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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Question: Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern society, criminals become a significant concern for debating in the large scale. Number of individuals argue that applying education and career training courses for the lawbreakers will be more efficiency than sending them to prison. Despite of some drawbacks it might causes, I believe that the advantages outweigh the downsides and this essay will analyze my viewpoint.
On the one hand, it could be dentrimental to the society if the criminals are available from the prison sentences. The crime offenders who find unsatisfied with the governments and the regulations will relapse into the crime without regretting of their faults, excerbates to the residents’ safety. Nevertheless, if the authorities implemented the appropriate educational programs for the criminals, it might enhances the criminals’ attitudes and behaviours towards society. The compelling reason for committing a crime is due to the lacks of education and social appreciation. Thereby, the governments should support subtantial opportunities for the offenders enrolling to the social activities, such as charity.
Moreover, the symptoms of depression and stress are witnessed in most criminals. It is well – documented that the crime offenders are sentimental because of numerous problems. For instance, most criminals worldwide have sufferred from family issues which leading to the downsides of their personal traits. By providing education programs, the lawbreakers’ academic level could be improved as well as deterring them from negative emotions and behaviours. Furthermore, it is reasonable for the criminals to access the vocational training courses. The feeling of isolation and less appreciation from the society bring difficulties in seeking jobs for the lawbreakers. Therefor, the career training plays a vital role in enhancing their life quality and occupation opportunity which results in the diminishing number of crime offenders.
In conclusion, it is neccessary to provide education programs and career training courses for the criminals instead of giving prison sentences. It will benefits not only for the lawbreakers’ life quality but also brings more advantages to the society by engaging in the social activities.
Question: Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
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Đề:
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up- to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
Bài làm:
The figure illustrates the process used by Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather.
There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This information is then analysed, prepared for presentation and finally broadcast to the public.
Looking at the first and second stage, there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming information may be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Secondly, incoming information may be collected directly by radar and analysed on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Finally, drifting buoy also may be received data and shown on a synoptic chart.
At the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally, it is delivered to public through television, radio or recorded announcement.
Đề:
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up- to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
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Question: Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
In today’s society, there is a persavive debate on the importance of teaching core subjects such as mathematics, literature for students taking the assignments rather than practical skills. Considering all the factors, I partially agree with the substantial benefits of academic knowledge and achievements. However, schools should allocate equivalent support to minor skills as well for all-rounded developments.
On the one hand, academic knowledge plays a crucial role in higher education and career opportunity. It is beneficial for students to learn core subjects that are effective for the school assessments. If the young learners desire to pursue academically education path, they should receive more achievements and results by specialised in mathematics, english and science. For example, high-level students whose objectivity is applying to renowned universities should prepare for outstanding school profiles with appealing academic achievements that required by the colleges’ standards. Moreover, by providing advanced knowledges for students, they will receive more opportunities in career development. Numerous of companies demands to employ excellent employees that have higher results in academic education.
On the contrary, lead subjects such as cooking and dressing bring multiple of advantages to students’ lifestyle. As soon as acquiring practical skills at schools, students will be more independent and having ability to take care of themselves. For instance, it is essential for students who study abroad to participate in cooking courses at school, hence it will be easier for them to reside in foreign countries without their families’ support. Furthermore, fashion field also has significant benefits to students in the workplaces as well as daily lifestyles. By learning fashion and stylist areas, they will be more confident and have gorgeous styles of clothes when going to the companies or dating with the partners, which are leading to their positive development.
In conclusion, to support all-rounded abilities in education environment for students, the school presidents should provide not only academic knowledge but also teaching practical skills that assist them to be more independent and confident in all circumstances in their life.
Question: Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
In today’s society, the circumstance of the natural environment is getting worse as a result of the demanding number of consumer goods production. This problem is probably caused by the greenhouse gases released by the factories and the high level of unsustainable items consumption. This essay will explain precisely the causes and analyze the solutions for this issue.
Initially, one compelling reason that leads to the environmental crisis is the substantial amount of gas emissions released from the factories. Due to industrialization, the production of consumer goods increases rapidly, leading to a significant amount of carbon dioxide that damages the atmosphere. According to BBC News, there was approximately 60% of the amount of greenhouse gases came from industrial factories in 2022, leading to numerous adverse impacts on the environment. Moreover, it is detrimental to nature because of the growth in the production of unsustainable clothes and the consumption of nylon bags that take a prolonged period to recycle, hence, bringing multiple downsides to the natural environment.
