Tạo tài khoản Pombeebee để đăng câu hỏi và được giáo viên hướng dẫn.
LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Topic: The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008
The picture illustrates the changes that took place in a museum between 1998 and 2008.
Overall, the museum has witnessed various transformations, most notably with the addition of a new restaurant and the relocation of certain rooms.
In 1998, there was merely a garden in the middle of the museum. Above this was a café surrounded by permanent exhibition rooms. Moving to the southern area of the garden, the tickets entrance/exit zone was located in the middle of a temporary exhibition room and a shop. Located in the southeast corner of the museum were a WC and a room to keep bags and coats of the visitors. Concerning the west and east of the museum, there were permanent exhibition rooms.
10 years later, there was a reconstruction to the left of the museum. To be precise, the shop and the room for bags and coats were shifted to the south west corner and the temporary exhibition room was moved northwards. In addition, a new restaurant was introduced to the left side of the café and the WC was also recolated to its right side. Finally, the garden was decorated with fountains and a café sitting area was also built on the garden to cater to visitors.
Topic: The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008
The picture illustrates the changes that took place in a museum between 1998 and 2008.
Overall, the...
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Đề:
Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society?
Bài làm:
At present, many individuals tend to spend more and more time outside of society instead of using those valuable times with family. This article will point out of some of the major reasons why this is happening, such as a huge volume of works and taking part in academic activities, and discuss a few problems caused by this phenomenon, including alleviating the relationships among family members and environmental contamination.
There are several reasons leading to this trend. Firstly, the first one is that people have to complete a large amount of works. In fact, people not only must do their works on office hours, but also work overtime. As an example, in Vietnam, many white-collar workers spend most of their evening time to go to their work. Additionally, in terms of students, the extra curriculum is an issue. Many parents currently desire their children to success academically, which is why forcing them take private lessons. For instance, the Vietnamese students have to study for 5 hours at school, as well as more than 3 hours taken extra classes in training institutions. Therefore, spending more time at home becomes a luxury.
Despite this, this phenomenon has several negative impacts on each individual and society. Firstly, bonds between family members will be broken. Less time at home is equivalent to less time for family, and therefore children will be negatively affected due to living secluded from their parents. To illustrate, many offsprings have grown up without parental love, which is why they are more susceptible to emotional problems, including low self-esteem. In addition, the environment will be seriously polluted. Spending most of the time outside means that citizens utilize private vehicles more, which triggers environment-related air. In Vietnam, for example, each inhabitant possesses a petrol-powered motorbike, which emits a huge amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. As a result, the quality of people’s lives will be dramatically declined.
In summary, there are two causes of spending less time at home, such as many works and academic classes, and some effects on citizens and society, namely declining relationships between family members and environmental pollution. It seems to me that parents should pay more attention to their children and teach them thoroughly.
Đề:
Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society?
Bài làm:
At present, many individuals tend to sp...
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Đề bài: The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Bài làm:
The given table illustrates a comparison of the percentage of women working as a part of workforce and managerial positions in five nations including Australia, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan and United States.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of female workers across all nation is consistent with the exception of Egypt. Regarding women as a managerial position, the highest number is concentrated on Australia and United States, while the opposite was true for other countries.
In terms of workforce, Japan has the highest proportion of women, at 48%, followed by the United States at 46%. The figures for Australia and Sri Lanka are lower, at 42% and 41% respectively. However, Egypt has the lowest proportion of women in its workforce, standing at only 20%.
Turning to managerial level, while number of female managers accounts for nearly a half for the total of men for Australia and United States. In Egypt and Sri Lanka, only one-tenth of women are working at this level. In the meantime, Japanese make up 17% of the labour force.
Đề bài: The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.
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Đề: It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài làm
Recently, some people believe that having some risky choices is extremely crucial and gives more benefits than drawbacks. Personally, I support the point that taking risks will give more positives.
On the one hand, If people go out of their safety area, it will give them some negatives. Firstly, they can't control the things that come with them. For example, there is a trend that many people choose to get out of their work to create their own businesses, in the worst case, they will lose and fall to unemployment. Secondly, if they can't overcome the risks, it will make the quality of their life decrease and lead to mental health issues.
