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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The given pie charts illustrate how old the populations were in two different countries, namely Yemen and Italy in 2000, along with predictions for the the next 50 years.
Overall, it is noticeable that the population of Yemen was mostly people aged 0 to 59, with consistently remaining the most significant for the next 5 decades. Meanwhile, the number of citizens aged 15-59 in Italy was higher than that of people aged over 60. However, the figure for the oldest people in Italy is expected to be greater than other age groups in 2050.
In Yemen, the age of people in the age bracket of 0-14 and 15-59 made up the majority of the total percentage of population age, accounting for 50.1% and 46.3%, respectively. Nevertheless, the percentage of individuals aged under 15 is predicted to decrease to 37%, compared to people aged 15-59, whose age is predicted to increase to 57.3% after 50 years. The figure for the oldest group were negligible, at 3.6% in 2000, followed by a slight upward trend to 5.7% in 2050.
In Italy, the proportion of people between 15 and 59 was the greatest in 2000. People at the age of over 60 and under 15 just ranked below, with respective proportions of 24.1% and 14.3%. However, the percentages of people in the youngest and the 15-59 group are anticipated to decline to 11.5% and 46.4% in that order. Furthermore, the figure for the oldest bracket is predicted to increase rapidly to 42.3%.
The given pie charts illustrate how old the populations were in two different countries, namely Yemen and Italy in 2000, along with predictions for the the next 50 years.
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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people discuss that newspapers play a vital role in adopting news. However, I also believe that social platform is a great way to update news the fastest. In this essay, I will argue some of the advantages of collecting news from social media.
On the one hand, many reasons why people suppose newspapers are good ways to update news. Firstly, newspapers are only prevalent to elderly people who do not approach modern social media, which makes them consider newspapers to be the most reliable source of information. Additionally, newspapers are printed and published official source of supply for the government, therefore elderly tend to read newspapers to make sure the that news is the most accurate. Take reality example nowadays, the Ministry of Transport will only focus on writing issues about transportation in daily life, and the public readers choose to spend time with correct news instead of tabloids.
On the other hand, I still support social platforms bring many benefits for readers. The first reason is that the media provides a variety of news from different fields making readers easily expand their knowledge through readings. Secondly, online newspapers will be updated constantly to make readers aware of the latest issues. For example, not only online newspapers on official websites public information but influential pages or Instagram also post on media platforms create for readers a hobby of getting information.
In conclusion, while newspapers are popular for many reasons, I also believe that media platform is a good way to acquire information quickly
Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Topic: In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Solve:
It is believed that individuals in various nations prefer to put on western-style attire, such as suits and jeans, over traditional clothing. There is a range of reasons for this shift, and I believe that this trend is positive.
A range of factors are responsible for the development in this shift. One of the primary reasons is globalization and cultural exchange. Firstly, living in the integration era parallels the flourishing of technology and social media which is why people can easily approach different cultures and fashion trends in the world. Moreover, Western-fashion has played a crucial role in shaping clothing preferences, including Vietnam. For instance, many fashionistas have caused a sensation and a radical approach in the global fashion industry, such as Chau Bui, Decao, Quynh Anh Shyn,... With their impacts, people prefer to imitate, leading to the rise in popularity of western clothing, especially among the younger generation.
In my opinion, this situation represents a positive development. It is undeniable that chasing Western-fashion trends is advantageous. This has led to economic growth and created job opportunities, such as designers, shopkeepers, preventing mass unemployment. Another reason for welcoming western-style clothing is that its practically and comfort. For example, in Vietnam, the younger generation often prefers wearing jeans and t-shirts for their daily activities, as it allows them to move freely and comfortably. Even for busy individuals, time management is a significant challenge, opting for suits or jeans is a great solution when they have two or three occasions within the same day. Traditional attire is not practical for daily activities, it is only suitable for special occasions and traditional festivals.
