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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Dạ em kính nhờ Thầy/Cô chấm và sửa bài Writing task2 hộ em ạ!
Topic: More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
Solve:
It is true that many individuals and society have been drinking sugar-based drinks in recent years. This can be attributed to several factors, which call for possible solutions to be adopted.
There are several explanations as to why a number of people have consumed sugar-based drinks in recent years. This is because some soft drink companies attempt to heavily promote their products in many ways, which can increase consumption of sugar-based drinks. Some companies adopt clever marketing strategies for their products. Consequently, consumers are increasingly exposed to their products and are more likely to buy them. By way of illustration, Pepsi collaborated with Black pink to release a new drink collection on the market, thereby attracting a lot of the group's fans to buy their products.
Various measures, nevertheless, can be implemented to address these issues. The first possible solution is that parents should work with the school to minimize the use of sugar-based drinks in daily life. For instance, schools should have lessons and propaganda sessions about the evils of soft drinks on humans' health to warn their students, which can cause several issues such as obesity, diabetes, and dental problems. Thus, it can help youngsters understand the adverse effects of sugar-based drinks and have their drinks in moderation. Furthermore, this can help them minimize drinking too much soft drink and use another drink good for their health.
In conclusion, while many reasons can be given to explain why many youngsters are drinking sugar-based drinks in recent years, steps can be taken to improve the situation.
Topic: More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
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The bar chart provides a comparison between three types of waste disposal in one European country throughout the 4-year-period from 2005 to 2008.
Overall, there was a downward trend in the waste from landfill in the period of four years. On the other hand, the burning waste increased noticeably while the sea dump was being stability in the same period.
In 2005, landfill waste overshadowed with 1800 million tonnes, which was about triple the sea waste and burning with 600 and 500 million tons, respectively. There was a significant decrease by 600 million tonnes in landfill waste and doubled the two other types, recorded in 2006.
From 2007 onwards, the landfill witnessed a sharp fall from 900 down to 600 million tons of waste. While the constrasting figure was seen in burning waste in 2008, with around 200 million tons more than the previous year. The dumping at sea waste remained stable at around 600 million tons throughout the period.
The bar chart provides a comparison between three types of waste disposal in one European country throughout the 4-year-period from 2005 to 2008.
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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In contemporary society, social position and wealth are believed to play a pivotal role in evaluating an individual's value, while other human qualities including honor, kindness, and trust are considered to be insignificant and out of date. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely disagree with this notion.
The foremost reason supporting my argument is that social status and material possessions could not be the standard to assess a person's worth. In fact, it is undeniable that high position in the society and richness can make it easier to make an impression at first sight. However, the glamor would not have a long-term impact on the way an individuals' value is assessed in the future. For instance, although high-incomed people seem to be admirable in the beginning, it may be realized that their wealth is inherited rather than earned. Therefore, richness and high position might bear no relation in the evaluation of people's value.
An additional reason in favor of my view is that other morals play an indispensable part in judging people. This means they can never be old-fashionable values. Although glamor might have an edge over other personalities in the short run, values like honor, kindness and trust can have a long-lasting effect. To illustrate, people who are kind, honorable and reliable can always be respected by their friends, family members regardless of their social status and their income, thus playing a key role in the judgement of individuals' worth.
In conclusion, I argue that high position in society and material values may not considerably affect the way people's worth is judged because of their short-term effect. Furthermore, other valuable personaltities such as honor, reliability, and kindness always play a crucial role in assessing a person's value.
A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
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Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. What extent do you agree or disagree?
opinions are divided upon whether the advancement of the internet makes it possible for people to learn about cultures and customs of foreign countries without actually traveling in real life. I believe that it cannot replace the experiences when we travel.
Granted, one might argue that people can learn about every country in all corners of the world only via any electronic gadgets, because they can contain a lot of detailed and useful information about different lifestyles of many nations at their fingertip. For example, there are varying videos and blogs uploaded on youtube or facebook nowadays allowing people to share their experiences of life in other countries. However, what if those are sponsored? In fact, the internet may solely give people a limited amount of knowledge and contents on the internet can be easily used for commercial purposes. Therefore, It is quite hard for people to actually ensure that those contents are all true or not, unless they can genuinely confirm visually.
