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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Question: Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?
It is true that many companies complain about the insufficient fundamental skills of their new staff, such as teamwork. This essay will first outline some underlying roots before suggest some feasible solutions to mitigate this issue.
There are two primary reasons why the employees don’t equip enough interpersonal skills before commencing new jobs. One reason is that most students completely focus on academic subjects and neglect to engage in extracurricular activities when they are undergraduate. For instance, many students aim to get impressive grades to gain scholarships rather than spending time on attending clubs. Furthermore, the advance in technology is a serious problem, leading to sedentary lifestyle and lack of social interaction. Thanks to the appearance of social networking, people tend to absorb information and chat with others online instead of directly communicating, thus their interpersonal skills are limited.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. Firstly, the universities should enhance organizing clubs and volunteer activities, then encourage students to participate in these programs. Therefore, participants have the opportunity to improve their skills as well as expand their relationships. Secondly, national and local authorities could implement healthy lifestyles campaigns to help people realise the importance of real interaction, along with the consequences of overusing technology. Finally, companies should pay attention to the training course, so that their staff could ensure the work requirement and build their company bond.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the lack of soft skills of new employees, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Đề: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disgree?
Today, some claim that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. I completely agree with this idea.
On the one hand, I acknowledge that the primary purpose of any company is making a profit in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of businesses engaged in a free market should be to cover its running costs, such as employees' wages and payments office space, utilities. Moreover, companies always need to invest in innovation and improvement if they want to remain successful. In other words, a company can only make social contribution if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, businesses should not completely focus on make money, they should do more for society. A social obligation that managers and ownes are to treat their employees well rather than exploiting them. For instance, companies can pay a " living wage" to ensure that all workers have good quality of life. Furthermore, they should use a proportion of their profits to support local charities or environmental projects.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should make social contribution within their sphere of influence although making money is the top primary for businesses.
Đề: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disgree?
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Đề:
It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Bài làm:
It is argued that national budget should be allocated for encouraging a healthy lifestyle instead of spending money on treatment of individuals who are already suffering from diseases. I utterly agree with this statement, given that there are some incurable diseases and long-term cost savings.
The major reason that I approve is that people can avoid many incurable health problems. In fact, there are many incurable diseases, such as HIV and AIDS, which is why the best solution is this case is obviously trying to prevent them. For instance, the WHO has successfully provided locals with essential health information related to nutrition, along with cardiovascular benefits of regular exercise in Vietnam. Therefore, the number of Vietnamese people who adopt healthy diets preventive measures against diseases is on the rise, the rate of citizens hospitalizing has significantly declined in recent years.
A further justification that I agree is that prevention is an effective way to save national budget. In reality, people have to spend a large amount of money to cure serious illnesses, such as cancer, which is why preventing illnesses can save on the extensive costs of treatment. This is exemplified by the fact that the total sum of medical treatment process can total over 50,000 USD in Vietnam. As a result, many nations can reduce a large amount of money for constructing hospitals and clinics and allocate a great proportion for other essential sectors, such as education.
In summary, I completely agree that spending money on promoting a healthy lifestyle. This is because it can help people alleviate the potential of deadly illnesses and national budget. It seems to me that parents had better encourage their offspring engage in outdoor activities, such as walking and cycling, instead of playing games with the aim of improving children’s physical fitness.
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Đề:
The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài làm:
In this day and age, most of large-sized enterprises and organizations, namely Facebook and Google, are possessing a large amount of private date among internet users. I believe that the benefits, such as providing convenience in purchasing and creating helpful services outweigh the drawback, including creating the misunderstandings among citizens.
There are two major advantages of personal information held by companies. First of all, internet users can be received the better experience. Facebook, for example, has tracked the activities of users on the Internet and then use this information in order to propose some advertisements which relate to the objects they are looking for. Additionally, the information is utilized to provide helpful services for consumers. Google Map, for instance, is a social media platform that is used by the millions of citizens all over the worlds which help them orient location they are standing and the road they are finding. Therefore, it is predicted that more and more social networking sites and applications will be created with the aim of making the people’s lives more convenient.
