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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Đề:
The diagram details the process of making wool.
Bài làm:
The picture illustrates how wool is produced for both personal and industrial use.
Generally, it is clear that there are various steps involved, beginning with the sheep sheared and ending with the wooled yarns being knitted or woven into commercially made jackets or carpets.
The process commences when the sheep are sheared for their fleece. Once the collective amount of fleece is cleaned by water and chemicals to get rid of contaminants such as grease, branches, and other debrism, it is taken to a drying machine. Following this the fleece is carded, which results in tufts of wool and pieces of string as byproducts, with the latter being reintroduced into process to maximize productivity.
Then, woolen tufts are spent to the storage before being spun into balls of yarn. In the last stage, these yarn balls are sold for either individual pastimesm, like knitting or the commercial purpose of making jackets or carpets.
Đề:
The diagram details the process of making wool.
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The picture illustrates how wool is produced for both personal and industrial use.
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đề: It costs a lot of money for a country to host an international sports event, such as the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Some people think that this is a waste of money, but others believe the opposite. Discuss both views and give your opinion .
Many people claim that certain country wastes a huge amount of state money on hosting an international sport tournaments such as Olympic Games or football World Cup. However, others how opposite belief . although I am in favor of the former opinions, this essay will discuss both viewpoints.
On the one hand, hosting international sport events are likely to bring many benefits for a country. To begin with, during these sport events, there is an influx of tourists who come from diverse backgrounds, visit this country and have a need of using services such as restaurants and hotels. therefore local people have more opportunities to boost business revenue and make profits. In addition, Thanks to globalization, this tendency will create cultural diversity and local people have a chance to broaden their horizons from other, more and civilized societies.
On the other hand, I agree with the opinion that the cost to organize sport tournaments are extremely huge and extravagant. Firstly, the host country have to invest .tremendous sum of money in constructing modern sport infrastructures which are used in short term in order to serve Olympic Games. For instance, many modern stadiums in Qatar,which were built for World Cup 2022 , now are abandoned and downgraded . It causes damage to natural resources and wastes country’s budgets. Meanwhile, the government should allocate that money to other essential investments, such as health care and education systems, so as to enhance people's living standards.
In conclusion , as the reasons discussed above, i contend that the government should minimize the costs of organizing sport tournaments and spend more money on supporting their citizens.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of reasons why employees did not go to work in European country in three years 2000, 2005 and 2010.
Overall, it can be observed that why the rate of sickness and family responsibilities underwent downward trends the opposite was true for anxious, person needs and unexpected issues
The first result worth pointing out is that, in 2000 the figure for illness accounted for just under 45%, then decreasing gently to 35% in 2010. Despite of this, it was still the highest throughout the period. Similarly, the ratio of family responsibilities followed a similar pattern as it declined moderately from just over 25% in 2000 to 25% in the next decade and only dwarfed by illness 10% .
It is apparent that, the proportion of stress was lower than person needs in 2000, the former being just over 5% and the latter being nearly one - third. These figure increased notably in the next 10 years and stress still lower than person needs, with just over 10% and nearly 25% respectively. Also worth noting is that unexpected problems climbed from around 10% in the beginning to peaked at under 15% in 2005, before falling minimally in the end
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of reasons why employees did not go to work in European country in three years 2000, 2005 and 2010.
Overall, it can be observed that why the rate of sickn...
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Đề:
Fewer and fewer people today right by hand using a pen pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Bài làm:
A decreasing number of individuals opt to write manually by using traditional tools, such as pens, pencils and brushes. This essay will point out some of the major reasons why this is happening, and I believe that this trend will bring about drawbacks, such as the lack of personal touch the loss of traditional skills associated with handwriting.
