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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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Đề:
The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.
Bài làm:
The provided line graph depicts the percentage of labour force employment in different sectors in the USA during the interval of 80 years starting from 1930.
In summary, there were upwards trends in the rate of labour force in the USA over the given period, except for other services. Additionally, the agricultural sector was the most common field during the first 60 years.
In 1930, there seemed to be no Americans engaged in technical and industrial sectors, and only about 10% pursued sales and office occupations. After remaining unchanged to 1960, the industrial sector began attracting more workers, this percentage increased and surpassed the figure for the agricultural sector in 1990, reaching a peak of about 40% in the last year. Similarly, the sales and office and technical sectors also underwent upward trends, reached the highest at 20% and approximately 23%, respectively, in 2010, which made them the second and third most common occupations.
On the other hand, despite being the most popular occupation in the first year, with 75% of the labour forced employed in farming, fishing and foresting, this sector experienced a significant decrease and reached a low of only 5% in 2010. Furthermore, the rate of works in other services rose slightly to 18% in the first decade, after this fell back to the initial figure in 1920 and remained stable over the rest of the period.
Đề:
The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.
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Question: Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends.
Answer: Many people believe that concentrating on academic success and passing examinations is more important than learning more soft-skills which they can study from their family and unnecessary to be taught at school. From my point of view, I completely agree with this issue.
Soft-Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork are necessary but not very important to learn in school. Because the main purpose of these skills is self-service and take care of own each other, from that, most of people just need to study basically. For instance, they learn cooking to cook for themselves and their family, friends and so on, and there aren’t many people who learn it to become a successful cook. Depending on each other, these skills will be indispensable for their life or their job and flexible in their choices. If someone wants to be a cooker, tailor or carpenter, there are many courses in college are suitable with their hobby and passion.
One of the reasons is the curriculum which is taught in school is extremely special and isn’t the same with other short courses. At school, students will learn many subjects, such as language, math, philosophy and so on. These fields need a long time to understand completely and shouldn’t divide this time for other unimportant subjects. Besides, having exams will check the knowledge of students and help learners know their virtues and weaknesses. For example, the scores in these exams can show their capacity in some major field which soft-skill can’t do. From that, students will focus on academic success, try to widen knowledge, perfect themselves and create huge contributions for society.
In conclusion, although some skills such as cookery, dressmaking or woodwork are necessary for human life and serve for many purposes. However, school curriculums should spend all time teaching important subjects, moreover, teaches good student who can contribute to the globe.
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Question: It is often said that governments spend too much money to promote wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary society, there is a widespread debate on whether governments allocate too much resources to protect the wildlife while there are more serious global issues that need to be considered. From my perspective, I totally agree with this notion and this essay will analyze my viewpoint.
Initially, it is undeniable that the wildlife plays a vital role in biodiversity and animals’ food chains. However, the amount of national budget that spent on protecting wild species is unnecessary and should be allocated to another field such as living standard. In modern life, the circumstance of overpopulation is witnessed in most of metropolitian areas. For instance, the population in Hanoi is doubled compared to the last decade since this capital is a place of career opportunities and relationships. Due to the development in facilities and technology, more individuals come to urban areas to seek out more chances, which led to more social crisis such as crime. Hence, it is essential for the governments to provide subtantial financial investment on the infrastructures and employment in the rural areas so the residents can approach equivalent opportunities.
Moreover, environment is one of the most serious worldwide issues that demands more resources and budget to address. The shift in temperature has a profound impact on human’s life as a consequence of climate change. For example, the rising in temperature results in numerous of natural disasters, especially drought, which may lead to the falling in national agriculture and economic. Thereby, the government leaders should have responsible to tackle this issue by funding more for the citizens and enhancing the state of environment. Furthermore, more resources are needed to improve individuals’ health. The authorities should spend more money on healthcare centers and advanced medication to reduce the mortality rate in the large scale. For instance, Vietnamese governments established more healthcare facilities and champaigns for the residents to engage in and raise awareness on boosting both physical and mental health.
In conclusion, although there are multiple advantages that the wildlife brings to human, the governments should allocate more resources in other social issues such as environment and healthcare in order to enhance the living standard for the citizens.
Question: It is often said that governments spend too much money to promote wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?
