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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
People living in the twenty-first century have a better quality of life than people who live in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The lives of people nowadays have developed significantly since the beginning of the twenty-first century in comparison to those in the previous centuries. While acknowledging the positive impacts of such development, I believe some challenges should be considered as well.
Granted, numerous individuals have achieved a better life quality in this century thanks to many advancements, especially in medical and technological aspects. Regarding the former, breakthroughs in medical fields allow better healthcare services and treatment options, leading to increased life expectancy and the eradication of fatal diseases. This can be seen in the case of Covid-19, where the development of vaccines has saved many lives, which nearly cannot be achieved in the past. Another advantage is that technology has transformed communication, enhancing social bonds and emotional well-being. Life convenience is improved through online shopping and smart home devices, allowing the focus on more meaningful activities and contributing to overall productivity and comfort. Again, these apparent benefits might not have been obtained in the previous centuries.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned progress, it would be unwise to overlook the difficulties and inequalities that still exist these days. Chief of these is that wealth disparity arguably affects many people, particularly the underprivileged groups, who, more often than not, are limited to access medical services. Another challenge can also be seen in the case of technology, which contributes to social isolation and the lack of depth in relationships, as virtual interactions are becoming dominant in communication. Job displacement and economic uncertainty resulting from automation and artificial intelligence also impact many workers’ overall quality of life since the productivity and efficiency of machines undeniably outweigh those of human beings. These obstacles are convincing evidence for the fact that the improvements in the twenty-first century cannot be overestimated compared to the follow-along effects.
In conclusion, while it is true that the twenty-first century has seen many beneficial changes when it comes to the life quality of people, in this case, the medical and technological facets, I firmly hold the view that there are still several difficulties and disparities that should be well-considered.
People living in the twenty-first century have a better quality of life than people who live in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that it's important to spend money on family celebrations (e.g. weddings, birthdays. However, some think that expensive celebrations are a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Family festivities often act as a pivotal part to promote the sense of togetherness among family members. Therefore, it is widely believed that the expenditure on such events is compulsory, while some opt for the idea that money splurging should not be encouraged in such occasions. From my perspective, the spending on such events should not be used exorbitantly as it can be allotted for better practical purposes.
On the one hand, it is justifiable that lavish spending on such occasions can strengthen the relationships among relatives. As family gathering events only happen on some special occasion, this is a rare chance for individuals to reunite and understand more about their status such as careers and well-being. For instance, by organizing events like birthday parties for children, they tend to have good memories of their childhood about their family, which acts as a precursor to the feeling of gratitude and the sense of responsibility to take care of their family in the future. Therefore, a strong bond of relatives will be the repercussions of the expenditure on these ceremonies.
On the other hand, overspending on family celebrations can be seen as extravagant to some extent. Luxurious gathering events usually require a massive budget, which constantly reflects the social status of the party holder. To meet the high expectations from family members, the holder can be under great economical pressure or even go into debt just for having a short satisfying moment. Furthermore, this may enhance the inequality among relatives. Young adults may face peer pressure when being compared about their commodities when involving in these specific events. As a result, the meaning of a family reunion may be overshadowed by a competition of wealthiness among relatives.
In conclusion, both views have their own merits; however, I am of the opinion that family milestones should be celebrated in order to promote the familial relationship as well as nurture the family values. However, the size and funding for the ceremonies should be moderated based on the family financial status.
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Writing task 1
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Task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar charts illustrate a few changes in the percentage of residents born both in and outside Australia in three distinct areas in 1995 and 2010.
In general, the proportion of people who were born in cities (boroughs are towns) had a tendency to increase significantly while in contrast, the ratio of the population born in smaller areas witnessed an opposite trend.
In the year of 1995, the birth rate of city dwellers of both inside and outside Australia accounted for more than half of the population at notably 50% and 60% respectively. This trend augmented so consecutively that in the year 2010, the ratio of residents born in Australia rose up to more than 60% and the ones who were born outside this continent peaked at 80%.
On the contrary, the rate of people born in rural areas experienced an opposing tendency.
After fifteen years, the data of new bornnewborn rural inhabitants had a dramatic decline from 30% down to nearly 20% for Australian and from 40% to a negligible number in its counterpart area. SimilarySimilarly, the population born in towns in both regions went down gradually with a steady decrease which was from 20% down low to 10%.
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Task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Austral...
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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In this digital era, several youngsters dedicate daily hours to using their smartphones .From a personal viewpoint , it can bring advantages but also have many disadvantages.In this essay, I going to light up my viewpoint .
