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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Read morePhạm Thị Thu Thủy
7/11/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn thầy cô
Đề: In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion. Bài làm: As life expectancy has been increasing inexorably in recent years, it has emerged as a topic of interest all around the world. Nowadays, people tend to live longer thanks to innovative technology and new methods of remedy. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks. From my perspective, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Longer life expectancy results in several related problems that can be anticipated. First and foremost, the principal issue with this situation is obviously aging-population, which is a long-term dangerous phenomenon leading to many social problems. By way of example, numerous elderly dwellers can cause a dense population, consequently, people have to face the lack of living spaces, rapid house price growth, and pollution. The second drawback is that there will be more people of retirement age who are eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of the working-age population will be smaller and thus, the government will receive less money in taxes. In other words, young generations have to handle a greater tax burden. Besides, the government can not stably maintain the budget for healthcare services and public hospitals. As a result, there are not enough facilities and human resources to take care of people’s health. Despite the fact that there have been many cons, that affect negatively on our society, the potential of increasing life expectancy brings about significant pros in human lives. On the plus side of this trend, the elderly will have more time for themselves to pursue their own recreational activities after their hard-working lifetime when they were young, for instance, they can play sports with friends, and take part in many cultural activities. What is more, the elderly can also help parents take care of their children, so it will cut down a certain amount of money spent on babysitting, and reduce parents’s financial burden in many households. Consequently, their mental health is not only improved, but their family are also becoming more close-knit. In conclusion, whilst there are certain benefits the growing popularity of life expectancy may bring about, I would opine that the disadvantages of this trend are far weightier. It is necessary that the government should take measures to manage and balance the population, for the better growth of the young generation. Đề: In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion. Bài làm: As life expectancy has been... Read morenhungtrang
7/11/2023
Thầy cô giúp em sửa bài với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô.
Some people think that news has no connection to people’s lives, and therefore, they consider it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is argued that reading news or watching TV programs is a waste of time, for it is irrelevant to people’s lives. This essay totally disagrees with this view. On the one hand, news does have a connection to human life. There are a bunch of new events updated from all over the world, ranging from politics to entertainment or even crime. Reading news from prestigious sources really benefits people to keep up with world speed, especially those who work in professional fields. For example, financial experts, who have to conduct extensive research or experiment of stock market, need to consistently update current affairs happening that affect to the price of market to make the right investment decision. On the other hand, watching TV programs would help people to be more sociable. By having a wide range of knowledge on various topics, people can have valuable conversations with their friends to discuss and debate the issues. That is the reason why not only is news obsolete, it would be more important over time and there are even more events will be explored. Admittedly, there are some meaningless information released from irresponsible and reckless tabloids, which is write about live of celebrities and their fabulous lifestyle. However, it does exist trusted newspaper or programs providing great knowledge. The BBC in the UK, for example, is one of the most cherished institution that stimulate conversation and lively debate about diverse aspects of life. In conclusion, it is undeniable that news is not related to people’s lives. By contrast, news has a strong connection and effect on our lives in different ways, even for professional or ordinary people. Some people think that news has no connection to people’s lives, and therefore, they consider it a waste of time to read news in newspapers or watch television news programs. To what extent do you agr... Read morephaminhbaongoc
7/11/2023
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Đề: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Bài làm: It is a common belief that advertising is an effective way to persuade customers to purchase stuff. However, some argue that nowadays people are not paying too much attention to advertisements since they have become so familiar. Therefore, this essay will discuss both ideas before revealing a definitive conclusion. On the one hand, due to the widespread multimedia and information transmission, advertising has become too popular, which bores people and makes them want to neglect it. In fact, according to a survey conducted in the USA in 2019, when coming across an advertisement on a webpage or TV, around 40% of people tend to overlook and the other 10% even try to cancel it by buying a free-advertising account. Consequently, this old way of marketing seems to be no longer as effective as it used to be in catching customers' attention. Additionally, it's more difficult for corporations to gain people's trust through the information advertised about the products compared to the past. On the other hand, advertising has a long history of existence in the markets. Besides, it is the easiest and most prevalent way for the companies' products to approach the customers. Therefore, numerous successful businesses both in the past and in the present still apply this way and come off well. Take the Unilever corporation as an example, from the last century up to now, they have continued using the old strategy as advertising but still gain significant incomes. For this reason, advertisements play an important in marketing despite of periods. Moreover, although parts of people choose to neglect or postpone the advertisements, more than 50% of the respondents during the above survey still watch the advertisements, 20% of which answered that they found some interesting and beneficial that affect their shopping choices from advertisements. In conclusion, although it is true that advertisement is no longer as effective in attracting customers as it was in the past, it is inevitable that it still holds an important status in business by encouraging people to purchase products. For that reason, advertising still be one of the most common ways used by companies to attract customers. Đề: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these... Read morePhạm Thị Thu Thủy
