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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Lịch nghỉ Tết Âm lịch 2024 của Pombeebee
Pombeebee sẽ nghỉ Tết từ 7/2 đến 18/2/2024 và không thể trả lời câu hỏi ở cộng đồng trong thời gian này. Pombeebee sẽ hoạt động trở lại từ 19/2/2024 và tiếp tục giải đáp câu hỏi của các bạn. Cảm ơn.
Pombeebee sẽ nghỉ Tết từ 7/2 đến 18/2/2024 và không thể trả lời câu hỏi ở cộng đồng trong thời gian này. Pombeebee sẽ hoạt động trở lại từ 19/2/2024 và tiếp tục giải đáp câu hỏi của các bạn. Cảm ơn.
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The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The chart depicts the sales of distinct types of digital games on a global scale between the year 2000 and 2006.
Overall, there was an upward trend in Handheld Games, Mobile Phone Games and Onlinne Games while Console Games witnessed the opposite pattern. The most significant change was recorded in the Online Games’ sales.
The sales of Mobile Phone Games stood at roughly 1 billion in 2002, which was not represented in 2000 and 2001. Following that, this kind of game saw its sales fluctuating considerably to reach its peak above 6 billions in the end of the period. Regarding Online Games, there was a gradual increase by approximately 5 billions to 2005, which was followed by a surge to around 9 billions in 2006.
The figure for Handheld Games started at just under 12 billions and then rose to about 15 billions in 2002. This figure then remained sustainable around 15 billions in the next four year, but later peaked at marginally
under 18 billions in 2006. The sales for Console Games, however, dipped continuously by about 2 billions to 2003, which decreased from under 6 to well over 3 billions. The figure remained stable in the next year before dropping to reach its lowest point at approximately 3 billions.
The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The chart depicts the sales of distinct types of digital games on a global scale between the year 2000 an...
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The table gives information about the proportion of freshmen giving ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses : Economics, Law and Commerce.
Overall, it can be seen that resources on teaching receives the highest ‘very good’ rating in 2 out of 3 courses. It is also noticeable that while Law has the lowest rating in 4 out of 5 categories, most first year students gave ‘vey good’ rating for Commerce.
Regarding Pre-course information, references for Commerce are rated ‘very good’ by 95% of students, as opposed to 59% of positive rating for Economics. Similarly, the percentage of first year student giving ‘very good’ feedback varies significantly among three courses, with 95% for Economics and Commerce, whereas 62% for Law.
When it comes to Tutor, Commerce still stands at the first place in receiving good comment (93%), followed by Economics and Law ( 90% and 76% respectively). The difference in ‘very good’ rating for in printed Resoures is not as considerable as those previous categories, which clusters around 78%.
In terms of other resources, for Commerce, 81% of the freshman give ‘very good’ rating, backed up by 80% for Law. In contrast, there are solely 60% of Economics students responding positively on this, which is more than half of that of two remaining courses.
The table gives information about the proportion of freshmen giving ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses : Economics, Law and Commerce.
Overall, it can be see...
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Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?
In these days, many people contend that advertisements have had a significant impact on the purchase of people, in particular clothes and shoes. While the are several causes for this phenomenon, some solutions should be taken to improve the situation as well.
To begin with, a contributing factor to this is that advertsing often take advantage of glamorous people and engrossing marketing strategies. To illustrate, those advertising may manipulates consumers into buying things that are unnecessary in order to follow new trends or supporting their favourite celebrities. This is obviously true of some brands which use household names to boost the sales of their products. An effective method for the government to implement is that there should be restriction on those advertisements. By doing this, the authorities can easily supervise the content of those advertising and deter them from providing misleading information alike. As a consequence, some regulations must be put on this industry.
