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Lee Wenyong

9/7/2024

LUYỆN TẬP IELTS MỖI NGÀY BẰNG CÁCH TRỞ THÀNH THÀNH VIÊN CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH POMBEEBEE – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!

Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được: 1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất. 2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó. 3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi. Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn. Nếu bạn vẫn còn thắc mắc nào về English club, bạn có thể comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu... Xem thêm

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Lee Wenyong

9/7/2024

CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!

Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc? Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ? Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline? Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được: 1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi. 2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v 3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong: Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC) Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền 4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design. Nếu bạn có thắc mắc thêm về English club, hãy comment ngay bên dưới để Pombeebee giải đáp bạn nhé! Hãy tham gia ngay: Nhấn vào nút "Gia nhập" để tham gia câu lạc bộ hoàn toàn miễn phí! Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)? Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp... Xem thêm

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Huyền

16/11/2023

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Đề bài: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Some individuals consider that pursuing a higher education after finishing high school is the best way for students to achieve a successful career path, while some others deem that entering the workforce immediately is a better choice. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before concluding I am in favor of the former. On the one hand, entering the workforce after graduation can be appealing for several reasons. The first one is that students might become independent by earning their own income, allowing them to establish a stable life. Additionally, starting work might enable students to broaden their practical experience which are beneficial to their occupation. That means students are able to aqquire practical skills such as: teamwork, communication, organization which might make it easy for them to climb the career ladder in the workplace On the other hand, I believe that continuing to study at university offers more benefits. Firstly, it can be advantageous for young people to achieve formal qualifications at university because academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having a relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Second, job market is becoming increasingly competitive. There are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company, hence, young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college may have more difficulties to compete. In conclusion, although some people think that students should get a job after high school graduation, I suppose that going to university is a better choice to be successful in their career. Đề bài: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both vie... Xem thêm

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An rt

16/11/2023

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Các thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ 🥹 It has been a bone of contention for years whether video games are recreational and educational or if they are imposing a detrimental impact on players. From my perspective, the former viewpoint, which maintains the positive sides of video gaming, is plausible for various justifications. Initially, it stands to reason that video games are beneficial to players. As they are designed for entertainment, video games act as effective stress relievers. After an industrious day working or studying, many people may opt to play on-screen games so as to unwind and relax. Moreover, video gaming offers and teaches gamers an array of intellectual and social skills that can be applied in practicality. They learn how to plan, analyse, strategise, organize, socialise or even work in teams in multiplayer and interactive games. With regard to the contrasting viewpoint, I admit that some may argue that video games, especially negatively designed ones such as violent games, are likely to change players’ personalities adversely. This is mainly because people who play this genre may often be seen to display aggressive behaviour and violent tendencies. However, I still firmly believe that there are numerous types of games available apart from such not-encouraged genres, for instance, solving puzzles, math or sports games. Additionally, the fact that some prefer to download violent games may possibly be pertinent to their social background, social groups and relationships with other people, which may appeal to them to choose such games. If players see fit to hone their logical thinking or intellectual mind, they will probably be more tempted by games involving tackling problems. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, video games are advantageous as they relieve our stress as well as educate players in some respects. It is gamers who are responsible for choosing the appropriate types of games to experience, which may well facilitate video games to take their positive effects. Các thầy cô chấm giúp em với ạ 🥹 It has been a bone of contention for years whether video games are recreational and educational or if they are imposing a detrimental impact on players. From my p... Xem thêm

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Châu

16/11/2023

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Topic: The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree? Housing shortage in metropolitan areas is a common issue we are facing currently. It is sometimes argued that only governments are able to tackle this problem. While I acknowledge the important role of the government intervention, I still hold the belief that it is not the only solution to the phenomenon as private sectors can also help to alleviate it. It is true that the governments have the authority to enact control the housing crisis by various measures. To begin with, they can reverse the trend of migrating from rural areas to the cities in search for better living standards, education, or healthcare systems, which has driven housing demand in the metropolitan areas. To be specific, they are capable of allocating national budget to improve the facilities and infrastructures in suburbs to cater people living in these areas, which may discorage them from moving to big cities. In addition, the government have an ultimate control over the real estate market which has significantly affected the housing scarcity. Seoul, the capital city of Korea, is a prime example of this, as the administration strictly restricts people from investing in the housing market. Nevertheless, I would argue that the inadequacy of housing can be solved by other private sectors. Firstly, companies can invest to establish their branches or factories in rural areas to provide local residents with more employment opportunitunities, thereby they can work at their hometown instead of moving to big cities and struggling to find a place to settle. Secondly, some economic institutions can facilitate those with low-income who find a house unaffordable. In fact, banks can help their customers get a friendly loan to buy a house, property companies could provide an easy scheme to pay for the houses. In conclusion, it is undeniable that the authorities’ part in dealing with the housing shortage is indisputable. However, I take the view that they are not the sole solution to the housing crisis since for-profit businesses would also be essential to tackle the issue. Topic: The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree? Housing shortage in metropolitan areas is a c... Xem thêm