7/11/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn thầy cô
The given chart depicts the amount of time spent by the residents who lived in the UK on three primary kinds of phone call from 1995 to 2002. Overall, most people tend to make calls by local-fixed line throughout the period shown. Meanwhile, the lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, however, this category also witnessed the most dramatic increase over the period of 7 years between 1995 and 2002. In 1995, local calls with fixed lines were used for a total of over 70 billion minutes, and around half of that amount was for national and international calls. On the contrary, the minority of UK’s citizens spent time on mobile calls. All three types of phone calls experienced a gradual increase during the next 4 years. By 1999, the number of minutes spent on local calls using landlines reached its peak of 90,000. Subsequently, the figures for this type fell steadily, but the rise in the other two kinds of phone calls continued. In 2002, the quantity of minutes of national and international landlines calls passed 60,000 billions, while mobile calls increased to around 45 billions minutes. The given chart depicts the amount of time spent by the residents who lived in the UK on three primary kinds of phone call from 1995 to 2002. Overall, most people tend to make calls by local-fixed... Read morePhạm Thị Thu Thủy
6/11/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn
The diagrams illustrate how the area of the town of Poulton changed after some alterations and urban developments over a period of 35 years, from 1900 to 1935. Overall, the area experienced significant renovations in terms of buildings and amenities. In 1900, the layout had a combination of residential, commercial, and industrial features. However, by 1935 the industrial features had largely disappeared, while there was a dramatic development of residential features. Whilst the railway line ran through the neighborhood in 1900, this had been removed by 1935. Furthermore, to the North of the map, the Bayley Mansions residence was erected on the original site of the factory, the Wasteland, and the first row of houses on Bayley Street. Besides, the two rows of terraced houses on Trent Street were replaced by blocks of flats to meet the growing demand for dwellings. Another major conversion to this area was the renovation of more commercial and recreational features. On the commercial side, the Laundry and Cafe had been relocated to the top right-hand corner, on the original site of the Wasteland in 1935. To the right of the map, some new shops were built on the aptly named New Lane, replacing the small shop of 1900. Furthermore, by 1935, recreational features appeared when the Wasteland, railway line, Railway workers' cottages at the bottom of the map, and the second row of houses on Bayley Street were torn down to make room for a spacious park and children’s play area. The diagrams illustrate how the area of the town of Poulton changed after some alterations and urban developments over a period of 35 years, from 1900 to 1935. Overall, the area experienced significan... Read morenhungtrang
6/11/2023
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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society To what extent do you agree with this view? The modern world we live in is now covered by a multitude of advertisements, from social media platforms to billboards lining the streets. This essay agrees that a number of advertisements nowadays have been created in unacceptable and immoral manner. To begin with, **it is deeply concerning that** certain intrusive commercials incorporate offensive content or even racist elements. This might have a profound impact on vulnerable individuals. Dove, for example, a well-known shampoo brand, released an advertisement that contained toxic imagery. It depicted a black woman removing her T-shirt to reveal a white woman after using Dove’s body lotion. Not only is this advertisement racist, but it is also deeply insulting to viewers. Another aspect of advertising I would like to consider is its unethical nature. The reason for this is that they tend to manipulate people into buying unnecessary products with unreasonable prices. What exacerbates this issue is promotion campaigns are likely targeted toward children and youth such as, expensive toys, **sugary beverages** or even luxury fashion **jewelry**. Young people who possess limited financial literacy, might force their parents to buy these things which place an immense burden on their parents to meet their children’s demands. In conclusion, it is undeniable that many advertisements that exist in contemporary society are irritating and unethical, which consistently encourage people to buy products or services that might be too expensive or not in need. Therefore, it is necessary for the administration to take actions to control and manage the content of adverts before they are made public. Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society To what extent do you agree with this view? The modern world we live in is now covered by a multitude of... Read morenguyen ly
6/11/2023
