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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read moreMinh Hạnh
2/11/2023
Thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ, em cảm ơn nhiều.
Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowadays, many people believe that their children should be exposed to the educational environment as soon as possible, whereas others believe that the students should only start their curriculums after 7 years old. This essay will first closely clarify both views before concluding that I agree with the latter view. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe there are numerous advantages to give children education early. The key rationale in favor of this notion is that in formative years, children could easily absorb new knowledge and develop their talent. For instance, many parents tend to encourage their girls or boys to learn logical math and art subjects. Therefore, these children become more smart, curious and creative than others. Considering these, the idea of educating the children when they were young is justifiable. On the other hand, I am convinced that children should be naturally developed up to the age of 7. This is because the children at too young age need more time to perfect their brain, muscle and bone systems. If they have to approach too many strange things, they will be overloaded, which can be detrimental to both their mental and physical health. Children are forced to learn more than two languages at the same time is a typical case, which makes them have language disorders when they grow up. In conclusion, while there are justifications that children should be educated at a very young age, I would contend that they need to improve comprehensively before beginning the education. Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowaday... Read moreNguyễn Đức Tú
1/11/2023
Cách làm phần writing task 1
Hiện tại mik bắt đầu học phần writing task 1 nhưng ko bt cách làm, mn có thể chỉ cho em các bước làm được không ạ? Hiện tại mik bắt đầu học phần writing task 1 nhưng ko bt cách làm, mn có thể chỉ cho em các bước làm được không ạ?Mina Tran
31/10/2023
Thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ.
The chart illustrates how recycling centers collected waste of paper, glass, tins and garden between 2011 and 2015. Overall, there was an increase in the amount of waste collected in all categories examined, with the most significant rise being seen in the figure for paper. Despite that, the garden consistently had the lowest figure throughout the period. The amount of paper waste started at 57 tons in 2011 after which it experienced a dramatically decrease to 40 tons in 2013 and soared to 70 tons at the end of the period. In 2011, 48 tons of glass waste collected by recycling centers, with a subsequent slight drop to 41 tons in 2012 and mildly rose to 46 tons in 2013 and remained the same in 2014, and the final continuous increase to 52 tons. The tins of waste collection was at 35 tons and sharply declined to 27 tons in 2012, followed by a gradual increase to 39 tons three years later. The figure for garden waste collection decreased a half at the beginning of the period to 15 tons and fluctuated remarkably in 2013 and 2014, before ending the period at 35 tons of waste. The chart illustrates how recycling centers collected waste of paper, glass, tins and garden between 2011 and 2015. Overall, there was an increase in the amount of waste collected in all categories e... Read moreMina Tran
31/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ———————— There are conflicting opinions as to whether humans should be reliant on others instead of living independently. In my opinion, although living reliant on others can live more easily, living without dependency is still more than the drawback. It is true that living relies on others, which can reduce the difficulty of living expenditures. This means that people can save some money to do other important things. For example, those who are married still choose to live with their parents to save on housing-cost when they do not have enough money to buy their own house. If the married people do not live dependent on their family, it will be hard to have an abundant life. Instead of living independently that may not save a lot of money to do many things, it seems reasonable that many people choose to live reliant on their family. However, others who choose living self-reliance can develop their personal development. When people start to live independently, they can self-learn many ways to take care of themselves and improve their soft skills. Research has generally shown that 85% students went to school while working in part-time jobs to cover their life, which usually have more social knowledge and also find a potential job even before graduating. With learning many ways to live independently, they can avoid taking advantage of the bad people. Therefore, people nowadays want to improve life skills to protect themself rather than depend on others. In conclusion, while living dependent on others is definitely a big money saver, it is evident that living self-reliance could enhance the soft skills by self-learning in their social life. Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ———————— There are conflict... Read moreVinh
22/10/2023
Nhờ thầy cô sửa giúp em bài viết này ạ. In what ways are social networks helpful for your study?