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Trần Việt An

15/11/2023

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The line graph illustrates the number of foreigners traveling to three different areas in a European country during the period of 20 years. Overall, it is clear that the coast was the most common a... Xem thêm

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123@123Nt

15/11/2023

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Châu

15/11/2023

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Topic: Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today, the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem? It is true that freshwater shortage has posed a formidable challenge to certain countries in the world. Undoubtedly due to the heightened demand for freshwater, the scarcity of this valuable resource has become an alarming global issue. This essay will identify the underlying reasons behind this phenomenon and then offer some feasible solutions to tackle the situation. Regarding the reasons for the increasing requirement for fresh water, population explosion is perhaps the most contributing factor. It is only natural that the inflated global population means higher demand for freshwater, which is essential for individuals’ personal use, agricultural and industrial activities. Another reason is that rapid industrialization has also compounded the graveness of this issue. For instance, millions of cars are being produced every year to meet the growing need, and a startling amount of water is required during the process. Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted by governments, organizations, and individuals to mitigate this issue. The first feasible approach is that educational institutions and authoritative bodies should increase individuals’ knowledge about water depletion issue. For instance, they should launch more campaigns to raise people’s awareness of the severe consequences of wasting water and the importance of conserving this valuable natural source, thereby encouraging them to refrain from performing activities that result in insufficient freshwater resources. Additionally, the government should enact infrastructures for the purification of seawater into salt-free water, which may help to meet the growing requirement for freshwater. In conclusion, the unstoppable growth in population and industrialization may be responsible for water scarcity. However, steps can be taken by the government and competent authorities to alleviate this situation. Topic: Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today, the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures... Xem thêm

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Yenhoa

15/11/2023

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The pie chart shows how the average household in Australia uses total energy while the table compares the electricity consumption of occupants number. Overall, the proportion of heating and cooling a... Xem thêm

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Phạm Thị Thu Thủy

14/11/2023

Mong thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em với ạ <3 em chân thành cảm ơn thầy cô

Đề: The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It has been suggested that people should consider money as a priority when seeking jobs or pursuing their profession. Despite this, I disagree that high salary is a key factor above all other concerns. To begin with, I strongly believe that people need stimulation in their working lives in order to trigger their interest and a sense of reward. It is undeniable that having a favourite and passionate job will lead to a happier working life. Very few of us can go through the entire career staying in a position in an industry that we feel purely bored of. For further explanation, motivation and passion act as potent shields against workplace stress and burden, fostering a positive and enthusiastic approach to work. Secondly, pursuing our dream career not only stimulate our dedication and greater efforts, but it also helps us achieve exceptional outcomes and good salary. Take Cristiano Ronaldo for example, despite his rough childhood, he has showcased a special aptitude for football since he was a child. Thanks to his remarkable talent and relentless effort he has dedicated to football, he has become a global renowned football star. What is more, he also reached the pinnacle of his career at a very young age, pursuing his burning passion with huge income. Having said that, a large number of people have to put high-salary as their first priority when choosing a job owing to financial burden in their family, They tend to work like robots without enthusiasm and motivation. Furthermore, the stressful workload combined with family burden are likely to upset them unless they are devoted and enthusiastic about their profession. Undoubtedly, this situation will have a bad impact on their well-being, cause long-term mental disorders such as anxiety and depression. For instance, millions of people have to meet psychologists annually due to overwork. Seriously, lots of individuals also attempt to suicide as they are hopeless at their work and personal life despite having a well-paid job. Hence, prioritising money when selecting a profession is not a wise decision. To conclude, good salary is crucial to human’s lives, however, it should not be the number one concern above all. In spite of financial benefits, it is not worth spending all the life time enduring the tiredness and unhappiness at the workplace purely for money. Đề: The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It has been suggested that people should consider money as a... Xem thêm

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Minh Hạnh

15/11/2023

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Question: Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome? It is true that many people assume keeping wo... Xem thêm

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Minh Hạnh

15/11/2023

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Question: Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem? It is true that th... Xem thêm

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Minh Hạnh

15/11/2023

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Question: Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree? Many people belie... Xem thêm