Despite this, this phenomenon will bring about the misuse of big date which has begun already and will become more worse in the future. In reality, the advertisements which are proposed to individuals are not always harmless. This is exemplified by the fact that during the last presidential election in the United State, some foreign organizations and individuals took advantage of personal information of residents on the Internet with the view to misleading them, which is why they could influence voting behavior. As a result, governments all around the world had better legitimate strict laws to punish cybercriminals and improve the defensive networks of personal information security.
In conclusion, I utterly believe that the advantages of mentioned-above trend, namely the removal of inconvenience in purchasing products on the Internet and providing better services, eclipse disadvantage, such as the abuse of people’s private information to come into conflict with the law. It seems to me that authorities should pay more attention to companies and individuals to regulate their activities more effectively.
Đề:
The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài làm:
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Bài làm:
The bar chart illustrates data on the number of tonnes wasted disposal of one European region in terms of the landfills, burning, and dumping at sea over a period of four years from 2005 to 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the number of landfills showed a downward trend. While the amount of waste disposed of burning experienced an increase steadily during the period shown.
At first glance, the average figure for landfills started at 1800 million tonnes, which was three times as much as that of the rubbish at sea in 2005. Between 2006 and 2008, there was a dramatic decrease in landfill numbers at 600 million tonnes at the end of the period.
As can be seen clearly from the chart, in the year 2006, the average amount of waste by burning went up considerably to just 600 million tonnes. The proportion of waste to burning continued to rise steadily to reach the point of approximately 850 million tonnes in 2008. In addition, there was a moderate drop of 500 in the number of dumping at sea in 2008.
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The bar chart illustrates data on the number of tonnes wasted disposal of one European region in terms of the landfills, burning, and dumping at sea over a period of four years from 2005 to...
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of travelers to four places in Scotland including Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and Festival between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, the percentage of tourists visiting Castle and Zoo increased while the reverse pattern can be seen in Aquarium and Festival. ln addition, Castle was the most popular visitor attraction in Scotland for most of the period.
ln 1980, over 20% tourists visited Castle, while the number of visitors who chose to visit the Zoo at just 10%. From 1985 to 2000, the percentage of Castle visitors increased dramatically to reach a peak of about 45% in 1995, but fell back to around 35% in 2000. The figures for Zoo visitors fluctuated to around 10-15%. Until 2010, Castle continued a decreasing trend to nearly 30%. By contrast, Zoo visitors doubled twofold from 10% to 20%.
ln 1980, the proportion of tourists who visited the Festival was about 30%. The figures for the Aquarium was lower than that of Festival, at about 20%. ln 1995, Festival and Aquarium dropped to nearly 25%. Between 1980 and 1990, the percentage of travelers visiting the Aquarium reached a peak of nearly 35% in 1985 before decreasing back to 20% five years later, Festival visitors fell gradually. Until 2010, Aquarium visitors tended to decrease sharply by almost 10%. Similarly, Festival also has a similar trend.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of travelers to four places in Scotland including Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and Festival between 1980 and 2010.
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Đề:
Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Bài làm:
Many individuals argue that the most effective way to access new information is by reading newspapers, whereas others mention that this can be effortlessly acquired through the usage of social media. In this essay, I will elaborate both sides of the topic, and I believe that people can access the news through a variety of choices.
Some think that traditional newspapers are considered a more reliable source of information compared to other sources. In fact, most of the newspapers were written by professional journalists and have to be checked before being published for citizens. In China, for instance, the government tightly controls the media, including newspapers, which is why all new articles must be approved by them before they are published for people. Therefore, all misunderstandings and sensitive information will be censored thoroughly.
Despite this, others believe that obtaining information more quickly across a variety of convenient platforms. In reality, with the widespread presence of the Internet, people with portable devices, such as a smartphone, are able to a huge story of news in just a few. This is exemplified by the fact that in Vietnam, new media outlets, such as Vietnamnet, constantly update breaking new stories more quickly than a traditional newspaper. As a result, it is predicted that more and more electronic newspaper would emerge with the aim of serving people’s needs.
