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Lee Wenyong
9/7/2024
CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêmKakakkkaa
5/12/2023
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Đề thi More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative progression? Bài làm: An increasing number of individuals are willing to invest considerable financial resources in their appearances with the aim of looking younger. In this essay, I will point out some of the major reasons why this is happening, and I believe that this trend will provide benefits, such as the development of the job market and promoting a culture of self-care and well-being. There are some several reasons why people want to look younger. First of all, a youthful appearance can contribute to confidence and success. By investing in skincare and cosmetics, people can enhance their images and promote a more optimistic and confident mindset. To illustrate, in large businesses, directors need to maintain a youthful look, resulting in increased self-esteem and confidence, helping them become an excellent leadership. Additionally, individuals with an eye-catching appearance can enhance their employment opportunities. In fact, initial impression in the eyes of other people can indicate what kind of person you are how. For example, in an interview for a job, people with attractive appearance constantly leave a positive first impression for the interviewer, which increases their employment opportunity. Therefore, the quest for a more youthful appearance becomes a means to achieve social acceptance and foster a positive self-image. The primary advantage is that the development of cosmetic industry contributes to the job market. Plenty of citizens tend to purchase cosmetic, beauty products, meaning that the sales of cosmetic corporations have significantly increased, which requires them recruit more workers. Many cosmetic companies in Vietnam, for example, tend to attract newly-graduate students to work for them. A further benefit is that citizens become more attentive to their health. Individuals engaging in skincare routines and cosmetic enhancements tend to adopt healthier lifestyle choices. This approach enhances people’s awareness about their well-being, the importance of maintaining a balanced lifestyle and self-care, fostering a positive and proactive attitude towards their well-being. As an example, people’s lives would be significantly improved and become more positive. In conclusion, there are two causes of this phenomenon, including promoting a confident attitude and enhancing employment opportunities. I believe that this trend will result in advantages, namely making more jobs for people and fostering self-care and healthy lifestyle. It seems to me that the governments should levy less tax on companies related to skincare, facilitate cosmetic industry development. Đề thi More and more people today are spending large amount of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative prog... Xem thêmLê Bảo
5/12/2023
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The given diagrams illustrate the amount of different types of ddairy production in MT belonging to the top three manufacturers in the world known as EU , India , and the United States in 2012. At the onset , milk production witnessed a reaching the peak over the three remaining s which was parallel with holding the top position by the EU in milk and cheese manufacture.Besides , Asian countries such as India and China dominated the statisticalstatistic table in butter and milk powder fields. According to the details of the graph ,the bottom data belonged to the nation was United States , which sawseen as 90 metric tons which was followed by India withabout 127 metric tons and the leader one was the EU with around 143 2 thousand tons.That was milk product and movinge to the cheese , it one witnessed the maintenance of standing the the first position belonged to by the EU with approximately estimated 7 MT followed by 4,9 MT in the United States and the lowest was Brazil which was one-tenth of the EU. As can be seen , India reached the zenith of butter production with 4.5 MT but later saw the EU around 2 thousand tons in the EU and the significant gap was surveyed in between the quantity of the EU and the United States , around 1.2 MT.It is too obvious that china ranked the top position at 1200MT followed by a negligible gap of 90MT in n , which was similar to the New Zealand’s figure around 1 MT,while around 770 MT was recorded as the data in the EU. The given diagrams illustrate the amount of different types of ddairy production in MT belonging to the top three manufacturers in the world known as EU , India , and the United States in 2012. At th... Xem thêmLê Bảo
5/12/2023
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The given diagrams illustrate the reconstructions in/ taken place in an industrial area/ zone named Norbiton at the present and in the up-coming project. At the onset, this zone goes through substantial upgradations and all of the blocks of factories will be altered by residential areas public places such as educational and commercial or medical purposes , amusements, etc. In terms of the Current design, ly, the roundabout is centrally positioneds holds the center position and which is encircledencircles by the factories.In the north side of map is the farmland , the river behind the river which flows from west to east and divides the zone into two sides, while the town is positioned in the west .Moreover, the external one is considered as a town while the main road is located in south side. As can be seen in the remaining picture, more accomodations and some social sites will be built, which is followed by two new road branches separating the small roundabout into two distinct sides.The nearest factories in south sides of the big roundabout is altered by shops and medical centres.Besides, there is no more factories in west side due to the apearance of entertainments and schools at the end of the road.The dominated one in the west side is still a town with nothing changes,farmland will no longer in a straight line with the big roundabout ,instead of this will belong to housing. The given diagrams illustrate the reconstructions in/ taken place in an industrial area/ zone named Norbiton at the present and in the up-coming project. At the onset, this zone goes through substan... Xem thêmLê Bảo
