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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The bar charts illustate the proportion of consuming fast food in residents in USA (2003-2013)
It is obvious that the percentage of pupils among 2003 and 2006 seem frequently getaway to fast food restaurant once a week. Futhermore in 2013 which is the highest in the stage once or twice a month
People in American during 2003 and 2006 make out the highest amount which is over 30% once a week in restaurant and in 2013 the proportion considerably less than 35% in once or twice a month. However, the figure frequency every day is the lowest of everything, just under 5%
The quantity in a sex times a year in 2006 and 2013 is the same and precisely 15%
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The bar charts illustate the proportion of consuming fast food in residents in USA (2003-2013)
It is obvious that the percentage of pupils among 2003 and 2006 seem frequently getaway to fas...
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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of Australian both male and female practice exercise in 2010.
in broad terms, It's noticeable that the age group of age 15 to 24 reveal the highest number of male and from 45 to 24 show the top of female. Male in Australian 15 to 24 tends to participate in doing exercise more than any period which makes out 52.8% meanwhile the percentage of woman in 45 to 54 is the highest in every stage of female and eventually the highest of the charts with the evidence is 53,3% which is more than figure of 52,8% male in 15 to 24
By contrast, the age 35 to 44 of male is the lowest just 39,5% and the lowest figure of all. Also female in 25 to 34 make out just 42,2% which is the lowest of woman and the sec lowest just over 39,5% of male.
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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of Australian both male and female practice exercise in 2010.
in broad terms, It's noticeable that the age group of age 15 to 24 reveal the highest n...
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The given pie chart illustrates the distribution of passengers from different areas and the provided table demonstrates their number of day-offs, the most popular accommodation, along with major activity in a specific holiday resort in Australia.
Overall, it is noticeable that the majority of tourists going on holiday in Australia come from US and Europe, with their average lengths of stay being the most significant while a converse pattern is witnessed in the case of Asian tourists. Additionally, camping and caravan are more popular accomodation for European passengers and visitors from other regions, whereas most Asian and American tourists prefer sightseeing.
According to the pie chart, European visitors make up the majority of total percentage of tourists traveling to Australia, accounting for 37%, followed by 35% of the US passengers. Meanwhile, the figures for visitors from Asia and other nations are slightly lower, at 10% and 18%, respectively.
Turning to the table, European and American visitors spend the greatest number of days on vacation in the overall length of stay, with respective figures of 16 days and 14 days. Individuals from other regions and Asia rank just below, standing at 10 days and 7 days, comparatively. Regarding accommodations, camping and caravan are the most favorable choices for European tourists and tourists from other countries, whereas the remaining groups opt to stay in hotels. Nevertheless, Asian and American people are immersed in sightseeing while passengers from Europe and other nations are more into other activities on the beach, such as swimming, sunbathing and surfing.
The given pie chart illustrates the distribution of passengers from different areas and the provided table demonstrates their number of day-offs, the most popular accommodation, along with major activ...
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The given table illustrates the average retirement age of men and women in different nations within the year 2003.
Overall, it is noticeable that males always retired later than females in all countries. Furthermore, Japanese people had the same retirement ages as Italian employees while the figures for France and Korea were comparatively the highest and lowest during the research.
In Korea, male employees were reported to retire when they were nearly 69, whereas women could stop working 2 months after turning 67. Meanwhile, French men were allowed to retire when they were 57 years and 4 months, compared to women, with a figure of just below 57 years. Similar patterns were witnessed in Japanese and Italian workers’ ages, with nearly 67 years and a half for males and under 67 years for women.
Turning to the United States, the figure for males was 65 years and 6 months, as opposed to females, standing at 64 years and 2 months. In addition, Australian men were regulated to retire at the age of just above 64, followed by 63 years and a half for females in 2003.
The given table illustrates the average retirement age of men and women in different nations within the year 2003.
Overall, it is noticeable that males always retired later than females in all countr...
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The given diagram depicts how much money that residents in five Australian cities have paid for water bills and provides an average bill per household.
As can be seen, locals living in Adelaide and Perth pay the least if they use excessively , reaching to 125 KL, while the charge applied on these two mentioned cities is the highest. Besides, Perth also holds the peak in average bill that one household pays and the opposite belongs to Melbourne.