There are two primary reasons leading to the aforementioned issue. Firstly, people tend to utilize digital communication methods, such as typing and texting. In fact, with the prevalence of digital devices, such as smartphones and computers, which allows people to send information more quickly due to its speed and efficiency. For example, Vietnamese managers currently tend to use email to share updates and documents with their staff. Secondly, typing on a keyboard allows for faster and more efficient in writing. The ease of typing on a keyboard allows for rapid transcription of thoughts and ideas, facilitating the creation well-structured documents. For instance, many Vietnamese undergraduates use word processing programs, such as Word and Excel, with the view to doing their graduation theses, ensuring that they submit these theses on time. Therefore, it is predicted that there will be an increasing number of word processing and communication applications, which makes people’s lives more convenient in writing.
The first primary disadvantage is that handwritten communication can convey a personal touch. When people take time to write a note by hand, it adds a personal and intimate element to the message. As an example, after a job interview, a candidate sends a handwritten thank-you letter to the interviewer can leave a long-lasting impression. Furthermore, the excessive make use of online communication can lead to losing traditional skills in handwriting. In many cultures, calligraphy has been considered as a unique art form for centuries, with the combination of cultural beauty and linguistic expression. This is illustrated by that fact that in East Asian cultures, such as China and Japan, where calligraphy has been a traditional beauty, the decline in the practice of handwriting may lead to a loss of cultural heritage. People, as a result, cannot enjoy the benefits of handwriting if they just emphasize on digital communication.
In conclusion, the decline of writing manually becomes common due to digital communication and the use of convenient keyboard, I totally believe that this phenomenon is negative, given that losing the writer’s meaning and the loss of traditional beauty. It seems to me that each individual needs to strike a balance between using technological devices and the cognitive awareness of handwriting to ensure effective learning and communication.
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Fewer and fewer people today right by hand using a pen pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
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The given table compares the numbers of cars manufactured in three countries, including Argentina, Australia and Thailand, starting from 2003 to 2009.
It can be seen that Thailand produced the largest amount of cars throughout the period. Besides, while the sum of automobile manufacturing in Argentina increased steadily, Thailand saw a consistent decrease over a period of 6 years.
Being the biggest automobile production country, Thailand commenced with a figure of 735,852 and then peaked at 1,16236 before ending the period with a slight fall to 999,963. In contrast, in 2003, 235,088 cars were issued in Argentina, representing the lowest quantity in the whole time given. This figure still grew noticeably until doubling that of in 2003, at 466,089 in 2009.
Regarding Australia’s number of cars made, it ranked second with 452,163 cars produced in 2003. After 6 years, these numbers continued to drop and nearly halved to 245,624 cars remained by 2009.
The given table compares the numbers of cars manufactured in three countries, including Argentina, Australia and Thailand, starting from 2003 to 2009.
It can be seen that Thailand produced the larg...
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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
In this day and age, there has been a notably increasing rate of people relying on writing platforms instead of using a pen, pencil or brush over a few decades. This shift can be attributed to the emergence of faster and convenient writing methods. While I acknowledge this approach has numerous benefits for individuals, I totally hold the view that its drawbacks are far more important in terms of affecting individuals health and writing skill.
To begin with, people who show a reluctance towards employing pens or brushes can be reasonable by two factors. First of all, it is undeniable that writing advancement brings a better speed compared to traditional writing. To illustrate, typists can benefit from utilizing both hands and multiple fingers at the same time, resulting in enhancing the efficient and accelerated workflow. Secondly, many typing softwares often incorporate many supporting features. For example, online Google Document offers autocorrection and opposes appropriate words. Therefore, these aids not only streamline the writing process but also contribute to improve work performance.
From my perspective, the declining rate of manual writing brings many drawbacks rather than its advantages. One of the serious disadvantages is the impact on people's health. This writing process involves the exposure to electric devices such as computers, mobile phones and so on for a long time, which have been gradually scientifically proven to health issues such as poor vision. Another problem is the potential detriment to an individuals’ writing skills. Some students nowadays have a tendency to over-reliance on digital innovations to prepare for their documents, this act can lead to an inactive behavior and thinking. Moreover, for a long time, they may find it difficult to write on their own owing to lack of ability to employ proper terminology or grammatical structures.
In conclusion, there has been a decreasing popularity of traditional writing, which can be answered by the advancement and convenience of digital writing methods. However, I believe that this phenomenon is a negative development due to its effect on people’s health and writing ability.
Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development?
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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown.
Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantage?
While many people can learn a new language in their country, other people select to go abroad in order to support their learning. In my opinion, the advantages of a journey are greater than the disadvantages.
There are some drawbacks to attending a language course overseas. Firstly, language learners have to consider the costs such as airline tickets and tuition fees. Besides, they need money for day-to-day expenses, such as/ including food and accommodation. In fact, not many families can afford such a journey because it is very expensive. Secondly, living away from family and friends makes them feel lonely, and they also have to experience cultural and language barriers, which can increase this sense of isolation. Therefore, these problems are serious enough to interfere with language learning.
Learning a foreign language overseas brings many benefits. international students can easily have access to native-speaker teachers and total immersion in the target language, which enables them to reach a higher level than learning at home. This also increases the chance of getting a part-time job, which can relieve the financial burdens on them or their family. In addition, at work and school, they have the chance to make friends and communicate with other people, and they will feel less homesick as a result. Thus, students can gain a lot from an opportunity like this.
In conclusion, although they have to adapt to a new culture and pay an amount of money for such a trip, those who overcome these can master the language better. The advantages of learning a new language overseas are greater than its drawbacks.
Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown.
Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantage?
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Đề:
The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
Bài làm:
The provided bar chart depicts the number of female and male undergraduates selecting six major subjects in a particular university in the US in 2010.
Overall, finance was the most favoured subject by both genders, the opposite was true for engineering. Additionally, there was a significant difference in the figures for males and females studying Mathematics.
In terms of the most popular majors among women, about 225 females majored in Finance, which was identical to that of males. The figures for females enrolling in Marketing and Accoutning stood at approximately 120 and 200, respectively, which were higher than that of men, with about 75 and 170 students in turn.
Looking more closely at the remaining subjects, 200 Math majors were female, whereas the number of men selecting this subject was dramatically lower than, with approximately 60 students. Similarly, the quantity of men studying Economics outnumbered women, with 150 and around 70, correspondingly. Meanwhile, engineering was the least prevalent subject, with just over 51 undergraduates stuyding in both genders.
Đề:
The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
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The provided bar chart depicts the number of female and male undergraduates sele...
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Question: The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.
Answer:
The line diagram illustrates the proportion of consumers of the Internet in the USA, Canada and Mexico in the period of a decade/ ten years.
Overall, There was a steadily increasing tendency of Internet Users in all countries. The rank of the percentages of population who used technology devices to Internet access experienced a significant fluctuation between these countries.
As can be seen from the graph, the Internet was more popular in the USA than in Canada and Mexico in 1999 and continued to increase. However, the percentage of internet users in Canada was in the 2nd rank in 1999, then it rose to as much as percentages of the USA in 2002, exceeded completely and peaked in the final year.
Compared with two other countries, the proportion of the population who used the internet in Mexico was at least in the first year. Although it had a increased tendency, this percentages was the similar in 1999, it was still the fewest figure after ten years, in 2009.
Question: The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.
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The line diagram illustrates the proportion of consumers of the...
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Question: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned the future development of the site
Answer: The diagrams illustrate the improvement plan for the industrial town of Norbition in the future.
Overall, the town will be experienced significant changes, such as all manufacturing will be replaced with housing, and a bridge, and some factors which serve residents' lives will appear.
There will be an appearance of the housing area with some facilities, such as the playground, school, and medical center will be added in the east of the main roundabout which will be stayed the same. Besides, the small roundabout will be built on the bottom road.
On the west of the main roundabout, they will build a road leading to another housing and add a shop bottom of this road. A bridge that leads from this roundabout to the housing on the other side of the river will be built on the area of the old farmland. This farmland will be relocated to the northeast area.
Question: The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned the future development of the site
Answer: The diagrams illustrate the improvement plan for the industrial town...