Another reason for the profound influence of advertising on people’s buying decision is that some of them often aim at children. By creating homorous and lively advertisemts, the firms may attract attention from the young consumers, who usually persuade their parents for what they desire repetitively. In this way, children have become an effective saler for the companies. To mitigate this problem, the governmet could prohibit advertisements that intentionally aimed at children. For instance, if there were strict policy on fast food’s advertising, there would be a considerable dip in this harmful food consumption. Therefore, banning these types of advertisements can lead to a more positive outcome.
In conclusion, using stars, ingenious marketing strategies and children-oriented advertising are two main culprits behind the situation. I believe that if the solutions mentioned above were implemented effectively, the problem would be alleviated.
Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?
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Space exploration costs tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration ?
Space exploration, according to some individuals, takes a high amount of money from tax payers annually. While this trend brings certain benefits, some drawbacks should also be considered.
To commence with, the first positive impact of exploring space is that humankind may find the alternative planets which support lives. To illustrate, the fast population growth and pollution has renderred the Earth be not as appropriate for living as before, which spurs people to find a new place for shelter. Therefore, financing in space exploration is beneficial in terms of looking for a livable planet. Another gain is that being knowlegable about the universe is synonymous with enhancing life security. Studying about space offers people with information about the likely outer-space disasters, thus, people can prevent them before the occurrence of these. For example, by devoting money to space exploration, people may indicate the meteorite that possibly hits the Earth. As a consequence, a benefit of this is the preservence of life.
However, despite some aforementioned merits, there are some negative aspects such as other issues which are more urgent than exploring outside the Earth. In other words, education and healthcare service, which contribute to well being in general, are more vital for the citizens. This is particularly true in developing countries, where investing in this realm is relatively unfeasible and exhorbitant. Therefore, other necessities may deter space exploration. Another drawback is that exploring space may be a culprit behind pollution. If this trend transpired in a global scale, the Earth’s atmosphere would be significantly contaminated, hence the detrimental impact on people’s health. Subsequently, pollution is a downside of this.
To conclude, investment on splace exploration provide some merits regarding searching for another planet for shelter and warranting life’s safety. However, it also has several demerits such as more money required for other basic needs and pollution. People should take both sides into consideration so that exploring space can bring most benefits the human.
Space exploration costs tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration ?
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The map illustrates how a central library has changed over 20 years. Overall, the library has undergone some significant changes, the most important of which are the removal of tables and chairs and the addition of a café, study activities, and events for storytelling.
A room for reading newspapers and magazines was located on the left and right of the entrance was the enquiry desk where readers could buy tickets or return books. At present, both these rooms have been replaced by a computer room and a café, respectively.
In the middle of the library, there were two sets of tables and chairs, on the left and right of which were two respective sections for fiction and non-fiction books for adults. Twenty years later, the tables and chairs have been removed, and the fiction genre section has been changed to exhibit books of all references. Meanwhile, the adult fiction section remained intact, with an information desk and three self-service machines having been newly added.
Finally, there was a room for CDs, videos, and computer games in the far left corner of the entrance, while on the other side was a room exhibiting only books for children. After 20 years, the former has been slightly expanded, with the replacement of merchandise with children’s fiction books and the addition of two new sofas for storytelling events. Meanwhile, children’s books in the latter have been removed and changed into a room for teaching.
The map illustrates how a central library has changed over 20 years. Overall, the library has undergone some significant changes, the most important of which are the removal of tables and chairs and t...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The picture shows the four-stage life cycle of a frog. Overall, it took a long time for a frog to fully develop, starting from eggs, through several changes in appearance and habitat, to an adult frog.
The process begins with eggs being laid in large quantities and protected by a jelly-like substance on the surface of a pond or lake where the water is still and shallow. After 6 to 21 days, the eggs hatch and tadpoles emerge, whose tails and movement resemble a fish and feed on algae and small plants. This second stage lasts up to 9 weeks, during which time the tadpole develops rear and all four legs within 3 to 6 weeks.