To add further credence to my assertion, I note that traveling can bring a much more intriguing experience to people than watching those videos that are uploaded on the internet. By viewing all the scenery and experiencing directly how one native speaker actually lives and works, people can gain a deeper insight into their cultures and traditions, their hidden aspects that no one has known before. In addition, this knowledge that people gained on their journeys might last a lifetime, because they are the people who participated in and experienced those events.
In conclusion, I totally disagree that the internet cannot equal to visual experiences. Instead it should be a valuable reference source for people before deciding to travel a foreign country.
Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. What extent do you agree or disagree?
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The provided chart gives information about the percentage of five different shares in Brazil’s economy in three years 2009, 2019 and 2029.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of almost sectors have a declining trend, except for the finance sector. Additionally, the percentage of the financial sector was the highest throughout the period.
Regarding finance, it accounted for a higher percentage of 30% in 2009, followed by a slight rise to more than 35% and this figure is forecasted to reach nearly 42% in 2029, which will be the highest point among all sectors. In terms of tourism, this segment made up for a higher 25% before a fall of 10% and a forecast of the stability in the end. Looking at manufacturing share, it witnessed a decline over the surveyed period, from 20% to a dramatic fall to 5% in 2029.
Concerning the proportion of food processing, initially, there was a record of just 10%, which was the lowest rate. After that, this number increased significantly to over 20% during the next decade before sharply decreasing back to 10 years according to the forecast. Meanwhile, the number for oil, coal and gas also experienced a similar trend to that of the food processing sector. To be more specific, it started at 25%, and then returned to this point after climbing to more than 30% in 2029.
The provided chart gives information about the percentage of five different shares in Brazil’s economy in three years 2009, 2019 and 2029.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of almost sectors h...
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Topic: It is possible for tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Solve:
As both technology and society have developed, travelers should have an option to visit isolated natural setting. This essay attempts to shed light on both pros and cons of this tendency before concluding that the latter is more significant.
On the one hand, travelling to remote destinations is advantageous to a certain extent. Firstly, visiting remote natural areas can increase awareness and conservation efforts. This can be seen in the Vietnam’s efforts to promote eco-tourism and protect its natural landscapes. Secondly, this activity is the potential for substantial economic benefits, even though providing job opportunities and increase the revenues for the residents. For instance, Vietnam plays a crucial role in boosting the economic landscapes, particularly in rural area and remote areas.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits, I am convinced that visiting pristine areas brings about greater drawbacks. Increasing tourism to remote natural areas can lead to negative environmental impacts, such as pollution, habitat destruction, and disturbance to wildlife. For instance, the influx of tourists in sensitive ecosystems can disrupt the natural balance and lead to irreversible damage. In terms of cultural and social impact, the influx of tourists can disrupt the traditional way of life for local communities and lead to cultural erosion. In Vietnam, the rapid growth of tourism has led to concerns about the preservation of indigenous cultures and traditions.
In conclusion, while tourism to remote natural environments can bring economic benefits and raise awareness for conservation, the potential environmental and cultural impacts must be carefully managed to ensure sustainable and responsible tourism practices
Topic: It is possible for tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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The given pictures depict the differences of two typical offices located in Japan and America.The images illustrate divergency in the construction between a popular Japanese office and an American one.
At first glance ,there are numerous differences between numerous transformations between Japan and America such as the addition of some furniture and the reconstructions of the office .Furthermore , each chair is accompanied with one table , parallel with it all of the chairs and tables still stand in the middle .
As it can be seen , the Japanese office witnessed the the department manager could be easily spotted in the center of the map in the Japanese office followed by two distinct section managers located on two sides of this place , including one huge large-sized table and six chairs from one side.Besides , the windows situated on the peak above the department manager .
