Tạo tài khoản Pombeebee để đăng câu hỏi và được giáo viên hướng dẫn.
Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêmKakakkkaa
26/11/2023
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Đề: The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010. Bài làm: The provided bar chart depicts the number of female and male undergraduates selecting six major subjects in a particular university in the US in 2010. Overall, finance was the most favoured subject by both genders, the opposite was true for engineering. Additionally, there was a significant difference in the figures for males and females studying Mathematics. In terms of the most popular majors among women, about 225 females majored in Finance, which was identical to that of males. The figures for females enrolling in Marketing and Accoutning stood at approximately 120 and 200, respectively, which were higher than that of men, with about 75 and 170 students in turn. Looking more closely at the remaining subjects, 200 Math majors were female, whereas the number of men selecting this subject was dramatically lower than, with approximately 60 students. Similarly, the quantity of men studying Economics outnumbered women, with 150 and around 70, correspondingly. Meanwhile, engineering was the least prevalent subject, with just over 51 undergraduates stuyding in both genders. Đề: The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010. Bài làm: The provided bar chart depicts the number of female and male undergraduates sele... Xem thêmTrần Ngọc Khánh Băng
25/11/2023
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Question: The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009. Answer: The line diagram illustrates the proportion of consumers of the Internet in the USA, Canada and Mexico in the period of a decade/ ten years. Overall, There was a steadily increasing tendency of Internet Users in all countries. The rank of the percentages of population who used technology devices to Internet access experienced a significant fluctuation between these countries. As can be seen from the graph, the Internet was more popular in the USA than in Canada and Mexico in 1999 and continued to increase. However, the percentage of internet users in Canada was in the 2nd rank in 1999, then it rose to as much as percentages of the USA in 2002, exceeded completely and peaked in the final year. Compared with two other countries, the proportion of the population who used the internet in Mexico was at least in the first year. Although it had a increased tendency, this percentages was the similar in 1999, it was still the fewest figure after ten years, in 2009. Question: The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009. Answer: The line diagram illustrates the proportion of consumers of the... Xem thêmTrần Ngọc Khánh Băng
26/11/2023
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Question: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned the future development of the site Answer: The diagrams illustrate the improvement plan for the industrial town of Norbition in the future. Overall, the town will be experienced significant changes, such as all manufacturing will be replaced with housing, and a bridge, and some factors which serve residents' lives will appear. There will be an appearance of the housing area with some facilities, such as the playground, school, and medical center will be added in the east of the main roundabout which will be stayed the same. Besides, the small roundabout will be built on the bottom road. On the west of the main roundabout, they will build a road leading to another housing and add a shop bottom of this road. A bridge that leads from this roundabout to the housing on the other side of the river will be built on the area of the old farmland. This farmland will be relocated to the northeast area. Question: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned the future development of the site Answer: The diagrams illustrate the improvement plan for the industrial town... Xem thêmchi
26/11/2023
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many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. however, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. to what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, because of the development of modern technology, many employees can work from their home. Some individual believe that this change may only bring advantage for workers, not the employers. I completely agree with this idea owing to several reasons which will be discussed in this essay. To begin with, working from home can be benefit for workers. The first reason is that, because they do not use means of transport to such as motorbike, bus, subway to move to company, workers can save on travel costs. As a result, they can spend the money that they earn to charity or entertainment. Furthermore, since employee do not have to distracted by others and a more comfortable work environment, this increased the productivity of work load. For example, many companies in Vietnam allow their workers working remotely, in order able to focus their task and complete them in a shorter amount of time. At the same time, allowing employee working from home may lead to some problems to employers. Firstly, because of the lack of supervision, employers cannot manage and control their staff, this negative effect on productivity of work. Secondly, due to remote work can leads to communication challenge, employee may struggle communicate with their college and their superior. If there is no conversation between worker and superior, their work may have some mistake that could influence their productivity and their company. In conclusion, i am the opinion that using modern technology to work remotely could bring effective workers but contrast to employers. many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. however, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. to what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, because... Xem thêmPhạm Thị Thu Thủy