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The given line graph reveals how the prices of bananas in Japan, France, Germany and the USA had changed from 1994 to 2004. Overall, as can be seen from the diagram, while bananas in Japan were the most expensive, the in the USA was the lowest over the period. Moreover, it is noticeable that there were mirroring patterns between the figures for Japan and Germany. Looking at the prices of bananas in Japan and Germany for more details, in the 1994-to-2001 period, while the bananas price in Japan dropped slightly by under 0.5$, that in Germany experienced a fluctuation at around 1.7$. However, the figure for Japan saw a recovery in the rest of the period, reaching roughly 2.5$ in 2004, doubling that for Germany. Moving onto France and the USA, there was a slight gap between bananas prices in those countries. The prices in France fluctuated around over 1.5$ throughout the given time. Meanwhile, that in the USA was quite cheaper and remained stable at approximately 1.2$. The given line graph reveals how the prices of bananas in Japan, France, Germany and the USA had changed from 1994 to 2004. Overall, as can be seen from the diagram, while bananas in Japan were the mo... Read moreMi ú
6/11/2023
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Some people think that nuclear energy is better than other sources of power for meeting ever-increasing global need. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ——————————————— It is undeniable that the population is significantly increasing, so the need for several sources of energy is growing. Many people argue that other sources of energy are not better than nuclear power. I am of that opinion that there is still a safer source of power. On the one hand, nuclear power can create a permanent source of power. To be more specific, the ways to produce nuclear energy do not contain coals, gases so there are not any toxic fumes released to the environment. Moreover, when people create nuclear energy, they do not make up many areas and it would prevent possible deforestation and pave the way for economical development. On the other hand, nuclear power can cause serious damage to the environment. For more illustration, if the scientists do not carefully handle the nuclear chemicals that they use in the process, both people and the environment can be harmed by those chemicals. For example, the Chernobyl nuclear explosion is the most serious happening in the 20th century, and the consequence is still continuing to these days such as the land cannot cultivate, the water from nearby rivers cannot drink or the residents cannot live around that areas. Besides, There are more safer sources of energy, for instance, renewable energy. Instead of Uranium, this source of power use wind, water or solar. This source of energy is endless and safe, people can use this energy without worrying about the toxic chemicals. In conclusion, while there are many benefits of using nuclear power, I still believe that there are more beneficial sources of power such as clean energy from nature because it is safe for users. Some people think that nuclear energy is better than other sources of power for meeting ever-increasing global need. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ——————————————— It is undeniable that th... Read moreMinh Hạnh
5/11/2023
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Question: Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Many people believe that sport plays an especially essential role in social development, whereas others believe that it does not offer any advantages than entertainment. This essay will first closely clarify both points of view before concluding that I argue with the former. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think sport activities are just a form of pastime. The key rationale in favor of this notion is that sportsmen could be outstanding and gifted to become a sport professional. Nowaday, many people spend most of their time playing sports after a long day working to reduce stress and enhance their physical health. Therefore, people take into consideration these sports as a relaxing activity. People who play football every week, for example, could release their negative energy and build their stronger muscle system. Considering these, the idea of considering sport as a leisure is justifiable. On the other hand, I am convinced that sport not only brings entertainment but also plays an especially important role for both individuals and society. This is because it helps players improve their Olympic ideals. Those who immerse in their favorite sports always try their best to gain certain achievements or simply become the most professional. Furthermore, playing sports in teams offers people to get on with new people who have the same interest, lead to expanding their social relationships. In conclusion, while there are justifications that sport is a reasonable leisure activity, I would contend that sport could bring more value than such entertainment. Question: Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both views and give your opin... Read moreMinh Hạnh
5/11/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em, em cảm ơn ạ
Question: The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Many people believe that raising petrol prices for transportation is the most efficient measure to tackle the environmental issues in the world. While I acknowledge the reasons behind this thinking, I would argue that the authorities could introduce many solutions that offer more suitable results. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe the environment will be considerably improved due to a sharp rise in petrol prices. The government decides to raise tax on fuel cost lead to reduce the number of transport. Those who own vehicles, for instance, would take into consideration using public transport to minimize cost. Besides, trading goods would be transported by railway system rather than trucks. These actions would cut down on emission from vehicles and help limit global warming and other consequences like acid rain and the greenhouse effect. On the other hand, I am convinced that increasing prices of petrol is just a stopgap measure, the national and local authorities should adopt more practical policies to comprehensively solve this problem. Firstly, the government should allocate resources to upgrade and expand public transport infrastructure to help moving in the city become more convenient. Thus, people tend to use it instead of private cars to avoid congestion and the emissions could also significantly decrease. Secondly, it is essential to enhance the use of electric vehicles instead of such petrol transportations. For example, the development of new friendly-environmentally electric motorbikes and cars help reduce the amount of petrol consumption and become a sustainable measure with the environment conservation. In conclusion, while there are justifications that rising petrol prices could positively impact on our habitat, I would contend that other solutions would offer long-lasting efficiency. Question: The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Many people believe that rai... Read moreLinh
