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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn luyện đắt đỏ. Tham gia câu lạc bộ bạn sẽ được:
1. Cập nhật nhanh chóng các câu hỏi thi thật IELTS Speaking và Writing Task 2 mới nhất.
2. Được gợi ý câu trả lời band 8 chuyên sâu cho những câu hỏi đó.
3. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
4. Nếu bạn có câu hỏi nào trong quá trình học cần tư vấn, giải đáp, hoặc mong muốn cải thiện các kỹ năng cụ thể, cần lời khuyên từ giáo viên thì có thể trực tiếp gửi câu hỏi vào group chat hoặc nhắn tin riêng cho giáo viên, không giới hạn số câu hỏi.
Các chủ đề của English club bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn trong các câu hỏi liên quan đến IELTS, tiếng Anh, Business English, hoặc các kỹ năng mềm trong công việc như cách viết CV tốt, internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email v.v, tất tần tật những gì các bạn học sinh, sinh viên, người đi làm cần hỗ trợ cho hành trang học tập và nghề nghiệp - giáo viên rất sẵn lòng chia sẻ và đưa ra lời khuyên cho các bạn.
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Câu lạc bộ tiếng Anh Pombeebee được tạo ra để giúp đỡ tất cả các bạn cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh mà KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO, đặc biệt là những bạn khó khăn, không đủ kinh phí cho quá trình ôn lu...
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CÂU LẠC BỘ TIẾNG ANH VÀ KỸ NĂNG MỀM POMBEEBEE CHO NGƯỜI ĐI LÀM – HOÀN TOÀN MIỄN PHÍ!
Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
Bạn là người đi làm muốn rèn luyện tiếng Anh giao tiếp, thuyết trình và các kỹ năng mềm để tự tin và có cơ hội thăng tiến trong công việc?
Bạn không có kinh phí tham gia các lớp học thêm đắt đỏ?
Bạn cảm thấy khó khăn để sắp xếp thời gian tham dự các câu lạc bộ tiếng anh offline?
Hãy đến với câu lạc bộ Tiếng Anh và kỹ năng mềm của Pombeebee. Tại đây bạn KHÔNG MẤT BẤT KÌ CHI PHÍ NÀO và sẽ được:
1. Tự tin luyện nói tiếng Anh với giáo viên bản xứ mọi lúc, mọi nơi thông qua tính năng voice record, giúp bạn chủ động thời gian. Nếu ngại gửi voice record vào group chat, bạn có thể gửi riêng cho giáo viên để được lắng nghe, nhận xét và góp ý cải thiện, không giới hạn số lần gửi.
2. Hỗ trợ tư vấn, đưa ra lời khuyên để cải thiện các kỹ năng mềm cần thiết cho học tập và công việc như: cách viết CV tốt, viết internship/scholarship letter, chuẩn bị cho interview, cách viết email chuyên nghiệp, thuyết trình, v.v
3. Giáo viên phụ trách là Mr. Lee Wenyong:
Tốt nghiệp Đại học Công nghệ Nanyang của Singapore với bằng Danh dự về Kỹ thuật
Đạt điểm cao nhất môn Tiếng Anh trong Chứng chỉ Giáo dục Tổng quát Singapore –Cambridge
Doanh nhân người Singapore, người sáng lập Lee Wenyong & Co. Holdings, cung cấp dịch vụ nhân sự và kế toán cho BreadTalk, Burberry, Bvlgari, Christian Dior, Elizabeth Arden, Hermes, Prada, Salvatore Ferragamo, Tiffany & Co. và National Trades Union Congress (NTUC)
Hơn 12 năm kinh nghiệm giảng dạy cho hơn 500 chủ doanh nghiệp Singapore cách sử dụng hiệu quả các công cụ kinh doanh thông minh và phân tích dữ liệu để tối đa hóa doanh thu, tối ưu hóa nhân lực và duy trì dòng tiền
4. Chủ đề của câu lạc bộ bao gồm nhưng không giới hạn các ngành nghề như: Marketing, Digital marketing, Customer service, Customer Experience, Public relations, Web design, Web development, E-Commerce development, Graphic design, Mobile development, Audio production, Animation, Illustration, Translation, Photography, 3D modeling, Game design, Product design.
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Bạn là sinh viên sắp tốt nghiệp mong muốn cải thiện tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho quá trình ứng tuyển việc làm (viết CV, phỏng vấn, v.v)?
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The charts depict the average energy consumption in Australian households and the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions. Overall, heating is the largest consumer of energy, while water heating generates the most greenhouse gas emissions.
Heating accounts for 42% of energy use, making it the highest consumer. In contrast, water heating, which uses 30% of the energy, is responsible for the largest share of greenhouse gas emissions at 32%. Notably, heating itself only contributes 15% to emissions.
Refrigeration and lighting consume 7% and 4% of the total energy, respectively. Despite their lower energy usage, their greenhouse gas emissions are roughly double these percentages. Cooling remains consistent, both in energy use and emissions, at approximately 2-3%.
Other appliances, though using 15% of the energy, produce a substantial 28% of the emissions. This makes them the second most significant contributor to greenhouse gases, highlighting a disparity between energy use and emission levels.
The charts depict the average energy consumption in Australian households and the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions. Overall, heating is the largest consumer of energy, while water heating genera...
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It is observed that in many countries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? What are the effects on the society?
It has been noted through surveys conducted in various countries that a significant number of students are not inclined towards pursuing science subjects. The primary reason for this trend is the demanding nature of these subjects, requiring meticulous research and accurate results. Consequently, the decreasing interest in science subjects among students may have adverse effects on the nation as a whole.