In the third stage, the tadpole grows into a froglet, which still has the tail and unchanged diet, but now it can jump with longer legs and its lungs are formed. The final stage occurs after 12 weeks when the froglet matures into an adult frog. During this stage, the adult frog becomes an amphibian with a disappeared tail, living in a mixed environment with small bodies of water or nearby vegetation and eating insects and small animals. The cycle repeats after 2 to 4 years when the adult frog mates, returns to a pond or lake and lays eggs there.
The picture shows the four-stage life cycle of a frog. Overall, it took a long time for a frog to fully develop, starting from eggs, through several changes in appearance and habitat, to an adult frog...
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The graph and table illustrate the amount of water used for agriculture, industrial use and domestic use in the world, and water use in Brazil and Công in 2000.
It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 to 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest amount of water consumption. Moreover, Brazil's water consumption was considered higher than Congo.
In 1900, 100 and 150 km3 were used for domestic and industrial use, while the figure for water agriculture use stood at around 500 km3. By 2000, global water use for agriculture surged dramatically to 3000 km3, and industrial water use increased quickly to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 300 km3
In the year 2000, the number of people in Brazil and Congo was 176 million and 5,2 million respectively. Especially, Brazil had more than 265 times irrigated land, which made the amount of water use in Brazil was higher than Congo, standing at 359 km3 and 8 km3.
The graph and table illustrate the amount of water used for agriculture, industrial use and domestic use in the world, and water use in Brazil and Công in 2000.
It is clear that global water needs ro...
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The presented bar chart indicates how many marriages ended with a divorce in two different countries, namely Finland and Sweden during a five-year period from 2011 to 2015.
Overall, it is clear that both countries showed some fluctuations. While Finland experienced an upward trend, the opposite tendency was recorded in Sweden. Initially, the figure for Finland was lower than that of Sweden, but this figure outraced Sweden at the end of the given period.
In 2011, the percentage of divorced couples in Finland was nearly 38% which was considerably lower than that of Sweden. Then, there was a slight decrease in this figure to roughly 32% in 2012. However, this figure rose gradually to just over 40% in the following two years and remained unchanged in 2015 which outraced the rate of Sweden.
Meanwhile, the rate of couples divorcing in Sweden showed a different tendency. This figure started at approximately 45% at the beginning of the period. Then, this figure increased slightly to roughly 50% in 2012, which was nearly one-third higher than that of Finland. However, there was a steady decline in this figure over the next two years, before reaching its lowest point at approximately 38% in 2015.
The presented bar chart indicates how many marriages ended with a divorce in two different countries, namely Finland and Sweden during a five-year period from 2011 to 2015.
Overall, it is clear that...
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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the information about Argentina, Indonesia, Italy and the Republic of Korea in 2003 and predicted how their population will have changed by 2025 and 2050.
Overall, following the population project, it is clear that all countries will see their population increase in the future, with the exception of Italy. Additionally, Indonesia is predicted by far to have the most population among those throughout the period.
In 2003, when examining Argentina and Indonesia for the first time, while the former recorded the lowest figure at only 34 million, the latter had the highest population of nearly 240 million, making it the most populous out of all nations examined. According to the project, there will be an increase in the population figures of both countries. Argentina citizens are predicted to grow to 48 million by 2025 and are expected to reach 62 million by 2050. Meanwhile, after a rise to 274 million by 2023, Indonesia resident numbers are projected to reach a total of 312 million by 2050, outnumbering those numbers at that time in the future
Turning to other nations, there was a significant difference in population figures between Italy and the Republic of Korea. The former had a population of 54 million, higher than the latter with only 48 million residents. In the future, the Republic of Korea’s population is expected to rise to 52 million by 2025 and remain unchanged until 2050. In contrast, there will be a decrease of 47 million in the population of Italy by 2025, which will further decrease to only 45 million by 2050.
The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compar...
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of different three types of crimes comprise car theft, house burglary and street robbery in England & Walse between 1970 and 2000
Overall, There is an increase in the data of crimes in England & Wales, with the most dramatic rises being seen in the figures for the car theft. Despite that, the street robbery had lowest figure over the period.