Social networks and technology have revolutionized the way we teach and study. First and foremost, social media proves to be an endless source of regularly updated information that can be accessed via a simple click of a mouse. For example, there is an array of English newspapers and magazines such as The Guardian, The Economist, and so on. In this fashion, learners can be provided with trending news happening worldwide and hot debates, contributing to one's enhancing cognitive and life skills, and honing one's critical thinking, which would be extremely vital in their later lives. Secondly, a wide variety of educational sites are readily available on the Internet, where the majority of lessons are not only free but also beneficial for learners. A fine example of such sites is Coursera, a massive provider of Internet-based courses, the majority of which are free and helpful towards learners. In addition, social media makes education more dynamic and adaptable to the demands of the modern world. To be more specific, teachers also benefit by using interactive apps and online platforms to create engaging presentations and quizzes. Last but not least, social media platforms pave the way for remote learning, ensuring that education continues even when students cannot be in the classroom. This flexibility is especially critical in time of the Covid-19 Pandemic, during which time schools and factories were closed down due to the lethal virus. So individuals can opt for online learning in their own home and at their own pace. In conclusion, social networks in education not only expand learning opportunities but also make education more dynamic and continuous. Social networks and technology have revolutionized the way we teach and study. First and foremost, social media proves to be an endless source of regularly updated information that can be accessed v... Read moreLê Trung Thành
24/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm và chữa bài task 2 giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ
Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? There has been much controversy about whether some students in recent years tend to take a year-long break after high school graduation that have more benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, this trend is more disadvantageous. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that taking a gap year is detrimental. One clear disadvantage of it is that it can lead to loss of confidence. The reason is because students can face a peer pressure, they always feel behind in terms of age and learning. Additionally, high school seniors can lose their momentum, finding it hard to continue. For instance, when they take a gap year that is too long, they do not have any motivation to push them come back, everything in front their eyes are spacious and they do not know how to begin with an intense school schedule. This drawback may pose a challenge for students who want to cultivate relevant job skills during the gap year. It is noticeable that most high school seniors graduate, there is a lack of work experience and professional qualifications, and they may end up doing low-paying jobs. On the other hand, I believe there are stronger benefits to delaying tertiary education for a one year. One advantage is that it provides them with more experiences, life skills and soft skills. This is because gap-year affords a new graduated time to travel, immerse themselves in various cultures in the world, which helps them enrich their life experiences and hone practical skills. Such a benefit is especially important for identifying their interests and a suitable career path. The fact is that many schools in Vietnam do not offer workshops aimed at career orientation or attending vocational training courses. They find it challenging to explore their personalities, hobbies, and interests to make a good choice in just a few months. It is quite difficult for students when they need to balance their studies and their orientation. In conclusion, while taking a gap year is not without certain benefits, I would contend that the given disadvantages do not make it a worthwhile path. Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? There has been much controversy about whether... Read moreVo gia thinh
25/10/2023
mong thầy cô chấm bài giúp em ạ, em cảm ơn nhiều ạ
Topic: Some people think that the main influence on young people's diet is advertising rather than family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In modern times, some inhabitants believe that the prime influence on young people's diet is advertising rather than family and friends.Personally, I assume that family and friends are more pivotal than advertising on young denizens' diets. There are some reasons to explain that young people's diets are impacted by advertising on social media or TV programs. Initially, young residents watch advertising on TV and they are affected by mouth-watering meals, such as candies, ice creams, and French fries. Hence, they desire to apply these meals to their diets. For example, the rate of obesity in children grows from strength to strength across the globe in light of advertising. Secondly, some influencers review new food, which is a stepping stone for young people’s curiosity in terms of this food. To illustrate, some meals become far-reaching, and citizens want to try eating them because some celebrities reviewed these meals. There are some more persuasive arguments that family and friends direct youngsters' diet immediately through their traditional meals and time eating out together. Initially, when the youngsters were infants, they were likely to eat some meals through their parents. Therefore, they were familiar with these meals and could not change their taste. Take exchange students as an example, they invariably miss traditional food in their hometown, and they spend a huge amount of time on adapting new cultures. Secondly, people eat out with their friends who have common meals in restaurants or food courts. Gradually, they also establish eating habits. To be specific, many groups are set up because they have the same eating hobby. In conclusion, the implications of young people's diet stem from both advertising and family and friends. Nevertheless, family and friends have greater importance. Topic: Some people think that the main influence on young people's diet is advertising rather than family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In modern times, some inhabitants belie... Read moreBhannn
27/10/2023
Chấm giúp em với ạ
Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? --------------------------------------------- Since the modern era started, the status of renowned people have changed, for which celebrities have earned higher incomes compared to politicians. Although this advance generally has no significant negative impacts on our society these days, the future will. Based on the status quo, do viewers enthuse on entertainment programmes more than on political counterparts do. It is apparent that TV shows such as comedy or reality games greatly make their name for attracting watchers, which brings about the well-known statement for celebrities. By contrast, because of its profound knowledge, politics might not deem to be a heated debate to all subjects. Hence, reasonably, the less prevalent they get, the lower income they get. On the other hand, although this development, at the moment, does not seem to leave any detrimental impacts on society, it might risk the upcoming era. Status of the politicians, in some ways, reflects the society. Therefore, the phenomenon of not being enthusiastic in this field might lead to an irreversible lack of highly evaluating the importance of it. Consequently, becoming politicians is not going to be a hot tendency among young people which accounts for the human resources in the educational field of the countries might be in shortage. To belabor the point, rising entertaining purposes is the main cause of the status replacement of two figures: celebrities and politicians, which explains the disparity in earnings. Moreover, as long as the existence of this status quo is still, the risk for the future will still be in greatly unforeseen and tremendous negative impacts. Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? --------------------------------------------- Since the modern era star... Read morenguyen ly
29/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa cho em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. answer: In the contemporary world, it is believed that there are many chances for people, which means they have to choose the best for them in all aspects. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will highlight several choices, thanks to the development of our society. It is obvious that accommodation and jobs have captured the public's interest for a long time. Regarding life in cities and rural areas, there are many distinctions of accommodation. For example, many people who are in the hope of higher living standards would tend to live in metropolises because of the development of better services and welfare. In recent years, in many countries, budget allocations for healthcare and infrastructure in large cities have been extended, leading to a better life for inhabitants. By contrast, counter-urbanization has also occurred for a long time, due to overpopulation in metropolises. Therefore, people have to choose the best place for them to settle in. In addition, job networking is also a concrete factor that people can pay attention to. It is ubiquitous that most staff nowadays want to apply for a job with high wage, good welfare and promotion, so they will choose an appropriate agency in order to meet their demands. In terms of the society scale, there are a variety of ways that everyone could contribute to our society. Firstly, people can help disadvantaged individuals if they donate supplies or participate in charity campaigns. For instance, it is not uncommon that a number of charity organizations have been established, which means impoverished people can have a better life. Secondly, to join in environmental conservation, inhabitants can do several household solutions or participate in green movements. Annually, in Vietnam, “We Cycle” are organised to engage people to recycle and reduce plastic consumption. Moreover, it has been investigated that there has been a reduction in soil pollution, thanks to the restriction of undecomposed trash and cleaning detergents in households. In conclusion, among plenty of choices in life, people can choose the best one relying on their standard, hence it leads to a higher living standard and helps them to meet their basic needs. (356 words) Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn... Read moreMinh Hạnh
27/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. The line graphs illustrate the average monthly expenditure that British parents spent on their children's sports and the number of children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014. Overall, there is a gradual increase in the amount of monthly money that parents spend on children's sporting activities. It is noticeable that the number of children who participated in football was the highest during the whole period examined. In 2008, British families spent approximately 20 pounds per month on sports activities for their children. Over the six-year period, the average monthly spend rose steadily and reached more than 30 pounds in 2014. The number of participants in football clubs was recorded at 8 million children in 2008, while that of athletics and swimming was only 2 million and 1 million, respectively. The number of children playing football demonstrated a stable growth over 6 years and achieved 9 million in 2014. At the same period, athletics participation doubled and the figure for swimming students had a near fivefold increase. The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in thr... Read moreTrang
28/10/2023
nhờ thầy cô xem và ước lượng band điểm giúp em với ạ, em xin cảm ơn
The line graph highlights the information about the percentage of people aged 65 and over in three distinct countries, namely Japan, Sweden, and the USA from 1940 to 2040. From an overall perspective, what stands out from the graph is that all three countries witness a gradual increase throughout the period. Another striking thing is that the figure for Japan is the lowest for most of the studied period. Turning to the details, in 1940, Japan had the smallest proportion of elderly individuals at 5%, in comparison to about 7% and 9% in Sweden and the USA, respectively. In the next 50 years, there was a significant rise in the percentage of the elderly population in both Sweden and the USA to roughly 15%, whereas the figure for Japan reached the lowest point at approximately 4%. Looking into the future, it is predicted that Japan's elderly population will see a dramatic surge and peak at 27% between 2030 and 2040, up from 10%. Moreover, the same trend will also be seen in the USA and Sweden, with percentages increasing from around 16% and 18% to just under 25% and 25%, respectively The line graph highlights the information about the percentage of people aged 65 and over in three distinct countries, namely Japan, Sweden, and the USA from 1940 to 2040. From an overall perspective,... Read morenguyen ly
25/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn nhiều ạ.
