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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read moreKakakkkaa
19/11/2023
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Đề: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? Bài làm: It is argued that enterprises should take responsibility for society in addition to making profits. I completely agree with this statement, given that they can attract more high-quality staff and enhance their image towards clients. The major reason that I approve is that taking social duties allows firms entice professional employees. More specifically, staff with high qualification constantly favor companies that are well-known for being socially responsible since the way they treat with society reflects the way they treat their workers. Vingroup, for example, a Vietnamese corporation, often allocates huge financial resources for charity works in the community, which helps them appeal numerous workers. Therefore, efforts and dedication to their job will be highly appreciated enabling them to employ qualified employees. A further justification that I agree is that businesses can enhance their image to consumers. In fact, plenty of companies have currently cooperated with local authorities and inhabitants to initiate programs in preserving the environment, which is why they will receive financial support from citizens in their projects. This is illustrated by the fact that T-Rex, a trading company in Indonesia, has linked to local inhabitants with the view to cleaning rubbish on nearby rivers and tunnels. As a result, they are given enormous favor from local people, which enables them to raise their sales and develop their trading. In summary, I utterly agree that business should undertake social duties because of the fact that it can allure more people to work for them and promote their brand imagine. It seems to me that governments all over the world had better facilitate companies in paying taxes, which allows them to help local individuals more straightforwardly. Đề: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? Bài làm: It is argued that enterprises should take responsibility for society in addition to makin... Read morePhạm Thị Thu Thủy
18/11/2023
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Đề: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Bài Làm: The table date enumerates the leading mobile phone manufacturers’ global market share in 2005 and 2006. Overall, Nokia was the market leader in both the year surveyed. Another highlight is that Nokia, Motorola, and Sony witnessed a slight increase in their figures, whilst there was a downward trend in those of the other brands given during the period. 2005 and 2006 were the two successive years of Nokia with the largest proportion of market share. Nokia also had a greater market share than Motorola and Samsung combined. In 2005, Nokia made up around one-third of the mobile phone sales with 32.5%. Afterward, this figure rose to 35% in the subsequent year. Also, Motorola ranked second in terms of popularity, selling 17.7% of mobile phones in 2005 and slightly more (21.1%) in 2006. By contrast, Samsung respectively sold 12.7% and 11.8% of all mobile phones. Despite its moderate fall of 1.5%, it still remained in the third position in the global market. The other brands took up a smaller proportion compared with the top three brands above. Sony saw an upward trend of 1%, while the figure for LG decreased slightly from 6.7% to 6.3%. Furthermore, Ben Q Mobile had a much smaller market in both years examined in comparison with the others. (4.9% and 2.4%). This category also dropped to half at 2.4% over the period. The other manufacturers accounted for 19.2% in 2005, higher than all the surveyed companies mentioned except Nokia. However, in the succeeding year, the figure for this category declined considerably by 3%, lower than Nokia and Motorola. Đề: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. summarise the informat... Read morePhạm Bảo Vân
19/11/2023
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn!
ĐỀ BÀI: Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Compare the two views and give your opinion. BÀI LÀM: It is profoundly believed that it is important to enjoy and love your job. However, some individuals think that earning much money is more important in your work. In my view, choosing a job which you like is more essential to your life. In this essay, i will discuss both views. Many people consider a job by money they can earn. Salary is the thing which employees can survive and have a better life. Money helps us with many things, for instance, we need money to pay electricity, water bills, food, housing, education and even health care. The level of salary will allow us to cover these requirments and have a reasonable quality of life. Salary will determine a part of your lives, however, it is not everything because it more or less affects our emotion in our job. On the other hand, choosing a job which can bring satisfaction and happiness in our lives is very important. It is one of the most crucial life decisions that people have to face on the threshold to achieve success. There are several reasons you should choose a job you like. For example, it will give you pleasure and opportunities to improve yourshelf if you have a favorite job. You want to learn and gain knowlegde from your work. Moreover, when you choose a job which is suitable for you, you will be not shy or afraid of showing your talent and personality, it will enhance your skills. Ordinarily, you will complete your tasks in the best way and you have a high sense of responsibility in your work. If you pay too much attention to your salary without having interest in your job, it is very hard to achieve a certain success. In conclusion, salary is important but i strongly believe that the satisfaction of your job is much more important to have a meaning life. ĐỀ BÀI: Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Compare the two v... Read moreHuyền
17/11/2023