One possible solution to address the problem is implementing more policies on the energy sources used by the factories. The amount of greenhouse gases will be reduced as long as the governments establish more regulations on changing to renewable energy instead of coal energy sources. Secondly, it is essential for the clothes brands to increase more sustainable items production and provide recycled plastic bags to the customers. Take Zara as a good example, this global brand implements a reused scheme for outdated clothes to maintain the sustainability of the products and bring positive effects to the environment. By making new obsolete pieces of clothes, these products will be purchased by other customers to reduce waste and contribute to enhancing natural circumstances.
In conclusion, the drawbacks of the high production of consumer goods result in the shift of the natural environment. However, it is possible to tackle this issue by encouraging all the factories to use renewable sources as well as producing more sustainable and recycled items.
The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
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Đề:
Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Bài làm:
It is argued that a large amount of time and funding should has been allocated towards helping humanity instead of wildlife conservation. I completely agree with this statement, given that alleviating the condition of poverty in many countries and the development of state-of-the-art medical systems.
The major reason that I approve is that the quality of impoverished families in some nations will be dramatically improved. An increasing number of individuals are currently facing with the condition of insufficient food and fresh water, especially in developing nations, by devoting enough money and time to handle this issue, there can be marked improvements in the quality of inhabitants. This is exemplified by the fact that the Vietnamese government spent a large of money to help the poor in Africa. Therefore, the more funding is allocated for, the more people’s life enhances.
A further justification that I agree is that the improvements in modern medical systems. In fact, many people all over the world are suffering from dangerous illnesses, such as the diseases related to cancer, which impact on people’s health significantly, which is why investments in advanced medical systems are essential to handle this problem. As an example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, the UK authority invested a large funding in researching and manufacturing AstraZeneca vaccines, with the aim of mitigating the potential of getting the Covid-19 disease. As a result, plenty of citizens would not concern about their health, which influence on their working and studying.
In conclusion, I utterly agree that people should make investments in humans instead of allocating for wildlife protection. This is because it provides opportunities for people to gain a better life and the improvement of medical systems. It seems to me that governments all over the world need to prioritize the fundamental needs of people with the view to bringing better lives for citizens.
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Topic: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The provided maps illustrate the current design of an industrial region in the Norbiton town, along with planned changes occuring in the area.
Overall, it is noticeable that the region is planned to experience various significant alterations, among which will be the demolition of factories and the construction of residential housing and other facilities. However, the locations of river, town and big roundabout will remain unchanged.
Presently, there has been a circle in the center of industrial area, connected by two pathways. One of them branches off to the main road in the south of the map, the other reaches a factory situated in the eastern side. Meanwhile, other factories have been built around the roundabout and the second pathway. In the west of the region stands a town, leading to a river in the north of the map, with a farmland situated right above the river.
In the future, the town will remain intact, while all factories will be removed to make room for other amenities. Notably, there will be two more pathways connected to the big circle. One way will lead northwest-ward to two houses, the other will directly seperate the old river in the north, with a new path constructed to protect people living in a house behind it, on its right side will be the farmland. A small roundabout is also planned to be built in the center of the road. Furthermore, the old pathway in the east will be expanded to construct accomodation, school and playground. Finally, shops and medical center will be located in either southern side of big roundabout
Topic: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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Đề: Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
BÀI LÀM
It has been increasingly prevalent for people to believe that graduation from university is the main driving force for a favorable profession. Meanwhile, many opponents suggested that young people should find a job after high school and obtain experience in the workplace. As far as I am concerned, both standpoints are justifiable and I will further elaborate on this essay.
To begin with, a growing number of individuals agree that university qualifications are the only key factor that results in career success. In the fast-paced world, it is undeniable that a large number of young people pursue doctors, teachers, engineers, and so on as their dream careers. Consequently, having a Bachelor’s Degree is compulsory in order to make their ambitions come true. Furthermore, recruiters are in favor of qualified applicants in curricula vitae screening and they are more likely to contact these applicants for an interview. For further explanation, curriculum vitae is a personal brief profile in which young people not only provide their personal information, but they can also showcase their certain level of intelligence, competence, and education. What is more, a university degree can demonstrate an individual’s educational background and expertise knowledge, which is recently a main driving force of recruitment in many companies. Hence, those who graduate tend to attract more employers, which can offer them a wide range of job opportunities and choices.
