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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm






Lê Trung Thành
30/11/2023
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The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Essay: The line graph given illustrates a comparison of the proportion of various generations visiting cinema in a country between 1978 and 2008. Overall, it is clear that the majority of age brackets showed a downward trend in cinema visits, with the exception of the 50+ age category showed a reverse pattern throughout the given period. Additionally, the rate of individuals going to the cinema went down with age. At the beginning of the period, the percentage of the youngest cohorts who visited cinema was the highest, reaching at 90%. The figures for age groups 25-34 and 35-49 were lower, at around 80% and 60 %, respectively. The over 50-years-old, however, accounted for the lowest number, at just 40%. In the following period, there was a decrease in the proportion of all aged brackets in 1988. The age group 14-24 experienced an increase in 1988 followed by a slight drop at the end of the period, reaching just over 80%. Similarly, the proportions of individuals in the age groups 25-34 and 35-49 experienced fluctuations, standing at approximately 70% and 50%, respectively. The opposite was true for the change in the percentage of those aged 50 and above witnessed a significant increase from 20% to 50% over the two following decades between 1988 and 2008. The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma... Xem thêm


Đoàn mạng thắng
30/11/2023
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Đề bài: The graph below shows the information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. The given graph give information about the job proportion across 6 nations in the year 1995 and 2005 Overall, it can be observed that, in 1995 the ratio of employed women dominated in 6 countries and the figure for man was lowest in 2005. Additionally, the employment rates in Iceland was the highest in 1995, however Switzerland took the first position in 2005. The first result worth pointing out is that, in 1995 the proportion of female employment in Iceland was highest,at just over 80% ,followed closely by Switzerland and other realms, with 80% and 70% respectively. Similarly the percentage of man witnessed a parallel but less pronounced,about 70% in Iceland and outstripped than other countries around 10% Turning in the year 2005,except Australia and New Zealand,the ratio of female in 4 nations namely uk, Switzerland,America and Iceland achieving a percentage more than half. Also worth noting is that while male in Australia and New Zealand made up just under one-third the opposite was true for the remaining nations Đề bài: The graph below shows the information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. The given graph give information about the job proportion across 6 nations in the year 1995 an... Xem thêm


Trần Ngọc Khánh Băng
30/11/2023
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Question: The average standard of people’s health health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now Do you agree or disagree Answer: Many people believe that the typical standard of human’s health will be increased in the future. Although, this tendency has some right points, however, I completely disagree with this issue. With the rapid development of society, the residents are more and more busier than before, from that, they don’t have much time in order to take care of their health. It means that people will have a tendency to eat fast food and drink more coffee, gas beverages, which has a negative impact on them, such as obesity or heart disease. Additionally, Work environment can change in the future and will require working with many toxic chemicals, which is a huge risk with human’s health. For instance, working in the nuclear factories will put people in danger which is contaminated with radiation and destroy the health of workers. In the future, there will be many achievements of science to serve the medical field. Scientists will invent lots of facilities or drugs, and construct more methods to treat diseases. For example, vacxin COVID-19 was produced in order to kill coronavirus; from that, the government avoided this epidemic and saved the lives of many people in many countries around the world. Furthermore, The education will able to improve strongly and will teach many talent people who interest about medical. From that, there will be more and more people study in order to the doctor, nurse or pharmacist, then, these professional human will contribute positive impacts on people’s health. In conclusion, although the health of humans can be endangered by some factors, there will be many inventions and professional people to help us maintain a healthy life. In my opinion, I believe that this issue also depends on the authorities of each country who will give some solutions to solve the risks and improve the average standard of human’s health according to beneficial directions. Question: The average standard of people’s health health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now Do you agree or disagree Answer: Many people believe that the typical standard of human’... Xem thêm
Phạm Thị Thu Thủy
30/11/2023
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The line graph compares the quantity of three kinds of visitors who travelled to a distinct Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the total number of the Caribbean island’s tourists increased rapidly over the period between 2010 to 2017, particularly in those who chose cruise ships as their accommodations. Meanwhile, there was only a slight growth in the figure for individuals who opted to remain on the island. In 2010, approximately 0.3 million of tourists who resided on cruise ships, then this number rose slightly to 0.5 million after one year. In 2012, this figure returned to its initial level, followed by a continuous upswing. Finally, it reached 2 million in 2017, surpassing the quantity of those who were on the island. On the other hand, there were around 0.7 individuals who sheltered on the island and this category leveled off during the time between 2010 and 2011. Afterward, it suddenly grew to 1.5 million in 2013 and remained unchanged over the period of two years from 2013 to 2015. After that, it fell to 1.4 million in 2016, followed by gentle growth, and ultimately in 2017, this category returned to the same level as it was in 2013. In general, the total quantity of tourists rose constantly and dramatically from 1 million in 2010 and peaked at 3.5 million in 2017. The line graph compares the quantity of three kinds of visitors who travelled to a distinct Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the total number of the Caribbean island’s tourists increased r... Xem thêm