One of the advantages of allowing children to use smartphones is can access many educational resources such as study apps or ebooks .It helps children to improve their knowledge and skills without having to face-to-face study and also develop skills that are not taught at school . For example , survival skill in the wild place may not be taught in class but with smartphones , they can easily learn how to protect themself in the uncovered place.
However , the negative effects of using smartphones cannot be denied , especially in Health , Social and Emotion . The most popular impact of spent too much time playing on smartphones is physical health such as reduced memory of brain or eye strain . It also can make children become anti-social , not interested in outdoor activities, or exacerbate the development of face-to-face skill . An example , when children dedicate much time to playing games on smartphones without the supervision of the guardian , they can learn the attitudes and actions of the characters in the game . From that , children who spend hours each day using smartphones can easily have a negative impact on children's mental and physical health .
To conclusion , using smartphones can have a positive effect . Additionally, it is necessary to understand and know about the disadvantages, especially the parents who should control the time limit of using smartphones of their children.
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
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Em mong cô chấm và nhận xét ạ, em cảm ơn cô: Some people claim that what many people eat in western countries is unhealthy food and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet.
In the modern world, fast food is becoming more and more prevalent in Western countries, even becoming an indispensable part of Western people’s daily menus. This situation raises the thought that their diets are harmful to the human body and that these unhealthy diets are becoming worse. Some people strongly believe that it is necessary for them to alter their eating habits. I personally agree with the fact that numerous citizens in Western countries consume a large amount of junk food and they should consider modifying the types of food intake.
In fact, via mass media, there are various news articles that told us how trendy processed food, convenience food, and junk food are in Western cultures. It is apparent to me that Western residents tend to consume a great deal of unhealthy food every day in their daily routines. For example, several fast food restaurant chains such as McDonald’s, Burger King, KFC, and Pizza Hut are well-known and they hold so much appealing from individuals of all ages. Particularly, children may have a higher risk of becoming addicted to fried chicken, chips, or pizza if adults do not give them any advice. Thanks to its appetizing taste, convenience, and advertisers’ glamorization, unhealthy food including fast food, junk food, and processed food is getting more and more popular and gaining much attraction. Interestingly, they have been even treated as the main course in Western feasts or banquets for a long time. Overeating processed food can cause adverse effects on our bodies, leading to many diseases such as diabetes, obesity, high blood pressure, and so on due to a huge quantity of energy intake from sugar, saturated fat, trans fatty acids, and used oil.
I strongly agree with the critics who hold the view that these countries should make changes to their diets. The thing is this is an effective way to prevent themselves from many detrimental illnesses or even fatal diseases. Nutritionists claim that “You are what you eat”.
Undoubtedly, vegetables, fruits, or fish are potent ingredients that supply nutrients to the human body, and provide us with diverse vitamins, and minerals. As a result, eating more healthy food and drinking juice instead of consuming canned food, and fizzy drinks enables us to strengthen our immune, cardiovascular, and digestive systems so that it acts as a powerful shield to alleviate the risk of suffering from sickness. The government plays a vital role in spreading and encouraging healthy eating habits to the inhabitants for the sake of their health by organizing voluntary campaigns or via mass media. Take my country by way of example, there are many articles on newspapers that are written about food. They deliberately emphasize the importance and influence of healthy food to people. Furthermore, raising juvenile students’ awareness of healthy eating is compulsory in every schools in my country, with the purpose of nourishing children’s mindset about distinguishing between beneficial food and harmful one from a very young age.
In conclusion, although becomes trendy and stylish in many Western countries, detrimental food also results in many negative and serious impacts on individuals’ physical bodies. Therefore, Western residents need to convert the food they eat in a healthier and more positive way in order to protect their well-being as well as organs inside their bodies.
In the modern world, fast food is becoming more and more prevalent in Western countries, even becoming an indispensable part of Western people’s daily menus. This situation raises the thought that the...
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The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
The given line chart gives information about the proportion of individuals belonging to four age groups who visited the cinema at least once a month in a specific nation over the period 30 years starting from 1978.
Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of people in four age groups witnessed a fluctuation over the period. In addition, individuals aged 14-24 accounted for the highest percentage of people who visited the cinema, while the opposite was true for individuals aged 50+.
As can be observed from the chart, in 1978, more than 40% of individuals aged 50+ watched at least one movie at the cinema on a monthly basis. This percentage decreased sharply to 30% in the next 10 years but increased significantly to 51% in 2008. Similarly, the percentage of individuals aged 35 to 49 stood at 60% in the first year but declined sharply to 10% in 1988. There was growth slightly and reached a peak at around 70% in 1998 before falling to 68% in the last year.
