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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé!
Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp...
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Task 2
Em chào các thầy cô ạ, mong thầy/cô có thể bỏ ra chút thời gian sửa bài giúp em với ạ, em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ
Đề bài: Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, there has been a heated debate among scientists whether planting trees in cities or constructing building is of more importance. In my opinion, I believe that the emphasis should be placed on the former one as it help to better people's living conditions and play a role in addressing global warming issue.
On the one hand, trees help enhance citizens' living environment. It is common knowledge that trees produce a significant amount of oxygen for us to survive and contribute to combating heavy pollution in cities and improving air quality. As a result, health conditions of residents living in those places can be improved as the fresher air can alleviate the risk of suffering from serious respiratory diseases such as lung cancer or asthma. In addition, trees can mitigate the rate of mental issues in humans, especially those living in metropolitian cities and often experience higher levels of stress. It has been proven by many scientists that trees can bring people a sense of peace in mind, and people are likely to be more relaxed when surrounded by trees.
On the other hand, trees can also make a contribution to tackle global warming crisis. As trees grow, they absorb and store the carbon dioxide emissions that are driving global heating. Moreover, their leaves also contribute to ultimately lower the temperature by filtering sun's heat and offer shade to vacant areas in towns or cities. Nowadays, there are many cosmopolitan cities all over the worlds, especially those in Europe are implementing this scheme in response to global climate crisis and almost all of them have been receiving remarkable benefits.
In conclusion, it is my point of view that trees should be planted in some open spaces in urban areas to improve surrounding condition and mitigating global heating.
Em chào các thầy cô ạ, mong thầy/cô có thể bỏ ra chút thời gian sửa bài giúp em với ạ, em cảm ơn thầy/cô nhiều ạ
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Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em em cảm ơn ạ
Topic "Some people believe that university students should pay all costs of studies because university education only benefits themselves, not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
In light of the increasing number of high school graduates opting for tertiary education, one school of thought holds that students should pay tuition fees by themselves because university education only benefits the students, not society. However, in this essay I will challenge this thinking.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that undergraduates who pursue higher education are the only beneficiary. Their key rationale is in favor of the notion that many college graduates are now immigrating to prosperous nations seeking better living conditions and a well-paid job, making little contributions to the development of their home countries. Thus, when the government pays their tuition fees, it will put a strain on the national coffers and tax-payers. However, this reasoning is flawed, as authorities in these less developed countries are making considerable efforts to keep talented graduates in their countries, offering higher salaries as well as many other benefits.
On the other hand, I would contend that high school seniors who pursue tertiary education also make contributions to society. To begin with, graduates equipped with skills and knowledge will lead to a better educated workforce, generating higher quality products and the country’s economic growth on a grander scale. Vietnam perfectly exemplifies this, as in the 1950s when this country was crippled with war and poverty, little importance was put on education. But since Vietnam gained its independence and the government started incentivizing students to pursue higher levels of education by means of scholarship or student loans, this country has been recorded as one of the countries with fastest economic growth in Southeast Asia. Moreover, when an individual is well-educated, they will be able to get a job and be independent of government grants. Consequently, the government can allocate this money on other pressing issues such as run-down transportation or healthcare services.
In conclusion, while there are justifications for advocating students to pay all costs of studies by themselves, I would contend that the government should help students pay some of their tuition fees to encourage them studying at university as this will benefit the students and society as a whole.
Topic "Some people believe that university students should pay all costs of studies because university education only benefits themselves, not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagr...
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Part 1
Part 1 - Map
Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em em cảm ơn ạ
The given maps illustrate the alternations taking place at West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010.
Overall, this area has witnessed a variety of modernization in its construction. Besides, a highlight change is the considerable expansion of the car park over the years
From 1950 to 2010, there was a significant reconstruction in the west of the school. To be more specific, the area of farmland in the southwest was removed to pave the wave for the sports field. Looking to the northwest, there used to be the location of housing in 1950, which was renovated into a car park and a new science block. On the other hand, the main road in the north, the main building of the school, and the playground on the east side were remained stable after 30 years.
In 2010, the main road, the school, and the science block were kept intact compared to their position in 1980. A prominent feature can be seen in the restructuring of the school in 2010 with the extension of the car park, which was 3 times as much as its original size and took over the place of the sports field. Meanwhile, the east playground was narrowed by one-third to make room for the relocation of the sports field.