Having said that, there is also a noticeable trend where people think going to work after graduating from school and earning experience is the superior orientation for the young generation.
In fact, there are many professions that do not require any qualifications or diplomas. Take hairdressers, tattoo artists, and mechanics for example, a large figure of them are still able to work and earn money without a university education. Therefore, studying in universities is a waste of money and time in these cases. In terms of personal development, working adults can gain more life skills as well as their specific expertise. On top of that, the working environment plays an essential role in helping them become an independent and mature person as they have to learn how to manage their living expenses, and communication skills to get on with their colleagues and make a living by themselves. Interestingly, universities do not teach those practical skills but school of life.
In conclusion, I feel that both perspectives are justifiable in their own way. Choosing to go to work or continue studying at the university after school depends on an individual’s orientation and family situation. From these factors, young adults can decide to pursue their own wishes in the most flexible and effective way that is suitable to their career path and personality.
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrate the expenditure on three list ( Food and drink, restaueant and hotel, Entertainment ) among distintion age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
As is observed, The number of entertainment hit the highest point in 2004, while the percentage of restaurant and hotel is lowest at all.
Looking at details 1, Entertainment and Food and drink accounted for hight point . ALmost, The two groups have a fairly moderate difference from less than 30 to 75. While, in the over 76 age group, they choose food and drinks more than entertainment at 24% and entertainment only half as much. For all ages, food and drinks always occupy a high position. Except for those under 30 and 61-75, entertainment is a little more approximate.
Looking at details 2, Restaurants and hotels make up the lowest percentage on all three lists. In the under 30s, restaurants and hotels top all three and reach 14% almost double that of food and drink and entertainment. There is a moderate difference at 31-45 and 46-60. The biggest gap is in the 61-75 age group at 2%, only 1/12 of entertainment and 1/10 of food and drink. At age 76 and older, there is also a large difference at 7%. The number of restaurants and hotels is only half that of entertainment and almost 1/4 that of food and drinks
The bar chart illustrate the expenditure on three list ( Food and drink, restaueant and hotel, Entertainment ) among distintion age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
As is observed, The number o...
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Đề:
The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
Bài làm:
The provided pie chart depicts the consumption of electricity in various sectors in two different years, namely 2007 and 2010.
In summary, the distribution of electricity remained mostly unchanged, with the exception of aluminium, manufacturing and other metals. Additionally, transport and agriculture were two sectors that consumed least electricity in both years.
In 2007, just over half of the total electricity was consumed by residential and commercial sectors, with 28% and 23%, respectively. Agriculture and transport both accounted for just 1% in the same year, while the mining consumed 9% of the total electricity consumed. There were no changes in the percentages of the aforementioned sectors after 3 years.
Meanwhile, the manufacturing and aluminium sectors both consumed 13% of the total electricity used by 2007, after which it dropped slightly to 9% and 11%, respectively in 2010. In contrast, the other metals witnessed a slight increase in the consumption of electricity, from 12% to 18% between 2007 and 2010.
Đề:
The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
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The provided pie chart depicts the consumption of electricity...
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ĐỀ BÀI: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
BÀI LÀM:
It is often argued that student shoud be taught to become good people in society by school. However, some individuals think that parents also should teach students. In my view, i firmly believe that not only school but also parents should educate students to become useful people in society.
School can be considered a ideal place so that students can gain knowledge and skills to enter society. Besides learning theoretical knowledge in books, nowadays, education is promoting teaching programs which have a tendency to guide the development of life skills, encourage using creativity and practical knowledge to apply lessons at school. Therefore, students can perceive both knowledge in textbooks and real life. The information which students learn will be conveyed by teachers who have experiences in teaching and also have solid practical knowledge. Moreover, parents can be quite busy, they do not have time to teach their children . Thus, it can be easier for students when they learn how to be a good members of society at school.
Nevertheless, it does not mean that parents can not teach those to their children. Many parents have knowlege about certain field and they also experience in all circumstances in life so that they can certainly communicate to their children the useful information and teach students how to behave properly to become a helpful person. Some people think that school is better to students learn this due to parents are quite swamped. Sometimes, they can not meet their children very often because they are busy and their children also focus on studying. Thus, teaching children perhaps is the impossible thing. However, I think parents should strive to talk with children and teach them how to behave properly in life.
To sum up, both parents and school are a good place to teach students. They are two important factors to make sure that students become good members in society.