In terms of embracing Western trends, individuals also need to be noted. The excessive pursuit of trends can lead to the loss of national identity. It is essential to strike a balance between modern styles and traditions to mitigate the negative impacts on the fashion industry and community aspects such as culture and economy.
In conclusion, the trend of wearing western-style dresses is due to the influence of globalization and popular culture. While there are some detriments to this trend, I believe it can also have more benefits to satisfy personal needs
Topic: In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
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Đề bài: The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK
The given line graph depicts number of immigrants to the uk from 2000 to 2008.The pie chart give information about the reason for immigrants in 2008
Overall it can be observed that while the figure for people intended to stay less than 4 years witnessed upward trends the number of people stay 4 or more years stabled throughout the period.Notably, the reason migration because of work was dominant in 2008
Turning to line graph ,the total of immigrants stay less than 2 years accounted for 150 thousand people between 2000 and 2001, equaled people stay 4 or more years and outstripped immigrants stay between 2 and 4 years about 100 thousand people.After that it rose sharply to 250 thousand people in 2004 and remained stable till the end.Similarly the figure for people stay between 2 and 4 years followed a similar pattern as it increased noticeably from 50 thousand people in 2000 to more than 100 thousand people in the next 8 years.Another highlight is that, people stay for more than 4 years freeze at 150 thousand people from 2000 to 2008
It is apparent that, The reason for migrating for work was higher than the reason for studying, the former being 38% and the latter being 32%.Consistently ranked third was accompany and join family achieving a percentage about 16% which was higher than no reason stated and other around 9%
Đề bài: The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK
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Topic: More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression?
In this day and age, there has been an increasing rate of people spending plenty of money on complexion treatments. This phenomena can be attributed to two reasons in terms of boosting their individual's appearance and gaining more career opportunities. However, from my perspective, I completely believe its drawbacks are more significant as it affects people's health and consumes a lot of money.
On the one hand, people are willing to invest a large amount of money to look younger because of two reasons. The foremost reason is the fact that these products can boost people’s look, enhancing their attractiveness and confidence. As a result, they will have more opportunities in starting a romantic relationship or remain physically attractive to their partners. Additionally, the great appearance plays an essential role in many jobs so that people can stand a higher chance of their occupation. To be more specific, in some fields including hospitality, business and so on, having an attractive look can play a factor in reaching higher positions and improving their standard of living.
On the other hand, in my point of view, I completely hold the view that this is a disadvantage development owing to its’ ability to impact on a person's health and finances. First of all, many low-quality products can have an enormous impact on individuals’ health. To begin with, many articles have reported on cases where users had to experience many undesirable effects. Some of them suffered from multitudes of symptoms such as rashes, breakout or even skin tissue damages, leading to hospitalization. The next concern relating to this is its ability to create financial pressure for consumers. To purchase these skin-care products, people are willing to allocate generously money on them, which might make people fall into debt or lack of resources in investment for their future.
In conclusion, the reasons for the tendency of people who want to become younger can be answered by two factors, including the desire to boost their appearance and have career prospects. However, I believe this is a negative development as its influence on people’s health and money management.
Topic: More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative pro...
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Topic: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that people have used social media platforms instead of direct contact in recent years. Although doing this has several disadvantages, the benefits may be far more significant.
On the one hand, there can be some minor disadvantages of the social media network. One possible issue is that social media platforms can make users concerned about privacy and security. The reason is that many websites require users to provide their personal data. As a result, users may be subject to targeted advertising, data breaches, and potential misuse of their personal information.
Nevertheless, the fact that people use social media for direct contact can have major advantages which overshadow these negative impacts. The most obvious benefit could be that using social media can help people connect their relationships across distances. This is because some social media platforms that people have been using in recent years, like Facebook and Twitter, allow people to communicate with their friends and family regardless of their geographical location, thereby maintaining their relationships and staying updated on each other’s lives, even when physically separated. The second merit is that using social media can help people release stress after many working or learning hours. For instance, when they have free time, they can watch the reels of their friends or some comedy videos to relax, which helps them feel comfortable after working and learning.