On the other hand, having risky actions will bring many advantages. Firstly, this choice will help people improve their skills, have more experiences, and perfect themselves. For example, if a person can't swim and decides to overcome their fear, they can have more of a skill that is helpful for their life. Secondly, Going out of their comfort zone is a measure to check their capacity including their virtues and drawbacks. For instance, people who try to participate/ take part in many competitions beyond their intelligence, they will have more opportunities to widen new knowledge which they have never known before. Finally, they will know their current ability, and make more efforts. From there, they will successfully achieve their goal, such as a dream career, life balance.
In conclusion, although risky actions have many negative sides, I strongly believe that the benefits of this issue outweigh the drawbacks. However, people should carefully consider before making their decision to take risks.
Đề: It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Bài làm
Recently, some peo...
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Đề:
The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.
Bài làm:
The provided line graph depicts the rate of people in Africa who subscribed to mobile and fixed-line phones during the interval of 10 years starting from 1994.
In summary, there were upward trends in the proportion of subscribers in both mobile and fixed-line phones over the given period. Additionally, while fixed-line phones were the common choice at the beginning of the period, mobiles were dramatically popular than at the end of the period.
In 1994, the percentage of African inhabitants subscribing to fixed-line phones accounted for 1.7%, which was higher than the figure for those using mobiles, at 0.06%. From that time on, both types of phone subscription increased and accounted for approximately 2.9% in 2001.
In 2002, the proportion of fixed-line subscribers stood at about 4.5%, which surpassed the figure for those using mobiles, occupying about 3%. The period between 2002 and 2004 witnessed a significant rise in the rate of mobile users, reaching a peak of 8.8%, compared to 3.1% for those using fixed-line phones in the final year.
Đề:
The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.
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Topic : Some people claim that shopping online does them a lot of good. Others think otherwise, claiming that it causes them a lot of trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that electronic shopping has come with a great deal of benefits while other consider that more trouble has arisen in e-tailing. Despile some problems, I firmly hold the belief that online shopping is beneficial in making people's life easier.
On the one hand some people arguing that home- shopping brings trouble contend that this means no inspection before paying for them. The quality of the items may not meet our expectation since there are probable differences to how they appear in
pictures. In particular, a woman with honey skin tone may be irritated when the dress ordered is scarlet instead of being in rosewood color. However, if people choose offline shopping, they can have opportunities to look at them in real life and also test ther quality. As a consequence, shopping at home by our smart phone can lead to unexpected goods.
On the other hand, other state that shopping online is less time-consuming, which is advantageous for working adults or parents with small childhen. People can reduce time by not being exposed to traffic congestion or travelling to different stores for distinct items. Instead, they can purchase a range of goods by their own smart phone and get them delivered to home. This particular true of moms with new born babies, who are required to stay at home 24/7, can easily do shopping online without having to deal with the hassle of going to busy high street. Therefore, a main benefit of e-tailing is saving time.
In conclusion, both views have valid points, however, I strongly believe that despite some downturns, electronic shopping is absolutely an ingenious idea in this era if people make use of it in an appropriate way.
Topic : Some people claim that shopping online does them a lot of good. Others think otherwise, claiming that it causes them a lot of trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Question: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In today’s society, there is a widely debate on whether national zoos are suitable for all animals. A number of individuals argue that keeping animals in the zoos poses significant threats to their health, while others state that zoos play an essential role in saving wild animals from the hunters. From my perspective, I believe that the zoos are crucial for animals and shouldn’t be closed down.
On one hand, keeping the wild animals in the zoos means that they completely lose their freedom. The wild animals are accustomed to the spacious spaces where they can freely go hunting and find their mates. As a consequence of sending the animals to the zoos, they will have the feelings of stress and isolation, which will exacerbate their mental health and illnessess. Moreover, the shift of environment and food sources can result in damage to animals’ physical health. According to the Forbes, there are 30% of wild animals living in the zoos causing some symptoms of sicknesses due to the changes of habitats and food sources, hence bringing more adverse effects to their life expectancy.