5/12/2023
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This bar chart describes the proportion of Brazil's economy in five different fields field in industry in three years: 2009, 2019, and 2029. However,in 2029 was just a was the prediction for the future. By and large,the finance provided the highest percentage to build Brazil's economy in the past,which was expected to be the biggest contributor. On the other hand, food processing and manufacturing tended to decline sharply between 2019 and the prediction in 2029. The diagram below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy. It showed me that inIn the domain of about finance, in 2009, the percentage was about 31%, then it reached reach 37% in 2019 (an increase of about 6%) and it was forecasted to reach 42% in 2029 (just an increase of about 5%). Whereas the food processing and manufacturing accounted for the lowest amount. But according to the data in of the graph,you could see the tremendous development of around 11% (from 10% to 21%) between 2009 and 2019. However,until 2029 it was expected to decrease the percentage back to the same in 2009. Besides,. the manufacturing was forecasted to quite substantially decrease, about 11%, from 2019 to 2029. Otherwise,in the field of tourism, in 2019, the percentage was approximately aprroximately 22%, and then in 2029, it is was forecasted to be the same percentage as in 2019. But in 2009, the percentage of tourism was higher than two years later (about 26%).And the last sector was the oil,coal and gas.Oil, coal and gas contributed contributes over 25% of for the economy in 2009 and 2029, even though they it reached about 30% in 2019 This bar chart describes the proportion of Brazil's economy in five different fields field in industry in three years: 2009, 2019, and 2029. However,in 2029 was just a was the prediction for the fut... Xem thêmLê Bảo
5/12/2023
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In the contemporary world, many people stand themselves In the on the good stead and have a tendency to send their children to the megacities megacity of their countries. Therefore, populations in the countryside are decreasing, which and results it result in economic economics,the growth for of countries. Were it not for searching for better educational opportunities to expedite their career development their development in career, the labor labour force would not leave their home country to immigrate immigrant. This essay will discuss both sides of the spectrum and provide comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter. First and foremost,having a chance to study or to experiment at in one of the most magnificent and prosperous universities in Vietnam is the desired dream of Vietnamese students. For example,the UEH( university of economics Ho Chi Minh city) is always a choice for locals and peasants to have faster ways of for developing their future. Moreover, laborers labours will get accustomed to modern lifestyles lifestyle when they have been living in hustling and bustling cities city. Thus,conquering daunting tasks is no longer a hardship. However, many crowds crown of people immigrated to politician city, which resulted result in less competitive competition edge over their blue-collars. Lastly, they will cope with significant unemployment. On the other side of the spectrum, an overcrowded over-crowded population will lead to more congestion, which and then it will devastate the environment and have negative impacts on living conditions such as pollution,climate change,etc. For instance, Vietnam is one of the most agricultural-oriented countries agricultural orientates in the world. If the exodus is still increasing and there is with no prevention to minimize it, the source of agricultural and handicraft goods will be procrastinated due to the lack of laborers labours. In contemplation of the preceding arguments, everyone on this planet has different objectives, but the most common is one that all are is for the sake of themselves, and our world. Nevertheless, they need to be visionaries visionaires to balance the development and population in both urban and rural areas. Nothing is bad or ,is impossible if we have an insightful mindset and determination In the contemporary world, many people stand themselves In the on the good stead and have a tendency to send their children to the megacities megacity of their countries. Therefore, populations in th... Xem thêmLê Bảo
5/12/2023
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Living in a country where they have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, practical problems.In the concurrent world, education plays a momentous role to improve people's awareness ,life conditions and the prosperous development in all respects of countries.Therefore,most parents have a tendency to let their children study and settle in foreign countries for better educational conditions.A large part of the public holds opinion that several serious problems such as society, daily life,communication, etc are negative impacts of living in nations which its language is a hardship. Were it not for searching for better chances to expand knowledge and to accustom to new places, the community wouldn't take risks to set foot on which bring challenges to them .This essay will discuss both sides of the spectrum and provide comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter. First and foremost, each area of the world has their own distinct languages. If the individual had a decision