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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read more






Lê Trung Thành
7/12/2023
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Topic: The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011. Essay: The line graph illustrates a comparison of the percentage of computer ownership from families in a nation in European over the course of 14 years, starting from 1997. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of households who possessed electronic devices witnessed an upward trend, with the exception of households without a computer. Additionally, the rate of households with two computers was constantly increase. At the beginning of the period, the percentage of people who did not own a computer was highest, at 47%. The figures for households with only one computer and two computers were lower, at around 44% and 10%, respectively. However, the percentage of families owned three or more computers accounted for the lowest number, at just 1%. During the period shown, while debuted in the highest position but the households did not have a computer experience a decrease to 20% in 2011. The opposite was true for the slight change in the percentage of households that had one computer, from 44% to 45%. Similarly, the figures for the last two categories saw a rapid climb while the households had two computers increased significantly, around triple, higher from the final figure for households that had three or more computers, which stood at just 10% at the end of the period. Topic: The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011. Essay: The line graph illustrates a comparison of the percentage of... Read more


Đoàn mạng thắng
7/12/2023
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The given chart illustrates how much money given to developing nations from 5 companies between 2008 and 2011 Overall, it can be observed that while the total money from business 1 and 2 experienced upward trends the opposite was true for organization 4 and 5. Additionally, company 2 witnessed a dominant in the last 2 years The first result worth pointing out is that, the amount of money given to upgrading countries from company 5 declined notably from just over 1 million dollars in 2008 to over half million in the next year and remained stable at under 0,5 billion dollars in the last 2 years .Similarly, organization 4 followed a similar pattern as it decreased moderately from more than half million dollars to just over 0,5 million before hitting a trough at under half million in the end It is apparent that,in the first 2 years while campany 3 led with about 1,5 billion dollars, business 2 followed with a significant amount of just under 1,5 billion,overshadowing organization 1 nearly half billion dollars .Another highlight is that between 2010 and 2011 around 2,5 billion dollars was given to improving nations by company 2,which exceeded company 3 and 1 about 1 billion dollars and 2 billion respectively The given chart illustrates how much money given to developing nations from 5 companies between 2008 and 2011 Overall, it can be observed that while the total money from business 1 and 2 experience... Read more


Lê Bảo
5/12/2023
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These days,a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports.Why it is?Is it a positive or negative development? In the contemporary world,human life is being improved in distinct aspects which are new technology such as laptops,televisions,smartphones,etc,...Moreover,being in modern life forces people to become accustomed to using computers and smartphones,children are no exception.A large part of the public holds opinion that allowing the young generation to spend time on computer is highly impactful to their brain and eyesight.Were it not for keeping up with the development and lacking supervision and attention of parents on their children,the kids would not be deep in computers and miss the opportunities to meet new friends and hang out with them.This essay will discuss both sides of the spectrum and provide comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter. First and foremost,getting access to social media or the Internet can help children catch up with up -to -date information and edify their mind with new things,new concepts.Besides,computers also provide them with empirical experience to take on daunting task whereby they can enhance problem solving skills and have much experience of managing time and building in-depth planning for the future.Furthermore,education is one of the vital factor offering by computers such as playing games like Dualingo and Brainout which require juveniles brainstorm to find the answer for a quiz. On the other side of the spectrum,a section of the community has been in term of permitting their kids to use technology equipment at their disposal and at the same time they haven’t supervised and paid attention.This state makes young generation have free time to play games continuously throughout the night.If parents don’t hinder the game and internet addiction,their childs will be affected on mental and physical health also causing giddy,myopia,etc…Lastly,using excessively computers can render juveniles more indolent and taciturn,accompanying with not spending time to learn,to communicate with other people,especially family resulting to apathy and thoughtlessness among members. In conclusion,everything in this planet not only has the advantage but also has the disadvantage.Although computer addiction is a concerning topic and hard to thoroughly solve.However,everything can be solved if you choose the correct method.Instead of giving a slap on the wrist,adults should deprecate and have a small talk with their children about the impacts of computer in their daily life.It’s vital to be aware of the potential negative effects and to use your products in moderation to maintain a healthy balance. These days,a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports.Why it is?Is it a positive or negative development? In the contemporary world,human life is being im... Read more
