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LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Đề:
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.
Bài làm:
The given line graph illustrates the number of foreign tourists coming to the United Kingdom for different reasons during the period of twenty years starting from 1989.
To summarize, there were upward trends in the quantity of overseas tourists visiting the UK from 1989 to 2009. Additionally, people who came to the UK to meet friends and relatives were always the lowest, whereas the opposite was true for those who visited for business over the period shown.
In term of those taking a holiday in the UK, the number of overseas tourists accounted for 6 million people initially, after which it had risen sharply to reach a peak of approximately 9 million people by 1996. Despite dropping gradually just under 7 million people eight years later. This figure went up again to over 8 million people in the final year.
In 1989, the number of people having a business trip and visiting friends and relatives stood at 5 million and around 3,5 million people, respectively. In the final year, these numbers soared and reached the highest point of 8 million and 7 million people in turn. From that time onwards, while there was a fall in the number of visitors taking vacations, the opposite was true for the figure for people meeting friends and relatives.
Đề:
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.
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The given line graph illustrates the number of foreign tourists co...
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ĐỀ BÀI: Hamburgers and pizzas may be convenient but they can also be unhealthy. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of fast food.
BÀI LÀM:
For some people who have hectic schedules find that fast food is convenient, however, it is unhealthy and not good if we eat too much. Fast food will have particular advantages and disadvantages depending on how much we eat it. In this essay, i will discuss both sides.
With regard to advantages, fast food seems to be a good idea for busy people. We don’t make any effort in cooking, we can buy or take it anywhere we want in a very quick period of time and we can eat, work or study in the same time. Therefore, it will save our time significantly. Besides, fast food usually attracts many people, especially young generations by its flavors, beautiful decorations, and stimulate the taste buds, making people crave it. The convenience and reasonable prices of fast food are also enjoyed by many people.
On the other hand, fast food will bring disadvantages to our health. Fast food contains many calories and cholesterols, so it can lead to obesity for those who eat too much. Moreover, studies have shown that eating fast food combined with soda, soft drinks regularly will be not good for liver, and the glycemic index is higher. Fast food is made of ingredients such as sausages, cold meat, bacon, fried chicken..., it contain high levels of salt and preservatives. If you absorb too much, it will be harmful to your heart and kidneys, increasing arterial blood pressure. Additionally, a 2011 British study on more than 14,000 children showed that eating fast food in a long time can have negative effects on children’s brain development.
To sum up, fast food bring benefits to people but also many negative effects on our health. We need to eat properly in order to prevent diseases.
ĐỀ BÀI: Hamburgers and pizzas may be convenient but they can also be unhealthy. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of fast food.
BÀI LÀM:
For some people who have hectic schedules find that...
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Đề:
Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Bài làm:
It is argued that the major advantage of global partnership is to preserve the environment, whereas other individuals mention that the most significant positives are in the field of international commerce. In this article, I will elaborate both sides of the argument, and my opinion is that worldwide cooperation could accelerate the use of renewable energy sources on a global scale.
Some people argue that cooperation among nations would contribute most to the preservation of rare and endanger animals. In fact, several animal species are facing the risk of extinction by dint of illegal hunting from humans. To illustrate, they are illegally trading in rhino horns and elephant tusks to gain lucrative incomes, posing a serious threat to the ecosystem. Therefore, a growing number of wildlife conservation society are being founded in several parts of the world so that they can collaborate with local authorities to fight against unlawful poaching and smuggling.
Others, despite this, mention that international collaboration could better facilitate international commercial activities. In other words, commericial barriers among nations will be significantly removed, which means that domestic customers can straightforwardly purchase imported merchandise without a need to go abroad. This could be exemplified by e-commerce sites, such as Amazon and Alibaba, in which Vietnamese clients can place orders and wait for two weeks to get their products delivered. Therefore, firms in the field of export and import can effortlessly distribute goods and services to overseas markets.