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Question: Some people think that the government should fund training courses for performing arts such as music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children’s families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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There is a school of thought that
classes that teach some kinds of art
should be supported by the
government, while some people
argue that either single businesses or
families of the children should be in
charge of funding. From my
perspective, there are much better
reasons proving that the authorities
plays an important role in
supporting art classes for children.
On the one hand, if the national?
government do investmen in aesthetic courses for children, it would be likely to attract many professional instructors. Since people might consider working for an agency
funded by government as a jobs that brings them chances of enhancing
their career promotion. Another point
to make is that, those classes funded
by government and teaching
children music tend to become
a quality centers. This is because they
need to reach some criteria from the
national policy in order to be
suitable for the support.
On the other hand, private
corporations could brings some
significant benefits for the
children's development in arts,
while families are their greatest
providing background. When it comes to the fund from businesses
children could be exposed to a
diversity of fields of arts.
Private companies are thought
to put their preferences on the
number of the courses but not the
quality, hence, young students could
fortunately have the opportunity
of exposure to different art
classes. A further discussion to consider is that family who know their
children well would decide themselves
which are the suitable and affordable
courses to invest their income in.To conclude, while government
compensates the reliability for training
projects, personal companies or
children's relative ones could help
to increase the chances and
be the best guidance for the young
participants. It is recommended that
these three financial resources
could collaborate to provide the
most qualified environment for children.
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Đề: It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.
Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
BÀI LÀM
In today’s fast-paced world, the media has been increasingly prevalent in our society. Obviously, it has an inevitable effect on our lives, including both pros and cons. As far as I am concerned, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. In this essay, I will examine both sides of living in a rich media society and explain my opinion.
It is undeniable that media brings a large number of advantages to human life. First and foremost, living with media makes it easier and more convenient for us in order to access information and knowledge. Living in a media-rich society is a way to broaden our horizons, and keep us up to date with the constant renovation of the global world. For further explanation, media allows individuals to stay informed about news and current events that are happening in our countries and the world. Also, it is an endless source of beneficial information and knowledge when we can effortlessly approach numerous websites and applications, and search for any information at any time. Also, individuals can join and discuss in many online forums, and learn everything they want flexibly and conveniently. Another benefit of living in a media-rich society is that it enhances the quality of entertainment and connectivity. The appearance of media clearly results in many entertaining platforms such as social media, forums, music, and so on. In other words, individuals can immerse themselves in their own ideal world even in their room such as by listening to music, watching films, chatting with friends from all over the world, and making a video call with their beloveds. Consequently, a media-rich society invisibly generates bonds among human society by connecting people from different parts of the world. Furthermore, it also enriches and renovates people’s mental lives and well-being. As a result, living in a media-rich society means a comfortable and convenient life.
Besides the large number of bright sides that media offers to humans, there are still several inevitable drawbacks. The main issue with this trend is that it may cause addiction. Research has found that there is a growing number of youngsters who are addicted to games and social media, which results in many bad outcomes related to their health, family, and society. For further explanation, constant exposure to media may cause obesity and other diseases due to sedentary routines and UV lights from digital devices. What is more, social media and games addition increase the crime rate when young people pursue them blindly and lack self-awareness about their behaviors.
In conclusion, whilst there are lots of advantages that living in a media-rich society brings to humans, it also comes with the risk of several negative impacts on our lives.
I would opine that the pros of this trend are far weightier. People should take advantage of the media in a smart way, and balance their lifestyles by flexibly combining physical activities and media usage.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in various age brackets who took part in physical activity on a regular basis within the year 2010.
Overall, it is noticeable that physical activity was the most popular for men and women in the age group of 15 to 24 and in the 45 to 54 bracket, respectively. Additionally, the percentages of females who participated in physical excercises took up more significant than those of males in all age ranges apart from the youngest group in the survey.
For people who were between 15 and 24 years old, the proportion of men stood at 52.8%, which was 5.1% more remarkable than that of women in the same group. Meanwhile, the figure for females aged 25 to 34 accounted for 48.9% while 42.2% of men were reported to do physical activity. Turning to the 35-to-44 age group, the percentage of women stood at 52.5%, making up about 1.5 times more than the proportion of men, with the figure of just 39.5%.
In 45-to-54 age bracket, the percentages of males and females were 53.3% and 43.1%, respectively. A similar pattern was witnessed in the figure for people between 55 and 64 years old, but at a different rate, with 53% for men and 43.1% for women. Finally, the proportions of males and females in the oldest group remained the most stable, with the figures of 46.7% for males and 47.1% for females.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in various age brackets who took part in physical activity on a regular basis within the year 2010.