Jasmin
7/12/2023
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not homework needs to be given to students. Although there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, I am strongly convinced that it plays a crucial role in educational outcomes. There are several reasons why homework can be seen as an unnecessary burden on children. One major issue contributing to this is that homework puts children under pressure on a daily basis. A case in point is Japan, there is a significant number of juveniles who contract mental diseases or find a sense of depression due to being swamped with a heavy load of deadlines and assignments. Another primary reason behind this trend could be that homework is not the most useful way for school children to achieve high-achieving records at school. Numerous students just pay a lot of attention to finishing their homework rather than consolidating their knowledge at home. In spite of the above argument, I firmly believe that homework has positive impacts on the schooling of students. The main benefit of homework is that it allows children to have more opportunities to review the lessons which makes it easier than ever for them to attain the knowledge. Secondly, doing homework encourages independent learning. This may facilitate children to work alone and at their own pace. In doing so, students become independent and do not overly depend on their parents. In conclusion, while some people hold negative views towards homework implementation, I still believe that homework is regarded as an indispensable part of student's learning. People’s opinions differ as to whether or not homework needs to be given to students. Although there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, I am strongly convinced that it plays a... Read more
Kakakkkaa
7/12/2023
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Đề: The table details the international tourist arrivals in millions in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages). Bài làm: The provided table illustrates the number of international travelers in eight different nations between 2009 and 2010 and the percentages of the changes. To summarize, there were upward trends in the quantity of number traveling internationally in all countries, except for France and Hong Kong over the given period. Additionally, France remained the most common tourist destination among 9 countries, whereas the opposite was true for Hong Kong. In terms of nations which attracted plenty of international tourists, the number of visitors to the US, Spain, and Italy stood at 66 million, 55 million and 44 million, respectively, in 2009. These figures increased slightly by 1 million in the next year. A similar pattern was recorded in the figure for the UK, beginning with 55 million and reaching 57 million in the final year. Meanwhile, the number of individuals paying a visit to France remained unchanged, at 76 million, in both years. As for remaining countries, Germany experienced a significant increase in the quantity of people who traveled to, rising from just 11 million to 23 million, indicating a growth rate of 109%. Similarly, Turkey and China witnessed considerable growth rates of 33 and 55%, correspondingly. On the contrary, in 2010, Hong Kong attracted less international visitors, with 9 million compared to 10 million in 2009. Đề: The table details the international tourist arrivals in millions in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages). Bài làm: The provided table illustrates the number of internati... Read more


Kakakkkaa
5/12/2023
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Đề: The chart below shows the yield of wheat, barley, rice and other grains grown in three different countries in 2001. Bài làm: The provided bar chart depicts how much wheat, barley, rice and other grains were cultivated in three distinct nations in 2001. To summarize, the yield of other grains was always the highest in three countries. Additionally, India always had fewest yield, compared to remaining nations. Looking more closely at the production of other grains, China and the USA crop yields were 9 million tonnes each, which was higher significantly than the figure for India, with just about 1.9 million. In terms of barley yields, the USA was leading producers, accounting for over 7 million tonnes, ahead of China, whose date was approximately 6.5 million. Meanwhile, India continued to be country with lowest statistic among three ones, at around 2.8 million. Turning to the remaining categories, China ranked first in the production of rice, occupying 6 million tonnes, followed by the figures for the USA and India, with 5 and 1 million, respectively. As for wheat, about approximately 3.4 and 2.4 million tonnes were harvested in China and the USA, respectively. Meanwhile, this figure recorded in India was lower significantly than, at over 1 million tonnes. Đề: The chart below shows the yield of wheat, barley, rice and other grains grown in three different countries in 2001. Bài làm: The provided bar chart depicts how much wheat, barley, rice and other... Read more


Trần Việt An
6/12/2023