5/11/2023
[task 1] em rất mong đc chấm bài essay này ạaa
The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Essay The bar graph displays the proportions of expenditures on five significant purposes in four distinct countries in 2009. Overall, in 2009, food, accommodation and transport accounted for the largest amount of spending, whereas healthcare constituted the smallest proportion. In the United States, it can be seen in the graph that 26% of the American budget, the highest figure among the four nations, was spent on accommodation, followed by transportation at 19% and food at 14%. In contrast, healthcare expenditures constituted 8%, doubling that of fashion. In Canada, citizens allocated 21% of their financial resources to housing, while transportation came in a close second at 20%. Additionally, food accounted for 15%, while medical care and clothing occupied more or less a third of that level. Moving to shares of expenditures in the United Kingdom, 24% of the UK’s spending went to housing, 21% to food, and 15% to transportation. Health care and fashion funds were marginal at 2% and 5% respectively, similar to two previous countries. Meanwhile, the Japanese allotted the majority of their money to food at 23%, making this country the top in this category. This was closely followed by accommodation, at 22%, while the other categories registered much lower shares, specifically 10% for transportation, and 5% for medical care and fashion. show less The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and repo... Read moreLê Hương Giang
3/11/2023
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The bar chart illustrates the yearly income for doctors and other occupations in seven countries, including France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland, Switzerland, and the US, in 2004. Overall, it was obvious that doctors make more money than the other workers. In addition, the salary of both doctors and other workers in the US was higher than in all the examined countries. As regards doctors’ annual salaries, the US ranked first at 120.000 USD, while the opposite was true for Finland, with a figure of only about 50.000 USD. Moreover, doctors in Switzerland and France shared the same pay at approximately 70.000 USD, compared with over slightly 60.000 USD in Germany and Czech Republic. Finally, exactly 60.000 USD was paid for doctors per year in Italy. By comparison, the income per year for the other jobs was lower than that of doctors. Other workers in the US earned around 45.000 USD, followed by Switzerland and France with 40.000 USD and 30.000 USD, respectively. Following this, 25.000 USD was the salary of other workers in Finland. However, the lowest annual earnings for other workers in Italy, Germany, and the Czech Republic were the same at exactly 20.000 USD. The bar chart illustrates the yearly income for doctors and other occupations in seven countries, including France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland, Switzerland, and the US, in 2004. Overall,... Read moreVinh
3/11/2023
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3/11/2023
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Some people think that a good health is very important should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages? ————————————————————— Good health is crucial to individuals’ life, so many people argue that it should not be managed by organizations which want to make profit. Although there are several controversies, I totally believe that the positive impacts are bigger than the negative ones. On the one hand, there are some disadvantages about private healthcare runned by profit-making companies that makes people think they waste their money having several additional tests. To be more specific, many private healthcare places often give unnecessary health tests for their patients or force the illness to buy healthcare center’s medicine to earn money. Patients do not know about the tests or the medicine can cost them a lot of money, but their health does not improve positively. Consequently, those private healthcare can make profits from the illness without taking care of their patient’s health. On the other hand, in my opinion, private healthcare centers have higher qualities of service and personal experience. For more illustration, because of the high prices, patients can be looked after carefully and treated with many modern facilities, especially for people who have serious illnesses such as cancer. For example, the patients can be cured with the technology that often lacks in normal hospitals, so they can be treated carefully by best devices and skillful doctors. Moreover, instead of waiting in a long queue in public hospitals, they can reduce time for waiting and take care fast by the nurses and doctors. In conclusion, in spite of some negative effects on having unnecessary tests in private healthcare systems, I hold the opinion that those health centers cure and care of their patients with many high qualified facilities, which may reduce the patients’ levels of illness. Some people think that a good health is very important should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages? ————————————————————— Good hea... Read moreMinh Hạnh
2/11/2023