ĐỀ BÀI: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
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topic: Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that with the development of advanced inventions such as smartphones, people’s relationships would become less interaction. I completely agree with this opinion and I will discuss about some its reasons in the essay.
Firstly, modern gadgets have changed in the way that people entertained. In the past, when people did not have many devices such as smartphones, computer, and so on, they would engage in some activities such as playing sports, dacing, and so on that helped them relax and unwind. However, these days, when technology become more and more popular, as a result people tend to spend a lot of time on using advanced devices rather than join other activities. The reason is that there are many various kind of online games that are their favourite games on their phones. Therefore,
Secondly, this trend also has changed the way that people make new friends. Traditionally, people need to meet face- to- face, chat and then if they had in commons, they would become friends. However, in modern society, people just use their mobiles phones and go online that help meet open-minded friends easily. For instance, when people are keen on cooking and want to make friends who have in common, they might use Facebook or Instagram, because there are many group which spend for cooking lovers on these platforms. That is so convenient but it might lead to a negative impact on our society. The evidence is that there are more and more people immerse to virtual life on social networking and gradually less contact with others in their real life espeacially young people.
In conclusion, when modern inventions developed, they affected negatively on the interaction of our community because they have changed to the way of people’s entertaining and broadening friend relationships.
topic: Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that with the development of advanced...
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Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s modern society, education become a widespread field that requires greater consideration from the parents. While number of people argue that the youngsters should approach to learning environment since they were toddlers, others believe that it is unnecessary to educate under 7-year-old children. This essay will explain the notion as well as my own perspective.
On the one hand, the youngsters who have the opportunities to access education at early age will enhance their creativity and critical thinking with high pace. Children in the age from 2 to 6 years old are better at memorizing and learning the foundation knowledges. Thereby, if the parents registered for their children to the kindergartens to study basic words and digits could sharpen their memory and acquire the background knowledges for higher education. Moreover, their personal traits could be enhanced by communicating with people surrounding them in an early age and improve the relationships between themselves and their childhood friends
On the contrary, starting education from the primary schools assist children to prepare carefully before approaching new learning environment. The younger learners will acknowledge their own abilities and objectives that they want to pursue in the educational paths after spending time for sharing and taking care of by their parents. Nevertheless, primary school learners may suffer from stressed and isolation when going to school later than their peers. It alleviates their relationship development between their classmates and get troubles in making new friendships. As the result of lacks social communication, the children have the tendency to be awkward and isolate themselves from others unless their classmates approach first.
In conclusion, the toddlers start education in an early age tend to have better foundation skills and relationships. However, the educational preparation would be witnessed in the children first access to the primary schools. In my opinion, I believe that approaching educational environment soon will have more significant benefits in children’ development.
Question: Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Topic: More and more people are relying on the Internet as their major source of news and information.
What advantages does the Internet have for the average person? What disadvantages could it have now or in the future?"
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The number of people relying on the internet as their primary source of news and information is increasing dramatically. It turns out to be an indispensable tool when it comes to the information needed. While this trend offers several benefits, it also comes with certain disadvantages both presently and in the future.
The most tangible advantage can be seen in the internet is that it provides plenty of sources of information. Readers can access many channels to obtain their needs from news about sports, politics, and so on. For instance, It is quite easy to stumble upon some articles, and academic essays that cite links from Google or Wikipedia on the internet. Additionally, the internet is considered to be a versatile tool for people to transport news in different forms. In this day and age, lots of applications are way more popular with internet users in covering news through videos or many entertaining forms namely YouTube, which helps enhance interest in working and studying.
Along with the good sides, there are also the drawbacks that the internet brings back to users. One obvious disadvantage that easily can be met is unofficial and unwarranted sources. On a day-to-day basis, the amount of internet users is facilitated, which is an event for many channels to jump at the chance to attract viewers. As a consequence, everyone can distract and even understand the thinking distortions. On the other hand, the Industrial Revolution 4.0 has observed huge changes in internet function. Thus, it will lead to many risks in network security when they access any website or run across some sites that need an agreement to open them, and as a result, stolen credentials appear.
In essence, It is irrefutable that the internet is a vital source in looking for news and information. Despite the internet bringing various sources of information and forms of delivering news, it can render users misunderstand and achieve unwarranted news. Personally, no matter how diverse the information is, the users have to be alert of any sources and cognitively clearly the information that they are receiving.
Topic: More and more people are relying on the Internet as their major source of news and information.