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries in two separate years. Overall, it is clear that total energy production increased dramatically in 1980 and 2000 in both Australia and France. While Coal Electricity was used to produce the most in Australia. By contrast, Hydropower in France was the least preferred to be produced. In 1980, Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity in Australia, rising to 130 out of 170 units in 2000. While natural gas and oil production were less common in Australia, accounting for 20 and 10 out of 100 units, declined to 2 units relatively in both of fuel sources in 2000. Whereas, the level of using nuclear power to produce in France from 15 out of 90 units, which surged significantly to 126 out of 180 units in 2000. 5 and 25 units of hydropower and natural gas production were important in France, but its use decreased to the same amount of using, with 2 units out of 180 in 2000. The pie charts illustrate the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries in two separate years. Overall, it is clear that total energy production increased... Read more


Lê Bảo
5/12/2023
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The given diagrams illustrate the travel industry state in the Uk which is the proportion of visits to and AND from the Uk starting in 1979 and finishing in 1990 belonging to the first one.While , the second chart emphasizes some destinations that the UK tourists WERE really into. As it can be seen , the number of residents witnessed a tremendous upsurge in the mentioned years.Moreover , France held the top favorable country in comparison to the bottom one seen as Turkey in 1999. Getting back to the particular details of the first graph , a slight increase in range of 1979 and 1984 estimated from 10 million to 20 millions.Furthermore ,over 15 years later , the number of citizens was in terms of developing with a significant upward trend .However , after a short period of time from 1984 , going abroad were more concerned elucidated for its growth from the middle of 1984 about 20 million to 1990 about 51,1 million. While , a great deal of oversea residents were parallel with the others from around 13 million to approximately 29.5 million which were even under a half of abroad figure. Move to the second graph , reaching the peak from France about 10 million which was followed by holding the lowest from Turkey about 2,5 million.Below the highest country were Spain approximately estimated around 8 million.Besides , there is no momentous changes between the Usa and Greece respectively known as 3 million and 4 million The given diagrams illustrate the travel industry state in the Uk which is the proportion of visits to and AND from the Uk starting in 1979 and finishing in 1990 belonging to the first one.While , th... Read more


Lê Bảo
5/12/2023
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A few language are increasingly spoken in different countries,while the use of others is rapidly declining.It is positive or nagative development? In the contemporary world , multilingual people are no longer considered geniuses as a genius due to the intercultural relationships relationship among some countries .However , not all languages are spoken in some distinct countries , a few are one is globally distributed, and the remaining are is facing the fall.This essay will discuss both sides of the benefits and drawbacks and then provide some comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter. Moving to the benefits of, living where witnessing the intercultural development gives humans a best shot to learn new things and , concepts in new fields that your country yet has , especially language , leading to minimizing the language barrier between foreigners and locals. For instance , English , our the our mutual language stretching streching all around the world , requires required people to do make an research on how to learn and speak , resulting in widening their your knowledge with new lessons. Besides , Spanish , used in all American America countries, such as Nicaragua , Puerto Rico , Mexico. On the other hand , there are many drawbacks that significantly impact the enhancement and the diverse cultures of one country. The value of traditional cultures that which our ancestors passed pass on to us, such as poetry , literature , paintings ,old-fashioned old fashioned places , etc., will fade with time and be removed from our minds out of mind. Furthermore , multilingualism multi-language not only influences countries but also affects the whole worldwolrd. To illustrate , in Vietnam , there are many overseas oversea Vietnamese students who can students can fluently speak English but forget their mother tongue and don’t know too much about the traditional and historical timestime. In conclusion , everything on this planet has its pros and cons. Therefore , it is too hard to define whether multi-language is good or bad for world developments ,but it depends on how you use it and your attitude, and your awareness of your hometown A few language are increasingly spoken in different countries,while the use of others is rapidly declining.It is positive or nagative development? In the contemporary world , multilingual people are... Read more
Lê Bảo
5/12/2023