Moving to the other diagram , new facilities are provided and the appearance of the other window .Each window is located on each site followed by the existing of the printer copier , the storage and doubled conference rooms on the left while and from the opposite witnesses withnesses, the top corner belonging to section manager in the top corner followed by the same room in below and the counterpart is then below is the similar one and the remaining is department manager .
The given pictures depict the differences of two typical offices located in Japan and America.The images illustrate divergency in the construction between a popular Japanese office and an American one...
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The charts below illustrate how white collars and blue collars spend their time on distinctive activities in a specific country in two mentioned years 1985 and 2008.
First and foremost, in both years the percentage of time allocated for working held the peak and accompanied with sleeping but there was an inverse relationship between sleeping and working after years.In contrary,the lowest was no longer the same which was time for traveling to work in 1958 and time for hanging out with friends or family.
Looking at the graphs in more detail, working and sleeping were the top of given figures which was 33% and 32% respectively.Besides,adults did not spend most of the time on traveling,relaxing and playing sports or other interests which lead those factors to stand at the bottom ranging from 2% to 8%.The last which was near one fifths of graphs, was time for going out with friends or family.
According to the pie chart, the highest time-spending activities still belong to sleeping and working.However,there were some changes such as the time used for working tremendously increased to 42% in comparison with 1958,the time that adults gave for sleeping dropped down about 7% from 32% to 25%.The rest of factors were in term of climbing up but time out with friends is the exception.Both times spent on traveling to work and relaxing at home have slightly upward trend with an estimated approximately from 5% to 6% against 1958.There was an decrease of over 10% in the percentage of time allocated for going out after 50 years.
The charts below illustrate how white collars and blue collars spend their time on distinctive activities in a specific country in two mentioned years 1985 and 2008.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of water levels of 6 distinct sites in Australia between 2009 and 2010 in October
Overall, the percentage of water levels of reservoirs in Sydney, Melbourne, Perth, Canberra city increased, except Darwin city. In addition, Darwin city had the lowest figure at the end of the period.
On the one hand, the percentage of water levels in Sydney made up the highest point of the chart (about 79%) in 2009. This figure was followed closely by Canberra (nearly 78%). Later 2 years, these cites continually went up, accounting for above 80% and around 100%, in turn. The data of Sydney's reservoirs' water levels in Perth city was nearly doubled compared to Oct in 2009, with approximately 77% in 2010.
On the other hand, the increases of water levels in Melbourne city corresponded with the declines in Darwin city, and by 2009, it had the lowest point of the chart (nearly 20%) after increasing almost doubled to around 40%. Specifically, the figure for Brisbane stayed the same compared to the previous year.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of water levels of 6 distinct sites in Australia between 2009 and 2010 in October
Overall, the percentage of water levels of reservoirs in Sydney, Melbo...
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BÀI LÀM:
The graph illustrates the amount of fish and some other meats which were consumed in European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that the consumption of beef and lamb had a decline trend, however, the amount of chicken increased over 25 years. The figure of fish had a stable level during this period.
The consumption of beef was highest at about 210 grams in 1979. After 5 years, it reach around 240 grams and then decreased from 1989 onwards. In 2004, the amount of beef was only around 120 grams. Lamb had a similar trend, the figure in 1979 was lower than beef and it decreased to about 70 grams in 2004.
With regard to chicken, the number of consumption was about 140 grams in 1979, it was lower compared to beef and lamb. However, it increased significantly during the period and in 2004 the figure reached approximately 250 grams. A number which never appeared in two kinds of meat above. The consumption of fish was relatively stable. In 1979, the number was about 60 grams and it slightly decreased to 50 grams in later years.
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The graph illustrates the amount of fish and some other meats which were consumed in European country from 1979 to 2004.
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The bar chart illustrates the four different types of waste that were collected by a recycling center between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, paper took the lead in the period of time except in 2013, however, the contrasting figure was witnessed in garden waste in all five years.