To summarise, both sides have their valid viewpoints. I, in contrast, feel that cooperation among nations and institutions might expedite investments in green power sources, such as wind power which is environmentally harmless. In reality, although the initial investment in wind turbines is substantial, the availability of international financial aid programs might facilitate the rapid introduction of wind energy in developing nations, like Vietnam.
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Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and...
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Some interesting facts concerning how many types of travelers to a museum from 1997 to 2012 are revealed in the bar chart
Most noticeably of all it can be observed while the number of special exhibition visitors and adult experienced upward trends the opposite was true for youngster under 15
The first result worth pointing out is that the quantity of adult visitors rose gently from just over 300000 people in 1997 to 302200 visitors in the next 5 years, then reached a peak at over 400000 before bouncing back to just over 380000 in the end, which was still the highest among other types of visitors.Likewise the figure for special exhibition travelers followed a same pattern as it rose gently from 28000 to 42000 people between 1997 and 2012
It is apparent that in the first year the number of juveniles under 15 accounted for 120000 prior to decreasing slightly in the next decade and hit a trough at 82,300 people in 2012
Some interesting facts concerning how many types of travelers to a museum from 1997 to 2012 are revealed in the bar chart
Most noticeably of all it can be observed while the number of special exhi...
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The table depicts the information about the number of people from different areas around the world who traveled internationally from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, it can be seen that the total number of that traveled internationally increased significantly over the period. Additionally, Europe accounted for the largest number of traveled abroad in all years.
In 1990, over 280 million Europeans traveled internationally , while 80 million Americans and 60 million people from Asia and the Pacific also traveled abroad. In Africa, the data of inbound tourists were 18,2 million people , while the Middle East was only a half that at 9,8 million travelers.
Over the following fifteen years, the number of European travelers continued to rise and reached a peak at 400,2 million tourist in 2005. Intertional tourists from Asia and the pacific grew dramatically from 80,3 million people in 1990 to over 138 million people in 2005. Meanwhile, the number of American tourists reached the highest point at 118,2 million people before decreasing to 113,2 million people. The figures for the different regions also went up over the period, with African travelers accounting to 28,7 million and those from the Middle East to 15,8 million.
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The table depicts the information about the number of people from different areas around the world who traveled internationally from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, it can be seen that the...
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Đề:
The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period.
Bài làm:
The line graph depicts the average salary of Japanese on a monthly basis and the costs of different televisions during the interval of 30 years starting from 1953.
To summarize, the average salary witnessed an upward trend, whereas the opposite was true for the price of both types of televisions. Additionally, color televisions cost was always higher than black and white ones.
In 1953, a black and white television cost around 111,000 Yen. In the next ten years, this cost dropped significantly to just 40,000 Yen, after that this continued to decrease gradually to 20,000 Yen by 1983. The price of color televisions witnessed a similar pattern, beginning with 100,00 Yen and then declining significantly over the following years to approximately 50,000 Yen by the end of the period.
When it comes to the Japanese average monthly salary, in the first year, they just earned under 20,000 Yen, which was significantly lower than the cost of a black and white television (110,000 Yen). The average monthly salary of Japanese increased slightly from 1963 to 1972, which surpassed the cost of a black and white TV. After that, it soared to around 70,000 Yen at the end of the period.
Đề:
The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period.
Bài làm:
The line graph depic...
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Đề:
The process below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapple.
Bài làm
The diagram depicts the process of planting pineapples and how pineapple products are manufactured from those fruits.
In summary, the production of pineapple consists of several steps, from growing in garden to making final products.
In terms of garden-based activities, at the beginning, under the ideal temperature of 28 to 30 degrees Celsius, the suggested spacing between pineapples is 26cm. After 7 months, chemicals are sprayed with these as a means of protecting against bugs. Subsequently, 5 months later, a fully grown pineapple which is 30cm in height and 2kg heavy is harvested.