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Space travel has been made possible for some time and some people believe that space Tourism could be developed in the Future. Do you think it is positive or negative development? First and foremost,I hold the opinion that the universal industry is an entirely favorable development.Travelling to space plays a vital role in economic growth due to their effects on tourism and education. This one is a multi-billion dollar industry so elites or other another countries are fascinated to invent more and more of their more their budget,workforces and machines leading led to the prosperous developments Some new machines are created which have more useful functions,especially for space tourism.Moreover,space tourism not only affects on their country but also deeply affects affect in human life,especially the unemployment rate. Instead instead of attentively focusing on applying to old-fashioned markets like agriculture,humans will have a fresh opportunity provided new experiences, and new knowdledge, which leads to unemployment, which is no longer the hottest problem. For example, India’s success succeeded in launching artificial artifical satellites into the universe to universe over the last few months helped it reach a new position in economic rank and have some global controversial debates around debates in around the world. On the other hand,a large part of the public believes advocates that the disadvantage outweighs the positive. To take off one rocket, it needs a great deal of energy. resulting in the running out of fossil out fossil fuels. Furthermore,air and water pollution negatively increase due to burning fuel, which influences influence to the ozone layer and makes make it worsen little by little. To encapsulate the key findings,everything on this planet not only has an advantage but also has a disadvantage., Space space tourism is no exception. Whereas ,economic development is the first thing belonging to the space industry, it is followed by raising awareness of saving our environment,our world, and our universe. In the future, the universe future universe is no longer a dream to reach, but we can set foot on it. Space travel has been made possible for some time and some people believe that space Tourism could be developed in the Future. Do you think it is positive or negative development? First and foremost,... Read more
Trang
5/12/2023
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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. The diagram illustrates the production and preparation of coffee before being sold by sellers in supermarkets and shops. Overall, there are 11 stages in the coffee manufacturing process, beginning with the collection of coffee beans and ending to the package stage. To begin with, the ripped coffee was harvested by hand before being dried out in the sun. In addition, those dried ones are heated by an oven, cooled swiftly and crushed into powder by a grinder. After that, the ground coffee is mixed with hot water, then strained and freezed. At the following stage of the process, the frozen liquid is removed by the grinder before being dried in the vacuum. In this stage, the high temperature causes the water to evaporate, leaving only the ground coffee, which is put into different coffee containers. These coffee jars are delivered to shops and supermarkets, ready to be sold to consumers. The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. The diagram illustrates the production and preparation of coffee before being sold by sellers in superm... Read more
123@123Nt
5/12/2023
Topic :Countries are becoming more and more similar because people buy same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.Chấm.giúp.em.với@ạ.em.sắp.đi.thi@ạ
There has been several controversies over the disparities among nations are increasingly declining,as purchasing commodities is assimilating virtually in the globe.This advantages of this problem are indisputable but I would argue that they are overshadowed by its disadvantages. -On the one hand ,In my perspective ,potential benefit is tourism as well as people are immigrating can face less challenges than before.To elucidate,They are easily access to their needs;thus,they get used to living in this nation,Not only do coutries living enhance the standard of living but that also bring peace of mind.Moreover,Their people no longer have to be waste a sizeable amount of money to detect an alternative for the goods they have used. -On the other hand,The drawbacks of this problem is that transporting the product from one country to another,leading to environmental problem.That is because most transport such as yatch and plane consume fossil fuels,producing exhaust fumes and releasing CO2.In this circumstances,The research is not enforce rigorous international law to prohibit this trend.As a result,That the global warming increase as well as fauna are on the verge of extinction.Futhermore,Extreme weather event are becoming more comon and serious health issues will increasingly become prevalent. -In Conclusion as discussed above,That accessibility of product all around the globe is more advantagous than its drawback.Moreover, That will seriously affect in term of damaging environment as well as physical health. There has been several controversies over the disparities among nations are increasingly declining,as purchasing commodities is assimilating virtually in the globe.This advantages of this problem are... Read more
Huyền
5/12/2023