In 2011, around 60 tons of paper being wasted while glass waste had only around 50 tons, then paper decreased to 40 tons before significantly rose by 30 tons in 2015. The waste of glass was more than 40 tons in 2012, followed by the stablility in the remaining years at approximately 50 tons.
The recycling center collected about 35 tons of tins waste in 2011 then dropped by around 10 tons in the next year, after that, it increased sharply to nearly 40 tons in 2015. There was a slightly growth in garden waste in 5-year-period from around 30 tons to 35 tons, while the smallest amount of waste was being seen in 2012, which was just about 15 tons.
The bar chart illustrates the four different types of waste that were collected by a recycling center between 2011 and 2015.
Overall, paper took the lead in the period of time except in 2013, however,...
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Topic: The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011.
Essay:
The line graph illustrates a comparison of the percentage of computer ownership from families in a nation in European over the course of 14 years, starting from 1997.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of households who possessed electronic devices witnessed an upward trend, with the exception of households without a computer. Additionally, the rate of households with two computers was constantly increase.
At the beginning of the period, the percentage of people who did not own a computer was highest, at 47%. The figures for households with only one computer and two computers were lower, at around 44% and 10%, respectively. However, the percentage of families owned three or more computers accounted for the lowest number, at just 1%.
During the period shown, while debuted in the highest position but the households did not have a computer experience a decrease to 20% in 2011. The opposite was true for the slight change in the percentage of households that had one computer, from 44% to 45%. Similarly, the figures for the last two categories saw a rapid climb while the households had two computers increased significantly, around triple, higher from the final figure for households that had three or more computers, which stood at just 10% at the end of the period.
Topic: The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011.
Essay:
The line graph illustrates a comparison of the percentage of...
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The given chart illustrates how much money given to developing nations from 5 companies between 2008 and 2011
Overall, it can be observed that while the total money from business 1 and 2 experienced upward trends the opposite was true for organization 4 and 5. Additionally, company 2 witnessed a dominant in the last 2 years
The first result worth pointing out is that, the amount of money given to upgrading countries from company 5 declined notably from just over 1 million dollars in 2008 to over half million in the next year and remained stable at under 0,5 billion dollars in the last 2 years .Similarly, organization 4 followed a similar pattern as it decreased moderately from more than half million dollars to just over 0,5 million before hitting a trough at under half million in the end
It is apparent that,in the first 2 years while campany 3 led with about 1,5 billion dollars, business 2 followed with a significant amount of just under 1,5 billion,overshadowing organization 1 nearly half billion dollars .Another highlight is that between 2010 and 2011 around 2,5 billion dollars was given to improving nations by company 2,which exceeded company 3 and 1 about 1 billion dollars and 2 billion respectively
The given chart illustrates how much money given to developing nations from 5 companies between 2008 and 2011
Overall, it can be observed that while the total money from business 1 and 2 experience...
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These days,a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports.Why it is?Is it a positive or negative development?
In the contemporary world,human life is being improved in distinct aspects which are new technology such as laptops,televisions,smartphones,etc,...Moreover,being in modern life forces people to become accustomed to using computers and smartphones,children are no exception.A large part of the public holds opinion that allowing the young generation to spend time on computer is highly impactful to their brain and eyesight.Were it not for keeping up with the development and lacking supervision and attention of parents on their children,the kids would not be deep in computers and miss the opportunities to meet new friends and hang out with them.This essay will discuss both sides of the spectrum and provide comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter.
First and foremost,getting access to social media or the Internet can help children catch up with up -to -date information and edify their mind with new things,new concepts.Besides,computers also provide them with empirical experience to take on daunting task whereby they can enhance problem solving skills and have much experience of managing time and building in-depth planning for the future.Furthermore,education is one of the vital factor offering by computers such as playing games like Dualingo and Brainout which require juveniles brainstorm to find the answer for a quiz.