In summary, both sides have their valid viewpoints, such as the reliability and accessibility of traditional newspapers and the convenience of electronic newspapers. I, however, believe that citizens can learn news visually or auditorily. For instance, people who are looking for a new smartphone could watch videos introducing the product to be better informed about its features and analyze reactions from the general public before making a buying decision.
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đề Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Bài làm
some people claim that the elderly should be subsidized with financial assistance and healthcare by the government ; however , other hold a belief that they have to put money aside for their future life. Although i am more in flavour of the latter opinion , this essay will discuss both view points.
on the one hand, there are several reasons why people think the government should help old people with financial support. The first reason for this is, the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to the society. this is perfectly exemplified in case of veterans and war invalids, they are no longer able to work ; hence, they deserve to receive all the social welfare. in addition, another reason is, there are a large number of aged people, who are homeless and childless, need to be taken good care of by the government because it belongs to the government's obligation.
on the other hand, i agree with the opinion that older people should prepare savings for themselves to cover their bills after retirement. firstly , if they have their own money for payment, they will not depend on their children's money and can use it for urgent situations. they can take care themselves without any support from the government. therefore, the government can allocate part of their budget to indispensable financial priorities such as transportation, education system and healthcare. in term of offspring, because their parents can look after themselves so they can have more time to pay attention to their own life .
in conclusion, although the government should support older people to some extent, i contend that the elderly should prepare money for their own payment so that do not need to rely on other people
đề Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give y...
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Đề:
Some people think the money spent on developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Bài làm:
It is argued that the expenditure allocated for state-of-the-art technological devices for space exploration is not reasonable. Many people believe that there are numerous productive uses to spend this money. I utterly agree with this statement given that addressing environmental contamination and investing in education in many countries are higher priorities.
The major reason that I agree is that this money can be utilized to fund programs aimed to restore the environment. It is undeniable that humans are polluting and destroying the environment at a rapid rate, and there seems to be no concrete action to prevent a global environmental catastrophe from occurring in the near future. In 2022, for example, the Vietnamese government invested a huge amount of money to organize a program with the aim of cultivating 50 million trees in Gia Lai province. Therefore, future generations could have a health and safety planet to live.
A further justification that I approve is that impoverished children’s lives can significantly be improved. In fact, there are millions of children around the world currently are unable to attend school due to the lack of financial resources and educational institutions. This is illustrated by the fact that the Vietnamese government subscribed a large amount of money to Angola with a view to constructing free schools, which is why education will become more accessible in many developing nations. Therefore, it is predicted that more and more free-paying schools will be built, youngsters have access to educational opportunities.
To conclude, I totally agree that spending money on space exploration is not unjustified. This is because this can help poor children access education and mitigate environmental pollution on a global scale. As a result, this financial resource should instead be allocated towards improving human welfare and installing cutting-edge medical systems in some developing nations, such as Angola.
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Đề:
The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site
Bài làm:
The two maps depict the changes which are planned to take place in industrial site. To summarize, this industrial park will undergo several significant changes, the most important of which will be the destruction of the factory as well as the construction of various accommodation structures.
Looking first at the western part of this location, adjacent to Toe Land, there are a parking lot and a warehouse, but they are expected to be replaced by two new houses, one with three bedroom and another with four. Meanwhile, the center will experience multiple remarkable variations, one of which is the removal of the entrance and reception building next to Chimney Road to make way for three 2-bedroom houses with their own communal gardens to their south, taking up more space than now.
On the eastern side of this location, near Pie Walk, the plant will be devastated to give way to a new parking lot and an apartment complex that are expanded to the north. Another change in the center is the replacement of the office area and the canteen beside Swallow Street by parking garages to cater to new residents. All the aforementioned new buildings will be connected via private roads, occupying the former yard.
Đề:
The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site
Bài làm:
The two maps depict the changes which are planned to take place in industrial site. To summarize, this indust...
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Đề:
The table shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Bài làm:
The table illustrates the amount of milk produced on a yearly basis in four distinct nations, namely the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala during the interval of 20 years starting from 1990.
To summarize, there were upward trends in the amount of milk produced in the Netherlands, Tanzania and Guatemala, while the opposite was true for the figure for Australia over the period of 30 years starting from 1990. Additionally, the Netherlands was the nation producing the most milk at the same time.