In conclusion, despite the potential downsides of the use of social media platforms in recent years, the beneficial effects brought about are of greater importance.
Topic: The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in everyday life. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Many people opine that the affluence of the regional economy serves as an optimal strategy to combat poor living conditions. While others believe that this has many unfavorable implications on the environment. This essay will elaborate on both perceptions and also provide my own viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is acknowledged that the prosperous economy has many beneficial impacts on miserable individuals, as it escalates overall living standards among them. By doing so, this formulates occupational opportunities due to the need of the labor workforce, thereby mitigating an immense amount of the unemployed. The prime illustration of this is that in an industrial sector, an apparent quantity of blue-collar workers is associated with economic growth in order to create products for the demand of society. Furthermore, another advantage is that many developmental efforts put in increasing medical fields and welfare, facilitating impoverished people to approach. As a result, this contributes substantially to the increased generall well-being, especially for miserable children.
On the other hand, while this has many merits in aiding a better life, the growth of the economy also has some repercussions on the ecological state. In terms of tourism sectors, the increased garbage is associated with promoting the culture of travelling, as many non-native visitors tend to behave terribly. Consequently, the prolonged state of this phenomenon may turn into a severe concern for the environment. For instance, in Thailand, the country has faced many environmental issues because of the escalated overseas tourists travelling each year.
In my opinion, while this measure is necessary to address the presence of the redundancy of the homeless and the impoverished, many restricitions and policies should be taken into consideration. To be more precise, implementing harsh punishments in case the travellers compromissing the enviroment, while applying renewable energy into industrial sectors.
To conclude, economic growth can undoubtedly alleviate poverty and improve living conditions; however, we must also address its negative impacts on the environment. It is imperative that measures are taken to ensure sustainable development practices are implemented alongside economic expansion efforts.
Many people opine that the affluence of the regional economy serves as an optimal strategy to combat poor living conditions. While others believe that this has many unfavorable implications on the env...
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The bar charts illustate the proportion of consuming fast food in residents in USA (2003-2013)
It is obvious that the percentage of pupils among 2003 and 2006 seem frequently getaway to fast food restaurant once a week. Futhermore in 2013 which is the highest in the stage once or twice a month
People in American during 2003 and 2006 make out the highest amount which is over 30% once a week in restaurant and in 2013 the proportion considerably less than 35% in once or twice a month. However, the figure frequency every day is the lowest of everything, just under 5%
The quantity in a sex times a year in 2006 and 2013 is the same and precisely 15%
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The bar charts illustate the proportion of consuming fast food in residents in USA (2003-2013)
It is obvious that the percentage of pupils among 2003 and 2006 seem frequently getaway to fas...
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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of Australian both male and female practice exercise in 2010.
in broad terms, It's noticeable that the age group of age 15 to 24 reveal the highest number of male and from 45 to 24 show the top of female. Male in Australian 15 to 24 tends to participate in doing exercise more than any period which makes out 52.8% meanwhile the percentage of woman in 45 to 54 is the highest in every stage of female and eventually the highest of the charts with the evidence is 53,3% which is more than figure of 52,8% male in 15 to 24
By contrast, the age 35 to 44 of male is the lowest just 39,5% and the lowest figure of all. Also female in 25 to 34 make out just 42,2% which is the lowest of woman and the sec lowest just over 39,5% of male.
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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of Australian both male and female practice exercise in 2010.
in broad terms, It's noticeable that the age group of age 15 to 24 reveal the highest n...
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The given pie chart illustrates the distribution of passengers from different areas and the provided table demonstrates their number of day-offs, the most popular accommodation, along with major activity in a specific holiday resort in Australia.
Overall, it is noticeable that the majority of tourists going on holiday in Australia come from US and Europe, with their average lengths of stay being the most significant while a converse pattern is witnessed in the case of Asian tourists. Additionally, camping and caravan are more popular accomodation for European passengers and visitors from other regions, whereas most Asian and American tourists prefer sightseeing.