The rate of Car theft started at 0.4%, after which it saw a rise sharply to 1.4% in 1985, before the figures drop significantly at 0.8% in 2000. Similar changes can be seen in the proportion of House burglary, growing from 0.3% in 1970 to 0.6% in 1990, and ending the period at 0.4%.
About 0.1% was street robbery in 1970, with a wild fluctuation around 0.15% over the period, and the figure decreased lightly at 0.1% again in 2000.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of different three types of crimes comprise car theft, house burglary and street robbery in England & Walse between 1970 and 2000
Overall, There is an increa...
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The charts highlight the information about the money spent by Japanese and Malaysian families on 5 different sectors, namely Housing, Transport, Food, Health care and other goods and services. From the overall perspectives, what stands out the the graphs is that the expenditures on Food and Housing in Malaysia was higher than that in Japan, whereas the opposite was witnessed in 3 other factors. Another striking thing is that the figure for healthcare was the lowest in both countries.
Turning to the details, in 2010, the proportions for housing in Japan and Malaysia was 21% and 34%, respectively. In terms of Food, there was 24% of families in Japan spending on, less than 3% in Malaysia. Besides, the expense for transportation in Japan accounted for 20%, twice as much as that in Malaysia.
Regarding Healthcare, the Japanese families allocated more funds with the amount of 6%, in comparison with a mere 3% of the Malaysian families. Moreover, there was more families in Japan consuming other goods and services, with the amount of 3%, than in Malaysia at 26%.
The charts highlight the information about the money spent by Japanese and Malaysian families on 5 different sectors, namely Housing, Transport, Food, Health care and other goods and services. From th...
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Some people think that increasing the cost of fuels is the best way to solve the world’s environmental problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
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One school of thought holds that raising fuel prices is the best way to mitigate global environmental problems. While I acknowledge the reasons behind this thinking, I would argue that there are also some limitations to this statement.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that environmental problems globally will be solved when the cost of fuels decrease. The key rationale in favor of this notion is that it could lead to a significant decline in demand for fossil fuels. It can be seen that this would reduce the emission of carbon dioxide, one of the factors resulting in global warming. However, this will also be an insurmountable issue when we depend on gasoline-powered vehicles. In other words, raising fuel prices will not significantly impact the demand for them. Considering these factors, this argument will be made redundant and seems perfectly unjustifiable.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the following measures are more effective in tackling current environmental problems. First, it is imperative that replacing and promoting green projects widely instead of using fossil fuels. It is undeniable that the development of electric vehicles contributes a host of benefits not only to individuals but also to the environment. This could be a key to lowering our dependence on sources of energy, leading to the mitigation of the emission of CO2 emitted. Additionally, the government should impose stricter regulation of environmental protection. For example, people who cut down forests illegally should receive severe punishment intended to deter illegal logging. This acts as a precursor to not only a thriving economy but also a civilized society.
In conclusion, while there are justifications that the raising of fuel prices will tackle environmental problems, I would contend that it would fail to produce a discernible effect on environmental issues. Instead, we should promote green projects to enhance environmental quality as well as build a civilized society.
Some people think that increasing the cost of fuels is the best way to solve the world’s environmental problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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The Graph below shows information on employment rates across 4 countries in 1970 and 2000.
The bar charts compare the workforce rate of two sexes in four different nations in the year 1970 and 2000.
Overall, the proportion of employed men was higher than that of women in four countries for both surveyed years. In addition, the figure for the employment of both genders witnessed a downward trend between 1970 and 2000.
In terms of males, the rate of working American men was the highest in two years. There was a moderate decline in male workers in the USA from 86% in 1997 to 78% in 2000. Similarly, the percentages of employed men in Japan decreased steadily from approximately three quarters in 1997 to 63% in 2000. The figure for working Indonesian men recorded a reduction of a tenth between 1997 and 2000. Meanwhile, the rate of male workers in Belgium experienced a significant fall from 79% to just over a half between 1997 and 2000.