Kakakkkaa
30/11/2023
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Đề: The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office Bài làm: The provided pictures depict the layout of typical offices in Japan and America. To summarize, there are some several differences between Japanese workplace and American one. The most important of which are that the Japanese offices prioritize communal spaces, whereas the American ones tend to favor individual workstation, by providing private rooms for managers and various functional spaces. Looking more closely at the Japanese office layout, tables of members in the same team are placed together to facilitate group discussions, forming two large areas, each of which is overseen by a section manager. However, the space of an American office is divided into separate areas, with high walls to minimize distractions. Additionally, not only is there a room for a department manager, but it is also available for two section managers. Another difference is that while the American working space has four rooms designed for different purposes, including one for a printer, one for storage, and the other two for conferences, there are no such facilitates in the Japanese one. In addition, windows in the former type of office are put at the front, compared to the latter, which has windows on the opposing sides. Đề: The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office Bài làm: The provided pictures depict the layout of typical offices in Japan and America. To summarize, there are some several diff... Xem thêm


Trần Ngọc Khánh Băng
30/11/2023
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The diagrams illustrate the improvement of pineapple and preliminary processing and production of pineapple. Overall, there are three periods in the growing of pineapple lengthen 13 months with impact from some natural factors. Additionally, pineapple will be divided according to catogies in order to produce three types of final products. In the process of pineapple growing, at the first period, each pineapples will be planted 26cm apart. The crown of pineapple will be received sunlight from the sun and improve to a little higher than previous. Next, the degree will be maintained in 23-30oC to help pineapple grow higher in the next 7 months. Finally, after 5 months, with influenced by sunlight and ethylene, a biggest size of pineapple will be completely grow with the height is 30cm and the weight is 2kg. After the process of pineapple development, it will be washed and classified into three catogies base on size: small, medium and large size. The smallest pineapples will be cut its crown, peeled and extracted to finish the pineapple juice. Liekwise, The medium also will be cut the crown, peel and then cut into many pieces to produce the pineapple contrainer. In contrast, the biggest pineapples will be waxed and crated in order to export to other coutries. The diagrams illustrate the improvement of pineapple and preliminary processing and production of pineapple. Overall, there are three periods in the growing of pineapple lengthen 13 months with imp... Xem thêm


rainbow
30/11/2023
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of wind energy in megawatts that was generated by India, Denmark, Germany and the U.S between 1985 and 2000. Overall, all four countries witnessed an upward trend in generating wind energy in the period of 15 years. From 1985 to 1995, the U.S generated the most significant amount of wind energy, however it surpassed to Denmark in the last year of period. It is evident that in 1985, Denmark generated just more than 200 megawatts of wind energy, which was twice less than Germany. In 15-year-period, the amount of energy from wind that Denmark generated increased significantly to more than 1600 megawatts. In the same period, there was a sharply growth in generating wind energy of Germany from 400 megawatts to about 900 megawatts. From the starting point, India generated the less amount of wind energy, just 200 megawatts, while the contrasting figure are being seen in the U.S which is sixfolds compared to India. From 1985 onwards, the amount of wind energy that India generated rose noticeably by 1000 megawatts. However, the figure shows a slightly decrease in the amount of wind energy that generated by the U.S in the last decade, from approximately 1600 megawatts to 1500 megawatts. The bar chart illustrates the amount of wind energy in megawatts that was generated by India, Denmark, Germany and the U.S between 1985 and 2000. Overall, all four countries witnessed an upward trend... Xem thêm