Part 1 - Map
Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em em cảm ơn ạ
The given maps illustrate the alternations taking place at West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010.
Overall, this area has witnesse...
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Writing task 1
Mong quý thầy cô chấm và sửa bài giúp em với ạ, em xin cảm ơn
The maps illustrate how much an Australian beachfront changed over 70 years from 1950.
Overall, the beachfront underwent radical modifications, some of which involve bifurcation of the main road and the construction of new infrastructures.
In 1950, along the main road to the space for parking car located the playground, dining tables and pavilion. After over 70 years, the location occupied by the playground is used to make way for a new car park. The dining tables, pavilion have remained unchanged over the past few years. To the southwest of the beachfront, there is a construction of a new restaurant and a surf club to adapt customers' need.
Additionally, the main road is significantly lengthened to access the lighthouse and seaside areas. One of two pools that still exist at the original site go through a two-size expansion. The lighthouse which can be easily spotted at the end of the footpath has remained unchanged.
Mong quý thầy cô chấm và sửa bài giúp em với ạ, em xin cảm ơn
The maps illustrate how much an Australian beachfront changed over 70 years from 1950.
Overall, the beachfront underwent radical modif...
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Task 1
kính chào quý thầy cô, hy vọng quý thầy cô dành thời gian đọc và chấm chữa cho bài writing task 1 dưới đây của em. em xin cảm ơn ạ
The plans describe modifications of the layout of the machine-made area between the present and the near future.
Overall, the industrial region will undergo radical changes, most of which involve the demolishment of existing buildings and the construction of new facilities for accommodating a larger population.
The road surrounding the region will remain unchanged. To the northern site of the region locates entrance and reception which will be demolished and expand three times in size to make room for three adjacent two-bed houses with a communal garden. In the South corner, the space occupied for offices and canteen is going to go through a slightly reduction in size and replaced by a place for parking car.
Floor plan in the future involves the erection of houses with 3 bedrooms or 4 bedrooms at the western site where a packing and a storage locate. We can realize that this region will be converted into a larger area in lieu of two separated smaller places. The original site of factory will be considerably widened and occupied by a parking space and some flats.
kính chào quý thầy cô, hy vọng quý thầy cô dành thời gian đọc và chấm chữa cho bài writing task 1 dưới đây của em. em xin cảm ơn ạ
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Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em em cảm ơn ạ
The provided graph illustrates how many inquiries were sent to the Tourist Information Office in one city from January to June 2021
Overall, the number of inquiries received by telephone and in-person dramatically went up while that of letter/email witnessed a strong decline over the months. A dominant feature can be seen as a dramatic increase in the quantity for in-person from the lowest position to the first rank in the end.
In January, there were 400 inquiries sent to the Office in person, which was 500 lower than that by telephone. Both numbers then experienced an upward trend to 800 and 1000 in March before rocketing to their peaks
at 1900 and 1600 correspondingly at the end of June.
A disparity was applied in the quantity of inquiries received by letter/email. In the beginning, the figure for letter/emails took up nearly 800, holding the runner-up in January. In the following 2 months, there was a modest dip to about 700 before losing momentum and plummeting to its rock bottom at less than 400 at the end of the surveyed period.
Mong các thầy cô chấm bài giúp em em cảm ơn ạ
The provided graph illustrates how many inquiries were sent to the Tourist Information Office in one city from January to June 2021
Overall, the num...
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Mong các thầy cô sửa bài T1 cho em em cảm ơn ạ
The pie charts give information about the proportion of people who worked in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010.
Overall, in town A the percentage of people taking part in services related sectors increased to be the most common job whereas the remaining categories saw decreases. Meanwhile, the people working in manufacturing sectors in town B declined but it still remained dominant in both years examined.
Looking first at the statistics for people working in the services sector in town A, in 1960, this statistic stood at 29%. After five decades, this statistic rose significantly to 64%. The figures for sales and manufacturing stood at 30% and 41% in 1960, respectively. In 2010, both figures halved to 16% for sales and 20% for manufacturing.
Turning to town B, the percentage of people who worked in the manufacturing sector was 70% in 1960. This figure later decreased to just 53% in 2010. Regarding the categories that experienced an upward trend, in 1960, 20% and 10% people worked in sales and services sector, in the same order. In 2010, the proportion of people working in manufacturing increased only by 2% to 22% and that of services rose to 25%.