At first glance, figures for overusing up to 125 kL cases witness the domination of Melbourne and Sydney which are respectively known as $0.78 and $0.98, followed by remaining stable if locals use over 125KL. In Brisbane city, there is a slight upsurge between reaching 125KL and surpassing 125KL about $0.3. While, the price that citizens in Adelaide and Perth are charged sees a significant increase starting at $0.42 and reaching $1.00 and $1.50.
Moving to the final column, the highest overall bill per family is in Perth, at $332 and on the opposite side belongs to Melbourne with $253. Furthermore, the remaining three cities seen as Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney have quite similar prices in the range of $310 and $219.
The given diagram depicts how much money that residents in five Australian cities have paid for water bills and provides an average bill per household.
As can be seen, locals living in Adelaide and P...
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Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is asserted that the government should invest the national budget in locating an increasing number of artworks like paintings and statues inside metropolises to make them appealing destinations. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely agree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that putting more works of art into towns and cities to attract visitors might be beneficial to the local people. More precisely, valuable works of art, such as pictures and statues could be appealing to various tourists who desire to have more insights into historical and architectural values of regions. As a result, tourism can provide local people with many employment opportunities like tourist guides, history presenters, etc, thus making a handsome profit, ultimately improving their quality of life.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that this policy can be positive to national development. In fact, a great number of foreigners who are insterested in historical and architectural values are believed to visit the cities and towns, thereby increasing the overall revenue of national tourism. This is exemplified by the fact that Statue of Liberty, located in the center of New York city, has risen the USA’s revenue to over 100 million USD per year by attracting a range of visitors, thus contributing to national development.
In conclusion, I advocate that allocating national expenditure in putting artworks inside cities and towns should be encouraged, given that this policy might supply occupations for local people and make a substantial contribution to the nation as well.
Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Several professors consider that students should be taught a second language at elementary school instead of secondary school. Although this inclination is believed to have certain negative aspects, I believe they are overshadowed by the positive counterparts.
On the one hand, one of the major drawbacks of teaching language at primary school is that it would overtake children's leisure time. More precisely, extracurricular activities are believed to play a key role in developing children's social development at a young age. Therefore, learning an additional language would reduce their free time spent on social activities like sports, teamworking, thus isolating them from society.
On the other hand, I argue that this drawback is outweighed by the benefits. Initially, early linguistic education might be beneficial to improvement of children's intelligence. More precisely, language is considered to be pivotal to stimulate both of human hemispheres, thereby equally enhancing logical thinking and creativity at an early stage. Furthermore, studying a language at elementary school might be beneficial to children's personalities. For instance, primary school students can become more sociable when studying English, given that language can make it easier for them to engage in conversation with foreigners, thereby having an advantageous impact on their personalities.
In conclusion, although some experts advocate that students should learn a foreign language when entering secondary school for the sake of their free time on other extracurriculum activities, I support that learning a second language at primary school bring more benefits, as it is advantageous to children's brains and behaviors.
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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The given bar chart illustrates how many minutes (in billions) spent on three different types of telephone in the UK over a period of 7 years commencing in 1995.
Overall, it is noticeable that fixed line consistently remained the most significant in the number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK during the research period. Furthermore, the figure for local - fixed line witnessed a marginal fluctuation while the upward trends were observed in the remaining categories.
Standing at over 70 billion minutes in the initial year, the number of minutes spent on local - fixed line experienced a rapid increase, reaching a peak of exactly 90 billion minutes in 1999 prior to gradually declining to about 71 billion minutes in the final year.
Regarding national and international - fixed line, the figure initially stood at approximately 37 billion minutes, followed by a stable rise to record its highest point of above 60 billion minutes after 7 years. Mobile phones followed a similar trend, but at a lower rate, standing at under 10 billion minutes in the first 4 years before rapidly growing, reaching its highest point of roughly 44 billion minutes by the end of the timeframe.
The given bar chart illustrates how many minutes (in billions) spent on three different types of telephone in the UK over a period of 7 years commencing in 1995.
Overall, it is noticeable that fixe...