Following that, the percentage of 14-to-24-year-olds visiting movie theaters at least once per month fluctuated slightly around 90%, ending the period at approximately
88% in 2008. The figure for individuals aged 25 to 34 stood at 80% in 1978. This percentage fluctuated sharply to 80% in 1998 and declined slightly to 77% at the end of the period before remaining unchanged between 1988 and 2003.
The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
The given line chart gives information about th...
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The pie charts give information about the percentage energy manufactured in a nation over the period of 20 years starting from 1983.
Overall, it can be seen that Oil accounted for the highest percentage in five types of energy. Additionally, Nuclear power and Natural gas saw an upward trend while the opposite was true for Coal and Hydropower.
As can be observed from the chart, in the first year, Oil accounted for the highest percentage of power produced, at around 42%. The percentage of Coal and Nuclear power and Natural gas made up for a considerable amount, at 23%, 20% and 11% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for Hydropower had the lowest percentage, just only 4%.
In the next 20 years, Oil power still made up for the highest percentage but declined slightly to 38%. The figure for Natural gas increased significantly to 10%, at around 21% while Coal and Nuclear Power decreased slightly to 24% and 13% respectively. In contrast, the percentage of Hydropower produced still remained unchanged from 1983 to 2003.
The pie charts give information about the percentage energy manufactured in a nation over the period of 20 years starting from 1983.
Overall, it can be seen that Oil accounted for the highest percent...
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The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors of three distinct categories to the museum over the course of 15 years, starting from 1997.
Overall, it is clear that there were increases in the number of adult visitors and special exhibition visitors, while the reverse was true for visitors aged under 15. Additionally, the most significant difference was seen in adult visitors throughout the period.
Regarding attention to adult guests, in 1997, there were 300,1000 attendees to a museum, recording the highest number. Over the following decade, their attendance experienced a significant rise, reaching a peak at 400,5000 visitors, before decreasing to 380,000 visitors in 2012, remaining in the peak position.
Throughout the period, the data for guests aged under 15 and special exhibition visitors to a museum were lower, witnessing an inverse trend, with the former decreasing from 120,000 participants in 1997 to only 82,300 participants in 2012 and the latter increasing from 28,000 participants in 1997 to 42,000 participants in 2012.
Turning to the total number of participants at the museum, this destination welcomed 448,100 visitors in 1997, undergoing the most significant growth to 525,200 guests in the two following decades and then bottomed out at 504,300 attendees by the end of the period.
The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors of three distinct categories to the museum over the course of 15 years, starting from 1997.
Overall, it is clear that there were increases in the nu...
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The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British and Americans’ consumption in five separate types of energy sources in the year 2000 and 2006. Overall, oil dominated the energy market of both countries over the given time frame, whereas other renewable sources were the least prevalent type in the UK and USA in the years examined.
In 2000 and 2006, the rate of oil consumption in the USA initially peaked at approximately 37% and 40% respectively, while this kind of energy source in the UK constituted less than 10% in comparison with the USA in the first year of 2000s, then stood at exactly 30% six years later. The runner-up in 2000 is coal which accounted for over one third of energy consumption in the USA and more than 5% compared with the UK. However, the amount of coal used in both countries had decreased dramatically in 2006, in which year its figure fell over a half and a tenth in the USA and UK sequentially. Meanwhile, one of the most striking features is the significant increase in the percentage of gas utilization in both countries, which climbed more than a half to 38%.
Nuclear power and other renewable sources are the least unpopular type with the British and American in the years surveyed, which witnessed a slight decline in six years. Nuclear power comprised around 16% of total British energy consumption in 2000 then dropped almost a half in 2006. Its figures in the USA were 8% and 6% respectively. Other renewable sources consist of a tiny minority of the UK’s energy use with slightly over a tenth in both years given. Turning to the USA, this type of energy source was responsible for 6% in 2000 and then dropped a half in 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British and Americans’ consumption in five separate types of energy sources in the year 2000 and 2006. Overall, oil dominated the energy market of both coun...