The process continues with the harvested fruits being washed throughly to remove impurities. Depending on each size, they are processed to various products. As for the small and medium-sized ones, the crown is cut off, after which it is peeled. The following stage is that the small-sized pineapples are crushed by an extractor to get the juice for consumption, whereas the medium-sized ones are cut into slices and packaged into cans and ready to be sold. In terms of the biggest fruits, these fruits experience the waxing process through the usage of specialized machines to facilitate freshness, followed by the packing stage before being shipped to other markets using a ship.
Đề:
The process below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapple.
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The diagram depicts the process of planting pineapples and how pineapple products are manufactured...
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Đề:
The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài làm:
The pie chart and table illustrate where visitors at a particular Australia holiday resort come from, how long they stay on average and which types of accommodation and activities they opt for.
To summarize, the proportion of the European travelers going to Australia is largest, whereas the opposite is true for the Asia ones. Similarly, European visitors have a tendency to stay longer compared to the others. Additionally, sightseeing seems to be the most popular activity when travelling to Australia.
Looking more closely at the pie chart, the percentages of European and US people are always highest, at 35% and 37% respectively. This is followed by the visitors from other parts of the world, accounting for 18%, compared to only one-tenth of those from Asia.
Turning to the average length of stay, the European and US travelers spend the most of time at the resort, which respective durations of 16 days and 14 days, whereas the Asian and other regions ones spend have shorter vacations here, typically lasting 7 and 10 days in turn. Regarding to the types of accommodation, the Asian and American tourists are inclined to choose 4-5-star hotels to stay, while camping and caravanning is the best choice among the European and individuals from other parts of the world. In terms of recreational activities, sightseeing is the major option for Asian and American tourists, while Europeans mainly engage in swimming or sunbathing, the others from remaining regions favor surfing.
Đề:
The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons...
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Đề bài:The bar chart compares the recycling rates of four different kinds of waste material in a city, from 1992 to 2002.
Some interesting facts concerning the recycling percentage of four diffierent kinds of material in urban area between 1992 and 2000 are revealed in the bar chart
Most noticeably of all it can be observed that the propotion of glass being recycled was the highest while the lowest was plastic
The first result worth pointing out is that in 1992 the ratio of glass recycled accounted for about 15% prior to increasing significantly to nearly 30% in the next 5 years,then reach a peak at 50% in the end. Likewise the figure for paper witnessed a parallel but less pronounced , increase over the same period from over 10% to 21% from 1992 to 1997. Therefore both followed a very similar pattern as they climbed toward 20%, with the 1997s and the 2002s seeing the sharpest rise
it is apparent that in the first year the rate of plastic recycled was higher than cans The former being 10% and the latter being nearly 10%. Also worth noting is that the figure for plastic stabilized at over 10% between 1997 and 2002 which was lower than cans
about 5% in 1997 and even lower in the end
Đề bài:The bar chart compares the recycling rates of four different kinds of waste material in a city, from 1992 to 2002.
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The pie chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage distribution of five different types of books available for purchase from a bookseller in the years 1972, 1992, and 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the figures for the number of Adult fiction and Children’s fiction purchased by bookseller show an upward trend while sales for Travel, Biography, and Others decreased. In addition, the highest proportion of books the most by readers is seen at adult fiction.
In 1972, interest in other books was the highest, accounting for 25% of total sales, while Travel books had the lowest sales at 15%. Adult fiction, children’s fiction, and biography books, which all had equal sales data, stood at 20% each.
The period between 1992 and 2012 experienced a significant change in the proportion of adult fiction books, reaching a peak of 45%, made the most widely sold out of all the products examined in 2012. A similar development can be seen in children’s fiction books which witnessed an upward trend, reached at 25%, becoming the second highest figure at the end of the surveyed. In contrast, during the same period, there was the dramatic decline in the figures for Biography books, others books and travel books, falling by only 8%, 12% and 10% respectively.
The pie chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage distribution of five different types of books available for purchase...
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Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is believed that unnamed automobile will be developed and controlled by computers. There is a range of reasons for this shift, and I believe that this trend is positive development
A range of factors are responsible for the increase in driverless cars. One reason for the increase in driverless car is that humans’ relentless pursuit of conveniences. Another factor that contributes to this situation is momentous technological leap. It can be seen that autonomous driving is a natural progression, which is why a number of companies have achieved initial success. Some major corporations have successfully taken in testing autonomous driving in recent time, for example, self-driving taxi model has been released and put into operation in San Francisco.