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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants, Why do people waste food, what can be dong to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
Due to the proliferation of human living standards, there are multiple shops and restaurants have been setting up. Despite its benefits, these establishments have led to a new bad habit among some purchasers which is wasting food. However, there are still solutions that can be implemented by governments, school education and places where individuals buy food.
The reasons for this issue vary. The primary of which is owing to the development of manufacturing, which accelerates ingredients and food production more quickly and more effectively than in the past. This then makes food become less privative, thereby, contributing to the greater depreciation of food in individuals. Another noticeable reason is the lack of planning when customers order food from shops or restaurants. Take buffet restaurants as a highlight example, orderers tend to take loads of food with the hope of fulfilling their curiosity and satisfaction or simply just want to balance the food they eat and the high-cost ticket that they pay for that buffet meal. Hence, people cause plentiful fare without a second thought or any regret with that.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken by governments, schools, shops and restaurants to alleviate this problem. The first solution should start by educating children when they still are students. Schools can hold more extracurricular activities to raise students’ awareness of food appreciation, together with the governments, encouraging citizens to get involved in some food campaigns in order to against wasting food. In addition, food retailers and food wholesalers can impose stricter rules with appropriate punishment to ensure people’s observance.
In conclusion, there are obvious rationales behind the magnitude of food wasted. However, this negative trend still can be handled with the hands of governments, restaurants and shops and aware individuals altogether.
Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants, Why do people waste food, what can be dong to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
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Đề bài: The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010
The given pie chart give information about the size of classes in grade school in four different states in Australia in the year 2010
Overall, it can be observed that, except southern, the size of classes for 21-25 learners was dominate throughout the states in Australia and the lowest in 4 states was 30 students or more
The first result worth pointing out is that, the figure for classes with 30 students or more in new south Wales and South Australia accounted for 4%, which was outstripped capital of Australia 3% and dwarfed by Western Australia only 1%.Also worth noting is that , 20 students or fewer was highest in Australia central , at 38%, followed closely by south , west Australia and New south wales, with 36% and 26% respectively
It is apparent that , while the proportion of 21-25 students on Australia capital led with just over half, western Australia followed with a significant percentage at 42%, overshadowing southern and new south Wales of 5% and 9% respectively.Additionally, while the rate of classes for 26-30 pupils in 3 states namely new south Wales and southern, western Australia made up over a quarter, the opposite was true for capital of Australia
Đề bài: The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010
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Question:
Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Answer:
Many inhabitants believe that a nation can have the capacity to have both virtue about economy and environment. From my point of view, I am convinced to completely argue with this issue.
Economic development will require a variety of fuel, such as oil, gas, wood or raw materials, which can help deal with other nations in global markets. As a result, many energy sources will be exploited by the government to serve for this purpose. For instance, the paper manufacturing industry needs to chop down many trees to create the final product and bring it to the market to trade and earn more money. Besides, the production process also wastes a lot of air pollution into the environment because they need to avoid many risks such as booming factories because they overload redundant sources. Another reason is the demand of the residents is as much as increasing, from that, they need more materials to serve their life qualify and it have a possible to destroy the balance environment. For example, the current citizens consume many plastic item which has a long decomposition and have negatives with environmental.
However, the improvement of the economy can help the environment remove many risks, such as wasting of resources. It means that the developed countries have progressive scientific and huge funding which help solve environmental problems, for example exploration of renewable energy, such as wind, sun, which are environmentally friendly and sustainable and they expense a numerous cost to operate these. A specific region which has a clean environment also is a factor that can contribute to the changes of the economy. Because the atmosphere in these areas will be very fresh, and the variety of diversity is conserved, which will be very attractive with travelers who come from other countries visit these and readily extend a suitable cost for their experience. From that, these nations will earn more money and improve more and more economically in a long period.
In conclusion, a country can improve both their economic and environmental demand in their authorities and opportunities for natural resources, weather and humans. In my opinion, this issue happened completely with many regions around the world in the current future.
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Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.
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Đề:
The diagram details the process of making wool.
Bài làm:
The picture illustrates how wool is produced for both personal and industrial use.