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Several individuals assert that voluntary services, such as charity, improving neighborhood and teaching sports to younger children should be required in high school's curriculum. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely agree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that volunteering activities can be beneficial to developing students' soft skills and personalities. Initially, being volunteers might require cooperation in groups to complete the tasks. As a result, students can make it easier to engage in conversations with other members, thus enhancing their communication skills, teamwork skills, etc. Furthermore, some unpaid public services might be a great method for students to become more sympathetic. For instance, when working for a charity in orphanages, students are believed to understand the difficulty of parentless children, thereby kindling their sympathy, ultimately having a positive impact on their personalities.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that performing voluntary service might be advantageous to students' healths. First and foremost, this trend can have a positive effect on physical health. Specifically, when teaching sports to younger children, they could spend a greater amount of time on taking part in physical activities, which can be an effective way to stay in shape. Moreover, several public services like improving the neighborhood can bring a multitude of opportunities for students to enjoy the fresh air and lift their mood after classes during school. For example, planting trees in surrounding areas would enable them to be friendly to nature, thereby improving their mental health.
In conclusion, I advocate that unpaid community service should be a mandatory part of learning programs at high school for the sake of improving social skills and behaviors. Additionally, volunteering could enhance students' health both physically and mentally.
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As a part of their education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, with the emergency of culture exchange, language is a bridge to tighten countries together. Some individuals suppose that the best approach to master a language is to live in this country for a certain time. From my point of view, I cannot entirely concur with this perspective in some instances.
Undeniably, living in the country where you are learning language is a golden opportunity to enhance your life experience and linguistic ability. Compared to reading magazines or watching videos, by which learners can have chances to experience the culture and have daily conversation with indigenous people. These help students not only sharpen their influence, but also pick up a new vocabulary in various contexts. For instance, one of the most notorious Vietnamese youtuber - Chao, she used to admit that her English skills were boosted drastically as she lived with her New Zealand roommates during her studying abroad process.
On the other hand, I still argue that spending time living in another nation to learn its language and culture has several drawbacks for everyone, especially people who are insufficient in living conditions. Going abroad requires learners to allocate a large amount of budget for flying tickets, accommodation costs, tuition fee,.. It is extravagant compared to the average standard of living in Vietnam, especially for students who live in isolated areas. Subsequently, language barriers and cultural shocks are unavoidable in the first time studying overseas. As a result, the process of absorbing a foreign language takes students a certain amount of time to familiarize themselves, and practice every day, irrespective of their language ability. After only a few months of trial and error, individuals who are persistent enough can overcome language difficulties and confidently pursue more knowledge of cultures and traditions.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the disadvantages of learning language by moving to this country, I consider that this field play a pivotal role in our contemporary life
As a part of their education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Đề bài: The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The two pie charts compare the proportion of the 23-65 age group in different occupations in Ashby that is a town of the UK and in the whole UK in 2018.
Overall, while British people preferred working in office, personal service work were the most popular jobs in Ashby.
The proportion of people who did not have jobs in the UK accounted for 10%, whereas that in Ashby were higher with 14%. The percentage of office work and shop work made up 18% and 14%, respectively, similar to that in the UK with 19% and 13%, respectively.
In addition, the figure for professional work and technical work in the UK were much higher than that in Ashby, 17% and 14% compared to 9% and 8%, respectively. By contrast, the proportion of construction work and personal services in the UK were lower than that in Ashby, 10% and 17% compared to 16% and 21%, respectively.
Đề bài: The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The two pie charts compare the proportion of the 23...
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The maps below show the changes happening in the Belien village from 2005 to 2010.
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The maps compare the changes between Belien village in 2005 and after several facility construction in the next 5 years.
Overall, this urban area was considerably transformed during the period. Noticeably, it is highlighted that the road systems were clearly widened and several amenities were constructed over the whole time frame.
Looking closely, a primary shift is the farming field, which was demolished and made way for a golf course in 2010. Additionally, a widening in road systems can be observed, while the unavailable railway was brought into
use, the small road was expanded near the railway and led directly to the gold section.
On the other hand, some minor shifts were displayed in this area. Specifically, a small tree area beneath the central hotel was logged and replaced by a hospital. Also, there were appears of a new warehouse and railway station 2010 near the port and at the top of the map respectively. Moreover, a parking lot was erected on the original site of the bus station which was relocated near the 3-way intersection of the small road.
The maps below show the changes happening in the Belien village from 2005 to 2010.
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This given picture depicts how to completely manufacture maple syrup products which have over gone numerous stages.
At first glance, the sap flows witness two different sides between night and day leading to a tube followed by storing it in a tank to get ready for some treaments.
As can be seen, the flow of sap in the freezing condition is towards the top but in warm conditions, this flow along the tree trunk to a tap equipped with a tube for pouring into a tank. Furthermore, this mixture is exposed to the sun to evaporate stems.