On the other hand, the national zoos are really important in terms of protecting wild animals from multiple threats. Because the hunters are primarily targetting all wild animals for business or discovering their mechanisms, which is detrimental to their lifespans. By overhunting, numerous wild animals are having life-threatening injuries or worse, become extincted, which will negatively effects the wildlife and the food chain as well. Furthermore, the highly demand on unsustainable goods and medication result in the high rates of overhunting. For instance, multiple global brands such as Prada, Chanel use wild animals’ furs for manufacturing clothes and bags. This problem will damage their physical health and the reduction in life expectancy of some wild species.
In conclusion, although there are various of immerse impacts when keeping the wild animals in the zoos such as mental and physical health, I believe that the advantages have brought to the wild species outweigh the threats in terms of protecting animals from overhunting.
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Đề: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of taking self-portraits using a coin-operated photo booth. Overall, there are several steps to create a photo and it will be ready within one minute.
On the outside of the booth, there is a slit above the buttons working as an insertion of coins. Additionally, it is issued in sets of four buttons. There are two buttons above that let us choose 1 large format or four passport-sized photos. Once a large format button is pressed, the booth produces one big portrait. Similarly, if people choose a passport-sized button, it will release four small photos. The two below buttons allow us to opt for color or black and white portraits. It must be a color photo if the passport-sized option is selected. On top of that, there is a tray below the buttons for photo delivery, from which a self-portrait is ready to receive within sixty seconds.
Inside the booth, there is a chair with an adjustable tool allowing us to adjust our eyes so that they are level with the center points among the four arrows’ direction. Also, we can use the mirror above to check our appearance before taking photos. The curtain must be closed during the process of taking a photo. After that, once ready, we can pull the switch to activate the camera. Next, we wait for a light single flash after three seconds and the photo will be printed and released from the tray within one minute.
Đề: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where...
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Đề:
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
Bài làm:
The provided table gives information about the number of visitors traveling in overseas countries in different parts of the world and the total of those between 1990 and 2005.
In summary, there was an upward trend in the number of international travelers over the given period. While Europe accounted for the largest number of people travelled internationally, the opposite was true for the Middle East.
In 1990, over 280.2 million Europeans travelled internationally, followed by Americans and people from Asia and the pacific, with 80.5 million and 60.2 million, respectively. Africans accounted for 18.2 million people in the total of international visitors, while the figure for the Middle East was just half about that, with 9.8 million people.
Over the following 15 years, the number of Europeans visiting foreign nations went up dramatically and reached the peak of 400.2 million in 2005. The similar pattern was recorded in those from Asia and the pacific, reaching the highest at 135.8 million in 2005. Meanwhile, the number of America visitors peaked at 118.2 million in 2003, after which it dropped slightly to 113.2 million in 2005. The figures for remaining regions also rose gradually over the period, with Africa people standing at 18.2 million, and those from the Middle East, 15.8 million. The period 1990 and 2005 witneesed a significant increase in the total of people who travelled internationally, from 448.9 million to 693.7 million
Đề:
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
Bài làm:
The provided table gives information about the number of visitors t...
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The two maps compare changes that took place in a town from 1995 to now.
Overall, there were dramatic changes in the facilities of the town. There has been an extra golf and two tennis courts, whereas fishing port on the sea disappeared.
The number of houses of housing area has increased slightly in the north-west and the road leading to the housing area has extended westward. In the northeastern corner of the town, farmland and forest park have been destroyed and replaced by golf course and two tennis courts.
Along the road that running from west to east of the town, shops have been transformed into restaurants and hotel which has built extra a car park has stayed unchanged its old location. Opposite to the hotel has been café shop which has remained unchanged. The significant changes in the south of the town have been that apartments have been placed in the old fish market and the fishing port disappeared.
The two maps compare changes that took place in a town from 1995 to now.
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Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the majority of recruiters are targeting soft skills as many people consider that interpersonal skills are always followed by formal qualifications. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint.
Soft skills can bring many benefits in terms of communication in business. To begin with, it is a necessary skill to improve cooperative teamwork and enhance their relationship. This means staff requires well-behaved in the situation and good communication in the workplace. Thereby, employees can have more faith in colleges and open up a range of career opportunities. In addition, their working life is more meaningful because they are exposed to various working environments, broadening their professional acumen and expanding their network of contacts as a result of interacting with their surroundings. Thus, this approach may be suitable for owning interpersonal skills.