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Đề bài: Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. There are widely differing views on whether university students should choose their subjects to study or not, with some considering they should be free to study whatever they are into while others deeming useful majors such as science and technology should solely be allowed. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before concluding that the former is more favorable. On the one hand, one of the reasons why university should offer only useful subjects for students' future is that it might be beneficial to their career prospects. This means studying majors like science and technology would provide them with a variety of employment opportunities including scientists, specialists, technologists, etc, which can also make a substantial contribution to the national development. On the other hand, I believe that students should be encouraged to opt for their preferred areas of study. First and foremost, there might be various benefits when studying other subjects. For example, studying arts and music would have a positive influence on developing students' skills such as creative thinking, imagination, and studying PE will be able to make it easier to improve their physical health since it is a great method to improve their fitness level. Additionally, university students will be able to have more motivations to acquire the knowledge if they are allowed to study their favorite majors. More precisely, they will be able to feel bored with science and technology if they are not interested in these areas, hence, they would find it useless for them to continue studying. However, they would find it more interesting when they can study subjects they like, which can motivate them to carry on their study. In conclusion, although some people support that only useful subjects for future ought to be offered in university's curriculum, I believe that students should be free to choose what they want to learn. Đề bài: Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as tho... Read morePhạm Bảo Vân
17/11/2023
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Mong thầy cô chấm chữa bài writing task 2 giúp e ạ. E cảm ơn!
ĐỀ BÀI: Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money? BÀI LÀM: Some people suggest that famous people should be overpaid nowadays. However, some individuals reckon that it is not fair if celebrities get too much money from their job. In my view, i firmly think that well-known people should be paid much money. In this essay, I will analyse the reasons for my point. To begin with, celebrities who have professions in particular fields such as music, acting, dancing and so on. They will have to find the way to attract many people by their personalities and talents. That is quite difficult to make it big in their career. Therefore, they deserve to get much money when they achieve a certain success in their field. Moreover, well-known people are also stressful and nervous. They have to be conscientious, responsible for their statements because many people are looking at them. The jobs which involve a high level of responsibilities and pressure also should get high pay. Additionally, famous people can contribute a part of our lives. For instance, they inspire us, motivate us and give advises to us about the life because celebrities usually have vilid experiences before they become famous. They bring us the stories in life through films or emotions through the songs...and those are their talents. If they earn much money for the difficulties or risks which they take, the amount of dedication will be stronger, they will attempt to complete their job and bring happiness to everyone. In conclusion, all the reasons above fortify my opinion that celebrities should be paid much money. Their jobs require responsibilities and skills and also involve high risks. They should be paid well to enhance their dedications, creativities in their fields. ĐỀ BÀI: Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money? BÀI LÀM: Some people suggest that famous people should be overpaid nowadays. However, some individuals reckon that it... Read moreChâu
18/11/2023
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Topic: Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performances from the screen (laptop, etc), and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree? It is often alleged that people can watch entertainment performances online instead of attending the live shows thanks to the development of technology. Although I acknowledge the logic behind this view, I still strongly disagree with it for several reasons. Advocates for online performances may have some valid arguments. They may well argue that watching art performances through technological devices can be more flexible for audiences, especially those who can barely manage to come to the show’s venue. During the Covid-19 pandemic, for instance, many concerts of KPOP idols were broadcasted online to satisfy their fans’ need for entertainment. Another reason is that people can save a significant amount of money from opting for watching shows online. To be specific, fees for online shows are significantly lower than the live ones, thereby they are able to enjoy the entertainment online without having to pay handsomely. Nevertheless, I still strongly oppose this view and believe that attending live performances can be more beneficial to both audiences and artists. Firstly, by seeing the close-up performances, audiences are likely to enjoy and immerse in the atmosphere of the shows which is a vital factor of the entertainment’s appeal. In fact, the crowd effect at live shows may foster people’s delirium and satisfaction which helps them to relieve stress and mental exhaustion from their daily basis. As for astists, the applause from live audiences plays an important role in encouraging them to be more enthusiastic on stage. As a result, the performers can grow to love their professions more as their devotion receives deserved recognitions from the viewers. In conclusion, despite the advantages that enjoy the showcases online can bring, admiring them in real life offer audiences irreplaceable experiences and performers can also be motivated to dedicate to their work. Topic: Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performances from the screen (laptop, etc), and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree? It is often alleged that people can watch entertainm... Read moreKakakkkaa
16/11/2023