to study overseas or work overseas it would be necessary to speak fluently and be able to understand what locals speak during their discussion. When speaking in an unlikely language was no longer as the encumbrance, most problems such as isolation,misunderstood state would not happen. Instead, settlers will have a chance to make friends with new companions and to get used to with new culture, new adventures. On the other side of the spectrum, a section of the business advocate that locating in foreign country just make them tough to fall in line with local neighbors.Thus,not only issues such as conflict among neighborhood,...are occured but also practical problems like isolation,not having competitive edge,etc are occured. However, it is up to their spirit.In spite of not being good at speaking to locals, colonists can use body language to interact and to converse with others.For example,Vietnamese Students whose english skill is at a moderate level, still have the ability to train,to be coached in Canadian university, USA university. In conclusion,nothing is difficult. Challenges are just hard, dangerous if they consider it as a fear and they give up. A roaring success will come to who can conquer daunting tacks,can leave fears behind and go forward to achieve their goals.Never bend your head, please always hold it high and look the world straight in the eye. Living in a country where they have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, practical problems.In the concurrent world, education plays a momentous role to improve people's awar... Xem thêmLê Bảo
5/12/2023
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It is important for people to take risks,both in their professional lives and their personal lives Stepping out of your comfort zone is always a huge challenge for all people in the world and one of the best ways to solve this problem is taking risks. A section of the community advocates that taking risks is important for people to reach their dream and promote their career, especially in their professional and personal lives. Were it not for the ambition to reach a huge dream and the development in all respects of life,the working and learning community wouldn’t nerve themselves to walk in a perilous path and step out of their comfort zone due to the insurance of and guarantee of safety and successful rate. Everything on this planet also has pros and cons. This essay will discuss both sides of the spectrum and provide comprehensive explanations to elucidate this matter. First and foremost,walking in a sole and perilous path helps people gain more opportunities such as working abroad,student grants, etc. Besides,accompanied with the capability of attaining whatever they want will help them easily take on daunting tasks and thus enhancing problem-solving skills and having a promotion or competitive edge over their peers. Furthermore, new things and new concepts are a hardship for those who decided to go alone.However, if they have passion, ambition and steadfastness to face up to challenges they will achieve a roaring success soon with pride and accomplishments. Not only work or learning experience but also providing empirical experience, which means boosting their percentage of reaching the climax and supporting to build in depth planning. On the other side of the spectrum,a small part of the public tends to have a mundane mindset.Nevertheless,this state may lead to miss opportunities and procrastinate growth in career at the moment, especially in the future. Moreover, it will render a large part of the community hinder self- improvement and being become stranded in circle of promotion.Although young generation is often curious to see a new things, reach new places, try new activities, a section of this generation has a tendency to stay in their comfort zone and follow their senior path instead of walking in perilous path which demand meticulousness, detailed mind set and the most momentous quality I think it is necessary to reach a roaring success by taking wish is calm. In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of taking risks are various and depend on your mind, your choices. Not all risks are worth taking, and there is always the potential for failure and negative consequences. It's vital to weigh the potential benefits and drawbacks of a particular risk before deciding whether or not to take it. It is important for people to take risks,both in their professional lives and their personal lives Stepping out of your comfort zone is always a huge challenge for all people in the world and one of... Xem thêmHuyền
5/12/2023
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If old people are no longer physically, mentally and financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree and disagree? It has been asserted that young people should be obliged to assume the responsibility of providing support for their elderly members who face physical, mental, and financial problems. This essay will elaborate on several reasons why I completely agree with this notion. The foremost rationale for my view is that implementing this law might be beneficial to national development. More precisely, when young family members take care of the elderly who are no longer physically, mentally and financially independent, the government can invest national budget in other social aspects including military, education, entertainment, etc, thus lessening the financial burden on building nursing homes and hospitals, and healthcare centers for old people, ultimately boosting national development. An additional reason to support my argument is that this policy can strengthen familial bonds between the elderly and the younger. In fact, young people might live with their elderly kins under the same roof to be convenient for supporting them in addressing their physical, mental, and financial issues. As a result, they can make it easier to engage in intimate conversation with older people, thereby