Concerning females, the proportion for American women plunged enormously from 78% to 45% in two years. Although the rate of employed women in Indonesia went down gradually by 15% from 1997 to 2000, this surpassed the USA in the final year. There was a reduction of 9% in working Japanese women throughout two years. The percentage of female employees in Indonesia took a similar trend, dropping sustainably from 65% to exactly a half between 1997 and 2000. Finally, the figure for employed women in Belgium saw a sharp decline by 55% during the examined period.
The bar charts compare the workforce rate of two sexes in four different nations in the year 1970 and 2000.
Overall, the proportion of employed men was higher than that of women in four countries for...
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The two bar charts illustrate the percentages of male and female workers in Belgium, the US, Japan, and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000.
Overall, consistently more men were employed than women in all four countries, with those in the US and Indonesia dominating in the two years examined. Additionally, all four countries saw decreases in the proportions of employment of both genders, with the greatest being seen in Belgium’s figures.
Regarding males, in 1970, the shares of American and Indonesian labourers were almost comparable, at 86% and 84%, respectively, followed by a slight decline in 2000 to 78% and 74% in that order. Moreover, almost 80% of Belgian and Japanese labourers were recorded initially. By the next thirty years, the former had plummeted to just over half, while the latter had done so to a smaller extent to 63%.
As for females, just over three-quarters of women in the US had a job in 1970, higher than their Indonesian counterparts (65%). However, after three decades, a reverse pattern was seen, with 45% in the US and 50% in Indonesia. Meanwhile, there were 63% of Belgian workers and 56% of Japanese ones in the first year. Thirty years later, the former experienced a nearly four-time drop, while the latter declined roughly to just below half.
The two bar charts illustrate the percentages of male and female workers in Belgium, the US, Japan, and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000.
Overall, consistently more men were employed than women in all fo...
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Writing Task 2 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Prompt: Some say that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects equally, and some say that they should only focus on the subjects that they are good at. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The fact that education is essential for the development of young generations is beyond dispute. This has diverging opinions on whether an equal emphasis on all subjects should be required for teenagers or the priority on subjects that align with their abilities. This essay will discuss both notions before explaining why I believe the combination of both is optimal.
On the one hand, teenagers can benefit from acquiring knowledge from a wide range of concepts. These individuals can obtain a versatile skill set by learning diverse subjects. Learning various subjects can also enhance a variety of abilities, such as critical thinking, problem-solving, and creativity, to name but a few. In other words, neglecting certain subjects may lead to an imbalanced education that can deter overall personal and academic achievement.
On the other hand, placing significance on a limitation of subjects suitable for teenagers’ strengths can also be advantageous. Expertise in particular subjects is, more often than not, motivational and can boost the confidence of young students. Professionalism can arguably inspire them with a positive attitude towards learning, leading to positive academic performance and outcomes. This can be seen in the way these prospective experts zealously raise their hands to ask questions and contribute to lectures.
From my perspective, gaining general knowledge of all subjects before concentrating on specific ones is fervently recommended. This is because exploring different subjects may allow adolescents to discover and cultivate their interests before identifying categories and topics they might not have initially recognised. As a result, having a well-rounded education can open up more opportunities and provide a solid foundation for further studies or diverse career paths.
In conclusion, there is no one-size-fits-all method that can ultimately bring the desired effects, and it is rather unwise to solely implement either approach. Therefore, I believe an equal grasp of every facet can enable teenagers to derive different abilities before being professional in aspects that fit their pros.
Prompt: Some say that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects equally, and some say that they should only focus on the subjects that they are good at. Discuss both views and give your opinion....
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Writing Task 1 - Em mong được thầy cô chấm chữa ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
The graph shows how many people visited four categories of tourist attractions and five different amusement parks in Britain in 1999.