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đề: The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Bài làm: The two maps illustrate the layout of a school in 1985 and the present day. Overall, the school has undergone significant changes to accommodate the growing number of students (from 1,500 to 2,300 students), with the most changes being in the side of road and playing fields to make room for additional learning and sports facilities. Further changes have also been made to the school's access and parking facilities. Looking first at the southern part of the campus, in 1985, it was containly occupied by the playing fields. They are now half the size they used to be, with a new pool and a fitness centre built in the west and new classrooms constructed in the north east corner. Just north of the new sport facilities now stand a new larger classroom building, replacing the one that once lay next to the old library. The library has been repurposed into a new learning resources and a dedicated computer room. Upon entering the school, in 1985, there were rounds around a rectangular car park and going south to the playing fields. The car park has been redesigned into a semicircle, with corresponding changes to the road around it. The smaller car park located just south of this driveway, along with the road that led to playing fields has been removed. Another major change has taken place in the east of the campus, where the classroom block now has 3 storeys instead of 2, and a new green area has been introduced in place of the road. đề: The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Bài làm: The two maps illu... Read morePhạm Thị Thu Thủy
17/11/2023
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Đề: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words Bài làm Recently, family finance has emerged as a polarizing topic. Many households feel it is crucial that both husband and wife have to share the financial burden. A school of thought holds that higher income from the parents will bring many advantages to their children. However, some others are opposed to this idea, claiming that the children of working parents suffer from neglected parenting. From my perspective, both views are of great significance in equal measure, and I will further elaborate in this essay. A large number of people believe that children will enjoy a better life quality if both their father and mother go to work. It is undeniable that these families will have higher incomes and can afford lots of costly things such as high-end clothes, video games, and mobile phones. Furthermore, their parents can also provide their children with high-quality medical and healthcare services as well as comprehensive education. Thanks to their parent’s wealth, children can greatly benefit from many opportunities to experience, discover more, and enjoy a prosperous life. As a matter of fact, the children of working parents tend to come to many developed countries to study abroad. What is more, parents can also afford a lot of lavish holidays overseas for their children together with numerous high-standard services. In terms of food demand, well-off families will certainly provide their children with different kinds of choices and nutritious viands. Daily balanced and healthy meals with the finest nutrition will result in good physical development of a child. Having said that, the proponents of this view argue that careless parenting leads to bad outcomes. I also agree that children can easily fall into temptation without parents’ care, affection, and encouragement. For further explanation, children may face a great deal of difficulties in studying if no one assists them with their homework or teaches them some difficult subjects at school. On the other hand, there is no denying the unshaken importance of parents’ role in children’s social growth and maturity. The thing is that children will be more vulnerable to misguided habits such as foul, abusive language, alcohol misuse, and smoking owing to parent’s carelessness and lack of advice. Notably, this situation will have a bad impact on children’s social awareness as well as their physical and mental development. For example, children are likely to learn many bad behaviors from toxic friends, which negatively affects their personality. Furthermore, immersing themselves in smoking and drinking alcohol will cause mental disorders and health problems. In addition, parents who are too engrossed with their work tend to have no time to share and communicate with their offspring. Consequently, it limits the communication and life skills of the descendants when they have no one to confide in. Hence, once children grow up, they have to deal with lots of difficulties in terms of soft skills and social manners. For further explanation, young children will find it hard to express their thoughts and opinions as well as tackle the problems in their daily lives. In conclusion, despite the undeniable upsides of the monetary aspect that working parents bring, I believe that parental fondness and assistance still have an integral role to play in offspring’s comprehensive upbringing. Children need a close bond and parental education rather than a materialistic life. Đề: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they... Read moreNgoc Han
17/11/2023
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Task 2: As machines have become more sophisticated, more and more jobs and tasks involving physical hard work can be done automatically. Do the positive effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects? There is a belief that the more sophisticated machines have improved, the more occupations and works can be completed in the automation. This essay will analyze this statement before performing my own perspective that its demerits of this trend may outweigh its benefits. To begin with, there are some obvious justifications to support the positive aspects of mechanized labor. Initially, when employing cutting-edge machinery while operating, faults resulting from humans may decrease. In fact, these intelligent tools can perform in the right sequence without having doubts or mistakes since they may be designed and programmed based on previously practical errors. Thereby, a host company might not have to spend time reviewing every step during advancement. Besides, most companies are able to cut the cost of workers, which relieves financial strain on employees. A good illustration is