The pie charts give information about the proportion of people who worked in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010.
Overall, in town A the percentage of people taking part in service...
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dạ thầy cô chữa giùm e bài writing task 1 này vs ạ e cảm ơn nhiều ạ
prompt: Percentage of Canadian children and youth attaining selected physical activity criteria.
The bar chart shows the amount of time that 12-17-year-olds in Canada spend per week on sport and exercise. It is clear from the chart that girls are less active in their leisure time than boys. There is a noticeable difference between the percentages of boys and girls who participate in sport for more than an hour three times a week. About one-third devote over an hour of their time three times a week to active leisure pursuits while this applies to over half of the boys. There is a similar difference between the percentages of very active young people. Almost 1 in 10 boys between the ages 12 and 17 play sport for an hour at least 6 days a week. The figure for young women is only 1 in 20. A closer examination of the figures for young people who actually participated in physical activity reveals that the greatest proportion dedicate at least 3 days per week to these pastimes. This is true of about 80 percent of both boys and girls. The fact that girls generally spend close to 10 percent less time on average
prompt: Percentage of Canadian children and youth attaining selected physical activity criteria.
The bar chart shows the amount of time that 12-17-year-olds in Canada spend per week on sport and exer...
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Em vừa học lại Writing task 1 nên còn sơ sài, nhưng không có app nào hỗ trợ chấm Task 1 nên rất mong thầy cô có thể chấm bài và nhận xét giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn rất nhiều.
The picture illustrates the process by which yoghurt production is made. In general, it can be seen that yoghurt is made through a four-stage process, beginning with adding three different types of ingredients into milk, which goes through various process steps, before ending with packaging complete products.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the process begins with stabilizers, dry milk, sugar, and milk mixed up in a hygienic stainless steel vessel. At that time, the mixture is heated to 85℃. The result will be cooled down subsequently to 42℃ with a ‘homogenization’ step. After this phase has been completed, cultures are added to blend the mixture. Following this is the ‘fermentation’, which reduce its temperature to 7℃. At the final stage of the period, the finished yoghurt is packaged into individual containers before being sold.
The picture illustrates the process by which yoghurt production is made. In general, it can be seen that yoghurt is made through a four-stage process, beginning with adding three different types of in...
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Writing task 1
em xin gửi bài, thầy cô chấm và nhận xét giúp em với ạ. em xin cảm ơn ạ
The diagrams illustrate how much a university sports court has changed from 1990 to the present. It seems that the space of the university sports court still remains unchanged in size.
Overall, a number of changes occurred all over the building, some of which involved the relocation and construction of some features. The exceptions are the pool, reception and the cafe as they have still existed in this original location. This pool, however, turns from an outdoor one into an indoor one.
In 1990, a park could be easily spotted in the top left corner of the university sports court. After 23 years, this space which go through a two-time reduction size is occupied to make space for a basketball court. In contrast, the place where a car park used to locate is slightly widened. The tennis court which used to be opposite to the outdoor pool now is moved to this aforemented wider space.
Lastly, the space for changing room was increased in half and relocated to the original location of the tennis court. Besides, a new fitness centre is constructed next to the changing room.
em xin gửi bài, thầy cô chấm và nhận xét giúp em với ạ. em xin cảm ơn ạ
The diagrams illustrate how much a university sports court has changed from 1990 to the present. It seems that the space of th...
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Dạ em xin gửi bài, mong thầy cô cho em xin nhận xét
Topic: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss bothe views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
People have different views about the improvisation of unexpected situations such as an undesirable occupation or lack of money. While some people assume that the acceptance of ineviable situations is the best, I believe that taking a chance for impletementing and enhancing those situations has to be a better option.