The given bar chart reveals the proportion of people who were born in Australia and other countries, settled in cities, towns and rural areas between 1950 and 2010. Overall, as can be seen from the illustration, people tended to live in the cities with the figure being the highest over the period. By contrast, towns and rural areas were less prevalent, whose figures had declined considerably throughout six decades. Looking at the data of inhabitants born in Australia, it is obvious that the percentage of citizens was ranked the highest, from roughly 50% to over 60%. In contrast, the figures for residents in towns and rural areas experienced a downward trend, from 20% and 30% to just approximately 18% respectively, marking the same position in 2010. Moving onto the percentage of people born outside Australia settling in three different places, while cities were preferred by the majority, leading to a significant growth in the quantity of citizens (80%), rural areas were the least common with the figure being only one-eighth of that for cities. Regarding towns, the proportion of people living in towns saw a slight fall, reaching around 10% at the end of the period. (196 words) The given bar chart reveals the proportion of people who were born in Australia and other countries, settled in cities, towns and rural areas between 1950 and 2010. Overall, as can be seen from the i... Read moreNgoc Han
23/10/2023
Nhờ mng và thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em bài này ạ, em cám ơn nhiều!
In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Recently, there has been a surge in pressure among students, ranging from school to university. They therefore desire to immerse themselves in working at a young age. From my perspective, this tendency is neither too negative nor positive. To begin with, there are some valuable merits that students might expose to the workplace at an early age. Gaining more practical work experience is the primitive explanation. Given that most scholars start their work soon, they might encounter a wide range of pragmatic circumstances in which the educational system cannot educate them. For example, staff members of a business have to meet different people with dissimilar personalities; they thus come up with various methods to satisfy the demands of these customers. This, in turn, provides young laborers with social knowledge, helping them to enhance their career aptitude and broaden their horizons. Additionally, working early can enable them to earn salaries compared to those who solely rely on studying. This might release the family's financial burden when young people are self-financing as well as confer an opportunity for earlier promotion. Nevertheless, there are some cons that may hinder intellectuals from being workers in their adolescence. Firstly, it is perhaps not effortless for them to find a job in this competitive market. As most enterprises nowadays are willing to yield more profits and maintain a good reputation, they might not appoint those who have inadequate expert knowledge and irrelevant degrees to an important post. Furthermore, seeking a suitable career can contribute to another tense problem that students have to deal with. Secondly, scholars can face numerous drawbacks, such as ill-treatment. On the grounds that young people have robust labor power, some unrespectable bosses can take advantage of them by virtue of their immaturity and lack of empirical awareness. To conclude, from my viewpoint, being forced into hard work is not totally a negative trend. However, parents and teachers may be responsible for counseling and helping students with their future, and educators might be judicious decision-makers. In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Recent... Read morenguyen ly
15/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài giúp em ạ
The given bar chart depicts how the number of the UK’s households by their annual income had changed from 2007 to 2015. Overall, as can be seen from the illustration, it is conspicuous that the most prevalent is households having $100,000+ yearly, while the figure for families with $75,000-$99,999 stood at the lowest point over the period. Looking at the data of three lower groups of income, it is noticeable that the number of households earning from $50 thousand to $74,999 annually remained constant at over 20 million throughout the given time. By contrast, there was a coinciding growth in the figures for $25-thousand-and-under and $25,000-$49,999 brackets, which were around 25 million and 28 million respectively. Moving on to other cohorts, the figure for the $100-thousand-and-over group increased considerably by approximately 4 million, to 33 million in 2015, roughly double that for the $75,000-$99,999 bracket, which grew by only 1 million over eight years. (154 words) The given bar chart depicts how the number of the UK’s households by their annual income had changed from 2007 to 2015. Overall, as can be seen from the illustration, it is conspicuous that the most... Read moreKieu
22/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm dùm em bài writing task 2 ạ, em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạ
It is observed that in many countries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? In recent years, many countries have experienced a noticeable decrease in the number of students pursuing scientific subjects such as maths, physics, chemistry or biology. There are numerous reasons behind this trend, and it will likely have a very negative effect on society. For many years, scientific subjects have been given a very damaging reputation as being very difficult and can only be studied by smart students. This is further compounded by the depiction of maths and science subjects in the media, especially in movies or TV shows aiming at the teenage demographics that stereotype maths or science students as “nerds” or “uncool”, socially awkward kids. As a result, many students have been discouraged from studying science-based subjects. Additionally, the majority regard scientific subjects as being very niche. For example, most future careers do not require a high level of physics or chemistry knowledge, unless one works in a field which directly involves these areas. Thus, unless a student wishes to pursue a university major and/or career in specific scientific subjects, he or she is unlikely to choose to continue with maths or science at high school or secondary level. It is undoubted that the lack of interest and low participation in science disciplines exerts adverse impacts on society. This is because modern technology advancement and innovations have vastly been driven by passionate scientists without whom discoveries would not be made and life quality of humankind would not improve over the years. Furthermore, with the rising number of students opting for business and economics, there will be an imbalance in the future workforce, meaning that job applicants will face fierce competition in those fields while there is a shortage of qualified science professionals. In conclusion, the reasons why students are shying away from science subjects are multiple, and in an era when it is evident that these subjects play an ever-increasing role in our countries’ economies, the potential impact on society is certainly not going to be a positive one. It is observed that in many countries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? In recent years, many countries hav... Read moreDo Quang Thanh Truc
21/10/2023
Mong thầy cô xem giúp em ạ
The line graph illustrates that the total number of individuals settling in cities in different Asian countries such as Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040 is presented a percentage. Overall, the general trend is predicted to be a significant increase in 2040. In 1970, the figure in Malaysia and Philippines began at around 30%, while in Indonesia and Thailand started at under 20%, which was two-third compared to Malaysia and Philippines. The percentage of the total people living in cities in Indonesia and Thailand slightly increased to meet in one point at around 25% after 30 years. Accounting for Thailand, it had a minor rise in next 20 years and was predicted to reach over 45% in 2030 and 2040. Whereas in Indonesia, it had a dramatic growth after that and had a prediction in continuing to sharply climb up at 60% in the future. Besides that, the total percentage of civilians living in Philipines’ cities nearly remained stable in 1980 and reached a peak at about 50% after 10 years, then gently fell by approximately 10% in 2010. Subsequently, it predicted to have a sudden rise back to 50% in next years. Moreover, the percentage of population locating in Malaysia’s cities fluctuated after 30 years starting from 1970, and then grew and predictably hit the highest point in both 2030 and 2040. The line graph illustrates that the total number of individuals settling in cities in different Asian countries such as Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, with predi... Read moreDo Quang Thanh Truc
19/10/2023
Dạ mong thầy cô nhận xét
Topic 4: Today there is a great increase in antisocial personal behavior such as committing a crime. What are the causes of this? Who should be responsible for this problem? A majority of personal behavior in antisociety has significantly mounted in recent years. There are a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted by governments and one’s selves to improve this situation. This issue can be explained by two main reasons. The prime reason is a vast number of unappropriate films such as serial killer movies. This is due to a lack of knowledge in distinguishing between right and wrong, and an ability to select suitable films, people are easily influenced by what they witness. Addtionally, a vast number of criminal movies has widely published in recent years, so people have approached them effortlessly. Therefore, those movies have a dramatical impact on people’s action, which leads to their serious crimes such as robbing or killing. Another reason relates to the life pressure. It could be explained by the fact that people have mental health illnesses such as depression as being under pressure of occupation and money, which are two enormously common problems in today’s modern lives. This can drive to behavioral disorders, which causes the delusion between reality and imagination. Consequently, people are not feasible to be aware of what they are doing right or wrong, even might be doing some criminal behaviors. There are two principle individuals having a responsibilty for tackling this problem. One’s selves are the initial human beings solving this problem. Since they should strengthen their mental and physical healthy by avoiding those detrimental influences such as watching serial killer or harshly violent movies, and gaining more knowledge in differentiating between right and wrong. The subsequent individuals who are reponsible to this is governments. As governments might not strictly censor in publishing movies, so some inadequate scenes such as exceedingly bloody or violent scenes are not controlled. This can be a significant impact on personal behaviors that causes numerous crimes. Consequently, governments have a responsibility in administrating those movies. In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for behavior antisociety, and steps need to be taken by governments and individuals to tackle this problem. Topic 4: Today there is a great increase in antisocial personal behavior such as committing a crime. What are the causes of this? Who should be responsible for this problem? A majority of personal be... Read moreTrần Anh Thái
22/10/2023
Grade IELTS essay, em nhờ các thầy cô chấm chữa ạ.
Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas while others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Of all truisms about tourism, perhaps the truest is that it empowers people of different cultures to interact, learn and evolve. Although this has led to some worry about local culture disappearing as a result of such interaction, my stance is that any kind of restriction or ban on tourism would not only fail to protect local cultures, but also yield no benefits whatsoever. Granted, one might argue that by banning tourist activities in certain places, the traditions and culture in these areas can be preserved. This is predicated on the assumption that with the presence of foreign travelers, native people will be affected by other cultures, ways of life and languages. According to this theory, local people may start to reject their way of life and beliefs to adopt more exotic ones, thinking that these are more enlightened and modern. Without such interaction, perhaps they would not compare their traditions to others, hence preserving the historic and culturally unique traditions, customs or practices of their area. However, this line of reasoning is not sound because the widespread use of internet exposes people to foreign mores, mindsets and values regardless. This means that changes in different facets of life are inexorable, and a form of indoctrination would ensure if their authorities decided to take away their citizens chance to learn by deliberately restricting their access to the world. The corollary of this control would be the loss of critical thinking, which subsequently would have stultifying effects on the progress of society. Furthermore, since tourism is a lucrative industry that also employs lots of people, especially in the service sector, a ban on this industry would result in huge job and economic loss. In conclusion, prohibiting tourist activities for the sake of local culture is an unwise proposal. This is because it is pointless to try to stop change and such a ban would upset the equilibrium of the local economy and cause hardship for local people whose livings depends on the influx of holiday makers. Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas while others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both views and... Read moreVũ Thị Bích Nguyệt
14/10/2023
em vừa làm xong 1 bài wrt, rất mong đc thầy cô chấm ạ, e cảm ơn nhiều lắm ạ
The given bar chart presents the percentage of average time-consuming in a school day on texting the Internet and playing consoled games of children 10 to 15 years old in the UK. Overall, children in general and boys in particular spent most of their time playing on games consoles. The amount of time for chatting on the Internet was dominated by girls. In terms of chatting on the Internet, boys who spent on this category for more than 4 hours and from 1 to 3 hours had the same percentage, about 25%, while the ones spent less than an hour accounted for only about 4%. It can be seen that girls who tended to chat with their friends for 1 to 3 hours constituted the highest figures, about 32% while others were approximately 22% and 8%. In total, children spending 1 to 3 hours chatting experienced the highest proportion, about 24% respectively. Regarding playing on games consoles, boys focusing on playing those games for 1 to 3 hours constituted the highest figure, about more than 35%, while others accounted for 30% and 10%. The amount of girls spending in games consoles for more than 4 hours was about 3 times the total of others, at 36%. On average, children tended to spend more than 4 hours playing games consoles, at 32%. This figure was followed by children spending 1 to 3 hours, at 29%, and the lowest was the ones spending less than an hour. The given bar chart presents the percentage of average time-consuming in a school day on texting the Internet and playing consoled games of children 10 to 15 years old in the UK. Overall, children... Read moreThao Nguyen
19/10/2023