Admittedly, there are some plausible reasons why both soft skills and high degrees are crucial. Firstly, employees getting high qualifications can climb the career ladder with a clear prospect and promotion path. This is why enterprises want to receive a person with excellent credentials because staff have the opportunity to get a job easily. Moreover, they can instill a sense of security and financial stability, which means helping them advance faster in their career path. Additionally, having a diverse background can make them attractive candidates for a higher-paid position and. Therefore, staff have good skills and backgrounds that they can truly bring value to the organization.
In conclusion, there are benefits to both social skills and good qualifications in terms of career success. In my view, I totally agree with this point of view.
Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countries between 1974 and 2004.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates consumption volumes of fish, chicken, lamb, and beef in European countries from 1974 to 2004. Overall, the consumption of chicken increased dramatically, while the amount of lamb, and beef decreased moderately. In addition, the figure for beef and chicken were consumed the most during the period.
In terms of chicken, beginning at approximately 150 grams, a gradual increase trend to 200 grams was seen in chicken consumption in 1989. From 1989 to 2004 the consumption of chicken was higher than that of others. After sharply increasing, the figure for chicken reached its highest point in 2004, at 250 grams. In 1979, Europeans consumed beef the most popular, approximately 220 grams. After dropping by 50 grams, beef consumption marked a turning point in 1984. From 1989 to 2004, beef consumption was at the second rank.
Regarding lamb, Europeans consumed lamb was as popular as chicken, reaching a peak at nearly 150 grams. Lamb consumption experienced a steady decrease during the period, hitting a trough at approximately 70 grams in 2004. The figure for fish remained stable during almost the period around 50 grams, a half of lamb in 1989.
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countries between 1974 and 2004.
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Task 1: Bar Chart (The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012
The graph illustrates four dairy merchandises (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) were manufactured by top three producers in the world in 2012.
Overall, the EU is the country that manufactured the most milk and cheese, while India and China witnessed the highest figure for butter and milk powder. The production of milk always the most popular item in three countries.
The figure for milk was the highest in three countries, at 142,790 metric tons, followed by the production of milk in india and United State, at 127,000 and 90,038 metric tons, respectively. Regarding cheese production, EU continued to lead at 7,120, which was higher than that of milk production in United State, at 2195 metric tons. The figure for milk manufacture is the lowest, at 700 metric tons.
7500 the production of milk metric tons were created in India, which was quadruple than that of milk production in EU. Far below was the US, creating just around 800 metric tons. With milk powder production, country on the top namely China, at 1200 metric tons, which was similar to that of dairy product in New zealand ( 1110 metric tons) . There was 810 metric tons of milk powder product manufactured by United States.
Task 1: Bar Chart (The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012
The graph illus...
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The use of social media, such as twitter and Facebook, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in their everyday life.
Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In this day and age, the internet has been playing a pivotal role in the way people contact each other. The application of social platforms including Twitter and Facebook has been substituting face-to-face interaction on a daily basis. Although using social networks has some negative aspects, I consider that its benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, one of the drawbacks of social media is that it is detrimental to face-to-face interaction. In fact, when people spend an excessive amount of time on social networks, they will be prone to separating themselves from other activities like hanging out with friends, engaging in conversation, thus adversely affecting their personal relationships.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits of social media are more remarkable. First and foremost, social networking sites can enable people to connect with others on a global scale. For instance, the rapid development of various apps like Twitter, Facebook, Instagram can make it easier for individuals to send messages, post pictures and videos to interact with people over a long distance. Additionally, social media could also be advantageous to students and teachers. This can be exemplified by the fact that in the outbreak of Covid-19, teachers can conduct online teaching for their children through learning apps, such as Zoom, Microsoft Teams, etc which might be more convenient in comparison with traditional teaching.
In conclusion, although overrelying on social media can be adverse to interpersonal interaction, I support that its advantages are more outstanding, as internet can facilitate communication and distance learning.
The use of social media, such as twitter and Facebook, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in their everyday life.