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Linh

15/11/2023

Em xin phép nhờ thầy cô chấm chữa giúp em bài essay task 1 này ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy cô nhiều ạaa

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. ESSAY: The given chart... Xem thêm

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Lê Trung Thành

15/11/2023

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Topic: Some people say that it is impossible for a country to both be economically successful and have a clean environment? It is widely argued that a country cannot be able to achieve both economic success and have an environment devoid of contamination. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, however, I personally disagree with this thinking for the reasons provided below. On the one hand, there are a host of compelling reasons. Notably, the advancements in technology offer viable solutions to mitigate the environment impact of economic activities, for example clean technology and sustainable practices which helps offset CO2 emissions from factories and promote resource efficiency. For instance, Sweden has invested in renewable energy aimes to reduce pollution and create new jobs (workforce in manufacturing, maintenance or installation), showcasing how economic growth can coexist harmoniously with environmental considerations. This acts as a precursor to not only a thriving economy but also a civilized society. On the other hand, another reason why I do not support this opinion. There is no denying the importance of raising awareness of environmental issues and environmental conservation. Having a clean environment is support directly to the economic benefits. On the society level, it is not only enhancing a goal of the country but also attract to investment globally and eco-tourism. For example, Vietnam has made significant progress in this regard by investing in renewable energy and implementing policies to reduce pollution. This has not only improved the country's environmental sustainability but has also attracted environmentally conscious investors and consumers, thereby boosting the economy. Last but not least, on the government and individual level, humans need to have a responsibility for not only environment but also society. Moreover, there are also some effective policies to simultaneously foster economic development while preserving a pollution-free society. In conclusion, I personally disagree again the idea that a country cannot have both economic success and a clean environment is not suitable. By following a clear example of countries like Sweden or Denmark, it becomes evident that these nations have effectively balanced economic growth with environmental preservation. This serves as a compelling example for other countries seeking sustainable development through parallel strategies. Topic: Some people say that it is impossible for a country to both be economically successful and have a clean environment? It is widely argued that a country cannot be able to achieve both economi... Xem thêm

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Conongchamchi

15/11/2023

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the pie charts compared the percentage of people using five different means of transports to commute to university between 2004 and 2009. overall, it can be seen that the most common form of transpor... Xem thêm

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Jasmin

14/11/2023

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Task 2 Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society? With the hurly-burly... Xem thêm

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vugorobi

14/11/2023

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The bar chart illustrates how much coffee and tea are bought and drunk in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide and Hobart in the last 4 weeks. Overall,going to a cafe to have coffee or tea was the m... Xem thêm

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Lê Trung Thành

14/11/2023

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Topic: The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers for four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in the year of 2012 The bar chart illustrates a... Xem thêm

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Kakakkkaa

13/11/2023

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Đề: The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Bài làm: The given table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities. The table comp... Xem thêm

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Nguyễn Duy Khang

14/11/2023

Mong thầy cô chấm giúp em bài writing task 2 ạ

Đề: Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion. Bài viết của em: In current times, the global prevalence of crime remains a pressing concern. While a plethora of robberies and murders are emerging, several debates are being triggered about whether the government should have constant deterrents for each genre of offense and whether the personal background and motivation of individuals should also be considered. Despite many arguments on both sides, I may lean more toward the latter. On the one hand, fixed punishments can be recognized as fairness for criminals, as each lawbreaker is sentenced on the same scale and no controversies may be ignited. Besides, crime rates can be reduced significantly. Indeed, strict punishments, regardless of motive, can be imposed on them, invoking their fears and declining their possibility of committing illegal activities. The New York Times reported a substantial decrease in crime rates in America over the past few decades when stricter sentences were imposed, irrespective of the reasons behind them. On the other hand, I constantly advocate my belief that the government should be soft on crime if circumstances warrant it. For instance, an injury can result from self-defense. For example, when thieves break into people's houses, the owners may not control their behaviors while protecting themselves and their families, which can lead to severe harm or even death. Also, mental illness may be behind criminal behavior in some cases, they can be aggressive and have uncontrolled tendencies that may break the rules. According to Vietnamese laws, those suffering from mental illness that impairs their ability to perceive or control themselves are not subjected to criminal liability. In conclusion, while imposing harsh punishments may serve as a deterrent for lawbreakers, it is crucial to consider individuals' motives to uphold the country's humanity Đề: Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, shou... Xem thêm

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Hoàng Trọng Sơn

13/11/2023

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The two charts depict information relating to the rates of females and males in particularly country in certain some kinds task at home, and the average of the time they spent time doing those tasks.... Xem thêm

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