Trần Việt An
30/11/2023
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The table illustrates the percentage of consumer expenditure on various categories and services in five countries in 2002. Overall, it is clear that the largest rate of consumers spent on food, drink, and tobaco. On the other hand, leisure and education items had the least significant percentage of consumer spending in five countries, especially Turley, which had the ratio of consumer spending in all categories in 2002. As can be seen, Turkey witnessed the percentage of consumer spending on food drinks and tobacco was the most substantial, at 32,14%, which was nearly three times the one on clothing and footwear, with 6.63% and just 4.35% on leisure and education. While the expenditure on clothing and footwear in Italia was significantly greater than in any of the other countries. 15.77% of consumer expenditure on food drinks and tobacco was the lowest in five countries in Sweden, at nearly 9% on clothing and footwear, and just over 3.32% on leisure and education. Furthermore, Leisure and education items in Spain were uncommon for consumer expenditure, accounting for 1.98% The table illustrates the percentage of consumer expenditure on various categories and services in five countries in 2002. Overall, it is clear that the largest rate of consumers spent on food, drink... Xem thêm


Sunnyy
30/11/2023
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The maps illustrate road access to a town medical institution between 2017 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that there were two major features that never changed: City hospital and Staff car park in both 2007 and 2010 However, the city hospital in 2010 has been built roundabout and transformed into a car park. Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that City hospital in 2007 was surrounded by Ring road. Along both sides on the Hospital Rd was a bus stop. In the east above City road were staff car park and public car park. City Hospital in 2010 erected a roundabout connection between the two roundabouts as Hospital Rd. In the west, the bus station also intersected with them. In 2010, the car park was split into two places. The staff car park remains unchanged but the public car park was located on the east side of the city hospital. (154 words) The maps illustrate road access to a town medical institution between 2017 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that there were two major features that never changed: City hospital and Staff car park in bot... Xem thêm


Nguyễn Thị Thủy Tiên
30/11/2023
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Phạm Thị Thu Thủy
29/11/2023
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The bar chart presents information about money donations of five organisations between 2008 and 2011. Overall, the second organization donated the largest amount of financial assistance to underdeveloped nations over the period from 2008 to 2011. Furthermore this category witnessed an upward trend during the period examined. By contrast, there was a significant decrease in the financial aid offered to the developing nations from organisations 4 and 5 over four years. In 2008, Organisation 2 gave 1.3 billion dollars to the underdeveloped nations initially and this amount of money soared in the following years, finally reaching a peak of 2.7 billion dollars in 2011. Organization 3 is the runner-up for financial aid " whose figure stood at 1.5 billion dollars at the beginning. In the subsequent years, the figure for this category increased slightly in 2009, and then after four years this category’s figure returned to its initial level. Similarly, organisation 1 started at 0.6 billion dollars, and gently raised its level of financial aid to 0.9 billion dollars in 2009. Finally, this category levelled off in the next two years. On the other hand, organisation 4 initially donated 0.7 billion dollars. Afterward, its amount of money assistance almost decreased and ultimately hit a low of 0.3 billion dollars in 2011. Similarly, organisation 5 started giving 1.3 billion dollars in 2008, then this category saw a continuous fall, finally finishing at approximately 0.5 billion dollars in 2011. The bar chart presents information about money donations of five organisations between 2008 and 2011. Overall, the second organization donated the largest amount of financial assistance to underdevelo... Xem thêm


Phương
29/11/2023
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The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant The line graph illustrates the number of store closings and openings in a single country between 2011 and 2018. Overall, both the number of stores closed and opened saw a significant decrease. In 2011, beginning at around 6000, the number of stores that closed dropped slightly before reaching its highest point at 7000 in 2013. Over the following two years, a significant decrease was seen in the number of closed stores, then it hit a trough at approximately 800. After increasing dramatically to 5000, from 2016 onward, this number remained relatively stable. In terms of shops that opened, it started at the highest point at 8500, after which it fell considerably by 3500 in 2012. Before rebounding to 6000, the number of opened shops dropped again to 4000, which was as much as the number in 2012. From 2015 to 2017, a stable remaining was seen at approximately 4000 in the number after hitting its lowest point at 3000 in 2018. The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari... Xem thêm