Generally, it is clear that there are various steps involved, beginning with the sheep sheared and ending with the wooled yarns being knitted or woven into commercially made jackets or carpets.
The process commences when the sheep are sheared for their fleece. Once the collective amount of fleece is cleaned by water and chemicals to get rid of contaminants such as grease, branches, and other debrism, it is taken to a drying machine. Following this the fleece is carded, which results in tufts of wool and pieces of string as byproducts, with the latter being reintroduced into process to maximize productivity.
Then, woolen tufts are spent to the storage before being spun into balls of yarn. In the last stage, these yarn balls are sold for either individual pastimesm, like knitting or the commercial purpose of making jackets or carpets.
Đề:
The diagram details the process of making wool.
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The picture illustrates how wool is produced for both personal and industrial use.
Generally, it is clear that there are various steps i...
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đề: It costs a lot of money for a country to host an international sports event, such as the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Some people think that this is a waste of money, but others believe the opposite. Discuss both views and give your opinion .
Many people claim that certain country wastes a huge amount of state money on hosting an international sport tournaments such as Olympic Games or football World Cup. However, others how opposite belief . although I am in favor of the former opinions, this essay will discuss both viewpoints.
On the one hand, hosting international sport events are likely to bring many benefits for a country. To begin with, during these sport events, there is an influx of tourists who come from diverse backgrounds, visit this country and have a need of using services such as restaurants and hotels. therefore local people have more opportunities to boost business revenue and make profits. In addition, Thanks to globalization, this tendency will create cultural diversity and local people have a chance to broaden their horizons from other, more and civilized societies.
On the other hand, I agree with the opinion that the cost to organize sport tournaments are extremely huge and extravagant. Firstly, the host country have to invest .tremendous sum of money in constructing modern sport infrastructures which are used in short term in order to serve Olympic Games. For instance, many modern stadiums in Qatar,which were built for World Cup 2022 , now are abandoned and downgraded . It causes damage to natural resources and wastes country’s budgets. Meanwhile, the government should allocate that money to other essential investments, such as health care and education systems, so as to enhance people's living standards.
In conclusion , as the reasons discussed above, i contend that the government should minimize the costs of organizing sport tournaments and spend more money on supporting their citizens.
đề: It costs a lot of money for a country to host an international sports event, such as the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Some people think that this is a waste of money, but others believe t...
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of reasons why employees did not go to work in European country in three years 2000, 2005 and 2010.
Overall, it can be observed that why the rate of sickness and family responsibilities underwent downward trends the opposite was true for anxious, person needs and unexpected issues
The first result worth pointing out is that, in 2000 the figure for illness accounted for just under 45%, then decreasing gently to 35% in 2010. Despite of this, it was still the highest throughout the period. Similarly, the ratio of family responsibilities followed a similar pattern as it declined moderately from just over 25% in 2000 to 25% in the next decade and only dwarfed by illness 10% .
It is apparent that, the proportion of stress was lower than person needs in 2000, the former being just over 5% and the latter being nearly one - third. These figure increased notably in the next 10 years and stress still lower than person needs, with just over 10% and nearly 25% respectively. Also worth noting is that unexpected problems climbed from around 10% in the beginning to peaked at under 15% in 2005, before falling minimally in the end
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of reasons why employees did not go to work in European country in three years 2000, 2005 and 2010.
Overall, it can be observed that why the rate of sickn...
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Đề:
Fewer and fewer people today right by hand using a pen pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
A decreasing number of individuals opt to write manually by using traditional tools, such as pens, pencils and brushes. This essay will point out some of the major reasons why this is happening, and I believe that this trend will bring about drawbacks, such as the lack of personal touch the loss of traditional skills associated with handwriting.
There are two primary reasons leading to the aforementioned issue. Firstly, people tend to utilize digital communication methods, such as typing and texting. In fact, with the prevalence of digital devices, such as smartphones and computers, which allows people to send information more quickly due to its speed and efficiency. For example, Vietnamese managers currently tend to use email to share updates and documents with their staff. Secondly, typing on a keyboard allows for faster and more efficient in writing. The ease of typing on a keyboard allows for rapid transcription of thoughts and ideas, facilitating the creation well-structured documents. For instance, many Vietnamese undergraduates use word processing programs, such as Word and Excel, with the view to doing their graduation theses, ensuring that they submit these theses on time. Therefore, it is predicted that there will be an increasing number of word processing and communication applications, which makes people’s lives more convenient in writing.