On the one hand, the option to confront with rough situations is attractive for several reasons. The main one is the reinforcement of strong mental health. This is because the negative thoughts occasionally get into people’s mind when they bear those tough situations, however, the acceptance and clarity of situations helps to form the positivity of mental health. As a result, people will be more optimistic instead of moaning, and not falter in the face of difficulties. Furthermore, the acceptance avoids the escape from the present reality. This could be explained by the fact that people have the tendency to live in their imagination of better scenarios whenever getting tough through the evasion. Therefore, civilians cannot distinguish between the reality and their delusion.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that those situations should be taken as a chance and developed. The significant point is the self-improvement. Because the difficulties should be seemed as an attempt to deeply realise people’s ordinary mistakes and then challenge themselves to improve ones. Consequently, that will be a fundament of generating the best version’s themselves. For example, a Mickey’s father Walt Disney, without a fulfil background due to not being assisted to grow up, endeavoured relentlessly to unleash and acquired successes. Moreover, creating an amazing opportunity for yourself is presented as a subsequent reason. It could be explained by the fact that instead of accepting and transforming those situations to a conventional way, people are able to figure out another ways and from that point, it might reap a fulfil chance to enhance. For instance, a talented actress Hedy Lamarr was assumed that she should stay at home and do woman’s duty such as cleaning, but instead of spending time on doing houseworks, she did research at home and created the frequency conversion method which is a foundation of later bluetooth, wifi and GPS.
In conclusion, while there are many benefits regarding that the admission of a tough context is the best, I still believe that it is more beneficial to undertake and encourage in changing which is remedied the badly inevitable situations.
Topic: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss bot...
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Em mới viết 1 bài task 1 mong được các thầy cô chấm và nhận xét ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ!
The chart illustrates the proportions of bilingual students in six specific nations.
Overall, the figures for female students are significantly higher than those for males in all countries, leaving aside Thailand. It is also clear that Romania, India, and Vietnam display much higher figures.
India registered the highest rates, with nearly 70% of female and around 56% of male students being bilingual. The proportions of bilingual students are slightly lower in Romania, where the respective figures for females and males stand at just over 63% and around 42%. The figure for female students in Vietnam is equal to that of Indian male students, while that of Vietnamese male students are about 20% less.
Moving on to the remaining countries, it is clear that the percentage of Chinese female students being fluent in another language are double that of male students, with just over 28%. The figures for female and male bilingual students in Russia are over 42% and 35%, respectively. Finally, the proportion of male students being fluent in two languages in Thailand is about 32%, nearly 5% higher than that of female students.
The chart illustrates the proportions of bilingual students in six specific nations.
Overall, the figures for female students are significantly higher than those for males in all countries, leaving as...
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em vừa làm xong 1 bài wrt, rất mong đc thầy cô chấm ạ, e cảm ơn nhiều lắm ạ
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views with regard to the importance of educating children in the current society. Some argue that kids need to start their formal education as early as possible while others think that it should be delayed until 7 years old. Both views are reasonable; however, I think starting education at an early age is essential.
Firstly, children beginning their education at a small age can learn new things quickly, and behave independently. Kids are able to learn basic skills surrounding them without the assistance of their parents. For example, in kindergarten, children can imitate how their classmates use their spoon while eating. This action can help them become self-reliant in meals. Secondly, parents can guarantee their childrens’ safety when they go to work. Adults are very busy in their career, and they cannot always take their small kids along with them, so sending small children to educational organizations is an ideal solution. For example, singled-moms can enroll their child in kindergarten to make sure that they will be taken care of. It is true that beginning education at an early age has many benefits to raising small kids.
On the other hand, children beginning education at 7 years old can have safetier lives. In recent days, many potential dangers are likely to occur everywhere. Children can be faced with many risks, so staying at home until they are 7 years old is a way to avoid those problems. For example, infectious diseases tend to happen in children, so when they play together, viruses of this disease spread to other kids and seriously affect their health. People can begin their childrens’ education at 7 years old to protect them from several issues.
In conclusion, I reckon the importance of teaching children, and I believe they should start education at a young age. It is also necessary to combine teaching and focusing on children safety to create a progressive education.
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Em mới bắt đầu học Ielts và em có viết thử 1 bài writing task 2, tuy chủ đề của bài viết này cũ nhưng mà em muốn bắt đầu từ những chủ đề như vậy trước khi tiếp cận các chủ đề của writing task 2 như hiện nay, mong mọi người giúp em sửa chữa và chấm bài giúp em ạ
Topic: It is difficult for people living in big cities today get enough physical exercise. what are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?
In the modernized world, people who live in metropolises do not have enough time for physical exercise. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and offer some possible solutions to this problem.