Kakakkkaa
30/11/2023
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Đề The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008 Bài làm: The provided line graph depicts the proportion of individuals by different age groups who visited the cinema at least once on a monthly basis in a particular nation during the interval of 30 years starting from 1978. In summary, while there were upward trends in the rate of people paying a visit to the cinema at least one time per month between 14 and 34 years old, those in the 35-49 and over 40 remained more or less unchanged. Additionally, people who aged from 14-25 were the highest over the given graph. In 1978, about 60% of people in the 35-49 age group were reported to go to the cinema at least once per month, this figure decreased slightly to over 50% in 1988, after it rose significantly to about 68% in the last year. A similar pattern was recorded in the figure for those who were over 50 years old, beginning with just over 40% in 1978, and reached a peak of approximately 50% in 2008. Turning to the remaining categories, the rate of cinema-goers with at least one visit every month in 14-24 accounted for about 90%, followed by the figure for those in 25-34 age group, with 80% in 1978. 30 subsequent years, these figures increased gradually, reached the highest at approximately 85% and 77%, respectively, at the end of the period, albeit some minimal drops. It can be noted that the latter’s statistics experienced most significant alterations. Đề The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008 Bài làm: The provided line graph depicts the... Xem thêm


Trương Thành Đại
29/11/2023
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ĐỀ BÀI: The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. The bar chart illustrates how many trips children from 5 - 12 years old took in a nation in two separate years and the five types of transport were car passenger, walking, cycling, walking with bus and bus to go from school to home. Overall, the means of car passengers who travel to go from school to home increased, some remaining sectors witnessed an opposite trend. On the one hand, the number of passenger car trips in 1990 was roughly 4 million, it increased sharply to 11 million in 2010. Interestingly, the increases in car passenger corresponded with the declines in walking transport, and by 1990, it had the highest point of the chart (nearly 13 million) before decreasing almost doubled to 6 million. On the other hand, there was a significant drop in the number of cycling, walking and bus and bus trips, while these sectors in 1990 were 6 million each, it decreased significantly 2 million to 3 million in 2010. Cycling was the least popular choice at the end of the period. ĐỀ BÀI: The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. The bar chart illustrates how man... Xem thêm


Jasmin
29/11/2023
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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. The line graph depicts the amount of carbon dioxide emissions per person in four distinct countries over the interval of 40 years, starting from 1967. Overall, what is evident from the graph is that there were significant increases in the average Co2 emissions per person in Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Meanwhile, the opposite patterns were true for that of United Kingdom and Sweden. The average Co2 emissions per person in the United Kingdom was in first place with over 10 metric tonnes in 1967, which was fivefold as high as the figure for Portugal. Additionally, the amount of carbon dioxide emissions consumed in the United Kingdom exhibited a slow decline over the given period, after which it finished at roughly 8.5 metric tonnes. By contrast, the data showed a substantial uptick in the figure for Portugal, as it climbed from approximately 2 metric tonnes to nearly 6 metric tonnes from 1967 to 1997, after that it rose slightly before peaking at nearly 6 metric tonnes in the last year. With regard to the amount of Co2 emissions per person used in Sweden and Italy, the figure for Sweden stood at over 8 metric tonnes in 1967 , which was followed by that of Italy with about 4 metric tonnes. Both Sweden and Italy experienced an upward trend, reaching over 10 and 6 metric tonnes respectively between 1967 and 1977. During the period from 1977 to 2007, there was a substantial decrease in Sweden's emissions to under 6 metric tonnes in 2007, while Italy's emissions climbed slightly to nearly 8 metric tonnes during the same period The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t... Xem thêm


Esme
29/11/2023
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The line graph illustrates how many people live in cities of four Asia countries from the period between 1970 to 2020, following up with foresights for 2030 and 2040, in percentage. Overview, there are increases in percentage of the population living in cities in all four examined countries. By 2040, Malaysia is predicted to have the highest figure out of all. The share of people living in urban areas in Indonesia started at roughly 14% in 1970, after which it experienced a steady growth to north of 50% in 2020. The figure is said to keep rising gradually to around 60% in 2040. Witnessing the same pattern, 30% of Malaysia's population lived in the cities in 1970, with a subsequent sharp increase to approximately 70% in 2010, later predicted to reach over 80% in 2040. The proportion of Thailand people who lived in urban areas in 1970 was just under 20%, followed by a rise to shy of 30% in 1990. The data then saw a marginal growth during 1990-2020. It is predicted that there will be substantial growth of about 20% in 2040. The figure for the Philippines grew considerably from the range from around 30% to 50% during the period between 1970 and 1990, then decreased by approximately 10% in the next 20 years before rising and being predicted to reach north of 50% in 2040. The line graph illustrates how many people live in cities of four Asia countries from the period between 1970 to 2020, following up with foresights for 2030 and 2040, in percentage. Overview, there... Xem thêm