that one versatile machine can supersede two or three employees’ capacity simultaneously. This can be conducive to boosting productivity and saving money for other vital purposes. Despite the aforementioned explanations, I would contend that the drawbacks of this tendency can overshadow its opposite, owing to a few clarifications. Firstly, there will be a surge in the unemployment rate when a business is operated with automation. This could result in social stagnation and lower the living standard among residents. In other words, the industrial field might lack creativity by virtue of mechanical dependency. Secondly, these types of businesses need to charge a large sum of money for maintenance expenses. As machines are likely to break down owing to a few external factors, such as physical touch and weather, a host company is willing to invest and improve their quality monthly. This deed therefore leads to the postponement of task completion, delaying almost all of the production chain. To conclude, it is clear that the negative impacts of automation are more significant than their positive sides. Although this form of operation can reduce artificial errors while working and release the financial budget of an enterprise, it may spark the proliferation of joblessness and be a waste of money. Task 2: As machines have become more sophisticated, more and more jobs and tasks involving physical hard work can be done automatically. Do the positive effects of this trend outweigh the negative eff... Read moreHuyền
17/11/2023
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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? The most crucial purpose of science should be to enhance individuals' lives. Personally, i totally disagree with this statement because there are also other vital objectives besides developing people's life. It is undeniable that developing quality of human's life is one of the objectives of science. In fact, conducting scientific research in terms of various fields could enable scientists to come up with the best ideas to apply in practical aspects, hence, improving people's life. For instance, scientists' research on the algriculture like investigating crops or new plantation methods would make it easier for farmers to increase the quality of their products, which could lead to the increase in their incomes and then enhance their life quality. However, there would be other targets which are as vital as people's lives. Firstly, scientists need to work in order to protect the environment. If they do research merely to satisy people's demands, they will be prone to damaging the nature. For example, new invention of pesticides which is able to be more convenient in farmers' life during their work, however, has a detrimental effect on the plants along with the surrounding atmosphere,. As a result, scientific research would contribute to environmental pollution. In addiction, conserving animals is also vitally important goal of science. Given that scientifists often make use of animals in their experiments to serve human beings' lives, which would make them suffer from side effects of drugs. Therefore, scientific research should be more humane to other species besides human. In conclusion, it is necessary for scientists to foster human's lives. However, protection of natural habitats and animals is also of importance as well. The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? The most crucial purpose of science should be to enhance individu... Read moreChâu
17/11/2023
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Topic: Some people think that governments should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion Opinions are divided into whether the governments should bear the responsibility for regulating people’s behaviour to adopt healthy lifestyle or whether citizens should decide on how they should live their lives. While I acknowledge the logic behind the former view, I am strongly in favour of the latter. Those who believe that the governments play an important role in making citizens live wholesome lives may have some valid arguments. They may well argue that the states have the ultimate power to enact laws and regulations to protects people from consequences of unhealthy lifestyles. It is the case in many countries where minors ae prohibited from purchasing cigarettes and alcohol lest the young generation suffer from health effects of these subtances. In addition, the ministrations have adequate resources to foster healthy lifestyle among the citizens. For instance, they can allocate the national budgets to invest in public health facilities and campaigns which are likely to encourage individuals to adopt healthy manners. Nevertheless, I still firmly believe that people should be entitled to make their own life decisions for several reasons. Chief among these is that individuals should have the total freedom to make choices regarding their preferences, as it is a matter of personal autonomy. In fact, it would be unfair to demand people to comply with a certain lifestyle which is opposite to the one they long for. The second reason is that by determining their own lifestyles, people can enjoy their lives to the fullest. To be specific, they can free from the heightened levels of axiety and frustration which may caused by strict control of authoritative bodies in terms of many aspects of life. In conclusion, it is understandable that governmental involvement may help people to lead a healthy way of living. However, I think that citizens should be responsible for their own lives and decisions as it is important to preserve their human rights and quality of life. Topic: Some people think that governments should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion Opinions a... Read moreHuyền
17/11/2023