There are a increasing number of reasons for city residents’ not having time to do regularly excersie. The first reason is that people in urban area spend most time working in the office. Owing to high cost of living in big cities, most people must work harder to get enough for their family’s expense. Another reason is development of social media has rapidly increased over the past few years. City residents devote their time to surfing the internet to catch the lastest information, make new friends which make them less time to do physical exercise.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, it is crucial to raise people’s awareness of the significance of active activities. People only enage in doing physical activities more regularly when they are full aware of how important they are. Secondly, the authority ought to build more equipment in public places and add bicycle lanes on the roads. Finally, we should launch the sport campaigns which attract people’s attention. The Olympic Running Day, for instance, is an impressive sport event which held in Ho Chi Minh City to improve its health residents.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to citizens’ reduction of engaing in physical activities and measures can be implemented to tackle the issue.
Topic: It is difficult for people living in big cities today get enough physical exercise. what are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?
In the modernized world, people who live...
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Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
People have different views with regard to several issues about criminals in the current society. Some people argue that prisons are not an effective way to change a prisoner's mind, and educational or job institutions should be applied. In my opinion, I disagree and maintain the idea that sending criminals to prison provides benefits to both prisoners and the society.
Firstly, prisons are places where offenders are isolated from the community to avoid doing illegal activities. Keeping criminals in jails is the way to maintain the safety of society and protect everyone from being harmed. For example, drivers driving too fast which lead to many people on the road being injured are sent to prison. Secondly, with the appearance of prisons, people are able to create a society in order. Putting prisoners in jail is a signal warning citizens have to obey the law, and promote a healthy lifestyle. For instance, in 2016 ,Hanoi announced that people stealing valuable things are kept in jail for 3 months. It is true that sending criminals to prison plays a vital role which helps people raise awareness of living rights.
On the other hand, education and job training for criminals are obviously included in prisons. Governments spend expenditure in several fields in training prisons to help them generate healthier lives. For example, Vietnam invests in building clothing workshops in prisons, so criminals can work there. After ending the time spent in prison, these prisons can find stable jobs to make a living. Prisons are not only the places to keep the criminals out of society, but also where these humans can gain other opportunities to live better. It is clear that prisons are very crucial to build a peaceful community.
In conclusion, I am convinced that putting criminals in prisons plays an important role which assists society significantly. This is also a solution which has many benefits to create a healthy lifestyle for individuals and countries.
Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
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Topic: Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that it is meaningless to obtain information from newspapers and television news programs due to their unconnectedness to the real world. From my perspective, I totally disagree and maintain the idea that newspapers offer humans a huge quantity of knowledge about happening around us.
To commence, as newspapers have no constraints on choosing the subject, people are able to face most sides of our societies including health, education, politics,...which offers them greater general insights. These can support individuals significantly in their way of thinking while making the ultimate decision. For example, given the political election, merely official information from newspapers or television news programs can help citizens consider who is more suitable to be their country’s leader. This given information including politicians’ proficiency, characteristics, or even their private lives, not only provides inhabitants with accurate insights about candidates but also assists them a lot in their final conclusion.
Moreover, without news, it is impossible for those who are at such a far distance to view the information, and thus, they cannot make adequate preparations for each situation. Take COVID-19 pandemic as an example, if neighbouring countries such as Vietnam, Laos, Campuchia,.... had missed the data related to the epidemiologic situation from China, there would have been more infected people and more likely to less possible handling the pandemic radically. Obviously, this is a testament to how crucial news plays in our human society.
In conclusion, I am convinced that news comprehensively benefits individuals due to the aforementioned reasons. Besides, it is advisable that citizens should select prestigious news origins in order to not cause misunderstanding and time-wasting.
Topic: Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?...
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Topic: In spite of the advances made in agriculture, any people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Despite the development of agriculture, the starvation of individuals remains as a controversial topic. Some explanation for this problem will be put forward, before a few possible solutions are proposed.