26/11/2023
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BÀI LÀM The table enumerates the data about railway traveling in the UK, USA, Japan and Italy in 2007. Overall, Japan became the leading country in terms of train usage, traveling distance, and cargo carried. On the contrary, this means of transportation is the least popular one in the USA compared with the other countries, ranked last in terms of all three categories. Obviously, the Japanese accounted for 27% of worldwide train users in 2007, which was 90 times as many as those in the USA. Furthermore, each individual traveled up to 1,980 kilometers on average and carried around 23.01 billion tons of cargo in the year surveyed. Meanwhile, trains were uncommon in the USA in 2007. The percentage of Americans who used trains stood at only 0.3%, each passenger traveled merely 80 km, and 2.820 billion tons of luggage were transported. On the other hand, the British who opted for the railway were responsible for 5.9%, ranked second in the number of train users in 2007. The average traveling distance per head of population was 770 kilometers, carrying 22.2 billion tons of cargo. Similarly, 5.5% of Italians went by train and transported 21.9 billion tons of cargo. Interestingly, each Italian passenger traveled more than the British around 10 kilometers. BÀI LÀM The table enumerates the data about railway traveling in the UK, USA, Japan and Italy in 2007. Overall, Japan became the leading country in terms of train usage, traveling distance, and cargo... Xem thêmPhạm Thị Thu Thủy
26/11/2023
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Đề: The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant BÀI LÀM The bar chart illustrates the average development of local products in rich countries, global countries, and non-global countries. Overall, the average growth of national products in well-off countries experienced a dramatic decrease during the period, whilst the percentage of universal nations rose rapidly. Another highlight is that non-globalizers witnessed a fluctuation in the ratio of domestic product growth from the 1960s to the 1990s. In the 1960s, prosperous countries took up the largest portion of the three surveyed kinds of countries (4.8%), followed by a downward trend in the subsequent years. The rate of this kind of nation dropped to nearly half at 2.9% in the 1970s; rose around 1.7% compared with the previous decade and finally stood at 2% after three decades. Meanwhile, worldwide nations’ growth in local goods accounted for 2% in the 1960s, making these countries the smallest manufacturers among the three categories. Then the proportion was succeeded by an upswing in the following years with 2.8% in the next decades, standing at 3.4% ten years later. Finally, this category’s rate peaked at nearly 5% after thirty years, which ranked it as the top local goods producer. In addition, non-globalizers made up around 2.4% of the average development of locally made products in the 1960s, then climbed slightly to 3.2% in the next 10 years. This rate then fell to a low of 0.8% in 1980, gently rising approximately 0.6% in comparison with the preceding decade, ranked third in terms of progress after 30 years. Đề: The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not. Summarize the informatio... Xem thêmChâu
25/11/2023
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Topic: The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008 The picture illustrates the changes that took place in a museum between 1998 and 2008. Overall, the museum has witnessed various transformations, most notably with the addition of a new restaurant and the relocation of certain rooms. In 1998, there was merely a garden in the middle of the museum. Above this was a café surrounded by permanent exhibition rooms. Moving to the southern area of the garden, the tickets entrance/exit zone was located in the middle of a temporary exhibition room and a shop. Located in the southeast corner of the museum were a WC and a room to keep bags and coats of the visitors. Concerning the west and east of the museum, there were permanent exhibition rooms. 10 years later, there was a reconstruction to the left of the museum. To be precise, the shop and the room for bags and coats were shifted to the south west corner and the temporary exhibition room was moved northwards. In addition, a new restaurant was introduced to the left side of the café and the WC was also recolated to its right side. Finally, the garden was decorated with fountains and a café sitting area was also built on the garden to cater to visitors. Topic: The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008 The picture illustrates the changes that took place in a museum between 1998 and 2008. Overall, the... Xem thêmKakakkkaa
24/11/2023
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Đề: Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society? Bài làm: At present, many individuals tend to spend more and more time outside of society instead of using those valuable times with family. This article will point out of some of the major reasons why this is happening, such as a huge volume of works and taking part in academic activities, and discuss a few problems caused by this phenomenon, including alleviating the relationships among family members and environmental contamination. There are several reasons leading to this trend. Firstly, the first one is that people have to complete a large amount of works. In fact, people not only must do their works on office hours, but also work overtime. As an example, in Vietnam, many white-collar workers spend most of their evening time to go to their work. Additionally, in terms of students, the extra curriculum is an issue. Many parents currently desire their children to success academically, which is why forcing them take private lessons. For instance, the Vietnamese students have to study for 5 hours at school, as