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Đề bài: In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? In various nations, individuals currently have a higher life expectancy in comparison with those living in the past. Although some consider that an ageing population may have some benefits, I believe its disadvantages for governments are more significant. It is undeniable that increasing the number of older people would be beneficial. Firstly, it can have a positive influence on career prospects. This means it can provide individuals with numerous employment opportunities, among which are doctors, nurses, caregivers, etc. Additionally, old people might possess a variety of knowledge and experience in various fields including education, volunteering, mentorship which can make a great contribution to society. For instance, younger generation can participate in various seminars so that they can listen to old professors sharing their wisdom, which can make it easier for them to be well-prepared for becoming adults in the future. However, I think that the disadvantages of ageing population can overshadow its advantages. First and foremost, it might be detrimental to the social development of nations since the governments may have to spend their national budget on building a greater number of facilities for old people such as: nursing houses, hospitals. As a result, governments will not be able to invest enough money in other aspects like military, education, entertainment, etc, which might have a negative impact on developing society. Besides, governments' financial situation would also be adversely affected, given that their investment in facilities to serve the elderly people might take a toll on their expenditure. For example, it might take billion dollars to construct hospitals when there are more people who have high life expectancy, hence, the governments might end up their spendings and their financial situation would get worse. In conclusion, while there could be several benefits of ageing population, I deem that its drawbacks which governments have to tackle surpass its advantages. Đề bài: In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has mo... Read moreHuyền
16/11/2023
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The given line graph illustrates how the average prices of some different metals per month changed within the year 2014. Overall, it is obvious that there was a reduction in the total average costs of metals in 2014. Additionally, the figure for Nickel and Zinc experienced more dramatic fluctuation while a stable trend was seen in the case of Copper. Regarding Nickel, the monthly change in its price experienced a significant drop to hit a bottom of -3% over a period of 5 months commencing in January, then hovered around -1% mark in the next 3 months. After reducing slightly in October, it recovered to 1% in the end of the year. Copper's figure followed a similar trend, but a different rate, standing at 1% in the first month before reaching its highest point of 3% after one month. Despite declining sharply to reach its lowest point of -1% in June, it rose and remained stable at about -0.5% tree months later, followed by a gradual decrease by 1% in October before increasing to 2% in December. Meanwhile, the proportion of change in Copper's cost initially stood at 2%, followed by a steady downward trend to hit its lowest point of roughly -0.5% in June before staying stable at 1% in July, Aigust and September. After witnessing a minor fluctuation, the figure started rising to nearly 1% in the final month. The given line graph illustrates how the average prices of some different metals per month changed within the year 2014. Overall, it is obvious that there was a reduction in the total average costs o... Read moreKakakkkaa
16/11/2023
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The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012. The given bar charts depict the production of various dairy items in Metric tons by the world’s top manufacturers in 2012. In summary, the total milk production from the three key contributors was significantly higher than other products, followed by cheese, butter and milk powder. Additionally, while the European Union dominated in the quantity of milk and cheese produced, it ranked last in the manufacturing of milk powder. When it comes to the amount of milk and cheese manufactured, the EU accounted for 142,970 MT, followed by India and the United States, with 127,000 and 90,038, respectively. In cheese production, while the European Union again led with 7,120 MT, the United States followed with a significant amount of 4,925 MT, which higher than Brazil’s production, at 700 MT. According to the amount of butter and milk powder, India’s production was the highest, at 4,500 MT, ahead of the figures for the EU (2,040 MT) and the United State (810 MT). In terms of the quantity of milk powder manufactured, China surpassed New Zealand and the EU’s production, with 1,110 and 770 MT, respectively, to become the top nation in this field, occupying 1,200 MT. The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012. The given bar charts depict the p... Read moreĐào Thị Huyền Trang
15/11/2023
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The line graph illustrates the average amount of money spent on cell phone, national fixed-line services and international fixed-line annually in America from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the yearly spending on Cell phone service increased while the reverse pattern can be seen in National fixed-line services. ln addition, the figures for international fixed-line services was lowest in three sectors. ln 2001, the average money poured into National fixed-line services was about $700. The figures for Cell phone service and international fixed-line services were lower than that of National fixed-line, at about $200 and $250 respectively. ln 2005, US consumers spent an amount of money on Cell phone services increased twofold from $200 to $400. The figures for international fixed-line services at $300, and it remained at a similar level until 2008. ln contrast, National fixed-line services tend to decrease sharply almost $500. Between 2008 and 2010, the average yearly expenditure on Cell phone services remained high and peaked at $750 in 2010, while the figure for national fixed-line services declined to about $400 at the end of the period. lnternational fixed-line services fluctuated and reached just over $300 in 2010. The line graph illustrates the average amount of money spent on cell phone, national fixed-line services and international fixed-line annually in America from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the yearly spen... Read moreHuyền
16/11/2023