The first primary disadvantage is that handwritten communication can convey a personal touch. When people take time to write a note by hand, it adds a personal and intimate element to the message. As an example, after a job interview, a candidate sends a handwritten thank-you letter to the interviewer can leave a long-lasting impression. Furthermore, the excessive make use of online communication can lead to losing traditional skills in handwriting. In many cultures, calligraphy has been considered as a unique art form for centuries, with the combination of cultural beauty and linguistic expression. This is illustrated by that fact that in East Asian cultures, such as China and Japan, where calligraphy has been a traditional beauty, the decline in the practice of handwriting may lead to a loss of cultural heritage. People, as a result, cannot enjoy the benefits of handwriting if they just emphasize on digital communication.
In conclusion, the decline of writing manually becomes common due to digital communication and the use of convenient keyboard, I totally believe that this phenomenon is negative, given that losing the writer’s meaning and the loss of traditional beauty. It seems to me that each individual needs to strike a balance between using technological devices and the cognitive awareness of handwriting to ensure effective learning and communication.
Đề:
Fewer and fewer people today right by hand using a pen pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
A decreasing number of individuals opt to write...
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The given table compares the numbers of cars manufactured in three countries, including Argentina, Australia and Thailand, starting from 2003 to 2009.
It can be seen that Thailand produced the largest amount of cars throughout the period. Besides, while the sum of automobile manufacturing in Argentina increased steadily, Thailand saw a consistent decrease over a period of 6 years.
Being the biggest automobile production country, Thailand commenced with a figure of 735,852 and then peaked at 1,16236 before ending the period with a slight fall to 999,963. In contrast, in 2003, 235,088 cars were issued in Argentina, representing the lowest quantity in the whole time given. This figure still grew noticeably until doubling that of in 2003, at 466,089 in 2009.
Regarding Australia’s number of cars made, it ranked second with 452,163 cars produced in 2003. After 6 years, these numbers continued to drop and nearly halved to 245,624 cars remained by 2009.
The given table compares the numbers of cars manufactured in three countries, including Argentina, Australia and Thailand, starting from 2003 to 2009.
It can be seen that Thailand produced the larg...
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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
In this day and age, there has been a notably increasing rate of people relying on writing platforms instead of using a pen, pencil or brush over a few decades. This shift can be attributed to the emergence of faster and convenient writing methods. While I acknowledge this approach has numerous benefits for individuals, I totally hold the view that its drawbacks are far more important in terms of affecting individuals health and writing skill.
To begin with, people who show a reluctance towards employing pens or brushes can be reasonable by two factors. First of all, it is undeniable that writing advancement brings a better speed compared to traditional writing. To illustrate, typists can benefit from utilizing both hands and multiple fingers at the same time, resulting in enhancing the efficient and accelerated workflow. Secondly, many typing softwares often incorporate many supporting features. For example, online Google Document offers autocorrection and opposes appropriate words. Therefore, these aids not only streamline the writing process but also contribute to improve work performance.
From my perspective, the declining rate of manual writing brings many drawbacks rather than its advantages. One of the serious disadvantages is the impact on people's health. This writing process involves the exposure to electric devices such as computers, mobile phones and so on for a long time, which have been gradually scientifically proven to health issues such as poor vision. Another problem is the potential detriment to an individuals’ writing skills. Some students nowadays have a tendency to over-reliance on digital innovations to prepare for their documents, this act can lead to an inactive behavior and thinking. Moreover, for a long time, they may find it difficult to write on their own owing to lack of ability to employ proper terminology or grammatical structures.
In conclusion, there has been a decreasing popularity of traditional writing, which can be answered by the advancement and convenience of digital writing methods. However, I believe that this phenomenon is a negative development due to its effect on people’s health and writing ability.
Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown.
Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantage?
While many people can learn a new language in their country, other people select to go abroad in order to support their learning. In my opinion, the advantages of a journey are greater than the disadvantages.
There are some drawbacks to attending a language course overseas. Firstly, language learners have to consider the costs such as airline tickets and tuition fees. Besides, they need money for day-to-day expenses, such as/ including food and accommodation. In fact, not many families can afford such a journey because it is very expensive. Secondly, living away from family and friends makes them feel lonely, and they also have to experience cultural and language barriers, which can increase this sense of isolation. Therefore, these problems are serious enough to interfere with language learning.