Looking specifically at the Netherlands and Australia, the amount of milk produced in the Netherlands accounted for 11.262.000 litres, followed by 11.246.000 litres in the figure for Australia in 1990. After two decades, Netherlands’s milk production increased slightly to 11.466.000 litres. Meanwhile, there was a gradual fall in the figure for Australia, with 9.165.000 litres at the same time.
The period between 1990 and 2010 witnessed gradual increases in the quantity of milk produced in Tanzania and Guatemala, yet both countries still recorded the lowest milk production compared to Australia and the Netherlands. Tanzania’s milk production went up from 87.000 to 1.55.000 from 1990 to 2010. Similarly, the amount of milk produced in Guatemala increased from 26000 litres to 84.000 litres, which was the lowest in the given table.
Đề:
The table shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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Đề:
The bar chart shows the percentage of small, medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.
Bài làm:
The bar chart depicts the rate of different-sized business using social media platforms as a marketing tool during the period of four years starting from 2012. In summary, the percentages of social media usage among business increased over the given period, except for 2015. Additionally, the highest proportion always belonged to large-sized ones.
In the first three years, the percentage of small companies experienced a slight rise from 28% to 30% while the figure for medium companies went up dramatically from just over a third to nearly a half. However, both types of enterprises suffered remarkable drops in 2015 and the rates were both recorded at 30%. In 2016, the upward trends continued in the percentage of small and medium ones with approximately about 49% and 53%, respectively.
In 2012, the rate of big companies was at the top of the graph with almost 80%. In the next two years, the figure remained unchanged at this level, after which it witnessed a significant drop to just over a half. In the final year, this figure went up again and was still the highest among three enterprises.
Đề:
The bar chart shows the percentage of small, medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.
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The line chart illustrates the quantity of shops were closed as well as that were opened from 2011 to 2018.
Firstly, the closings over the 4 years ( from 2011 to 2014) always fluctuate strongly. Having had 6100 closures in 2011, the closings increased 900 shops in 2013 but decreasing slightly in 2014. Remarkably, in 2015 the number of stores bankrupted only had approximately 900 closures and it was also hit a low in that year. However, after one year the closers began to develop rapidly again with 5000 stores, which were happening for the next two years but it inconsiderable.
Secondly, the amount of openings in the early time were about 8500, but between 2011 and 2012 that was lessened more doubly. Nevertheless, from the final 2012 year to 2014, this quality grew speedily and achieved 6000 shops in 2014. Specially, in 2015 the openings were equivalent within 2012. Throughout the next 2 years, the shops were launched always steadily with 4000 shops, but it was declined 1000 stores in 2018.
The line chart illustrates the quantity of shops were closed as well as that were opened from 2011 to 2018.
Firstly, the closings over the 4 years ( from 2011 to 2014) always fluctuate strongly. Ha...
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Đề:
Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development?
Bài làm:
Advertising has become a ubiquitous presence in modern society, infiltrating our daily lives through television, social media, and public spaces. I believe that this phenomenon will bring about drawbacks, such as the loss of personal information and interruptions in concentration on a daily basis.
The first primary disadvantage is its potential to invade personal privacy. In fact, advertisers constantly collect personal data from consumers without their knowledge or consent, then utilize this information to modify their advertisements. For example, the social media platforms, such as Facebook or Instagram, are assumed to track user activity and browsing history to distribute adverts, resulting in the loss of private information for internet users. Consequently, our online behavior is being closely monitored, analyzed and exploited by companies.
A further drawback is that the omnipresence of commercials disrupts our daily habits and demands our attention, making us difficult to concentrate on working or studying. In reality, while browsing a website or using an app, pod-up ads can emerge unexpectedly, hindering navigation and frustrating users. For instance, while we are watching video on Youtube, watchers are often interrupted by adverts that cannot be skipped, causing a break in concentration and immersion. Therefore, the experience when people are utilizing the Internet and the process of working or studying will be negatively affected.