From my perspective, the use of self-driving vehicle is a beneficial trend. To begin with, due to this feature, which allows us ensuring safety while participating in traffic. This is because most accidents all are started by people, so that self-driving car will help us eliminate in reckless driving. Moreover, this trend as a precursor to not only a thriving economy but also a civilized society, as it helps cut down operating costs, for example salary, training, liability insurance, associated with human drivers. Furthermore, concurrently with the development of autonomous vehicles, there are more different opportunities opening up to ensure employment for the workforce.
In conclusion, human natural desire and fast-paced technological innovations are the key driving forces for the advent of driverless cars, and I am convinced that this type of vehicle, once popularized and optimized, would contribute to road safety and economic growth.
Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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Question: Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions?
It is true that many companies complain about the insufficient fundamental skills of their new staff, such as teamwork. This essay will first outline some underlying roots before suggest some feasible solutions to mitigate this issue.
There are two primary reasons why the employees don’t equip enough interpersonal skills before commencing new jobs. One reason is that most students completely focus on academic subjects and neglect to engage in extracurricular activities when they are undergraduate. For instance, many students aim to get impressive grades to gain scholarships rather than spending time on attending clubs. Furthermore, the advance in technology is a serious problem, leading to sedentary lifestyle and lack of social interaction. Thanks to the appearance of social networking, people tend to absorb information and chat with others online instead of directly communicating, thus their interpersonal skills are limited.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. Firstly, the universities should enhance organizing clubs and volunteer activities, then encourage students to participate in these programs. Therefore, participants have the opportunity to improve their skills as well as expand their relationships. Secondly, national and local authorities could implement healthy lifestyles campaigns to help people realise the importance of real interaction, along with the consequences of overusing technology. Finally, companies should pay attention to the training course, so that their staff could ensure the work requirement and build their company bond.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the lack of soft skills of new employees, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Đề: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disgree?
Today, some claim that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. I completely agree with this idea.
On the one hand, I acknowledge that the primary purpose of any company is making a profit in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of businesses engaged in a free market should be to cover its running costs, such as employees' wages and payments office space, utilities. Moreover, companies always need to invest in innovation and improvement if they want to remain successful. In other words, a company can only make social contribution if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, businesses should not completely focus on make money, they should do more for society. A social obligation that managers and ownes are to treat their employees well rather than exploiting them. For instance, companies can pay a " living wage" to ensure that all workers have good quality of life. Furthermore, they should use a proportion of their profits to support local charities or environmental projects.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should make social contribution within their sphere of influence although making money is the top primary for businesses.
Đề: As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disgree?
Today, some claim that businesses should do more for society than simply make money....
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Đề:
It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Bài làm:
It is argued that national budget should be allocated for encouraging a healthy lifestyle instead of spending money on treatment of individuals who are already suffering from diseases. I utterly agree with this statement, given that there are some incurable diseases and long-term cost savings.
The major reason that I approve is that people can avoid many incurable health problems. In fact, there are many incurable diseases, such as HIV and AIDS, which is why the best solution is this case is obviously trying to prevent them. For instance, the WHO has successfully provided locals with essential health information related to nutrition, along with cardiovascular benefits of regular exercise in Vietnam. Therefore, the number of Vietnamese people who adopt healthy diets preventive measures against diseases is on the rise, the rate of citizens hospitalizing has significantly declined in recent years.
A further justification that I agree is that prevention is an effective way to save national budget. In reality, people have to spend a large amount of money to cure serious illnesses, such as cancer, which is why preventing illnesses can save on the extensive costs of treatment. This is exemplified by the fact that the total sum of medical treatment process can total over 50,000 USD in Vietnam. As a result, many nations can reduce a large amount of money for constructing hospitals and clinics and allocate a great proportion for other essential sectors, such as education.