Learning a foreign language overseas brings many benefits. international students can easily have access to native-speaker teachers and total immersion in the target language, which enables them to reach a higher level than learning at home. This also increases the chance of getting a part-time job, which can relieve the financial burdens on them or their family. In addition, at work and school, they have the chance to make friends and communicate with other people, and they will feel less homesick as a result. Thus, students can gain a lot from an opportunity like this.
In conclusion, although they have to adapt to a new culture and pay an amount of money for such a trip, those who overcome these can master the language better. The advantages of learning a new language overseas are greater than its drawbacks.
Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown.
Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantage?
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Đề:
The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
Bài làm:
The provided bar chart depicts the number of female and male undergraduates selecting six major subjects in a particular university in the US in 2010.
Overall, finance was the most favoured subject by both genders, the opposite was true for engineering. Additionally, there was a significant difference in the figures for males and females studying Mathematics.
In terms of the most popular majors among women, about 225 females majored in Finance, which was identical to that of males. The figures for females enrolling in Marketing and Accoutning stood at approximately 120 and 200, respectively, which were higher than that of men, with about 75 and 170 students in turn.
Looking more closely at the remaining subjects, 200 Math majors were female, whereas the number of men selecting this subject was dramatically lower than, with approximately 60 students. Similarly, the quantity of men studying Economics outnumbered women, with 150 and around 70, correspondingly. Meanwhile, engineering was the least prevalent subject, with just over 51 undergraduates stuyding in both genders.
Đề:
The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
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The provided bar chart depicts the number of female and male undergraduates sele...
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Question: The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.
Answer:
The line diagram illustrates the proportion of consumers of the Internet in the USA, Canada and Mexico in the period of a decade/ ten years.
Overall, There was a steadily increasing tendency of Internet Users in all countries. The rank of the percentages of population who used technology devices to Internet access experienced a significant fluctuation between these countries.
As can be seen from the graph, the Internet was more popular in the USA than in Canada and Mexico in 1999 and continued to increase. However, the percentage of internet users in Canada was in the 2nd rank in 1999, then it rose to as much as percentages of the USA in 2002, exceeded completely and peaked in the final year.
Compared with two other countries, the proportion of the population who used the internet in Mexico was at least in the first year. Although it had a increased tendency, this percentages was the similar in 1999, it was still the fewest figure after ten years, in 2009.
Question: The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.
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The line diagram illustrates the proportion of consumers of the...
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Question: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned the future development of the site
Answer: The diagrams illustrate the improvement plan for the industrial town of Norbition in the future.
Overall, the town will be experienced significant changes, such as all manufacturing will be replaced with housing, and a bridge, and some factors which serve residents' lives will appear.
There will be an appearance of the housing area with some facilities, such as the playground, school, and medical center will be added in the east of the main roundabout which will be stayed the same. Besides, the small roundabout will be built on the bottom road.
On the west of the main roundabout, they will build a road leading to another housing and add a shop bottom of this road. A bridge that leads from this roundabout to the housing on the other side of the river will be built on the area of the old farmland. This farmland will be relocated to the northeast area.
Question: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned the future development of the site
Answer: The diagrams illustrate the improvement plan for the industrial town...
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many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. however, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, because of the development of modern technology, many employees can work from their home. Some individual believe that this change may only bring advantage for workers, not the employers. I completely agree with this idea owing to several reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, working from home can be benefit for workers. The first reason is that, because they do not use means of transport to such as motorbike, bus, subway to move to company, workers can save on travel costs. As a result, they can spend the money that they earn to charity or entertainment. Furthermore, since employee do not have to distracted by others and a more comfortable work environment, this increased the productivity of work load. For example, many companies in Vietnam allow their workers working remotely, in order able to focus their task and complete them in a shorter amount of time.
At the same time, allowing employee working from home may lead to some problems to employers. Firstly, because of the lack of supervision, employers cannot manage and control their staff, this negative effect on productivity of work. Secondly, due to remote work can leads to communication challenge, employee may struggle communicate with their college and their superior. If there is no conversation between worker and superior, their work may have some mistake that could influence their productivity and their company.
In conclusion, i am the opinion that using modern technology to work remotely could bring effective workers but contrast to employers.
many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. however, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, because...
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