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many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. however, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, because of the development of modern technology, many employees can work from their home. Some individual believe that this change may only bring advantage for workers, not the employers. I completely agree with this idea owing to several reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, working from home can be benefit for workers. The first reason is that, because they do not use means of transport to such as motorbike, bus, subway to move to company, workers can save on travel costs. As a result, they can spend the money that they earn to charity or entertainment. Furthermore, since employee do not have to distracted by others and a more comfortable work environment, this increased the productivity of work load. For example, many companies in Vietnam allow their workers working remotely, in order able to focus their task and complete them in a shorter amount of time.
At the same time, allowing employee working from home may lead to some problems to employers. Firstly, because of the lack of supervision, employers cannot manage and control their staff, this negative effect on productivity of work. Secondly, due to remote work can leads to communication challenge, employee may struggle communicate with their college and their superior. If there is no conversation between worker and superior, their work may have some mistake that could influence their productivity and their company.
In conclusion, i am the opinion that using modern technology to work remotely could bring effective workers but contrast to employers.
many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. however, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The table enumerates the data about railway traveling in the UK, USA, Japan and Italy in 2007. Overall, Japan became the leading country in terms of train usage, traveling distance, and cargo carried. On the contrary, this means of transportation is the least popular one in the USA compared with the other countries, ranked last in terms of all three categories.
Obviously, the Japanese accounted for 27% of worldwide train users in 2007, which was 90 times as many as those in the USA. Furthermore, each individual traveled up to 1,980 kilometers on average and carried around 23.01 billion tons of cargo in the year surveyed. Meanwhile, trains were uncommon in the USA in 2007. The percentage of Americans who used trains stood at only 0.3%, each passenger traveled merely 80 km, and 2.820 billion tons of luggage were transported.
On the other hand, the British who opted for the railway were responsible for 5.9%, ranked second in the number of train users in 2007. The average traveling distance per head of population was 770 kilometers, carrying 22.2 billion tons of cargo. Similarly, 5.5% of Italians went by train and transported 21.9 billion tons of cargo. Interestingly, each Italian passenger traveled more than the British around 10 kilometers.
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The table enumerates the data about railway traveling in the UK, USA, Japan and Italy in 2007. Overall, Japan became the leading country in terms of train usage, traveling distance, and cargo...
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Đề: The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the average development of local products in rich countries, global countries, and non-global countries.
Overall, the average growth of national products in well-off countries experienced a dramatic decrease during the period, whilst the percentage of universal nations rose rapidly. Another highlight is that non-globalizers witnessed a fluctuation in the ratio of domestic product growth from the 1960s to the 1990s.
In the 1960s, prosperous countries took up the largest portion of the three surveyed kinds of countries (4.8%), followed by a downward trend in the subsequent years. The rate of this kind of nation dropped to nearly half at 2.9% in the 1970s; rose around 1.7% compared with the previous decade and finally stood at 2% after three decades. Meanwhile, worldwide nations’ growth in local goods accounted for 2% in the 1960s, making these countries the smallest manufacturers among the three categories. Then the proportion was succeeded by an upswing in the following years with 2.8% in the next decades, standing at 3.4% ten years later. Finally, this category’s rate peaked at nearly 5% after thirty years, which ranked it as the top local goods producer.
In addition, non-globalizers made up around 2.4% of the average development of locally made products in the 1960s, then climbed slightly to 3.2% in the next 10 years. This rate then fell to a low of 0.8% in 1980, gently rising approximately 0.6% in comparison with the preceding decade, ranked third in terms of progress after 30 years.
Đề: The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.
Summarize the informatio...
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Topic: The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008
The picture illustrates the changes that took place in a museum between 1998 and 2008.
Overall, the museum has witnessed various transformations, most notably with the addition of a new restaurant and the relocation of certain rooms.
In 1998, there was merely a garden in the middle of the museum. Above this was a café surrounded by permanent exhibition rooms. Moving to the southern area of the garden, the tickets entrance/exit zone was located in the middle of a temporary exhibition room and a shop. Located in the southeast corner of the museum were a WC and a room to keep bags and coats of the visitors. Concerning the west and east of the museum, there were permanent exhibition rooms.