In conclusion, I am convinced that the increasing prevalence of advertising in everyday life will result in negatives, including the potential violation of personal privacy and the disturbance of daily activities of individuals on the Internet. It seems to me that the companies overseeing social media platforms had better adjust the number of advertisements on the Internet.
Đề:
Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development?
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Đề:
In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
Bài làm:
As life expectancy has been increasing inexorably in recent years, it has emerged as a topic of interest all around the world. Nowadays, people tend to live longer thanks to innovative technology and new methods of remedy. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.
From my perspective, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Longer life expectancy results in several related problems that can be anticipated. First and foremost, the principal issue with this situation is obviously aging-population, which is a long-term dangerous phenomenon leading to many social problems. By way of example, numerous elderly dwellers can cause a dense population, consequently, people have to face the lack of living spaces, rapid house price growth, and pollution. The second drawback is that there will be more people of retirement age who are eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of the working-age population will be smaller and thus, the government will receive less money in taxes. In other words, young generations have to handle a greater tax burden. Besides, the government can not stably maintain the budget for healthcare services and public hospitals. As a result, there are not enough facilities and human resources to take care of people’s health.
Despite the fact that there have been many cons, that affect negatively on our society, the potential of increasing life expectancy brings about significant pros in human lives. On the plus side of this trend, the elderly will have more time for themselves to pursue their own recreational activities after their hard-working lifetime when they were young, for instance, they can play sports with friends, and take part in many cultural activities. What is more, the elderly can also help parents take care of their children, so it will cut down a certain amount of money spent on babysitting, and reduce parents’s financial burden in many households. Consequently, their mental health is not only improved, but their family are also becoming more close-knit.
In conclusion, whilst there are certain benefits the growing popularity of life expectancy may bring about, I would opine that the disadvantages of this trend are far weightier. It is necessary that the government should take measures to manage and balance the population, for the better growth of the young generation.
Đề:
In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
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Some people think that news has no connection to people’s lives, and therefore, they consider it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that reading news or watching TV programs is a waste of time, for it is irrelevant to people’s lives. This essay totally disagrees with this view.
On the one hand, news does have a connection to human life. There are a bunch of new events updated from all over the world, ranging from politics to entertainment or even crime. Reading news from prestigious sources really benefits people to keep up with world speed, especially those who work in professional fields. For example, financial experts, who have to conduct extensive research or experiment of stock market, need to consistently update current affairs happening that affect to the price of market to make the right investment decision.
On the other hand, watching TV programs would help people to be more sociable. By having a wide range of knowledge on various topics, people can have valuable conversations with their friends to discuss and debate the issues. That is the reason why not only is news obsolete, it would be more important over time and there are even more events will be explored. Admittedly, there are some meaningless information released from irresponsible and reckless tabloids, which is write about live of celebrities and their fabulous lifestyle. However, it does exist trusted newspaper or programs providing great knowledge. The BBC in the UK, for example, is one of the most cherished institution that stimulate conversation and lively debate about diverse aspects of life.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that news is not related to people’s lives. By contrast, news has a strong connection and effect on our lives in different ways, even for professional or ordinary people.
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Đề: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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It is a common belief that advertising is an effective way to persuade customers to purchase stuff. However, some argue that nowadays people are not paying too much attention to advertisements since they have become so familiar. Therefore, this essay will discuss both ideas before revealing a definitive conclusion.
On the one hand, due to the widespread multimedia and information transmission, advertising has become too popular, which bores people and makes them want to neglect it. In fact, according to a survey conducted in the USA in 2019, when coming across an advertisement on a webpage or TV, around 40% of people tend to overlook and the other 10% even try to cancel it by buying a free-advertising account. Consequently, this old way of marketing seems to be no longer as effective as it used to be in catching customers' attention. Additionally, it's more difficult for corporations to gain people's trust through the information advertised about the products compared to the past.
On the other hand, advertising has a long history of existence in the markets. Besides, it is the easiest and most prevalent way for the companies' products to approach the customers. Therefore, numerous successful businesses both in the past and in the present still apply this way and come off well. Take the Unilever corporation as an example, from the last century up to now, they have continued using the old strategy as advertising but still gain significant incomes. For this reason, advertisements play an important in marketing despite of periods. Moreover, although parts of people choose to neglect or postpone the advertisements, more than 50% of the respondents during the above survey still watch the advertisements, 20% of which answered that they found some interesting and beneficial that affect their shopping choices from advertisements.