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Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the fast-paced world, it has become increasingly prevalent for individuals who tend to live with their mates in lieu of living with their families, which causes some people to believe that this tendency is conceivably to bring disadvantage to communities. I personally disagree with this point of view. In this essay, I will further elaborate and give relevant examples to support my arguments
There are two main reasons why I suppose that living alone or with friends is not harmful to communities. Firstly, living alone or with friends can boost people's maturity and independence. For further explanation, living apart from families means that individuals are responsible for their lives, and they have to do everything by themselves, such as earning money for their own living expenses, doing housework, and so on. Consequently, they will certainly obtain numerous soft skills and gain more experience in their lives in comparison with those who live with their parents. Mature and experienced people are able to put great effort into social contributions for the sake of communities. For example, young people can take advantage of their skills, knowledge and experience to do voluntary work, take part in local cultural activities, or support local businesses, which can foster a sense of community and nourish local cultural identities as well as finance.
Another reason is that living with friends or alone can give people opportunities to form close-knit social circles, develop more relationships, and make new friends without suffering from parents’ control. As a consequence, thanks to a wider network, individuals can undoubtedly get more job opportunities via friends’ introduction, which partly alleviates unemployment, bringing benefits to communities. Furthermore, it is apparent to me that living alone or with fellows offers freedom together with a comfortable life. Individuals are capable of traveling to their favorite places, eating the food they love or pursuing their hobbies. As a result, people will feel happier as they can live in their ideal world, which reduces the rate of anxiety and depression and brings positive energy to our communities.
In conclusion, it is understandable that people choose to live alone or with their friends in lieu of with their families and this trend does not have any negative effect on communities. Conversely, it brings several advantages to individuals’ growth.
People should have the right to decide their own lives. It is important to respect and support individuals’ choices rather than assuming that it will have a negative impact on communities.
In the fast-paced world, it has become increasingly prevalent for individuals who tend to live with their mates in lieu of living with their families, which causes some people to believe that this ten...
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In society's development, advanced technology has a huge influence on communication between people. Although there are problems associated with internet-based learning, it is a fundamentally positive development Undoubtedly, the refurbishment of innovative technology has some disadvantages. One of these is that individuals can easily approach their many people through applications such as skype, google meet, and zoom, leading to lack of face-to-face interaction. In fact, in society, people should have a good flexibility in real-life experiences, requiring them to be well-behaved in certain situations. Moreover, people can feel loneliness when they live in remote areas. In order to conduct a video call with their loved ones, they have to use various apps. Consequently, they can not share their personal feelings with family persons and may struggle with describing their conservation Nevertheless, there are a lot of advantages to communicating with people on the internet. This is because the emergence of advanced technologies has led to numerous interactive applications for people. For instance, people can keep in touch with people in many ways such as Facebook, Zalo, and Instagram apps, regardless of geographical boundaries or distances. By doing this, they can brodern their relationships and make new friends, which helps them share common interests, and interact through their computers rather than face to face. Moreover, company members can contribute to their perspective through screens. This facilitates the effectiveness of employers and employees' work, which can promote their company's numerous quality evaluations. Therefore, communicating with other people can bring a positive way. In conclusion, the problems associated with this type of skills take a toll on everyone. However, communicating with people confer upon them to be convenient and find a suitable partners, which that this is a positive trends
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The presented table illustrates the prices of cup of coffee in six different cities in Australia during a three-year period from 2010 to 2014.
Overall, it is clear that six cities experienced an upward trend, with Melbourne showed a noticeable growth. while sydney was the highest figure, the opposite was recorded in Canberra over the given period.
In 2010, the prices of cup of coffee in Sydney was 2,8 dollar, which was the highest price out of six cities. then, this figure rose slightly by 13.2% to 3,17 dollar in the next three years. Likewise, Melbourne witnessed the most significant rise by 20,8% from 2,4 dollar in 2010 to 2,9 dollar in 2014.
In contrast, the figure for Canberra was lowest, by 6,25% from 1,6 dollar to 1,7 dollar. In addition, there was a slight growth in the figures for Adelaide and Perth from 2010 to 2014, of 6,95% and 7,1% respectively. Meanwhile, that of Brisbane remained unchanged at 2,25 dollar over the same period.
The presented table illustrates the prices of cup of coffee in six different cities in Australia during a three-year period from 2010 to 2014.
Overall, it is clear that six cities experienced an upwa...
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The line graph illustrates three different types of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is clear that the total number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island increased gradually during the period shown.
In 2010, the total number of visitors travelling to a Carribbean island stood at exactly 1 million, with 75.000 choose to stay on island, while the rest decided ti stay on cruise ships. Over the two following years, witnessed a insignificant drop to the lowest point of only 0.25 million people staying on cruise ships, staying on the island still a popular choice with 1.25 million of visitors.