According to the pie chart, European visitors make up the majority of total percentage of tourists traveling to Australia, accounting for 37%, followed by 35% of the US passengers. Meanwhile, the figures for visitors from Asia and other nations are slightly lower, at 10% and 18%, respectively.
Turning to the table, European and American visitors spend the greatest number of days on vacation in the overall length of stay, with respective figures of 16 days and 14 days. Individuals from other regions and Asia rank just below, standing at 10 days and 7 days, comparatively. Regarding accommodations, camping and caravan are the most favorable choices for European tourists and tourists from other countries, whereas the remaining groups opt to stay in hotels. Nevertheless, Asian and American people are immersed in sightseeing while passengers from Europe and other nations are more into other activities on the beach, such as swimming, sunbathing and surfing.
The given pie chart illustrates the distribution of passengers from different areas and the provided table demonstrates their number of day-offs, the most popular accommodation, along with major activ...
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The given table illustrates the average retirement age of men and women in different nations within the year 2003.
Overall, it is noticeable that males always retired later than females in all countries. Furthermore, Japanese people had the same retirement ages as Italian employees while the figures for France and Korea were comparatively the highest and lowest during the research.
In Korea, male employees were reported to retire when they were nearly 69, whereas women could stop working 2 months after turning 67. Meanwhile, French men were allowed to retire when they were 57 years and 4 months, compared to women, with a figure of just below 57 years. Similar patterns were witnessed in Japanese and Italian workers’ ages, with nearly 67 years and a half for males and under 67 years for women.
Turning to the United States, the figure for males was 65 years and 6 months, as opposed to females, standing at 64 years and 2 months. In addition, Australian men were regulated to retire at the age of just above 64, followed by 63 years and a half for females in 2003.
The given table illustrates the average retirement age of men and women in different nations within the year 2003.
Overall, it is noticeable that males always retired later than females in all countr...
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The given diagram depicts how much money that residents in five Australian cities have paid for water bills and provides an average bill per household.
As can be seen, locals living in Adelaide and Perth pay the least if they use excessively , reaching to 125 KL, while the charge applied on these two mentioned cities is the highest. Besides, Perth also holds the peak in average bill that one household pays and the opposite belongs to Melbourne.
At first glance, figures for overusing up to 125 kL cases witness the domination of Melbourne and Sydney which are respectively known as $0.78 and $0.98, followed by remaining stable if locals use over 125KL. In Brisbane city, there is a slight upsurge between reaching 125KL and surpassing 125KL about $0.3. While, the price that citizens in Adelaide and Perth are charged sees a significant increase starting at $0.42 and reaching $1.00 and $1.50.
Moving to the final column, the highest overall bill per family is in Perth, at $332 and on the opposite side belongs to Melbourne with $253. Furthermore, the remaining three cities seen as Adelaide, Brisbane and Sydney have quite similar prices in the range of $310 and $219.
The given diagram depicts how much money that residents in five Australian cities have paid for water bills and provides an average bill per household.
As can be seen, locals living in Adelaide and P...
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Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is asserted that the government should invest the national budget in locating an increasing number of artworks like paintings and statues inside metropolises to make them appealing destinations. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely agree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that putting more works of art into towns and cities to attract visitors might be beneficial to the local people. More precisely, valuable works of art, such as pictures and statues could be appealing to various tourists who desire to have more insights into historical and architectural values of regions. As a result, tourism can provide local people with many employment opportunities like tourist guides, history presenters, etc, thus making a handsome profit, ultimately improving their quality of life.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that this policy can be positive to national development. In fact, a great number of foreigners who are insterested in historical and architectural values are believed to visit the cities and towns, thereby increasing the overall revenue of national tourism. This is exemplified by the fact that Statue of Liberty, located in the center of New York city, has risen the USA’s revenue to over 100 million USD per year by attracting a range of visitors, thus contributing to national development.