Tbkien
29/11/2023
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The given process provides a detailed procedure of building an igloo. Overall, the production of igloo begins with sawing hard-packed snow and finishes with ventilation holes cut in the roof. As can be clearly seen from the diagram, blocks are cut in hard-packed snow by a snow saw. But they only used large blocks for the base. Next, the edges of the blocks are smoothed and placed to form the desired shape. Subsequently, an entrance is made by digging a hole under the wall. The last opening on the top is filled by a large block, carefully cut to create the exact size. The process continues when snow is scooped up on the igloo and packed into all the crevices or gaps. Next, the walls are smoothed by hand inside the igloo. In the penultimate stage, the entrance is built and the hole is covered with blocks of snow. Finally, ventilation holes which allow air to enter are cut in the walls and roof. The process ends when the igloo finished The given process provides a detailed procedure of building an igloo. Overall, the production of igloo begins with sawing hard-packed snow and finishes with ventilation holes cut in the roof. As can b... Xem thêm


chi
29/11/2023
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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The three pie chart illustrate the average proportion in typical meals of three kinds of nutrients, which may be effect on health if consumed too much. Overall, sodium and saturated fat was consumed by people in the USA in dinner is the highest, the opposite is true with breakfast. Mean while, snacks is the highest proportion of added sugar. According the chart, dinner and lunch is the highest proportion of both sodium ( at 43% and 29% for lunch ) and saturated fat ( at 37% and 26%). In contrast, the figured for added sugar for lunch and dinner are lower, at 19% and 23% respectively. The proportion of added sugar consumed in snacks is the highest, at 42%, which was significantly higher than that of breakfast, at 16%. With regards to snack and breakfast, they are both made up of 14% sodium. 21% of saturated fat in snack was eaten, slightly higher than the figure for saturated in breakfast. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the m... Xem thêm


Mi ú
29/11/2023
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some people think that all lawbreakers ahould be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ———————- In today’s society, it is widely debated whether or not all criminals should be put into prison. It is argued by some people that offenders should be punished by staying in prisons, while others believe that there are more effective ways. From my perspective, I am of the opinion that offenders should stay in prisons. On the one hand, offenders have to stay in the prisons so they can be observed carefully by the police. For more illustration, the police can take care of the criminals vividly and avoid them from reoffending. Moreover, in the prisons, there are several teaching courses which help offenders to learn about some kinds of jobs such as electricity fixing or volunteering. After they are out of prison, they have qualifications and can find jobs to earn money for their lives. For example, in Vietnam, there are many volunteering programmes which encourage the prisoners to choose their favorite jobs to learn and they will get their qualifications if they pass their experience exams. On the other hand, keeping offenders in prison can ensure individuals’ safety. In recent years, there have been many serious cases such as pickpocketing or murdering. If the government does not put all the criminals into prison, they will commit more dangerous crimes and harm other people, especially children and women. These types of offenders should reoffend with higher levels of negative impacts. As a consequence, if the governments do not keep criminals in prisons, the safety of both individuals and country will be threatened. To conclude, while others argue that there are more good alternatives, I still believe that all prisoners should be kept in prisons. some people think that all lawbreakers ahould be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ———————- In today’s society, it i... Xem thêm
Trần Ngọc Khánh Băng
28/11/2023
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The table illustrates how much money the household in five cities in Australia, namely Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth and Sydney, spend on water. Overall, the cost of water is divided into two types of the amount of used water: below 125 kilolitre and over 125 kilolitre. Besides, the amount of money spent for water is the highest in Perth and the least in Melbourne. Perth has the most typical bill per family for water, at $332. Next ranking is the average bill per household spend for water in Sydney, Adelaide, Brisbane, at 319, 312, 310 respectively. Finally, Average the households’ Melbourne spends the least money for water, at $253. Melbourne and Sydney divide the cost of water in the same cost in both two groups, at 0,78 in Melbourne and 0,98 in Sydney, while other cities classify differently. Moreover, Sydney also has the much higher cost of water to pay for per kilolitre water in the below 125KL group than others and the largest cost in over 125KL group is Perth, at 1.50 per kilolitre water. The table illustrates how much money the household in five cities in Australia, namely Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth and Sydney, spend on water. Overall, the cost of water is divided into tw... Xem thêm