During the last five years, there was a significant increase of 3.5 millions in the number of tourists. Moreover, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships recorded a increased gradually during the rest of period. However, the number of tourists staying on island remained a stable increase from 2013 to 2015 and then fallen once again before ended in 2017 at 1.5 million.
The line graph illustrates three different types of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, it is clear that the total number of tourists visiting a Caribbean islan...
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The internet has brought about many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we are doing things such as mailing, communication much faster. Do these developments have more advantages than disadvantages?
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The internet has revolutionized people's lives. It has altered the way we communicate with one another, do business, and obtain information. Although the internet has both positive and bad characteristics, I believe that its merits outweigh its demerits.
The Internet has facilitated our work life to a great extent. The invention of online conference calls or emails has provided us with much faster methods of communication. Another benefit that is online shopping and banking have saved people a great deal of time and effort. People today can sit at home and buy their groceries, books or household appliances from online sites such as Amazon or eBay and their stuff will be delivered at home. Moreover, transferring and withdrawing money has become very easy today with online facilities offered by most banks. Students gain from using the Internet as well. For example, Google today allows you to discover information on any topic in a matter of seconds. This has made it easier for us to study things in which we are interested but do not have access in a traditional classroom setting.
On the other hand, a great deal of offensive and obscene content is available on the web and children have easy access to them. Many antisocial elements and terrorist groups like ISIS recruit youngsters through the internet. Internet addiction is another problem. Many people are now addicted to the internet and wasting their time. This can affect their career and relationships. Furthermore, the speed of the internet allows for the quick transmission of disinformation, allowing anarchy to reign in critical situations. As a dramatic example, during the COVID-19 outbreak, there were hundreds of resources circulating false information on the internet, generating worry and concern among citizens.
In conclusion, the internet has benefitted individuals in a variety of ways. Despite its drawbacks, it may be effectively managed by enacting appropriate rules and regulations, as well as parental monitoring.
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It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
It is said that all young should do a job without being paid to help people in public. Although it has certain disadvantages, i would argue that its advantages are far greater.
On the one hand, do an unpaid work can brings about a number of demerits for young people. Firstly, due to the development of social life, young individuals could feel discouraging if they can't earn money to live on. As a result, they have to depend on their family to making a living. Secondly, they may lose an chances to understand themselves because they spend time to support community, which have an negative effects on their orientation. If they are too concentrate on help public, they would not focus on their future and lose their career that they want.
Nevertheless, the advantages of helping community without being paid are much more significant. The first reason is that, since young people contact with every body on a daily basis, they can improve their social communication skills. This allows them have life skills to deal with a hardship situation they could facing difficulties in social. Additionally, as young individuals have their own experience, they could have an opportunity to get a job with a high salary in the future. For example, young people who do volunteer activities, this could write on their job application and the recruiter would catch eyes on them.
Conclusion, while there are a host of demerits when do a work without salary, i feel that its advantages are weightier.
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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates how often Americans had meals in fast food eateries in three separate years 2003, 2006, and 2013. Overall, most people in the USA consumed fast food once a week or once or twice a month over the given time frame. By contrast, there was a minority of individuals who never came to fast food restaurants or went to them every day.
It is striking that the number of American convenience food consumers reached a peak of 33% in two categories: once a week and once or twice a month in 2006 and 2013 respectively. Meanwhile, the USA fast food restaurant’s daily customers only took up 4% in 2003, leveled off at approximately 2.5% in the subsequent years 2006 and 2013. Similarly, individuals who never feed themselves with fast food started at a mere 5% in 2003, then decreased slightly, and remained unchanged at 4% eventually.
Another apparent feature is that in 2006, those who visited fast food establishments every week peaked at 33% of the quantity of once or twice-a-month customers in American fast food eateries hit a low of 25%, whereas the quantity of once or twice-a-month customers in American fast food eateries hit a low of 25%. Turning to the several times a week category, there were around 16% consumers in 2003, then it experienced a noticeable growth to 20% in the following 3 years, ultimately standing at 16% seven years later. Regarding those who enjoyed fast food a few times a year, made up roughly 13% initially, after that, the proportion remained stable at 15% in both the year 2006 and 2013.
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The table illustrates the proportion of British in different age groups working in four separate fields in 1998 and 2006. Overall, there was a vast majority of the UK’s citizens taking part in the technology sector in 2006. By contrast, the number of working people at the age of 56 to 65 was the lowest in every area except education in the years surveyed.