Some measures could be implemented to reduce the number of starvers. The highly cost of products is presented as a first reason. This is due to the improvement of agriculture, the quality of products is gradually promoted which leads to the pricey items. Consequently, civillians are not able to afford to buy a single product which causes the exploided population of starvers. For example, the cost of apples is recently mounting because of their heavenly taste, particularly more than a hundred thousand Vietnam Dong for each. Moreover, the reduction of daily products is also one of the most significant reasons. This is because manufacturers pay excessive concentration on the oversea exportation, which translates into the dramatical inadequate of domestic products. As a result, domestic human beings are not provided enough the amount of food and it might cause some criminal actions such as stealing food from supermarkets.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem. The first solution would be mitigating the pricey cost of products. It can not be extremely cheap or expensive, it should be sanely regulated to an available price which suits the different kinds of people’s incomes. Each individual consequently has an ability to find and purchase appropriate products based on their financial background. In addition, the government and manufacturers are in need of co-operation, which generates the most sufficient method about oversea exportation. This could be done by the fact that they must gain more attention on not only the exported products, but also the quality and quantity of domestic products, which releases the fulfilled amount of food for habitants.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the civillian’s hunger despite the enhancement of agriculture, and steps need to be taken by the government and manufacturers to tackle this problem. It can be predicted that with appropriate cost and implementation of these suggested measures, this issue would likely be alleviated.
Topic: In spite of the advances made in agriculture, any people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
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Topic : In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is recognized that in many nations, an increasing number of young adults choose to live with their parents even after graduation and have a job. While acknowledging the benefits this trend may confer, I am of the opinion that the disadvantages are more evident.
On the one hand, it is true that college graduates reap a host of benefits when living with their parents. The most pronounced merit is that young individuals can save a colossal amount of money on buying food or paying rent fees to later spend on developing themselves. For instance, young adults can spend these money to enroll in courses training interpersonal skills or problem-solving skills, the skills that are believed to be of paramount importance in today’s society. However, this fails to consider that not many people will spend this money on personal growth but rather indulging themselves in unhealthy lifestyles like buying junk food.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that the merits that this trend confers are eclipsed by the setbacks. To begin with, when living under one roof with parents, young individuals may become over reliant on them. The implication of this is that they may lack essential life skills such as doing the laundry or cooking because their parents do everything for them. Another downside that is worth mentioning is that they may lack the freedom because they will have to be obedient of the rules set by their parents at home. In contrast, their counterparts who opt for an independent life are given the freedom to do whatever they want.
In conclusion, while acknowledging the fact that living with parents can be beneficial to young adults in terms of saving money and personal development, I would contend that the advantages are pale in comparison with the disadvantages.
Topic : In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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The given table illustrates the percentage of consumer spending on three categories Of products and services in five different countries in 2002. It is clear that the proportion of food/drinks/tobacco was the highest figure. On the other hand, leisure/education had the lowest percentage in all countries. Out of the five countries, the proportion of spending
on food/drinks/tobacco noticeably made up the highest in Turkey, at 32. 14% while that of spending on food/drinks/tobacco in Italy was 28. 91%. The figures for other three countries did not exceed 18. 8%.
The proportion of spending on leisure/education
in Turkey also account for the highest percentage, at 4. 35% followed by the figures for the other three countries with lower than 3. 3%.
The proportion of spending on clothing/footwear
made up the highest figure at 9% in Italy. Meanwhile, the proportion clothing/footwear in Sweden accounted for the lowest, at 5. 40%. The figures for Ireland, Spain and Turkey stood at around 6. 5%
The given table illustrates the percentage of consumer spending on three categories Of products and services in five different countries in 2002. It is clear that the proportion of food/drinks/tobacco...
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The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York last year
The line graph depicts the revenue of four Cafes including The tea room, Internet Express, Wifi Cafe and Cafe Cool in New York in the previous year.
Overall, all cafes witnessed an upward trend in the income excluding that of The tea room. Additionally, the Wif cafe increased significantly over the whole period starting from the third and finally reaching the highest amount of dollar income.
From the first three months, there was a noticeable fluctuation in the Tea room’s earnings beginning with 160000 dollars and peaking at nearly 180000 Dollars in March before seeing a considerable decline, ending the period with the lowest figure at around 50000 Dollars. In addition, although the Internet Express initially earned 100000 Dollars, the amount of income slightly decreased prior to a flattening out at around 80 Dollars until July, after which it recovered to the second rank with a number of 140000 Dollars income in December.
Towards the remaining data, firstly, a drastic change was seen in the Wifi cafe’s profit which commenced from third place in January at around 50000 Dollars to the top income cafe in the final month of the year with approximately 190000 Dollars, not regrading to some minimal oscillations during the whole period. Similarly, the revenue of Cafe Cool ranked the bottom in the starters, after fluctuations, ending the period with the third place at 120000 Dollars.
The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York last year
The line graph depicts the revenue of four Cafes including The tea room, Internet Express, Wifi Cafe and Cafe Cool in New York...
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