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The bar chart illustrates how much renewable energy was used in total enery in four nations between 1997 and 2010.
Overall, there were increases in the share of naturally replenished energy in Iceland and Sweden while the divergent tendencies were recorded in Australia and Turkey. Additionally, the proportion of renewable resources in Iceland was consistently the largest throughout the time while the opposite case was is for Australia and Sweden.
Looking first at the two highest regions, the percentage of energy that can be renewed in Iceland saw a steady jump from 45% at the beginning to its peak of 70% in 2010. Meanwhile, that in Turkey slightly increased to over 40% in 2000, after bottoming out at 31% at the end of the period.
Moving on to Australia and Sweden whose figures were both under 10%, this is easy to notice that there was a contrasting trend in the amount of energy that could an be restored in these areas. The figures for these nations were at the same level was 6% in 2000, and Australians consumed the same amount of renewable energy in 1997 as was the same as that of Sweden did in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates how much renewable energy was used in total enery in four nations between 1997 and 2010.
Overall, there were increases in the...
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Question: Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe that films should merely be considered as a form of pastime, whereas others believe that each movie offers an educational aspect. This essay will first closely clarify both points of view before concluding that I agree with the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people assume watching movies is an extremely effective leisure method. The key rationale in favor of this notion is that people nowaday are busy with their work and study schedule, and movies play an important role in releasing stress and depression. After finishing a day working at the workplace, everyone wants to sit and turn on one program on TV to relax instead of continuing to focus on other tasks. Therefore, many people might take films into consideration as a habit on a regular basis. Furthermore, the entertainment industry contributes many advantages to the improvement of the national economy. This is the prospective industry that brings billions of dollars and jobs for employees. Considering these, the idea of considering movies as a leisure activity is justifiable.
On the other hand, I am convinced that movies not only bring entertainment, but also offer lessons in many aspects. This is because films provide behavior patterns that impact on our lives in both negative and positive terms. For example, what children watch in formative years could shape their personality, thus they are able to have objective eyesight about surroundings. Besides, recent films tend to be implemented based on real stories, emphasizing the cultural identity of each area. As a result, people could broaden the cultural horizon as well as learn about life in other nations through movies.
In conclusion, while there are justifications that films should simply be a source of entertainment, I would contend that educational value is a vital element that enhances the humanity of the movies.
Question: Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Question: The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that attending parenting courses is the most effective method to nurture their children comprehensively. While I acknowledge the reasons behind this thinking, I would argue that there are many ways that could offer better results in children's development.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people recognize the benefits of taking nurturing classes. The main reason is that these courses are designed to suit children’s growth progress. Parents who come to class for infancy care, for instance, would be taught by the newborn professions. They have numerous experience in studying newborn’s behavior and emotion, thus could easily satisfy them. In addition, parenting classes provide a community for parents whose children are at the same ages, that they could share about their children’s educational measures. Therefore, the family relationships might become more connected and understanding.
On the other hand, I am convinced that taking training courses for parents is unnecessary. This is because these courses cost a high registration fee and almost all young families receive the support from the grandparents, who have experience in taking care of a child from birth until mature age. Woman in Vietnam after giving birth to a baby, for example, could ask her parents or her husband’s parents to give a hand. Moreover, many families could not arrange time to attend nurture courses because of their heavy schedule. Adults have to balance their work and life at the same time, even though they sometimes might work overtime or have a meeting.
In conclusion, while there are justifications that taking parenting classes could bring positive results, I would contend that this should not be compulsory as the reasons mentioned above.
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The line graph gives information about how much chicken, beef, lamb and fish were consumed in a European country during the period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, almost types of food experienced a fluctuated trend during the surveyed period while the reverse trend was recorded for fish. Another striking feature is that the consumption of chicken was the most popular at the end of the period.
Looking at the figure of chicken and beef for more details, at the beginning, beef was dominant as the most consumed protein, at nearly 225 grams per person per week, which was roughly 75 grams higher than the amount of chicken consumption. Following the next 10 years, the number of beef consumption fluctuated and decreased to 200 grams, while the figure of chicken gradually increased to higher 205 grams. From 1989 onwards, consumption of chicken significantly rose, surpassing beef to become the most preferred at the end of period at 250 grams per person per week. At the same time, the figure of beef consumption witnessed a substantial fall to approximately 100 grams at the end.