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? In contemporary society, there has been a noticeable increase in the number of museums requiring entrance fee while others offer free charge to the public. Although this inclination is believed to bring certain negative aspects, I believe they are overshadowed by the positive counterparts. On the one hand, one of the primary drawbacks of charging people for admission is that this trend would have an adverse influence on museum's operation in the short term. More precisely, when museums start to be open, the public might opt to visit the free-charging museums in lieu of choosing to pay for the entry, thus hindering the financial performance of charging museums in the beginning. Nevertheless, I support that this disadvantage can be outweighed by the benefits. First and foremost, charging visitors for admission might be an effective strategy in the long run. Specifically, although other complimentary museums might have an edge over museums asking for fees in the short run, they are not able to sustain their operation in years to come, given that they lack income to continue operating. Therefore, it is vital for museums to require entrance tickets. Furthermore, requirement of entry fees might also be beneficial to the employees in museums. This means they can make a living by receiving salaries allocated from a portion of entry fees, thereby lessening their financial burdens, ultimately establishing a stable life. In conclusion, although requiring entrance fees might be initially disadvantageous in the short term, I argue that its drawback is surpassed by the advantages, as it may be positive to museums' operation and their staff in the long future. Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? In contemporary society, there has been... Read more
Lê Bảo
5/12/2023
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fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? During the most recent years , in a modernized world , everything on this planet has been developed due to the advancement of technology and innovations in the economy ,leadingled to handwriting being no is no longer famous in society, replaced with using tablets or laptops to take some notes. This essay will explore the primary causes and provide comprehensive explanations to the pros and cons of using new devices . Development in technology , keeping up with the trend , and a large amount of inventions belonging to the 4.0 revolution has a significant influence on the handwriting reduction. To be more specific , in a range of 2019 and 2021 , witnessed the Covid-19 has transitioned the manual writing to digital one for the educational purpose, which can enhance the collaboration and access among educators and students , obligated humans to work ,study online , and isolate at home . Therefore , the higher percentage of laptops or tablets , met the demand of convenience , time saving and multi-task purposes.Furthermore , writing tools don’t ensure that our materials will not be lost , parallel with the higher speed at typing due to copying and pasting , belonging to modern devices . Besides , there are numerous benefits that using tablets or laptops can bring brings such as time saving , meeting the demand of convenience and multi-task purposes . To be more specific , as chat GPT or Google , had a diversity of useful functions for both workers and students . Additionally ,writing online provided an error correction system to help students immediately fix their mistakes it .However , drawbacks are still present existing , the excessive dependence on artificial intelligence restricts the brain growth and renders human become more indolent and taciturn.Take an example , in Vietnam , a large number of newspapers mentions the abuse of chat GPT to complete their dissertation , resulting in less attention to lessons and virtual school reports . To encapsulate the key finding , our world witnessed a lot of causes , but I hold a firm belief that the main cause was the development of the economy and new technologies.Moreover , I’m on the middle side of the comparison because everything that exists on this planet has its advantages and the disadvantage so no methods can define which one outweighs the other. fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? During the most recent years , in a modernized world , every... Read more
Phạm Thị Thu Thủy
5/12/2023
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. BÀI LÀM In recent years, it has become increasingly prevalent for to who prioritise buying a house rather than leasing one, and they feel it is necessary to possess an accommodation. There are several factors resulting in this perspective, which will be explained carefully in this essay. As far as I am concerned, this case has both positive and negative sides. I will discuss both its benefits and drawbacks, and give explanations and examples. There are several significant motivations that encourage humans to put great effort into purchasing a home instead of renting it. First and foremost, owning a home offers a great sense of stability and freedom for individuals and their families. For further explanation, possessing a house means a fixed accommodation and any decisions will be primarily decided by the owner. Furthermore, homeownership offers a stable life without dealing with any impacts stemming from others and worrying about any evictions or sudden alterations in rent. Also, the house proprietor has the right to make any renovations or constructions. By contrast, it is obvious that a person is constrained by an owner or landlord when they rent or lease an apartment or any other kind of accommodation. They always have to ask the landlord for permission if there are any problems or if they want to fix anything in their home. Besides, individuals who rent a home will be completely dependent and they have to put up with all the hasty conversion owing to their landowner. Another reason behind this is the financial benefits when owning a home. Individuals will not be under pressure in terms of housing expenses as they do not have to pay a certain