minimizing the generation gap. Finally, this law can have an advantageous influence on improving younger people’s soft skills. For example, when being responsible for the elderly’s issues, not only might young generation have to learn problem-solving skills in old people’s physical and mental health, but they also might be experienced in money management to spend a portion of their income on solving their elderly’s financial problems In conclusion, I totally advocate that young people are encouraged to shoulder the responsibility for helping their elderly kins addressing physical, mental and financial issues, as this policy can bring benefits to the state funding. Moreover, the relationship between family members and young individuals’ soft skills can be improved. If old people are no longer physically, mentally and financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree... Xem thêmTrần Việt An
5/12/2023
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Some people have opinions that teachers should not give homework to children. However, there are many strong arguments against the setting of homework, it is a necessary aspect of education. On the one hand, there are several reasons why people might argue that homework is an unnecessary task for children. Firstly, homework is not the only way to improve educational outcomes. For example, students who in some countries are not given homework, still achieve high and remarkable scores at schools. Secondly, many parents agree that the school day is enough long, and leaves schools too tired to do further study when they return home. Finally, it is recognized that playtime is also beneficial as study time from the perspective of the development brain. On the other hand, I still support the view that homework has a vital role in the schooling of children. The main benefit of homework is that it encourages independent learning and problem-solving, as children challenge themself to finish homework following their own way in a private space. The second reason is that homework forces students to review the knowledge that get in school to solve exercises at home. In doing this, students have more chances to consolidate their understanding of what the teacher taught. Take mathematical homework which requires students to spend much time reviewing and reading knowledge before, which develops independent study habits. In conclusion, many people argue homework have certainly drawbacks, but I still agree that the benefits outweigh it in the long run. Some people have opinions that teachers should not give homework to children. However, there are many strong arguments against the setting of homework, it is a necessary aspect of education. On the... Xem thêmTrương Thành Đại
5/12/2023
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Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in detail. Discuss both views and give your opinions. It is believed that older pupils in school might learn various subjects to obtain abundant knowledge. However, other individuals think that students should focus on learning a select few subjects in great depth. These viewpoints will be discussed in this essay before presenting my own stance. There are many advantages of older adolescents approaching a huge number of subjects in school. To begin with, they can broaden numerous aspects of difficult topics. This means they can easily access the value of different disciplines and show a reasonable opinion. To be more specific, when older minors have to apply for jobs in the workplace, the high-value position in a company requires them to have numerous skills related to subjects in school such as Physics, Chemistry, Maths, and so on. Furthermore, studying subjects diversities can help them enhance their real-life world matters in community such as time-management, problem-solving, communication. Additionally, it is crucial things in order to research deeper knowledge, which means they have a good chance to improve the good grades in exams Nevertheless, there are also several benefits of studying some subjects in great depth. To commence with, children tend to choose some favorite subjects, which enables them to pursue their major and concentrate on their strengths. Besides, they do not have an interest in studying abstract knowledge such as History, Geography. This means it takes a lot of time to memorize an exact location and historical event. However, critics of this approach think that they can miss a huge amount of essential knowledge. In the future, they will run a higher risk of academic and career paths. Thus, children who learn limited subjects achieve a different type of benefits unlike the one experienced in their studying a lot of subjects. In conclusion, older individuals choosing a variety of subjects in school can bring more profit than other people just restricting such subjects because it gives them life skills and achieve a high score. Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in detail. Discuss... Xem thêmPham Thuy
5/12/2023
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The given chart gives information about the percentage of people going to the cinema among four different age groups in a particular country during the period from 1978 to 2008. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of cinema-goers experienced a fluctuating trend. Additionally, the percentage of cinema young visitors was leading during the years, while the lowest figure was recorded for senior citizens. Regarding the young brackets, the number of visitors, aged 14-24 ranked first at 90% at the beginning, followed by a gradual decrease to nearly 75 % in the next decade. During the next 10 years, this rate increased to the same level at the beginning before the stablility in 5 years later. Finally, there was a 10% decrease at the end of the period but still the highest rate. In 1978, the rate of visitors aged 25-34 started at 80%, which later sharply declined by 20%. During the half period later, this figure slightly rose and remained unchanged before steadying at roughly 65% at the end. Concerning the older cohorts, in the started year, residents who aged 35-49 going the cinema stood at 60%, with being significantly 20% higher than that of the 50 plus category, which was recorded at the lowest point. Following the next 25 years, both numbers witnessed the similar trend, reducing by 20% in 1988 before climbing back to 60 and 40% respectively. Consequences, these percentages were stable during the next 5 years and then reached the same rate of nearly 50% at the end. The given chart gives information about the percentage of people going to the cinema among four different age groups in a particular country during the period from 1978 to 2008. Overall, it is clear... Xem thêmHuyền