It is striking that working in the education field was the least popular with the youngest age group over the given time frame. Meanwhile, over one hundred thousand of workers who were from 26-55 joined this sector. Individuals belonging to the 56-65 age group also witnessed the largest number in education with 43.647 and 23.000 employees in 1998 and 2006, respectively compared with the other categories.
Technology led the job market in 2006 with a huge quantity of the UK’s laborers. Notably, there were 454.375 British laborers at the age of 26-35 who had jobs relevant to technology.
The runner-up was the 36-45 group which consisted of 273.466 people. Whilst, the oldest group hit a low of merely 800 workers in this field. Turning to building, which became the most appealing section in the job market with respect to the youngest group. Building dominated the workforce in the 18-25 group, attracting 112.565 and 86.430 workers in 1998 and 2006 sequentially. Conversely, the oldest group who contributed to this sector comprised the smallest numbers (5.400, 3.287 people in 1998, 2006 respectively). Interestingly, the older people got, the fewer of them chose to work in the building sector.
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In a number of countries, some people think it necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In several countries, it has become increasingly prevalent for individuals to suppose that spending a fortune on building new railway lines for a quicker journey among cities is crucial. On the other hand, other people think that existing public transport should be invested for enhancement. From my perspective, both qualities are of great significance in equal measure as these infrastructures are equivalently vital to human’s life and society’s development. In this essay, I will further elaborate both perspectives and give relevant examples to support my arguments.
There is one key reason why large sums of money should be invested in constructing new railway lines for high-speech trains which travel through different nations. Notably, it rapidly boosts the convenience in terms of traveling for a long journey. As a consequence, the wide fast train network will attract more tourists and stimulate tourism, which can bring a lucrative income to countries, offer more job opportunities to local people and alleviate the rate of unemployment. Therefore, allocating a great deal of money for erecting new railway lines for high-speed trains should be encouraged.
Regarding existing public transport, there are two principal motivations to allocate money for this area of infrastructure. First and foremost, it is undeniable that expanding the current network of public transport will certainly assist domestic traveling, make it more effortless and convenient for daily transportation. For further explanation, numerous students and working people who do not have any means of transport now can easily go to their schools and companies thanks to public transports. For example, thousands of people go to work by subway trains and public transports are considered as an indispensable part of their lives.
Another reason is the environmental benefit that public transport brings to humans. Thanks to it, the number of personal vehicles is reduced significantly, which results in the decline regarding exhaust fumes and traffic congestion. Consequently, humans can prevent the Earth from pollution.The air quality will be improved, decreasing the risk of suffering from lung diseases. From these above advantages, it is necessary to spend money upgrading existing public transport.
In conclusion, both points of view are reasonable. I hold the opinion that the budget invested into public transport improvement and railway lines for very fast trains should be measured and divided equally and reasonably as both of them are beneficial to the growth of countries.
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Views on what constitutes human characteristics today clearly influence human psychology and mental growth. My point is that character development and personality cultivation are greatly aided by the everyday lessons learned from human experience.
First and quite fundamental, human characteristics are very important while parenting a child because they help shape their behavior in this world. They could still be modified, though, in order to accommodate external changes. As a result, this is the foundational phase in which parents can shield their kids from negative consequences. With the grower stage, kids are now teenagers, old enough to mostly take care of themselves and no longer need their parents' protection. At this point, external variables have the ability to quickly affect and greatly compromise their traits. For example, when they first started their temporary part-time employment, they were a committed, caring person. But after those harsh and unfair competitions, their traits progressively shift. They then modify and select a different approach to develop a whole different trait. Adulthood causes people to become more aware of what is good and bad. They select the best course of action and appropriate therapy for their behaviors based on the physical surroundings in which they operate.
In conclusion, I do not think that characteristics have much more influence on our personality and development but the experiences we have in our life. They heavily affect and adjust the way we live in our lives.
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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate what UK graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving college in 2008. It can be seen that most of students decided to futher study, while it is few those who deciding to participate in voluntary work.
In the term of the first graph, it shows that 17,735 students did part-time employment in 2008 while 3,500 people participating in voluntary work and 29,655 graduate students sought to further study. According to this graph, 16,235 students become unemployment which is similar to who sought the part-time-work.
Regarding to the second graph, we can see that 2,535 postgraduate students decided to do part-time work while only 345 students did voluntary work. Following this graph, there were 2,725 sought to further study which is slightly more than those who did part-time employment. Lastly, the only difference that we can notice between 2 graphs was the amount of sudents did part-time employment. The figure for postgraduate students did further study was third as high as which of graduate students.
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