well as more than 3 hours taken extra classes in training institutions. Therefore, spending more time at home becomes a luxury. Despite this, this phenomenon has several negative impacts on each individual and society. Firstly, bonds between family members will be broken. Less time at home is equivalent to less time for family, and therefore children will be negatively affected due to living secluded from their parents. To illustrate, many offsprings have grown up without parental love, which is why they are more susceptible to emotional problems, including low self-esteem. In addition, the environment will be seriously polluted. Spending most of the time outside means that citizens utilize private vehicles more, which triggers environment-related air. In Vietnam, for example, each inhabitant possesses a petrol-powered motorbike, which emits a huge amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. As a result, the quality of people’s lives will be dramatically declined. In summary, there are two causes of spending less time at home, such as many works and academic classes, and some effects on citizens and society, namely declining relationships between family members and environmental pollution. It seems to me that parents should pay more attention to their children and teach them thoroughly. Đề: Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society? Bài làm: At present, many individuals tend to sp... Xem thêmLê Trung Thành
24/11/2023
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Đề bài: The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Bài làm: The given table illustrates a comparison of the percentage of women working as a part of workforce and managerial positions in five nations including Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan and United States. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of female workers across all nation is consistent with the exception of Egypt. Regarding women as a managerial position, the highest number is concentrated on Australia and United States, while the opposite was true for other countries. In terms of workforce, Japan has the highest proportion of women, at 48%, followed by the United States at 46%. The figures for Australia and Sri Lanka are lower, at 42% and 41% respectively. However, Egypt has the lowest proportion of women in its workforce, standing at only 20%. Turning to managerial level, while number of female managers accounts for nearly a half for the total of men for Australia and United States. In Egypt and Sri Lanka, only one-tenth of women are working at this level. In the meantime, Japanese make up 17% of the labour force. Đề bài: The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and repo... Xem thêmTrần Ngọc Khánh Băng
24/11/2023
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Đề: It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages? Bài làm Recently, some people believe that having some risky choices is extremely crucial and gives more benefits than drawbacks. Personally, I support the point that taking risks will give more positives. On the one hand, If people go out of their safety area, it will give them some negatives. Firstly, they can't control the things that come with them. For example, there is a trend that many people choose to get out of their work to create their own businesses, in the worst case, they will lose and fall to unemployment. Secondly, if they can't overcome the risks, it will make the quality of their life decrease and lead to mental health issues. On the other hand, having risky actions will bring many advantages. Firstly, this choice will help people improve their skills, have more experiences, and perfect themselves. For example, if a person can't swim and decides to overcome their fear, they can have more of a skill that is helpful for their life. Secondly, Going out of their comfort zone is a measure to check their capacity including their virtues and drawbacks. For instance, people who try to participate/ take part in many competitions beyond their intelligence, they will have more opportunities to widen new knowledge which they have never known before. Finally, they will know their current ability, and make more efforts. From there, they will successfully achieve their goal, such as a dream career, life balance. In conclusion, although risky actions have many negative sides, I strongly believe that the benefits of this issue outweigh the drawbacks. However, people should carefully consider before making their decision to take risks. Đề: It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages? Bài làm Recently, some peo... Xem thêmKakakkkaa
25/11/2023
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Đề: The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004. Bài làm: The provided line graph depicts the rate of people in Africa who subscribed to mobile and fixed-line phones during the interval of 10 years starting from 1994. In summary, there were upward trends in the proportion of subscribers in both mobile and fixed-line phones over the given period. Additionally, while fixed-line phones were the common choice at the beginning of the period, mobiles were dramatically popular than at the end of the period. In 1994, the percentage of African inhabitants subscribing to fixed-line phones accounted for 1.7%, which was higher than the figure for those using mobiles, at 0.06%. From that time on, both types of phone subscription increased and accounted for approximately 2.9% in 2001. In 2002, the proportion of fixed-line subscribers stood at about 4.5%, which surpassed the figure for those using mobiles, occupying about 3%. The period between 2002 and 2004 witnessed a significant rise in the rate of mobile users, reaching a peak of 8.8%, compared to 3.1% for those using fixed-line phones in the final year. Đề: The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004. Bài làm: The provided line graph depicts the rate of people in Africa... Xem thêmmy.........