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Đề: The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
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It has traditionally been a practice for a close-knit family to share their leisure time dining together. However, this tradition seems to be less prevalent in today's society. This essay will shed light on the factors and analyze some feasible drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are three possible causes that result in this shift. First and foremost, diverse food preferences can pose a significant challenge. In fact, a family that includes vegetarians or individuals who are on a diet can find it challenging to have meals together with other members, who pursue a scrumptious one with a traditional mix of meat, fish, and vegetables. Moreover, the overwhelming workload and study can discourage people from sharing meals. For example, adults with nine-to-five jobs, as do the children with extra classes in the evenings may struggle to find a mutual schedule, which can impose a restriction on their quality time. Furthermore, individual temptations can be a significant contributing factor. Notably, kids are likely to be engrossed in their favorite TV cartoons, while fathers might be inclined to socialize over drinks with colleagues and friends, resulting in isolation during meal times.
On the other hand, I firmly believe this issue may take a toll on the family's relationship. A prime impact can be mentioned is a weakening of family bonds. Admittedly, meals undeniably foster quality time. Indeed, it is when all members gather and nurture their relationships with near and dear ones. Without this part, their bonds are likely to be loosened. Another primary drawback of this is the potential development of poor manners in children. During their formative years, parents play a crucial role in shaping their kids’ personalities by teaching them how to behave when they’re guests, as well as how to express hospitality when friends or relatives visit. Thus, children who do not frequently share meals with their parents are likely to cultivate these poor manners.
In conclusion, shifts in family dynamics can be attributed to various causes. I constantly advocate for members to encourage each other to spend their leisure time together, which can not only strengthen family bonds but also contribute to the cultivation of proper personalities in children.
Đề: The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
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It has traditionally been a practice for a close-knit family to share...
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Đề bài: The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The provided line graphs illustrate the development occurring in the proportion of families with electrical devices and the number of weekly hours spent on housework in a specific nation over a period of under 100 years commencing in 1920.
Overall, it is noticeable that there was an increase in the overall percentage of households owning electrical appliances. with the figures for fridge and vacucum cleaner witnessed wilder growths while a slighter upward trend was seen in the case of washing machine. However, an opposite trend was witnessed in the number of hours of household per week during the timeframe.
In 1920, people did not use vacuum cleaners for cleaning in their house. However, the percentage of families using a vacuum cleaner rocketed to 90% in the following four decades, before stabilizing around 100% from 1980 to 2019. For households owning refrigerators, the figure initially stood at 30%, followed by a remarkable rise, reaching its highest point of 100% in 2000 and remained stable in the final year. Meanwhile, the figure for washing machine began at 40%, seeing a marginal fluctuation prior to recording its highest point of over 70% in the end.
Nevertheless, the number of weekly hours utilized in housework experienced a significant drop, from 50 hours per week in the beginning to 10 hours by the end of the timeframe.
Đề bài: The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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Topic: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The given maps illustrate the development occuring in the design of a public library for the past 20 years.
Overall, it is noticeable that the library experienced various significant alterations in its layout over a period of 2 decades. The most prominent of which were the modifications of some reading facilities. Further changes have also been made to tables and chairs.
In the previous 20 years, there was a couple round tables surrounded by chairs located in the center of the library. In the bottom right-hand corner of the building housed an enquiry desk, which was opposite to a section for reading newspapers and magazines. On both sides of tables and chairs, adult fiction books and adult non-fiction books were arranged, while the upper right and left corners were designated for children’s books and multimedia materials such as CDs, video games and computer games, respectively.
Nowadays, the library has undergone some remarkable changes. Notably, the old tables and chairs have been removed, creating a more spacious space. The enquiry desk has been transformed into a coffee shop, while the reading room in the left corner has also been converted into a computer room. Furthermore, the children’s books has been replaced with a new lecture room, and the space between it and the café is an information desk, flanked by self-service machines and adult fiction books. Finally, the former multimedia room has been expanded to a brand new room consisting of storytelling events, children fiction books and two L-shaped sofas, to its south lay a section for all reference books.
Topic: The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The given maps illustrate the development occuring in the design of a public library for the pas...