Overall, theme parks and museums and galleries were the two most popular attraction types in the year examined, with Blackpool Pleasure Beach receiving by far the highest percentage of tourists in the theme park sector.
Specifically, the proportions of visitors in theme parks and museums and galleries were almost comparable, at 38% and 37% respectively, both of which were over two times higher than those of historic houses and monuments (16%). This pattern can also be seen in the figure for historic houses and monuments compared to that of wildlife parks and zoos (9%).
In the amusement park sector, the highest tourist proportion (47%) was seen in Blackpool Pleasure Beach, higher than the figures for Alton Towers (17%) and Pleasureland in Southport (16%) combined. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor were the two least visited theme parks, at 10% each.
The graph shows how many people visited four categories of tourist attractions and five different amusement parks in Britain in 1999.
Overall, theme parks and museums and galleries were the two mos...
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The table gives a breakdown of the different types of families who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost doubt of this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.
Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of households with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.
Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favored elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).
Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.
The table gives a breakdown of the different types of families who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this po...
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Em hi vọng được chấm bài task 2. em cảm ơn
Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that government funds should be allocated to find out extraterrestrial life, while others think that this is wasteful expenditure since there are lots of global issues. This essay will discuss both notions and explain why I agree that investing in exploring other planets is much more significant.
Granted, the authorities should allocate funds to solve pressing challenges such as international conflicts and pandemics. First, international conflicts, specifically the war between two nations, is one of the main reasons resulting in poverty. For instance, the supply chain disruption and stagnation in logistics management are consequences of the war between Russia and Ukraine, which leads to the scarcity of food sources in some countries around the world. Therefore, inhabitants need to receive financial support from the state due to the recession of the economy. Second, the health care system needs more fundings to assure treatments and medicines for patients. For example, Covid-19 pandemic has spread across many countries around the globe from 2019 up to now, so government funds are vital in order to make sure that specific drugs, vaccines, and modern equipment are always available.
Nevertheless, from my perspective, I believe that looking for other habitable planets should be taken into account. First and foremost, there are a number of challenging problems that people can not afford to completely tackle. In fact, a large number of factors are attributed to destroying human's life such as climate change, natural resources depletion, greenhouse effects that lead to catastrophic storms, floods and heatwaves. For example, in the beginning of January in 2024, a tsunami in Japan led to the death of more than two hundred people. Therefore, searching for new extraterrestrial life is a good idea to avoid environmental impacts that humans cannot control. Additionally, space exploration could bring scientific advancements that enhance the human's standard of living. For instance, GPS, which stands for Global Positioning System, is a breakthrough creation. Specifically, scientists developed a system that can track the position of satellites in space, and then it was adapted to create GPS which is now widely used by millions of people and is a key to navigate people the right direction in a map.
To sum up, I support the idea of investing more to search for new livable planets to avoid environmental problems as well as bring specific advantages to human's life , even though there are some current issues in the globe that need government funds.
Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views...
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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
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The given chart provides a comparison of how much money was spent on four categories by an average household in Malaysia and Japan in 2010.
Overall, there are significant differences between household expenditures in Malaysia and Japan, with housing and food being the highest spending categories.
As can be seen from the chart, in comparison with Japan at the time, housing was considerably more costly for households in Malaysia. This is because the figure for housing accounted for 34% of the total, far higher than that of Japan, which was 21%. This means that in comparison with Japan at the time, housing was considerably more costly for households in Malaysia. Similarly, spending on food in Japan accounted for 24%, while the figure for Malaysia took up 27%. In fact, housing expenditure is directly proportional to the amount of money spent on food.
By contrast, Japanese spent 20% of their budget on transportation, which was twice as much as the expense of Malaysians. Regarding spending on healthcare, the figure for Malaysia accounted for 3%, which was much lower than that of their Japanese counterpart, whose figure was 6%.
The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
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The given chart provides a comparison...
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