In summary, I completely agree that spending money on promoting a healthy lifestyle. This is because it can help people alleviate the potential of deadly illnesses and national budget. It seems to me that parents had better encourage their offspring engage in outdoor activities, such as walking and cycling, instead of playing games with the aim of improving children’s physical fitness.
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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or...
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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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In this day and age, most of large-sized enterprises and organizations, namely Facebook and Google, are possessing a large amount of private date among internet users. I believe that the benefits, such as providing convenience in purchasing and creating helpful services outweigh the drawback, including creating the misunderstandings among citizens.
There are two major advantages of personal information held by companies. First of all, internet users can be received the better experience. Facebook, for example, has tracked the activities of users on the Internet and then use this information in order to propose some advertisements which relate to the objects they are looking for. Additionally, the information is utilized to provide helpful services for consumers. Google Map, for instance, is a social media platform that is used by the millions of citizens all over the worlds which help them orient location they are standing and the road they are finding. Therefore, it is predicted that more and more social networking sites and applications will be created with the aim of making the people’s lives more convenient.
Despite this, this phenomenon will bring about the misuse of big date which has begun already and will become more worse in the future. In reality, the advertisements which are proposed to individuals are not always harmless. This is exemplified by the fact that during the last presidential election in the United State, some foreign organizations and individuals took advantage of personal information of residents on the Internet with the view to misleading them, which is why they could influence voting behavior. As a result, governments all around the world had better legitimate strict laws to punish cybercriminals and improve the defensive networks of personal information security.
In conclusion, I utterly believe that the advantages of mentioned-above trend, namely the removal of inconvenience in purchasing products on the Internet and providing better services, eclipse disadvantage, such as the abuse of people’s private information to come into conflict with the law. It seems to me that authorities should pay more attention to companies and individuals to regulate their activities more effectively.
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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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In this day and age, mo...
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The bar chart illustrates data on the number of tonnes wasted disposal of one European region in terms of the landfills, burning, and dumping at sea over a period of four years from 2005 to 2008.
Overall, it is clear that the number of landfills showed a downward trend. While the amount of waste disposed of burning experienced an increase steadily during the period shown.
At first glance, the average figure for landfills started at 1800 million tonnes, which was three times as much as that of the rubbish at sea in 2005. Between 2006 and 2008, there was a dramatic decrease in landfill numbers at 600 million tonnes at the end of the period.
As can be seen clearly from the chart, in the year 2006, the average amount of waste by burning went up considerably to just 600 million tonnes. The proportion of waste to burning continued to rise steadily to reach the point of approximately 850 million tonnes in 2008. In addition, there was a moderate drop of 500 in the number of dumping at sea in 2008.
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The bar chart illustrates data on the number of tonnes wasted disposal of one European region in terms of the landfills, burning, and dumping at sea over a period of four years from 2005 to...
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of travelers to four places in Scotland including Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and Festival between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, the percentage of tourists visiting Castle and Zoo increased while the reverse pattern can be seen in Aquarium and Festival. ln addition, Castle was the most popular visitor attraction in Scotland for most of the period.
ln 1980, over 20% tourists visited Castle, while the number of visitors who chose to visit the Zoo at just 10%. From 1985 to 2000, the percentage of Castle visitors increased dramatically to reach a peak of about 45% in 1995, but fell back to around 35% in 2000. The figures for Zoo visitors fluctuated to around 10-15%. Until 2010, Castle continued a decreasing trend to nearly 30%. By contrast, Zoo visitors doubled twofold from 10% to 20%.
ln 1980, the proportion of tourists who visited the Festival was about 30%. The figures for the Aquarium was lower than that of Festival, at about 20%. ln 1995, Festival and Aquarium dropped to nearly 25%. Between 1980 and 1990, the percentage of travelers visiting the Aquarium reached a peak of nearly 35% in 1985 before decreasing back to 20% five years later, Festival visitors fell gradually. Until 2010, Aquarium visitors tended to decrease sharply by almost 10%. Similarly, Festival also has a similar trend.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of travelers to four places in Scotland including Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and Festival between 1980 and 2010.