In conclusion, I advocate that allocating national expenditure in putting artworks inside cities and towns should be encouraged, given that this policy might supply occupations for local people and make a substantial contribution to the nation as well.
Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting more works of art like paintings and statues into towns and cities to make them attractive places
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Several professors consider that students should be taught a second language at elementary school instead of secondary school. Although this inclination is believed to have certain negative aspects, I believe they are overshadowed by the positive counterparts.
On the one hand, one of the major drawbacks of teaching language at primary school is that it would overtake children's leisure time. More precisely, extracurricular activities are believed to play a key role in developing children's social development at a young age. Therefore, learning an additional language would reduce their free time spent on social activities like sports, teamworking, thus isolating them from society.
On the other hand, I argue that this drawback is outweighed by the benefits. Initially, early linguistic education might be beneficial to improvement of children's intelligence. More precisely, language is considered to be pivotal to stimulate both of human hemispheres, thereby equally enhancing logical thinking and creativity at an early stage. Furthermore, studying a language at elementary school might be beneficial to children's personalities. For instance, primary school students can become more sociable when studying English, given that language can make it easier for them to engage in conversation with foreigners, thereby having an advantageous impact on their personalities.
In conclusion, although some experts advocate that students should learn a foreign language when entering secondary school for the sake of their free time on other extracurriculum activities, I support that learning a second language at primary school bring more benefits, as it is advantageous to children's brains and behaviors.
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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The given bar chart illustrates how many minutes (in billions) spent on three different types of telephone in the UK over a period of 7 years commencing in 1995.
Overall, it is noticeable that fixed line consistently remained the most significant in the number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK during the research period. Furthermore, the figure for local - fixed line witnessed a marginal fluctuation while the upward trends were observed in the remaining categories.
Standing at over 70 billion minutes in the initial year, the number of minutes spent on local - fixed line experienced a rapid increase, reaching a peak of exactly 90 billion minutes in 1999 prior to gradually declining to about 71 billion minutes in the final year.
Regarding national and international - fixed line, the figure initially stood at approximately 37 billion minutes, followed by a stable rise to record its highest point of above 60 billion minutes after 7 years. Mobile phones followed a similar trend, but at a lower rate, standing at under 10 billion minutes in the first 4 years before rapidly growing, reaching its highest point of roughly 44 billion minutes by the end of the timeframe.
The given bar chart illustrates how many minutes (in billions) spent on three different types of telephone in the UK over a period of 7 years commencing in 1995.
Overall, it is noticeable that fixe...
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Several individuals assert that voluntary services, such as charity, improving neighborhood and teaching sports to younger children should be required in high school's curriculum. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely agree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that volunteering activities can be beneficial to developing students' soft skills and personalities. Initially, being volunteers might require cooperation in groups to complete the tasks. As a result, students can make it easier to engage in conversations with other members, thus enhancing their communication skills, teamwork skills, etc. Furthermore, some unpaid public services might be a great method for students to become more sympathetic. For instance, when working for a charity in orphanages, students are believed to understand the difficulty of parentless children, thereby kindling their sympathy, ultimately having a positive impact on their personalities.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that performing voluntary service might be advantageous to students' healths. First and foremost, this trend can have a positive effect on physical health. Specifically, when teaching sports to younger children, they could spend a greater amount of time on taking part in physical activities, which can be an effective way to stay in shape. Moreover, several public services like improving the neighborhood can bring a multitude of opportunities for students to enjoy the fresh air and lift their mood after classes during school. For example, planting trees in surrounding areas would enable them to be friendly to nature, thereby improving their mental health.
In conclusion, I advocate that unpaid community service should be a mandatory part of learning programs at high school for the sake of improving social skills and behaviors. Additionally, volunteering could enhance students' health both physically and mentally.
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger ch...
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As a part of their education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, with the emergency of culture exchange, language is a bridge to tighten countries together. Some individuals suppose that the best approach to master a language is to live in this country for a certain time. From my point of view, I cannot entirely concur with this perspective in some instances.