amount of money for monthly rent. Consequently, possessing a house partly helps to alleviate the financial burden for numerous households. Having said that, despite of several advantages it offers, this situation also has some drawbacks. Firstly, homeownership ties individuals down to a specific location, making it difficult and inconvenient for those who intend to alter their accommodation by reason of their work, relatives or other personal reasons. As a result, it may limit job opportunities in terms of geographical positions. In summary, although homeownership may become numerous people’s desire, it also results in several disadvantages. I personally believe that it depends on an individual’s perspective, future plans, financial status, and so on to decide whether they should buy a house or not. In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and... Read more
Lê Bảo
5/12/2023
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In the contemporary world , following the modernized revolution , technology is more uquibitous among society , leading to the abuse of using it in some workplace.Therefore ,a large part of the public holds the opinion that its changes are just is just beneficial to the workers only not the employers. From my point of view, I don’t really agree with this statement. This essay will discuss and give some comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter. First and foremost , during the covid 19 , humans are obliged to get on screen every single day so they need their own fresh technology .However , misusing modern devices , resulting in the low quality of work and the restriction of workers’ abilities.Working at home is more convenient and gives the comfortable atmostphere for workers due to the flexibility in arranging schedule to more appropriate with their needs in comparison with working in the office .For instance , in the covid-19 , staying at home allows workers have more leisures for their family to bond the love among family members. On the other hand , to keep concentrated on working and to gain more real-world experiences , working in the office is the most suitable activity which meets.the needs. Getting acquainted with new colleagues and being under control by the employers provide staff with a strict workplace led to the significant progress in quality and quantity .For example , despite a large number of noises and attraction that work from home brings , the bosses and their workers can have an argument and be in a agreement to generate the result for company. To conclude, both of these matters also have their pros and cons. If humans don’t excessively misuse technology, it will be beneficial for them and give them a better workplace. They not only influence the workers but also directly impact the tracking of the boss. In the contemporary world , following the modernized revolution , technology is more uquibitous among society , leading to the abuse of using it in some workplace.Therefore ,a large part of the public... Read more


Kakakkkaa
5/12/2023
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Đề thi More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression? Bài làm: An increasing number of individuals are willing to invest considerable financial resources in their appearances with the aim of looking younger. In this essay, I will point out some of the major reasons why this is happening, and I believe that this trend will provide benefits, such as the development of the job market and promoting a culture of self-care and well-being. There are some several reasons why people want to look younger. First of all, a youthful appearance can contribute to confidence and success. By investing in skincare and cosmetics, people can enhance their images and promote a more optimistic and confident mindset. To illustrate, in large businesses, directors need to maintain a youthful look, resulting in increased self-esteem and confidence, helping them become an excellent leadership. Additionally, individuals with an eye-catching appearance can enhance their employment opportunities. In fact, initial impression in the eyes of other people can indicate what kind of person you are how. For example, in an interview for a job, people with attractive appearance constantly leave a positive first impression for the interviewer, which increases their employment opportunity. Therefore, the quest for a more youthful appearance becomes a means to achieve social acceptance and foster a positive self-image. The primary advantage is that the development of cosmetic industry contributes to the job market. Plenty of citizens tend to purchase cosmetic, beauty products, meaning that the sales of cosmetic corporations have significantly increased, which requires them recruit more workers. Many cosmetic companies in Vietnam, for example, tend to attract newly-graduate students to work for them. A further benefit is that citizens become more attentive to their health. Individuals engaging in skincare routines and cosmetic enhancements tend to adopt healthier lifestyle choices. This approach enhances people’s awareness about their well-being, the importance of maintaining a balanced lifestyle and self-care, fostering a positive and proactive attitude towards their well-being. As an example, people’s lives would be significantly improved and become more positive. In conclusion, there are two causes of this phenomenon, including promoting a confident attitude and enhancing employment opportunities. I believe that this trend will result in advantages, namely making more jobs for people and fostering self-care and healthy lifestyle. It seems to me that the governments should levy less tax on companies related to skincare, facilitate cosmetic industry development. Đề thi More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative prog... Read more