On the other side of the spectrum,a section of the community has been in term of permitting their kids to use technology equipment at their disposal and at the same time they haven’t supervised and paid attention.This state makes young generation have free time to play games continuously throughout the night.If parents don’t hinder the game and internet addiction,their childs will be affected on mental and physical health also causing giddy,myopia,etc…Lastly,using excessively computers can render juveniles more indolent and taciturn,accompanying with not spending time to learn,to communicate with other people,especially family resulting to apathy and thoughtlessness among members.
In conclusion,everything in this planet not only has the advantage but also has the disadvantage.Although computer addiction is a concerning topic and hard to thoroughly solve.However,everything can be solved if you choose the correct method.Instead of giving a slap on the wrist,adults should deprecate and have a small talk with their children about the impacts of computer in their daily life.It’s vital to be aware of the potential negative effects and to use your products in moderation to maintain a healthy balance.
These days,a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports.Why it is?Is it a positive or negative development?
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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not homework needs to be given to students. Although there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, I am strongly convinced that it plays a crucial role in educational outcomes.
There are several reasons why homework can be seen as an unnecessary burden on children. One major issue contributing to this is that homework puts children under pressure on a daily basis. A case in point is Japan, there is a significant number of juveniles who contract mental diseases or find a sense of depression due to being swamped with a heavy load of deadlines and assignments. Another primary reason behind this trend could be that homework is not the most useful way for school children to achieve high-achieving records at school. Numerous students just pay a lot of attention to finishing their homework rather than consolidating their knowledge at home.
In spite of the above argument, I firmly believe that homework has positive impacts on the schooling of students. The main benefit of homework is that it allows children to have more opportunities to review the lessons which makes it easier than ever for them to attain the knowledge. Secondly, doing homework encourages independent learning. This may facilitate children to work alone and at their own pace. In doing so, students become independent and do not overly depend on their parents.
In conclusion, while some people hold negative views towards homework implementation, I still believe that homework is regarded as an indispensable part of student's learning.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not homework needs to be given to students. Although there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, I am strongly convinced that it plays a...
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The table details the international tourist arrivals in millions in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages).
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The provided table illustrates the number of international travelers in eight different nations between 2009 and 2010 and the percentages of the changes.
To summarize, there were upward trends in the quantity of number traveling internationally in all countries, except for France and Hong Kong over the given period. Additionally, France remained the most common tourist destination among 9 countries, whereas the opposite was true for Hong Kong.
In terms of nations which attracted plenty of international tourists, the number of visitors to the US, Spain, and Italy stood at 66 million, 55 million and 44 million, respectively, in 2009. These figures increased slightly by 1 million in the next year. A similar pattern was recorded in the figure for the UK, beginning with 55 million and reaching 57 million in the final year. Meanwhile, the number of individuals paying a visit to France remained unchanged, at 76 million, in both years.
As for remaining countries, Germany experienced a significant increase in the quantity of people who traveled to, rising from just 11 million to 23 million, indicating a growth rate of 109%. Similarly, Turkey and China witnessed considerable growth rates of 33 and 55%, correspondingly. On the contrary, in 2010, Hong Kong attracted less international visitors, with 9 million compared to 10 million in 2009.
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The table details the international tourist arrivals in millions in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages).
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The provided table illustrates the number of internati...
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The chart below shows the yield of wheat, barley, rice and other grains grown in three different countries in 2001.
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The provided bar chart depicts how much wheat, barley, rice and other grains were cultivated in three distinct nations in 2001.
To summarize, the yield of other grains was always the highest in three countries. Additionally, India always had fewest yield, compared to remaining nations.
Looking more closely at the production of other grains, China and the USA crop yields were 9 million tonnes each, which was higher significantly than the figure for India, with just about 1.9 million. In terms of barley yields, the USA was leading producers, accounting for over 7 million tonnes, ahead of China, whose date was approximately 6.5 million. Meanwhile, India continued to be country with lowest statistic among three ones, at around 2.8 million.
Turning to the remaining categories, China ranked first in the production of rice, occupying 6 million tonnes, followed by the figures for the USA and India, with 5 and 1 million, respectively. As for wheat, about approximately 3.4 and 2.4 million tonnes were harvested in China and the USA, respectively. Meanwhile, this figure recorded in India was lower significantly than, at over 1 million tonnes.