In conclusion, although it is true that advertisement is no longer as effective in attracting customers as it was in the past, it is inevitable that it still holds an important status in business by encouraging people to purchase products. For that reason, advertising still be one of the most common ways used by companies to attract customers.
Đề: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
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The given chart depicts the amount of time spent by the residents who lived in the UK on three primary kinds of phone call from 1995 to 2002.
Overall, most people tend to make calls by local-fixed line throughout the period shown. Meanwhile, the lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, however, this category also witnessed the most dramatic increase over the period of 7 years between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995, local calls with fixed lines were used for a total of over 70 billion minutes, and around half of that amount was for national and international calls. On the contrary, the minority of UK’s citizens spent time on mobile calls. All three types of phone calls experienced a gradual increase during the next 4 years.
By 1999, the number of minutes spent on local calls using landlines reached its peak of 90,000. Subsequently, the figures for this type fell steadily, but the rise in the other two kinds of phone calls continued. In 2002, the quantity of minutes of national and international landlines calls passed 60,000 billions, while mobile calls increased to around 45 billions minutes.
The given chart depicts the amount of time spent by the residents who lived in the UK on three primary kinds of phone call from 1995 to 2002.
Overall, most people tend to make calls by local-fixed...
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The diagrams illustrate how the area of the town of Poulton changed after some alterations and urban developments over a period of 35 years, from 1900 to 1935. Overall, the area experienced significant renovations in terms of buildings and amenities.
In 1900, the layout had a combination of residential, commercial, and industrial features. However, by 1935 the industrial features had largely disappeared, while there was a dramatic development of residential features. Whilst the railway line ran through the neighborhood in 1900, this had been removed by 1935. Furthermore, to the North of the map, the Bayley Mansions residence was erected on the original site of the factory, the Wasteland, and the first row of houses on Bayley Street. Besides, the two rows of terraced houses on Trent Street were replaced by blocks of flats to meet the growing demand for dwellings.
Another major conversion to this area was the renovation of more commercial and recreational features. On the commercial side, the Laundry and Cafe had been relocated to the top right-hand corner, on the original site of the Wasteland in 1935. To the right of the map, some new shops were built on the aptly named New Lane, replacing the small shop of 1900. Furthermore, by 1935, recreational features appeared when the Wasteland, railway line, Railway workers' cottages at the bottom of the map, and the second row of houses on Bayley Street were torn down to make room for a spacious park and children’s play area.
The diagrams illustrate how the area of the town of Poulton changed after some alterations and urban developments over a period of 35 years, from 1900 to 1935. Overall, the area experienced significan...
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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society
To what extent do you agree with this view?
The modern world we live in is now covered by a multitude of advertisements, from social media platforms to billboards lining the streets. This essay agrees that a number of advertisements nowadays have been created in unacceptable and immoral manner.
To begin with, **it is deeply concerning that** certain intrusive commercials incorporate offensive content or even racist elements. This might have a profound impact on vulnerable individuals. Dove, for example, a well-known shampoo brand, released an advertisement that contained toxic imagery. It depicted a black woman removing her T-shirt to reveal a white woman after using Dove’s body lotion. Not only is this advertisement racist, but it is also deeply insulting to viewers.
Another aspect of advertising I would like to consider is its unethical nature. The reason for this is that they tend to manipulate people into buying unnecessary products with unreasonable prices. What exacerbates this issue is promotion campaigns are likely targeted toward children and youth such as, expensive toys, **sugary beverages** or even luxury fashion **jewelry**. Young people who possess limited financial literacy, might force their parents to buy these things which place an immense burden on their parents to meet their children’s demands.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that many advertisements that exist in contemporary society are irritating and unethical, which consistently encourage people to buy products or services that might be too expensive or not in need. Therefore, it is necessary for the administration to take actions to control and manage the content of adverts before they are made public.
Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society
To what extent do you agree with this view?
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