10 years later, there was a reconstruction to the left of the museum. To be precise, the shop and the room for bags and coats were shifted to the south west corner and the temporary exhibition room was moved northwards. In addition, a new restaurant was introduced to the left side of the café and the WC was also recolated to its right side. Finally, the garden was decorated with fountains and a café sitting area was also built on the garden to cater to visitors.
Topic: The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008
The picture illustrates the changes that took place in a museum between 1998 and 2008.
Overall, the...
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Đề:
Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society?
Bài làm:
At present, many individuals tend to spend more and more time outside of society instead of using those valuable times with family. This article will point out of some of the major reasons why this is happening, such as a huge volume of works and taking part in academic activities, and discuss a few problems caused by this phenomenon, including alleviating the relationships among family members and environmental contamination.
There are several reasons leading to this trend. Firstly, the first one is that people have to complete a large amount of works. In fact, people not only must do their works on office hours, but also work overtime. As an example, in Vietnam, many white-collar workers spend most of their evening time to go to their work. Additionally, in terms of students, the extra curriculum is an issue. Many parents currently desire their children to success academically, which is why forcing them take private lessons. For instance, the Vietnamese students have to study for 5 hours at school, as well as more than 3 hours taken extra classes in training institutions. Therefore, spending more time at home becomes a luxury.
Despite this, this phenomenon has several negative impacts on each individual and society. Firstly, bonds between family members will be broken. Less time at home is equivalent to less time for family, and therefore children will be negatively affected due to living secluded from their parents. To illustrate, many offsprings have grown up without parental love, which is why they are more susceptible to emotional problems, including low self-esteem. In addition, the environment will be seriously polluted. Spending most of the time outside means that citizens utilize private vehicles more, which triggers environment-related air. In Vietnam, for example, each inhabitant possesses a petrol-powered motorbike, which emits a huge amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. As a result, the quality of people’s lives will be dramatically declined.
In summary, there are two causes of spending less time at home, such as many works and academic classes, and some effects on citizens and society, namely declining relationships between family members and environmental pollution. It seems to me that parents should pay more attention to their children and teach them thoroughly.
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Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society?
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At present, many individuals tend to sp...
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Đề bài: The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table illustrates a comparison of the percentage of women working as a part of workforce and managerial positions in five nations including Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan and United States.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of female workers across all nation is consistent with the exception of Egypt. Regarding women as a managerial position, the highest number is concentrated on Australia and United States, while the opposite was true for other countries.
In terms of workforce, Japan has the highest proportion of women, at 48%, followed by the United States at 46%. The figures for Australia and Sri Lanka are lower, at 42% and 41% respectively. However, Egypt has the lowest proportion of women in its workforce, standing at only 20%.
Turning to managerial level, while number of female managers accounts for nearly a half for the total of men for Australia and United States. In Egypt and Sri Lanka, only one-tenth of women are working at this level. In the meantime, Japanese make up 17% of the labour force.
Đề bài: The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
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Đề: It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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Recently, some people believe that having some risky choices is extremely crucial and gives more benefits than drawbacks. Personally, I support the point that taking risks will give more positives.
On the one hand, If people go out of their safety area, it will give them some negatives. Firstly, they can't control the things that come with them. For example, there is a trend that many people choose to get out of their work to create their own businesses, in the worst case, they will lose and fall to unemployment. Secondly, if they can't overcome the risks, it will make the quality of their life decrease and lead to mental health issues.
On the other hand, having risky actions will bring many advantages. Firstly, this choice will help people improve their skills, have more experiences, and perfect themselves. For example, if a person can't swim and decides to overcome their fear, they can have more of a skill that is helpful for their life. Secondly, Going out of their comfort zone is a measure to check their capacity including their virtues and drawbacks. For instance, people who try to participate/ take part in many competitions beyond their intelligence, they will have more opportunities to widen new knowledge which they have never known before. Finally, they will know their current ability, and make more efforts. From there, they will successfully achieve their goal, such as a dream career, life balance.
In conclusion, although risky actions have many negative sides, I strongly believe that the benefits of this issue outweigh the drawbacks. However, people should carefully consider before making their decision to take risks.
Đề: It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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Recently, some peo...
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Đề:
The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.