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The chart below shows the yield of wheat, barley, rice and other grains grown in three different countries in 2001.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries in two separate years.
Overall, it is clear that total energy production increased dramatically in 1980 and 2000 in both Australia and France. While Coal Electricity was used to produce the most in Australia. By contrast, Hydropower in France was the least preferred to be produced.
In 1980, Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity in Australia, rising to 130 out of 170 units in 2000. While natural gas and oil production were less common in Australia, accounting for 20 and 10 out of 100 units, declined to 2 units relatively in both of fuel sources in 2000.
Whereas, the level of using nuclear power to produce in France from 15 out of 90 units, which surged significantly to 126 out of 180 units in 2000. 5 and 25 units of hydropower and natural gas production were important in France, but its use decreased to the same amount of using, with 2 units out of 180 in 2000.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries in two separate years.
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The given diagrams illustrate the travel industry state in the Uk which is the proportion of visits to and AND from the Uk starting in 1979 and finishing in 1990 belonging to the first one.While , the second chart emphasizes some destinations that the UK tourists WERE really into.
As it can be seen , the number of residents witnessed a tremendous upsurge in the mentioned years.Moreover , France held the top favorable country in comparison to the bottom one seen as Turkey in 1999.
Getting back to the particular details of the first graph , a slight increase in range of 1979 and 1984 estimated from 10 million to 20 millions.Furthermore ,over 15 years later , the number of citizens was in terms of developing with a significant upward trend .However , after a short period of time from 1984 , going abroad were more concerned elucidated for its growth from the middle of 1984 about 20 million to 1990 about 51,1 million. While , a great deal of oversea residents were parallel with the others from around 13 million to approximately 29.5 million which were even under a half of abroad figure.
Move to the second graph , reaching the peak from France about 10 million which was followed by holding the lowest from Turkey about 2,5 million.Below the highest country were Spain approximately estimated around 8 million.Besides , there is no momentous changes between the Usa and Greece respectively known as 3 million and 4 million
The given diagrams illustrate the travel industry state in the Uk which is the proportion of visits to and AND from the Uk starting in 1979 and finishing in 1990 belonging to the first one.While , th...
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A few language are increasingly spoken in different countries,while the use of others is rapidly declining.It is positive or nagative development?
In the contemporary world , multilingual people are no longer considered geniuses as a genius due to the intercultural relationships relationship among some countries .However , not all languages are spoken in some distinct countries , a few are one is globally distributed, and the remaining are is facing the fall.This essay will discuss both sides of the benefits and drawbacks and then provide some comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter.
Moving to the benefits of, living where witnessing the intercultural development gives humans a best shot to learn new things and , concepts in new fields that your country yet has , especially language , leading to minimizing the language barrier between foreigners and locals. For instance , English , our the our mutual language stretching streching all around the world , requires required people to do make an research on how to learn and speak , resulting in widening their your knowledge with new lessons. Besides , Spanish , used in all American America countries, such as Nicaragua , Puerto Rico , Mexico.
On the other hand , there are many drawbacks that significantly impact the enhancement and the diverse cultures of one country. The value of traditional cultures that which our ancestors passed pass on to us, such as poetry , literature , paintings ,old-fashioned old fashioned places , etc., will fade with time and be removed from our minds out of mind. Furthermore , multilingualism multi-language not only influences countries but also affects the whole worldwolrd. To illustrate , in Vietnam , there are many overseas oversea Vietnamese students who can students can fluently speak English but forget their mother tongue and don’t know too much about the traditional and historical timestime.
In conclusion , everything on this planet has its pros and cons. Therefore , it is too hard to define whether multi-language is good or bad for world developments ,but it depends on how you use it and your attitude, and your awareness of your hometown
A few language are increasingly spoken in different countries,while the use of others is rapidly declining.It is positive or nagative development?
In the contemporary world , multilingual people are...
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