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5/12/2023
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The given diagrams illustrate the amount of different types of ddairy production in MT belonging to the top three manufacturers in the world known as EU , India , and the United States in 2012. At the onset , milk production witnessed a reaching the peak over the three remaining s which was parallel with holding the top position by the EU in milk and cheese manufacture.Besides , Asian countries such as India and China dominated the statisticalstatistic table in butter and milk powder fields. According to the details of the graph ,the bottom data belonged to the nation was United States , which sawseen as 90 metric tons which was followed by India withabout 127 metric tons and the leader one was the EU with around 143 2 thousand tons.That was milk product and movinge to the cheese , it one witnessed the maintenance of standing the the first position belonged to by the EU with approximately estimated 7 MT followed by 4,9 MT in the United States and the lowest was Brazil which was one-tenth of the EU. As can be seen , India reached the zenith of butter production with 4.5 MT but later saw the EU around 2 thousand tons in the EU and the significant gap was surveyed in between the quantity of the EU and the United States , around 1.2 MT.It is too obvious that china ranked the top position at 1200MT followed by a negligible gap of 90MT in n , which was similar to the New Zealand’s figure around 1 MT,while around 770 MT was recorded as the data in the EU. The given diagrams illustrate the amount of different types of ddairy production in MT belonging to the top three manufacturers in the world known as EU , India , and the United States in 2012. At th... Read more


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5/12/2023
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The given diagrams illustrate the reconstructions in/ taken place in an industrial area/ zone named Norbiton at the present and in the up-coming project. At the onset, this zone goes through substantial upgradations and all of the blocks of factories will be altered by residential areas public places such as educational and commercial or medical purposes , amusements, etc. In terms of the Current design, ly, the roundabout is centrally positioneds holds the center position and which is encircledencircles by the factories.In the north side of map is the farmland , the river behind the river which flows from west to east and divides the zone into two sides, while the town is positioned in the west .Moreover, the external one is considered as a town while the main road is located in south side. As can be seen in the remaining picture, more accomodations and some social sites will be built, which is followed by two new road branches separating the small roundabout into two distinct sides.The nearest factories in south sides of the big roundabout is altered by shops and medical centres.Besides, there is no more factories in west side due to the apearance of entertainments and schools at the end of the road.The dominated one in the west side is still a town with nothing changes,farmland will no longer in a straight line with the big roundabout ,instead of this will belong to housing. The given diagrams illustrate the reconstructions in/ taken place in an industrial area/ zone named Norbiton at the present and in the up-coming project. At the onset, this zone goes through substan... Read more


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5/12/2023
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This bar chart describes the proportion of Brazil's economy in five different fields field in industry in three years: 2009, 2019, and 2029. However,in 2029 was just a was the prediction for the future. By and large,the finance provided the highest percentage to build Brazil's economy in the past,which was expected to be the biggest contributor. On the other hand, food processing and manufacturing tended to decline sharply between 2019 and the prediction in 2029. The diagram below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy. It showed me that inIn the domain of about finance, in 2009, the percentage was about 31%, then it reached reach 37% in 2019 (an increase of about 6%) and it was forecasted to reach 42% in 2029 (just an increase of about 5%). Whereas the food processing and manufacturing accounted for the lowest amount. But according to the data in of the graph,you could see the tremendous development of around 11% (from 10% to 21%) between 2009 and 2019. However,until 2029 it was expected to decrease the percentage back to the same in 2009. Besides,. the manufacturing was forecasted to quite substantially decrease, about 11%, from 2019 to 2029. Otherwise,in the field of tourism, in 2019, the percentage was approximately aprroximately 22%, and then in 2029, it is was forecasted to be the same percentage as in 2019. But in 2009, the percentage of tourism was higher than two years later (about 26%).And the last sector was the oil,coal and gas.Oil, coal and gas contributed contributes over 25% of for the economy in 2009 and 2029, even though they it reached about 30% in 2019 This bar chart describes the proportion of Brazil's economy in five different fields field in industry in three years: 2009, 2019, and 2029. However,in 2029 was just a was the prediction for the fut... Read more