4/12/2023
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Many students find it difficulf to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem? In contemporary society, there has been a noticeable increase in the number of students who have difficulties in focusing on lessons at school. This essay will elaborate on various factors driving this trend before discussing several solutions to mitigate this matter. There are several drivers for this phenomenon. Initially, school children might be immersed in other school’s extracurricular activities including participating in clubs, playing sports, etc. As a result, they would spend less time on their academic performance when taking lessons, leading to their lack of concentration at school. Moreover, students may also find the school curriculum too tedious for them to pay attention. Specifically, their educational programs might solely prioritise theoretical knowledge on textbooks in lieu of emphasizing on practical aspects of the subjects. There exist a multitude of remedies for this issue. First and foremost, it is crucial for school to limit students’ extracurricular activities. For example, institutions should come up with regulations of restricting numbers of clubs and limiting the amount of time they can spend on other activities at school. Thus, they can invest a greater amount of time in their study. Furthermore, it is vitally important to substitute the way teachers educate students. More precisely, schools ought to renew the teaching programs by applying an increasing number of practices in the lesson. For instance, teachers should encourage students to do some experiments in Chemistry class, thus making it easier for students to be more interested in what they have learnt, ultimately focusing more on their study. In conclusion, students’ priority in extracurricular activities at school and boring teaching programs are the key contributors to their lack of concentration on study. Additionally, restriction of extracurricular activities and renewal of curriculum should be encouraged to handle this problem. Many students find it difficulf to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem? In contemporary society, there has been a noticeable inc... Xem thêmrainbow
4/12/2023
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The bar chart illustrates four different dairy products that were produced by the top three world countries in 2012. Overall, it is evident that the total of milk production took the lead in 2012, while the contrast figure is being witnessed in milk powder production within the same period. Take a closer look to the chart, EU exceeded the amount of milk production with 142,970 MT, followed by 127,000 MT in India. While the third ranking went to the U.S with 90,038 MT. The EU ranked first in cheese production with 7,120 MT, while the second top producers was the U.S with 4,925 MT. Brazil first appeared as the top three producers with nearly ten times less than the number of the same products from EU. India was the top one world producer in butter production with 4,500 MT, with approximately half of the amount was being seen in EU and followed by 810 MT from the U.S. China excelled the number of milk powder production with 1200 MT and 90 MT more than New Zealand. The third ranking of milk powder production was EU with just 770 MT. The bar chart illustrates four different dairy products that were produced by the top three world countries in 2012. Overall, it is evident that the total of milk production took the lead in 2012, whi... Xem thêmRpark
5/12/2023
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4/12/2023
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Music plays an important role in society, others think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both and give your opinions. There are differing views on the significance of music in society, with some considering music plays an indispensable role in social aspects while others contend it serves primarily as a source of entertainment. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before concluding that the former is more favorable. On the one hand, it is undeniable that music is crucial for entertainment. Initially, people might often listen to musical melodies when they have leisure time. This means listening to their favorite songs might be an effective method to uplift their mood after a hectic day. Furthermore, there are diverse kinds of music that bring joys to listeners. Take pop music, which is one of the most prominent genres on a global scale, as an illustration. This type of music can bring positive vibes to the listeners, thus making people feel joyful and entertained. On the other hand, I believe that music also plays a significant role in other social aspects. First and foremost, it offers opportunities for individuals to make a handsome profit by creating and performing their musical works. To illustrate, Taylor Swift, who is a multi-talented artist in the music industry, can earn over billions of dollars annually by composing, producing, and singing songs on her own. Moreover, various genres such as old-school