Following this, after putting the products of evaporation into cans or tins, there are two distinct ways to consume. Firstly, it is put in storage and saved for decorating cakes and being a crucial ingredient to make the taste more flavourful. However, it can be immediately used to generate a group of small desserts such as tiramisu, macaron,...
This given picture depicts how to completely manufacture maple syrup products which have over gone numerous stages.
At first glance, the sap flows witness two different sides between night and day l...
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The two pie charts illustrate the average distribution of energy usage and its corresponding greenhouse gas emissions in an Australian household.
Overall, it is noticeable that the predominant share of energy utilization is attributed to heating and water heating, while the majority of greenhouse gas emissions emanate from water heating and other household appliances.
In terms of household energy, heating consists of nearly half of the total consumption, standing at 42%, followed by 32% of energy consumed in water heating. Furthermore, the figures for refrigeration, lighting, and cooling make up 7%, 4%, and 2%, respectively. Meanwhile, 15% of household energy is used for other appliances.
Consequently, water heating is responsible for below one-third of the total pollution emissions, with a figure of 32%. Though consuming a small proportion of the energy, other appliances immensely contribute to the overall emissions, accounting for 28%. Heating and refrigeration rank just below, taking up 15% and 14%, respectively, whereas the figures for lighting and cooling are negligible, standing at 8% and 3%, respectively
The two pie charts illustrate the average distribution of energy usage and its corresponding greenhouse gas emissions in an Australian household.
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Topic: More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
Solve:
It is true that many individuals and society have been drinking sugar-based drinks in recent years. This can be attributed to several factors, which call for possible solutions to be adopted.
There are several explanations as to why a number of people have consumed sugar-based drinks in recent years. This is because some soft drink companies attempt to heavily promote their products in many ways, which can increase consumption of sugar-based drinks. Some companies adopt clever marketing strategies for their products. Consequently, consumers are increasingly exposed to their products and are more likely to buy them. By way of illustration, Pepsi collaborated with Black pink to release a new drink collection on the market, thereby attracting a lot of the group's fans to buy their products.
Various measures, nevertheless, can be implemented to address these issues. The first possible solution is that parents should work with the school to minimize the use of sugar-based drinks in daily life. For instance, schools should have lessons and propaganda sessions about the evils of soft drinks on humans' health to warn their students, which can cause several issues such as obesity, diabetes, and dental problems. Thus, it can help youngsters understand the adverse effects of sugar-based drinks and have their drinks in moderation. Furthermore, this can help them minimize drinking too much soft drink and use another drink good for their health.
In conclusion, while many reasons can be given to explain why many youngsters are drinking sugar-based drinks in recent years, steps can be taken to improve the situation.
Topic: More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
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It is true that many individuals and socie...
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The bar chart provides a comparison between three types of waste disposal in one European country throughout the 4-year-period from 2005 to 2008.
Overall, there was a downward trend in the waste from landfill in the period of four years. On the other hand, the burning waste increased noticeably while the sea dump was being stability in the same period.
In 2005, landfill waste overshadowed with 1800 million tonnes, which was about triple the sea waste and burning with 600 and 500 million tons, respectively. There was a significant decrease by 600 million tonnes in landfill waste and doubled the two other types, recorded in 2006.
From 2007 onwards, the landfill witnessed a sharp fall from 900 down to 600 million tons of waste. While the constrasting figure was seen in burning waste in 2008, with around 200 million tons more than the previous year. The dumping at sea waste remained stable at around 600 million tons throughout the period.
The bar chart provides a comparison between three types of waste disposal in one European country throughout the 4-year-period from 2005 to 2008.
Overall, there was a downward trend in the waste from...
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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In contemporary society, social position and wealth are believed to play a pivotal role in evaluating an individual's value, while other human qualities including honor, kindness, and trust are considered to be insignificant and out of date. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely disagree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that social status and material possessions could not be the standard to assess a person's worth. In fact, it is undeniable that high position in the society and richness can make it easier to make an impression at first sight. However, the glamor would not have a long-term impact on the way an individuals' value is assessed in the future. For instance, although high-incomed people seem to be admirable in the beginning, it may be realized that their wealth is inherited rather than earned. Therefore, richness and high position might bear no relation in the evaluation of people's value.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that other morals play an indispensable part in judging people. This means they can never be old-fashionable values. Although glamor might have an edge over other personalities in the short run, values like honor, kindness and trust can have a long-lasting effect. To illustrate, people who are kind, honorable and reliable can always be respected by their friends, family members regardless of their social status and their income, thus playing a key role in the judgement of individuals' worth.