25/11/2023
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Topic : Some people claim that shopping online does them a lot of good. Others think otherwise, claiming that it causes them a lot of trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some people argue that electronic shopping has come with a great deal of benefits while other consider that more trouble has arisen in e-tailing. Despile some problems, I firmly hold the belief that online shopping is beneficial in making people's life easier. On the one hand some people arguing that home- shopping brings trouble contend that this means no inspection before paying for them. The quality of the items may not meet our expectation since there are probable differences to how they appear in pictures. In particular, a woman with honey skin tone may be irritated when the dress ordered is scarlet instead of being in rosewood color. However, if people choose offline shopping, they can have opportunities to look at them in real life and also test ther quality. As a consequence, shopping at home by our smart phone can lead to unexpected goods. On the other hand, other state that shopping online is less time-consuming, which is advantageous for working adults or parents with small childhen. People can reduce time by not being exposed to traffic congestion or travelling to different stores for distinct items. Instead, they can purchase a range of goods by their own smart phone and get them delivered to home. This particular true of moms with new born babies, who are required to stay at home 24/7, can easily do shopping online without having to deal with the hassle of going to busy high street. Therefore, a main benefit of e-tailing is saving time. In conclusion, both views have valid points, however, I strongly believe that despite some downturns, electronic shopping is absolutely an ingenious idea in this era if people make use of it in an appropriate way. Topic : Some people claim that shopping online does them a lot of good. Others think otherwise, claiming that it causes them a lot of trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some people ar... Xem thêmrainbow
25/11/2023
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Question: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. In today’s society, there is a widely debate on whether national zoos are suitable for all animals. A number of individuals argue that keeping animals in the zoos poses significant threats to their health, while others state that zoos play an essential role in saving wild animals from the hunters. From my perspective, I believe that the zoos are crucial for animals and shouldn’t be closed down. On one hand, keeping the wild animals in the zoos means that they completely lose their freedom. The wild animals are accustomed to the spacious spaces where they can freely go hunting and find their mates. As a consequence of sending the animals to the zoos, they will have the feelings of stress and isolation, which will exacerbate their mental health and illnessess. Moreover, the shift of environment and food sources can result in damage to animals’ physical health. According to the Forbes, there are 30% of wild animals living in the zoos causing some symptoms of sicknesses due to the changes of habitats and food sources, hence bringing more adverse effects to their life expectancy. On the other hand, the national zoos are really important in terms of protecting wild animals from multiple threats. Because the hunters are primarily targetting all wild animals for business or discovering their mechanisms, which is detrimental to their lifespans. By overhunting, numerous wild animals are having life-threatening injuries or worse, become extincted, which will negatively effects the wildlife and the food chain as well. Furthermore, the highly demand on unsustainable goods and medication result in the high rates of overhunting. For instance, multiple global brands such as Prada, Chanel use wild animals’ furs for manufacturing clothes and bags. This problem will damage their physical health and the reduction in life expectancy of some wild species. In conclusion, although there are various of immerse impacts when keeping the wild animals in the zoos such as mental and physical health, I believe that the advantages have brought to the wild species outweigh the threats in terms of protecting animals from overhunting. Question: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinio... Xem thêmPhạm Thị Thu Thủy
23/11/2023
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Đề: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram illustrates the process of taking self-portraits using a coin-operated photo booth. Overall, there are several steps to create a photo and it will be ready within one minute. On the outside of the booth, there is a slit above the buttons working as an insertion of coins. Additionally, it is issued in sets of four buttons. There are two buttons above that let us choose 1 large format or four passport-sized photos. Once a large format button is pressed, the booth produces one big portrait. Similarly, if people choose a passport-sized button, it will release four small photos. The two below buttons allow us to opt for color or black and white portraits. It must be a color photo if the passport-sized option is selected. On top of that, there is a tray below the buttons for photo delivery, from which a self-portrait is ready to receive within sixty seconds. Inside the booth, there is a chair with an adjustable tool allowing us to adjust our eyes so that they are level with the center points among the four arrows’ direction. Also, we can use the mirror above to check our appearance before taking photos. The curtain must be closed during the process of taking a photo. After that, once ready, we can pull the switch to activate the camera. Next, we wait for a light single flash after three seconds and the photo will be printed and released from the tray within one minute. Đề: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where... Xem thêmKakakkkaa
24/11/2023
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Đề: The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Bài làm: The provided table gives information about the number of visitors traveling in overseas countries in different parts of the world and the total of those between 1990 and 2005. In summary, there was an upward trend in the number of international travelers over the given period. While Europe accounted for the largest number of people travelled internationally, the opposite was true for the Middle East. In 1990, over 280.2 million Europeans travelled internationally, followed by Americans and people from Asia and the pacific, with 80.5 million and 60.2 million, respectively. Africans accounted for 18.2 million people in the total of international visitors, while the figure for the Middle East was just half about that, with 9.8 million people. Over the following 15 years, the number of Europeans visiting foreign nations went up dramatically and reached the peak of 400.2 million in 2005. The similar pattern was recorded in those from Asia and the pacific, reaching the highest at 135.8 million in 2005. Meanwhile, the number of America visitors peaked at 118.2 million in 2003, after which it dropped slightly to 113.2 million in 2005. The figures for remaining regions also rose gradually over the period, with Africa people standing at 18.2 million, and those from the Middle East, 15.8 million. The period 1990 and 2005 witneesed a significant increase in the total of people who travelled internationally, from 448.9 million to 693.7 million Đề: The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Bài làm: The provided table gives information about the number of visitors t... Xem thêmTaamtks