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The provided line graph depicts the rate of people in Africa who subscribed to mobile and fixed-line phones during the interval of 10 years starting from 1994.
In summary, there were upward trends in the proportion of subscribers in both mobile and fixed-line phones over the given period. Additionally, while fixed-line phones were the common choice at the beginning of the period, mobiles were dramatically popular than at the end of the period.
In 1994, the percentage of African inhabitants subscribing to fixed-line phones accounted for 1.7%, which was higher than the figure for those using mobiles, at 0.06%. From that time on, both types of phone subscription increased and accounted for approximately 2.9% in 2001.
In 2002, the proportion of fixed-line subscribers stood at about 4.5%, which surpassed the figure for those using mobiles, occupying about 3%. The period between 2002 and 2004 witnessed a significant rise in the rate of mobile users, reaching a peak of 8.8%, compared to 3.1% for those using fixed-line phones in the final year.
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The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.
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The provided line graph depicts the rate of people in Africa...
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Topic : Some people claim that shopping online does them a lot of good. Others think otherwise, claiming that it causes them a lot of trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that electronic shopping has come with a great deal of benefits while other consider that more trouble has arisen in e-tailing. Despile some problems, I firmly hold the belief that online shopping is beneficial in making people's life easier.
On the one hand some people arguing that home- shopping brings trouble contend that this means no inspection before paying for them. The quality of the items may not meet our expectation since there are probable differences to how they appear in
pictures. In particular, a woman with honey skin tone may be irritated when the dress ordered is scarlet instead of being in rosewood color. However, if people choose offline shopping, they can have opportunities to look at them in real life and also test ther quality. As a consequence, shopping at home by our smart phone can lead to unexpected goods.
On the other hand, other state that shopping online is less time-consuming, which is advantageous for working adults or parents with small childhen. People can reduce time by not being exposed to traffic congestion or travelling to different stores for distinct items. Instead, they can purchase a range of goods by their own smart phone and get them delivered to home. This particular true of moms with new born babies, who are required to stay at home 24/7, can easily do shopping online without having to deal with the hassle of going to busy high street. Therefore, a main benefit of e-tailing is saving time.
In conclusion, both views have valid points, however, I strongly believe that despite some downturns, electronic shopping is absolutely an ingenious idea in this era if people make use of it in an appropriate way.
Topic : Some people claim that shopping online does them a lot of good. Others think otherwise, claiming that it causes them a lot of trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people ar...
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Question: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In today’s society, there is a widely debate on whether national zoos are suitable for all animals. A number of individuals argue that keeping animals in the zoos poses significant threats to their health, while others state that zoos play an essential role in saving wild animals from the hunters. From my perspective, I believe that the zoos are crucial for animals and shouldn’t be closed down.
On one hand, keeping the wild animals in the zoos means that they completely lose their freedom. The wild animals are accustomed to the spacious spaces where they can freely go hunting and find their mates. As a consequence of sending the animals to the zoos, they will have the feelings of stress and isolation, which will exacerbate their mental health and illnessess. Moreover, the shift of environment and food sources can result in damage to animals’ physical health. According to the Forbes, there are 30% of wild animals living in the zoos causing some symptoms of sicknesses due to the changes of habitats and food sources, hence bringing more adverse effects to their life expectancy.
On the other hand, the national zoos are really important in terms of protecting wild animals from multiple threats. Because the hunters are primarily targetting all wild animals for business or discovering their mechanisms, which is detrimental to their lifespans. By overhunting, numerous wild animals are having life-threatening injuries or worse, become extincted, which will negatively effects the wildlife and the food chain as well. Furthermore, the highly demand on unsustainable goods and medication result in the high rates of overhunting. For instance, multiple global brands such as Prada, Chanel use wild animals’ furs for manufacturing clothes and bags. This problem will damage their physical health and the reduction in life expectancy of some wild species.
In conclusion, although there are various of immerse impacts when keeping the wild animals in the zoos such as mental and physical health, I believe that the advantages have brought to the wild species outweigh the threats in terms of protecting animals from overhunting.
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