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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are widely differing views on what progress is the most crucial objective, while various governments considering that economic development is pivotally important, some other individuals deeming that other kinds of development might play a vital role as well. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before concluding that the latter is more favorable.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that developing economy is an important goal, given that it can positively affect human's quality of life. More precisely, an increase in national budget resulting from economic progress could make it easier for governments to invest the money in a range of aspects, such as education, healthcare, entertainment, etc, thus improving people's quality of life.
On the other hands, I believe that there are some other objectives which are also indispensable to a nation. First and foremost, development of digital technology should be encouraged because of its multifunction in society. For instance, with the advent of AI technology, scientists can find it convenient to do scientific research and come up with new ideas, meanwhile, robotic machines can enable doctors to create precise prescriptions to treat patients, which could contribute to national development. Furthermore, progress in military is another important goal for a sake of protecting a country. In fact, development of military could provide a nation with strong defense to shelter people from different threats including crimes, invasion, terrorism. Therefore, it also plays a pivotal role in developing a country.
In conclusion, although government consider economic progress as their most vital objective, I support that the multifunctional purpose of technology and protecting people by improving miltary are equally important.
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
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Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamor and wealth than for their achievement, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, superstars are more well-known for their lavish lifestyle than for their outstanding achievement. This will have an influence on the younger generation. In my view, despite this viewpoint being practical,. I do not completely agree with it.
Admittedly, there are some plausible reasons why some famous people are a bad sample for the youth. To begin with, they can easily mislead young people about their wealth. In fact, they are not quite outstanding about their achievement but they often live in huge mansions, drive supercars and wear expensive clothes, which makes the youth get into the habit of spending unnecessary things and imitating the actions of superstars. In addition, the younger generation tends to find cosmetic surgery places in order to take care of themselves. This means they can have a subjective lifestyle and lead to bad results in school. Therefore, these problems are serious enough to interfere with the young.
In spite of downsides, the benefits are more significant. Firstly, superstars are followed by luxurious lifestyles but they have to overcome a hard time to gain the status in society. Therefore, a famous individual can inspire the youth to gain more valuable experience and useful lessons. Moreover, many celebrities tend to help the poor people because they are unable to overcome mental health conditions, which enables contributing a great deal of money in order to provide daily living habits. Besides, superstars can tell significant positive stories for people and raise awareness, which enables the youth ways to behave with other people in the community. Thus, these kinds of celebrities are worth being followed by the young people.
In conclusion, although the wealth of famous people may affect the youth, they also can create positive stories for everyone. In my view, I do not totally agree with this point of view.
Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamor and wealth than for their achievement, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Question: Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern society, criminals become a significant concern for debating in the large scale. Number of individuals argue that applying education and career training courses for the lawbreakers will be more efficiency than sending them to prison. Despite of some drawbacks it might causes, I believe that the advantages outweigh the downsides and this essay will analyze my viewpoint.
On the one hand, it could be dentrimental to the society if the criminals are available from the prison sentences. The crime offenders who find unsatisfied with the governments and the regulations will relapse into the crime without regretting of their faults, excerbates to the residents’ safety. Nevertheless, if the authorities implemented the appropriate educational programs for the criminals, it might enhances the criminals’ attitudes and behaviours towards society. The compelling reason for committing a crime is due to the lacks of education and social appreciation. Thereby, the governments should support subtantial opportunities for the offenders enrolling to the social activities, such as charity.
Moreover, the symptoms of depression and stress are witnessed in most criminals. It is well – documented that the crime offenders are sentimental because of numerous problems. For instance, most criminals worldwide have sufferred from family issues which leading to the downsides of their personal traits. By providing education programs, the lawbreakers’ academic level could be improved as well as deterring them from negative emotions and behaviours. Furthermore, it is reasonable for the criminals to access the vocational training courses. The feeling of isolation and less appreciation from the society bring difficulties in seeking jobs for the lawbreakers. Therefor, the career training plays a vital role in enhancing their life quality and occupation opportunity which results in the diminishing number of crime offenders.
In conclusion, it is neccessary to provide education programs and career training courses for the criminals instead of giving prison sentences. It will benefits not only for the lawbreakers’ life quality but also brings more advantages to the society by engaging in the social activities.
Question: Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern society, criminals become a s...
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