Undeniably, living in the country where you are learning language is a golden opportunity to enhance your life experience and linguistic ability. Compared to reading magazines or watching videos, by which learners can have chances to experience the culture and have daily conversation with indigenous people. These help students not only sharpen their influence, but also pick up a new vocabulary in various contexts. For instance, one of the most notorious Vietnamese youtuber - Chao, she used to admit that her English skills were boosted drastically as she lived with her New Zealand roommates during her studying abroad process.
On the other hand, I still argue that spending time living in another nation to learn its language and culture has several drawbacks for everyone, especially people who are insufficient in living conditions. Going abroad requires learners to allocate a large amount of budget for flying tickets, accommodation costs, tuition fee,.. It is extravagant compared to the average standard of living in Vietnam, especially for students who live in isolated areas. Subsequently, language barriers and cultural shocks are unavoidable in the first time studying overseas. As a result, the process of absorbing a foreign language takes students a certain amount of time to familiarize themselves, and practice every day, irrespective of their language ability. After only a few months of trial and error, individuals who are persistent enough can overcome language difficulties and confidently pursue more knowledge of cultures and traditions.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the disadvantages of learning language by moving to this country, I consider that this field play a pivotal role in our contemporary life
As a part of their education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Đề bài: The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The two pie charts compare the proportion of the 23-65 age group in different occupations in Ashby that is a town of the UK and in the whole UK in 2018.
Overall, while British people preferred working in office, personal service work were the most popular jobs in Ashby.
The proportion of people who did not have jobs in the UK accounted for 10%, whereas that in Ashby were higher with 14%. The percentage of office work and shop work made up 18% and 14%, respectively, similar to that in the UK with 19% and 13%, respectively.
In addition, the figure for professional work and technical work in the UK were much higher than that in Ashby, 17% and 14% compared to 9% and 8%, respectively. By contrast, the proportion of construction work and personal services in the UK were lower than that in Ashby, 10% and 17% compared to 16% and 21%, respectively.
Đề bài: The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
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The maps below show the changes happening in the Belien village from 2005 to 2010.
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The maps compare the changes between Belien village in 2005 and after several facility construction in the next 5 years.
Overall, this urban area was considerably transformed during the period. Noticeably, it is highlighted that the road systems were clearly widened and several amenities were constructed over the whole time frame.
Looking closely, a primary shift is the farming field, which was demolished and made way for a golf course in 2010. Additionally, a widening in road systems can be observed, while the unavailable railway was brought into
use, the small road was expanded near the railway and led directly to the gold section.
On the other hand, some minor shifts were displayed in this area. Specifically, a small tree area beneath the central hotel was logged and replaced by a hospital. Also, there were appears of a new warehouse and railway station 2010 near the port and at the top of the map respectively. Moreover, a parking lot was erected on the original site of the bus station which was relocated near the 3-way intersection of the small road.
The maps below show the changes happening in the Belien village from 2005 to 2010.
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The maps compare the changes between Belien village in 2005 and after several facility construction in the n...
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This given picture depicts how to completely manufacture maple syrup products which have over gone numerous stages.
At first glance, the sap flows witness two different sides between night and day leading to a tube followed by storing it in a tank to get ready for some treaments.
As can be seen, the flow of sap in the freezing condition is towards the top but in warm conditions, this flow along the tree trunk to a tap equipped with a tube for pouring into a tank. Furthermore, this mixture is exposed to the sun to evaporate stems.
Following this, after putting the products of evaporation into cans or tins, there are two distinct ways to consume. Firstly, it is put in storage and saved for decorating cakes and being a crucial ingredient to make the taste more flavourful. However, it can be immediately used to generate a group of small desserts such as tiramisu, macaron,...
This given picture depicts how to completely manufacture maple syrup products which have over gone numerous stages.
At first glance, the sap flows witness two different sides between night and day l...
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