Concerning the remaining types of food, the amount of lamb and fish consumption stood at 150 and 52 grams respectively. As for lamb, there was a fluctuation with a sharp decrease to nearly 75 grams over the period. Meanwhile, the number of fish consumed was nearly unchanged and stood at 50 grams in the end.
The line graph gives information about how much chicken, beef, lamb and fish were consumed in a European country during the period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, almost types of food experienced a fluc...
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Topic : In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In these days, some people believe that it is redundant to go to school by virtue of the availability of a range of knowledge on the internet so that children can study at home. This essay totally disagress with this view for the following reasons.
To begin with, teachers at school can help students develop comprehensively, which home-schooling is incapable of. Provided that teachers have a chance to supervise the children on a daily basis, they can understand the learning capacity of each students in order to assist them in improving their weaknesses and enhancing their strong points. For instance, a teacher can help his student to overcome his weak point in maths, which learning at home cannot achieve the same effect. However, if the student studies at home and relies on the source of information on the internet, it can be more challenging for him to realize the existing issue. Subsequently, going to school enables students to enhance due to teachers’ help.
Studying at school, moreover, provides he adolescents opportunities to improve their soft skills. To clarify, commnunicating or working with friends allows students to be more sociable, independent and develop their team work. For example, getting prepared for a presentation at school helps children to get on well with their peers and also enhance their leading skill as well. Therefore, going to school is beneficial for the young on the grounds that soft skills are improved.
In conclusion, opting for schools in lieu of Internet-based education at home is more reasonabe due to numerous merits that it brings.
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Question: It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that the government should prioritize allocating resources to enhance healthy lifestyle rather than spending money on cures for patients. While I acknowledge the reasons behind this thinking, I would argue that people who are already ill also need to be paid attention.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe the authorities should finance to encourage activities that are beneficial for health. The main reason is that more and more people have unhealthy lifestyles and habits in recent years. For instance, those who eat too much fast food and less exercise could be prone to obesity and diabete. Therefore, measures could be implemented to prevent sedentary lifestyles, which offer health risks. Moreover, there are various diseases that are easily transmitted by chance such as HIV, AIDS. Healthy lifestyles might help us increase resistance and resist diseases. Considering these, the idea of investing to promote healthy lifestyles is justifiable.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the government should spend a certain fund on sponsoring cure fees. This is because treatment costs might increase the financial burden of the family, many people who are disadvantaged could not afford a huge amount of money for this. For instance, those who are at stage one of cancer could have the ability to cure if the government supports medical expenses. Furthermore, some diseases bring inherited elements that no one wants to suffer from. Therefore, facilitating the import of modern technology and medicine helps people get access to new treatment methods and raise their ability to combat diseases.
In conclusion, while there are justifications that healthy lifestyles need to be concentrated on by the government, I would contend that investing in treatment methods is equally important.
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Đề:
More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
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An increasing number of students have opted to pursue higher educational levels in foreign countries. I consider that the benefits of this phenomenon, such as self-development through international exposure and the promotion of essential skills, overshadow the drawback, including the high cost of tuition fees and living expenses.
There are two advantages of going to study abroad. Firstly, it provides opportunities for students to gain international exposure. By immersing themselves in a new culture, they can develop a deeper understanding of different perspectives and ways of life. For example, many Vietnamese students opt for Australia to study due to its unique culture, rare wildlife and breathtaking structures. Additionally, pursuing higher education abroad contributes to the development of crucial skills. In fact, international students are required to adapt to unfamiliar environments and manage their finances effectively. As an example, if a Vietnamese student in Australia must learn to adapt quickly, solve problems independently, and make wise decisions for success. Therefore, overseas students would gain a broader understanding of the world and develop essential life skills, which would be invaluable throughout their life.
Despite this, it is challenging to pay expenses related to living and education when studying abroad. In fact, most of students tend to choose developed nations to study abroad, such as the United States, which is why they need to have a financial source to pay each day. This is exemplified by the fact that my neighbor, after studying abroad in Australia for 2 years, he had to return to Vietnam. This is because he did not afford to pay his course fees and living costs. As a result, the high cost of tuition fees and living expenses make many students challenging when going to study overseas.
In conclusion, I utterly believe that the advantages of studying in other countries, namely international exposure and the development of essential skills, eclipse its disadvantage, including the steep expenses for tuition and living. It seems to me that educational institutions should organize workshops with the view to taking to students about the benefits of studying abroad, thus it can lead to personal and professional development.
Đề:
More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
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An increasing number of student...
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