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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Bài làm:
Many individuals argue that the most effective way to access new information is by reading newspapers, whereas others mention that this can be effortlessly acquired through the usage of social media. In this essay, I will elaborate both sides of the topic, and I believe that people can access the news through a variety of choices.
Some think that traditional newspapers are considered a more reliable source of information compared to other sources. In fact, most of the newspapers were written by professional journalists and have to be checked before being published for citizens. In China, for instance, the government tightly controls the media, including newspapers, which is why all new articles must be approved by them before they are published for people. Therefore, all misunderstandings and sensitive information will be censored thoroughly.
Despite this, others believe that obtaining information more quickly across a variety of convenient platforms. In reality, with the widespread presence of the Internet, people with portable devices, such as a smartphone, are able to a huge story of news in just a few. This is exemplified by the fact that in Vietnam, new media outlets, such as Vietnamnet, constantly update breaking new stories more quickly than a traditional newspaper. As a result, it is predicted that more and more electronic newspaper would emerge with the aim of serving people’s needs.
In summary, both sides have their valid viewpoints, such as the reliability and accessibility of traditional newspapers and the convenience of electronic newspapers. I, however, believe that citizens can learn news visually or auditorily. For instance, people who are looking for a new smartphone could watch videos introducing the product to be better informed about its features and analyze reactions from the general public before making a buying decision.
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đề Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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some people claim that the elderly should be subsidized with financial assistance and healthcare by the government ; however , other hold a belief that they have to put money aside for their future life. Although i am more in flavour of the latter opinion , this essay will discuss both view points.
on the one hand, there are several reasons why people think the government should help old people with financial support. The first reason for this is, the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to the society. this is perfectly exemplified in case of veterans and war invalids, they are no longer able to work ; hence, they deserve to receive all the social welfare. in addition, another reason is, there are a large number of aged people, who are homeless and childless, need to be taken good care of by the government because it belongs to the government's obligation.
on the other hand, i agree with the opinion that older people should prepare savings for themselves to cover their bills after retirement. firstly , if they have their own money for payment, they will not depend on their children's money and can use it for urgent situations. they can take care themselves without any support from the government. therefore, the government can allocate part of their budget to indispensable financial priorities such as transportation, education system and healthcare. in term of offspring, because their parents can look after themselves so they can have more time to pay attention to their own life .
in conclusion, although the government should support older people to some extent, i contend that the elderly should prepare money for their own payment so that do not need to rely on other people
đề Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give y...
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Some people think the money spent on developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is argued that the expenditure allocated for state-of-the-art technological devices for space exploration is not reasonable. Many people believe that there are numerous productive uses to spend this money. I utterly agree with this statement given that addressing environmental contamination and investing in education in many countries are higher priorities.
The major reason that I agree is that this money can be utilized to fund programs aimed to restore the environment. It is undeniable that humans are polluting and destroying the environment at a rapid rate, and there seems to be no concrete action to prevent a global environmental catastrophe from occurring in the near future. In 2022, for example, the Vietnamese government invested a huge amount of money to organize a program with the aim of cultivating 50 million trees in Gia Lai province. Therefore, future generations could have a health and safety planet to live.
A further justification that I approve is that impoverished children’s lives can significantly be improved. In fact, there are millions of children around the world currently are unable to attend school due to the lack of financial resources and educational institutions. This is illustrated by the fact that the Vietnamese government subscribed a large amount of money to Angola with a view to constructing free schools, which is why education will become more accessible in many developing nations. Therefore, it is predicted that more and more free-paying schools will be built, youngsters have access to educational opportunities.
To conclude, I totally agree that spending money on space exploration is not unjustified. This is because this can help poor children access education and mitigate environmental pollution on a global scale. As a result, this financial resource should instead be allocated towards improving human welfare and installing cutting-edge medical systems in some developing nations, such as Angola.
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Some people think the money spent on developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?...
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