23/11/2023
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The two maps compare changes that took place in a town from 1995 to now. Overall, there were dramatic changes in the facilities of the town. There has been an extra golf and two tennis courts, whereas fishing port on the sea disappeared. The number of houses of housing area has increased slightly in the north-west and the road leading to the housing area has extended westward. In the northeastern corner of the town, farmland and forest park have been destroyed and replaced by golf course and two tennis courts. Along the road that running from west to east of the town, shops have been transformed into restaurants and hotel which has built extra a car park has stayed unchanged its old location. Opposite to the hotel has been café shop which has remained unchanged. The significant changes in the south of the town have been that apartments have been placed in the old fish market and the fishing port disappeared. The two maps compare changes that took place in a town from 1995 to now. Overall, there were dramatic changes in the facilities of the town. There has been an extra golf and two tennis courts, whereas... Xem thêmTrương Thành Đại
23/11/2023
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Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, the majority of recruiters are targeting soft skills as many people consider that interpersonal skills are always followed by formal qualifications. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint. Soft skills can bring many benefits in terms of communication in business. To begin with, it is a necessary skill to improve cooperative teamwork and enhance their relationship. This means staff requires well-behaved in the situation and good communication in the workplace. Thereby, employees can have more faith in colleges and open up a range of career opportunities. In addition, their working life is more meaningful because they are exposed to various working environments, broadening their professional acumen and expanding their network of contacts as a result of interacting with their surroundings. Thus, this approach may be suitable for owning interpersonal skills. Admittedly, there are some plausible reasons why both soft skills and high degrees are crucial. Firstly, employees getting high qualifications can climb the career ladder with a clear prospect and promotion path. This is why enterprises want to receive a person with excellent credentials because staff have the opportunity to get a job easily. Moreover, they can instill a sense of security and financial stability, which means helping them advance faster in their career path. Additionally, having a diverse background can make them attractive candidates for a higher-paid position and. Therefore, staff have good skills and backgrounds that they can truly bring value to the organization. In conclusion, there are benefits to both social skills and good qualifications in terms of career success. In my view, I totally agree with this point of view. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, the majority of recruiters are targetin... Xem thêmPhương
23/11/2023
mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài ielts writing task 1 của em với ạ
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countries between 1974 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The graph illustrates consumption volumes of fish, chicken, lamb, and beef in European countries from 1974 to 2004. Overall, the consumption of chicken increased dramatically, while the amount of lamb, and beef decreased moderately. In addition, the figure for beef and chicken were consumed the most during the period. In terms of chicken, beginning at approximately 150 grams, a gradual increase trend to 200 grams was seen in chicken consumption in 1989. From 1989 to 2004 the consumption of chicken was higher than that of others. After sharply increasing, the figure for chicken reached its highest point in 2004, at 250 grams. In 1979, Europeans consumed beef the most popular, approximately 220 grams. After dropping by 50 grams, beef consumption marked a turning point in 1984. From 1989 to 2004, beef consumption was at the second rank. Regarding lamb, Europeans consumed lamb was as popular as chicken, reaching a peak at nearly 150 grams. Lamb consumption experienced a steady decrease during the period, hitting a trough at approximately 70 grams in 2004. The figure for fish remained stable during almost the period around 50 grams, a half of lamb in 1989. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countries between 1974 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and... Xem thêmchi
24/11/2023
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Task 1: Bar Chart (The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012 The graph illustrates four dairy merchandises (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) were manufactured by top three producers in the world in 2012. Overall, the EU is the country that manufactured the most milk and cheese, while India and China witnessed the highest figure for butter and milk powder. The production of milk always the most popular item in three countries. The figure for milk was the highest in three countries, at 142,790 metric tons, followed by the production of milk in india and United State, at 127,000 and 90,038 metric tons, respectively. Regarding cheese production, EU continued to lead at 7,120, which was higher than that of milk production in United State, at 2195 metric tons. The figure for milk manufacture is the lowest, at 700 metric tons. 7500 the production of milk metric tons were created in India, which was quadruple than that of milk production in EU. Far below was the US, creating just around 800 metric tons. With milk powder production, country on the top namely China, at 1200 metric tons, which was similar to that of dairy product in New zealand ( 1110 metric tons) . There was 810 metric tons of milk powder product manufactured by United States. Task 1: Bar Chart (The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012 The graph illus... Xem thêmHuyền
24/11/2023