hiphop, rock, and R&B can be beneficial to mitigating social problems. More precisely, they can make it easier for individuals to express their feelings and opinions on numerous social issues, thus having a positive impact on solving these issues. For instance, old-school hiphop, which originated from African community, can encourage government to come up with policies of equal treatment and anti-racism in African countries through powerful messages in the lyrics. In conclusion, although some individuals argue that music is simply important for entertaining people, I advocate that it also plays a vital role in social development, as people working in music industry can make a massive income and various social issues could also be addressed through music. Music plays an important role in society, others think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both and give your opinions. There are differing views on the significance of mu... Xem thêmSunnyy
4/12/2023
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is a common belief that speaking a not native tongue in a country can be an important issue in society and also a practical matter. However, I completely agree with this statement because people would have to face challenges and physiological effects. To begin with, language is a part of communicating living in a country where someone who does not speak the local language may face significant practical problems. For instance, it may be challenging language when communicating with locals to misunderstand or when encountering health or legal problems. In addition, it can be difficult to access certain services such as public transport. For example, if someone is unable to read signs or announcements, it can be challenging to navigate the public transport systems. On top of that social problems can arise when people do not communicate effectively due to language barriers. In this situation, people may feel bored and isolated. Moreover, this can lead to lack of social interaction, affecting health such as depression and anxiety. For instance, immigrants to new country make new friends, find employment,... To sum up, I agree that living in a country where someone speaks a foreign language can cause crucial social and practical problems. Therefore, the governments make an effort for individuals to learn the local language to adapt to a new country. Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is a c... Xem thêmnhi nguyen
3/12/2023
Numerous animal species worldwide are currently facing extinction. Some argue that countries and individuals should prioritize protecting these animals, while others believe resources should be focused more on human issues. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ The debate over whether to prioritize protecting endangered animals or focusing on human issues is complex, with valid arguments on both sides. In my opinion, countries and individuals are also combating human society issues by prioritizing protecting endangered animals. Admittedly, many people-related problems are more imminent and pressing than protecting animals. For instance, billions of people around the world live in poverty and lack access to basic necessities like food and water. While safeguarding animal species contributes to environmental equilibrium, it's crucial to acknowledge that human well-being is intricately linked to the health of ecosystems. Environmental problems as well as endangered animals have a complicated relationship with humans. Humans can solve the above problems, so human problems need to be solved first to solve environmental problems especially the extinction of animals more effectively. However, preserving biodiversity can enhance food security, provide medicinal resources, and mitigate natural disasters. Endangered animals play important roles in ecosystems, and their loss can have cascading effects on other species and the environment as a whole. For example, we can protect forests, which provide habitat for endangered animals, while also providing clean air and water for people. Animals play a crucial role in protecting the environment and human health, protecting endangered animals is the same as protecting human development and significantly improving health problems as well as solving food problems. In conclusion, my opinion aligns with a balanced approach. Both animal conservation and addressing human issues are interconnected facets of sustainable development. Allocating resources judiciously to ensure the coexistence of thriving ecosystems and improved human conditions is paramount for a harmonious future. Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em ạ The debate over whether to prioritize protecting endangered animals or focusing on human issues is complex, with valid arguments on both sides. In my opinion, countri... Xem thêmchi
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The two maps illustrate the degree to which a cinema has changed since 1980. Overall, the cinema has experienced a number of dramatic changes, the most prominent of which was the development of cinema 2 and cinema 3 at the expense of car park. The addition of cinema 4 and cinema 5. There used to be the car park, but it was then removed to make way for cinema 2 in the north-west part and cinema 3 in the north-east part. In the west, the public toilet stays the same, and in the south-west, cinema 1 is replaced by a catering space. Cinema 4 and cinema 5 are constructed opposite the toilet, overtaking the land previously occupied by cinema 2. Additionally, in the right side of the entry, the ticket room remained unchanged, while adjacent to the ticket, the drinks shop was transformed into a DVD shop. The two maps illustrate the degree to which a cinema has changed since 1980. Overall, the cinema has experienced a number of dramatic changes, the most prominent of which was the development of cinema... Xem thêmKakakkkaa
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