In conclusion, I argue that high position in society and material values may not considerably affect the way people's worth is judged because of their short-term effect. Furthermore, other valuable personaltities such as honor, reliability, and kindness always play a crucial role in assessing a person's value.
A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
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Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. What extent do you agree or disagree?
opinions are divided upon whether the advancement of the internet makes it possible for people to learn about cultures and customs of foreign countries without actually traveling in real life. I believe that it cannot replace the experiences when we travel.
Granted, one might argue that people can learn about every country in all corners of the world only via any electronic gadgets, because they can contain a lot of detailed and useful information about different lifestyles of many nations at their fingertip. For example, there are varying videos and blogs uploaded on youtube or facebook nowadays allowing people to share their experiences of life in other countries. However, what if those are sponsored? In fact, the internet may solely give people a limited amount of knowledge and contents on the internet can be easily used for commercial purposes. Therefore, It is quite hard for people to actually ensure that those contents are all true or not, unless they can genuinely confirm visually.
To add further credence to my assertion, I note that traveling can bring a much more intriguing experience to people than watching those videos that are uploaded on the internet. By viewing all the scenery and experiencing directly how one native speaker actually lives and works, people can gain a deeper insight into their cultures and traditions, their hidden aspects that no one has known before. In addition, this knowledge that people gained on their journeys might last a lifetime, because they are the people who participated in and experienced those events.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that the internet cannot equal to visual experiences. Instead it should be a valuable reference source for people before deciding to travel a foreign country.
Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. What extent do you agree or disagree?
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The provided chart gives information about the percentage of five different shares in Brazil’s economy in three years 2009, 2019 and 2029.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of almost sectors have a declining trend, except for the finance sector. Additionally, the percentage of the financial sector was the highest throughout the period.
Regarding finance, it accounted for a higher percentage of 30% in 2009, followed by a slight rise to more than 35% and this figure is forecasted to reach nearly 42% in 2029, which will be the highest point among all sectors. In terms of tourism, this segment made up for a higher 25% before a fall of 10% and a forecast of the stability in the end. Looking at manufacturing share, it witnessed a decline over the surveyed period, from 20% to a dramatic fall to 5% in 2029.
Concerning the proportion of food processing, initially, there was a record of just 10%, which was the lowest rate. After that, this number increased significantly to over 20% during the next decade before sharply decreasing back to 10 years according to the forecast. Meanwhile, the number for oil, coal and gas also experienced a similar trend to that of the food processing sector. To be more specific, it started at 25%, and then returned to this point after climbing to more than 30% in 2029.
The provided chart gives information about the percentage of five different shares in Brazil’s economy in three years 2009, 2019 and 2029.
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Topic: It is possible for tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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As both technology and society have developed, travelers should have an option to visit isolated natural setting. This essay attempts to shed light on both pros and cons of this tendency before concluding that the latter is more significant.
On the one hand, travelling to remote destinations is advantageous to a certain extent. Firstly, visiting remote natural areas can increase awareness and conservation efforts. This can be seen in the Vietnam’s efforts to promote eco-tourism and protect its natural landscapes. Secondly, this activity is the potential for substantial economic benefits, even though providing job opportunities and increase the revenues for the residents. For instance, Vietnam plays a crucial role in boosting the economic landscapes, particularly in rural area and remote areas.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits, I am convinced that visiting pristine areas brings about greater drawbacks. Increasing tourism to remote natural areas can lead to negative environmental impacts, such as pollution, habitat destruction, and disturbance to wildlife. For instance, the influx of tourists in sensitive ecosystems can disrupt the natural balance and lead to irreversible damage. In terms of cultural and social impact, the influx of tourists can disrupt the traditional way of life for local communities and lead to cultural erosion. In Vietnam, the rapid growth of tourism has led to concerns about the preservation of indigenous cultures and traditions.
In conclusion, while tourism to remote natural environments can bring economic benefits and raise awareness for conservation, the potential environmental and cultural impacts must be carefully managed to ensure sustainable and responsible tourism practices
Topic: It is possible for tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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As both technology and...
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