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Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowadays, many people believe that their children should be exposed to the educational environment as soon as possible, whereas others believe that the students should only start their curriculums after 7 years old. This essay will first closely clarify both views before concluding that I agree with the latter view. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe there are numerous advantages to give children education early. The key rationale in favor of this notion is that in formative years, children could easily absorb new knowledge and develop their talent. For instance, many parents tend to encourage their girls or boys to learn logical math and art subjects. Therefore, these children become more smart, curious and creative than others. Considering these, the idea of educating the children when they were young is justifiable. On the other hand, I am convinced that children should be naturally developed up to the age of 7. This is because the children at too young age need more time to perfect their brain, muscle and bone systems. If they have to approach too many strange things, they will be overloaded, which can be detrimental to both their mental and physical health. Children are forced to learn more than two languages at the same time is a typical case, which makes them have language disorders when they grow up. In conclusion, while there are justifications that children should be educated at a very young age, I would contend that they need to improve comprehensively before beginning the education. Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowaday... Read moreNguyễn Đức Tú
1/11/2023
Cách làm phần writing task 1
Hiện tại mik bắt đầu học phần writing task 1 nhưng ko bt cách làm, mn có thể chỉ cho em các bước làm được không ạ? Hiện tại mik bắt đầu học phần writing task 1 nhưng ko bt cách làm, mn có thể chỉ cho em các bước làm được không ạ?Mina Tran
31/10/2023
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The chart illustrates how recycling centers collected waste of paper, glass, tins and garden between 2011 and 2015. Overall, there was an increase in the amount of waste collected in all categories examined, with the most significant rise being seen in the figure for paper. Despite that, the garden consistently had the lowest figure throughout the period. The amount of paper waste started at 57 tons in 2011 after which it experienced a dramatically decrease to 40 tons in 2013 and soared to 70 tons at the end of the period. In 2011, 48 tons of glass waste collected by recycling centers, with a subsequent slight drop to 41 tons in 2012 and mildly rose to 46 tons in 2013 and remained the same in 2014, and the final continuous increase to 52 tons. The tins of waste collection was at 35 tons and sharply declined to 27 tons in 2012, followed by a gradual increase to 39 tons three years later. The figure for garden waste collection decreased a half at the beginning of the period to 15 tons and fluctuated remarkably in 2013 and 2014, before ending the period at 35 tons of waste. The chart illustrates how recycling centers collected waste of paper, glass, tins and garden between 2011 and 2015. Overall, there was an increase in the amount of waste collected in all categories e... Read moreMina Tran
31/10/2023
Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ. Em cảm ơn ạ.
Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ———————— There are conflicting opinions as to whether humans should be reliant on others instead of living independently. In my opinion, although living reliant on others can live more easily, living without dependency is still more than the drawback. It is true that living relies on others, which can reduce the difficulty of living expenditures. This means that people can save some money to do other important things. For example, those who are married still choose to live with their parents to save on housing-cost when they do not have enough money to buy their own house. If the married people do not live dependent on their family, it will be hard to have an abundant life. Instead of living independently that may not save a lot of money to do many things, it seems reasonable that many people choose to live reliant on their family. However, others who choose living self-reliance can develop their personal development. When people start to live independently, they can self-learn many ways to take care of themselves and improve their soft skills. Research has generally shown that 85% students went to school while working in part-time jobs to cover their life, which usually have more social knowledge and also find a potential job even before graduating. With learning many ways to live independently, they can avoid taking advantage of the bad people. Therefore, people nowadays want to improve life skills to protect themself rather than depend on others. In conclusion, while living dependent on others is definitely a big money saver, it is evident that living self-reliance could enhance the soft skills by self-learning in their social life. Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ———————— There are conflict... Read moreVinh
22/10/2023
Nhờ thầy cô sửa giúp em bài viết này ạ. In what ways are social networks helpful for your study?
Social networks and technology have revolutionized the way we teach and study. First and foremost, social media proves to be an endless source of regularly updated information that can be accessed via a simple click of a mouse. For example, there is an array of English newspapers and magazines such as The Guardian, The Economist, and so on. In this fashion, learners can be provided with trending news happening worldwide and hot debates, contributing to one's enhancing cognitive and life skills, and honing one's critical thinking, which would be extremely vital in their later lives. Secondly, a wide variety of educational sites are readily available on the Internet, where the majority of lessons are not only free but also beneficial for learners. A fine example of such sites is Coursera, a massive provider of Internet-based courses, the majority of which are free and helpful towards learners. In addition, social media makes education more dynamic and adaptable to the demands of the modern world. To be more specific, teachers also benefit by using interactive apps and online platforms to create engaging presentations and quizzes. Last but not least, social media platforms pave the way for remote learning, ensuring that education continues even when students cannot be in the classroom. This flexibility is especially critical in time of the Covid-19 Pandemic, during which time schools and factories were closed down due to the lethal virus. So individuals can opt for online learning in their own home and at their own pace. In conclusion, social networks in education not only expand learning opportunities but also make education more dynamic and continuous. Social networks and technology have revolutionized the way we teach and study. First and foremost, social media proves to be an endless source of regularly updated information that can be accessed v... Read moreLê Trung Thành
24/10/2023