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Đề bài: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Some individuals consider that pursuing a higher education after finishing high school is the best way for students to achieve a successful career path, while some others deem that entering the workforce immediately is a better choice. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before concluding I am in favor of the former. On the one hand, entering the workforce after graduation can be appealing for several reasons. The first one is that students might become independent by earning their own income, allowing them to establish a stable life. Additionally, starting work might enable students to broaden their practical experience which are beneficial to their occupation. That means students are able to aqquire practical skills such as: teamwork, communication, organization which might make it easy for them to climb the career ladder in the workplace On the other hand, I believe that continuing to study at university offers more benefits. Firstly, it can be advantageous for young people to achieve formal qualifications at university because academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having a relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Second, job market is becoming increasingly competitive. There are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company, hence, young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college may have more difficulties to compete. In conclusion, although some people think that students should get a job after high school graduation, I suppose that going to university is a better choice to be successful in their career. Đề bài: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both vie... Read moreAn rt
16/11/2023
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Các thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ 🥹 It has been a bone of contention for years whether video games are recreational and educational or if they are imposing a detrimental impact on players. From my perspective, the former viewpoint, which maintains the positive sides of video gaming, is plausible for various justifications. Initially, it stands to reason that video games are beneficial to players. As they are designed for entertainment, video games act as effective stress relievers. After an industrious day working or studying, many people may opt to play on-screen games so as to unwind and relax. Moreover, video gaming offers and teaches gamers an array of intellectual and social skills that can be applied in practicality. They learn how to plan, analyse, strategise, organize, socialise or even work in teams in multiplayer and interactive games. With regard to the contrasting viewpoint, I admit that some may argue that video games, especially negatively designed ones such as violent games, are likely to change players’ personalities adversely. This is mainly because people who play this genre may often be seen to display aggressive behaviour and violent tendencies. However, I still firmly believe that there are numerous types of games available apart from such not-encouraged genres, for instance, solving puzzles, math or sports games. Additionally, the fact that some prefer to download violent games may possibly be pertinent to their social background, social groups and relationships with other people, which may appeal to them to choose such games. If players see fit to hone their logical thinking or intellectual mind, they will probably be more tempted by games involving tackling problems. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, video games are advantageous as they relieve our stress as well as educate players in some respects. It is gamers who are responsible for choosing the appropriate types of games to experience, which may well facilitate video games to take their positive effects. Các thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ 🥹 It has been a bone of contention for years whether video games are recreational and educational or if they are imposing a detrimental impact on players. From my p... Read moreChâu
16/11/2023
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Topic: The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree? Housing shortage in metropolitan areas is a common issue we are facing currently. It is sometimes argued that only governments are able to tackle this problem. While I acknowledge the important role of the government intervention, I still hold the belief that it is not the only solution to the phenomenon as private sectors can also help to alleviate it. It is true that the governments have the authority to enact control the housing crisis by various measures. To begin with, they can reverse the trend of migrating from rural areas to the cities in search for better living standards, education, or healthcare systems, which has driven housing demand in the metropolitan areas. To be specific, they are capable of allocating national budget to improve the facilities and infrastructures in suburbs to cater people living in these areas, which may discorage them from moving to big cities. In addition, the government have an ultimate control over the real estate market which has significantly affected the housing scarcity. Seoul, the capital city of Korea, is a prime example of this, as the administration strictly restricts people from investing in the housing market. Nevertheless, I would argue that the inadequacy of housing can be solved by other private sectors. Firstly, companies can invest to establish their branches or factories in rural areas to provide local residents with more employment opportunitunities, thereby they can work at their hometown instead of moving to big cities and struggling to find a place to settle. Secondly, some economic institutions can facilitate those with low-income who find a house unaffordable. In fact, banks can help their customers get a friendly loan to buy a house, property companies could provide an easy scheme to pay for the houses. In conclusion, it is undeniable that the authorities’ part in dealing with the housing shortage is indisputable. However, I take the view that they are not the sole solution to the housing crisis since for-profit businesses would also be essential to tackle the issue. Topic: The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree? Housing shortage in metropolitan areas is a c... Read moreTrần Việt An
15/11/2023