There are multiple causes underlying the reluctance of students to opt for science subjects. Firstly, the intricate nature of these subjects requires a high level of precision and critical thinking skills. For instance, conducting longitudinal studies in the field of science emphasizes a deep understanding of the subject matter and the ability to analyze complex problems effectively. Therefore, the lack of interest in science subjects can be attributed to the aforementioned challenging demands they pose on students. Secondly, tedious experiments in certain science subjects, such as Quantum Physics, are indispensable. Students often have to work far into the night to conduct such experiments. The mental challenges these experiments pose often result in lack of sleep, which could further lead to poor problem-solving skills or lowered immune system function. On that account, students usually omit those science subjects in their curriculum.
The deficiency in the number of students in the science subjects could further degrade a nation’s development. The consequences might include the lack of a professional workforce in specialist fields. For example, professions such as scientists and physicists are highly vital for a country to thrive. These experts’ contributions facilitate a country’s navigation towards the developed world by means of innovative inventions. The absence of these experts would significantly drag a nation’s growth. India, for example, because of the absence of students to science subjects, this country is notably short of methods to fully thrive.
In conclusion, the intense requirements that the science subjects bring about are the main factor for students opting out, which could potentially lead to a retrograde nation.
It is observed that in many countries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? What are the effects on the society?
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Some people believe that it is better teaching
language students in small classes. Others think the
number of people in the classes does not matter. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some opinions say that languages classes should be taken place with a small number of students while others think that it is not a problem to study in a crowded class. From my perspective, I believe that how many individuals in class is essential to study languages.
It is beneficial for students to attend a language class with a few classmates. To begin with, it may hard for teachers to come into every students’ assistance if someone is particularly in need as the number is overwhelming. This causes a problems that students having problems understanding lessons cannot capable of catching up with their classmates in later classes. As a result, students’ quality of studying and the ability to absorb knowledge will possibly be affected, causing them to be dis-motivated. This is why studying in a small language classes are better for learners.
Furthermore, there is an advantage students can gain from the learning environment with a small number of classmates. Language learners tend to be shy to show their speaking ability when there are so many people looking at them when they practice speaking. To clarify, these students are afraid of being laughed at if they make mistakes, this feeling prevents them from speaking fluently as they do not dare to practice. However, this situation can be improved if there are only a few people around them because these students can feel more relieved and comfortable to speak.
In conclusion, I agree that small classes are more superior than big classes when it comes to studying languages. Teachers can pay more attention to each student also students themselves feel more comfortable to practice speaking in that environment.
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The given two pictures illustrate the modification of an island which shows the previous appearance before being constructed to the tourists destination.
Overall, the island experienced numerous changes, with the most significant alterations are the construction of some accommodations and recreational facilities.
In the west of the island, there used to be merely three trees in a vacant land which is currently surrounded by a circle footpath with six small counterparts leading to the staying places and a long track reaching forward to the beach in the west where visitors can swim. Additionally, in the east of the circle track, a reception is built with the vehicle track being constructed surround. This track has one way leading to the restaurant and the remaining ones goes to the pier.
In the center of the island, the accommodations are built from open land with nine paths joining to a circle footpath in the middle. Despite the development of the center, there is no change in the east of the island which still has a large bare space. However, the sea has a noticeable change when it has two yachts beside the pier catering for recreational tourism of the island.
The given two pictures illustrate the modification of an island which shows the previous appearance before being constructed to the tourists destination.
Overall, the island experienced numerous chan...
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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the question of whether music solely should be a form of entertainment or plays a more significant role in recent society remains a source of controversy. The following essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion in favour of the latter viewpoint.
On the one hand , the proponents of the idea that music should only be for entertainment highlight the inherent nature of music as a form of relaxation and stress relief. Music serves as a valuable tool for people to relax and recharge after an exhausting day with heavy workload in order for them continue to focus working again with high level of productivity. Listening to music can offer a temporary respite from the stresses of daily life , including the pressure of work , social relationships and other responsibilites , enhancing personal mental heath. Therefore , it is necessary for music to fulfill its role in helping people to escapte from reality and be entertained.
On the other hand , music has been recognized for its effectiveness in treating mental health issues. For example, in countless research papers , patients suffering from depression and anxiety have shown significant improvement when exposing to gentle rhythm and melody , helping to alleviate stress and enhance emotional well-being. Therefore, the therapeutic benefits of music illustrate its profound impact on individual health and, by extension, society at large.The argument in favor of this notion is further fortified by the fact that music has the unique ability to convey powerful messages and emotions, which can influence societal attitudes and behaviors. For instance, the song "Legends Never Die" and a classic World Cup song named "We Are Champions" emphasize perseverance and encourage people to persist in pursuing their goals. In this way , this inspirational message inspire and motivate them to strive for success and overcome obstacles in the journey to success.
In conclusion , although both views certainly have validity , it seem to me that it is better to recognize the profound impact of music on society.
Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The given illustration outlines the proposed plan for the changes of a public library’s floor in two periods: 20 years ago and current time.
Overall, the adjustment encompasses the replacement of some certain stores by other alternatives, the addition of facilities and the disappearance of some objects. Particularly, most of the positions have experienced at least one of these changes.
In detail, from both sides of the map, it is noteworthy that the areas for children’s book storage and reading have been demolished and replaced by the lecture room and computer room. In addition, whereas the enquiry desk used for selling tickets and returning book in the last 20 years is converted to the café place in the present map, the room with digital items such as CDs, videos, and computer games is changed as well as expanded to become a room storing fiction books for children with more sofas.
Furthermore, tables and chair which were placed at the centre of the library 20 years ago tend to be removed in the current plan. Conversely, self-service machines and informative desk are added between lecture room and coffee area.
The given illustration outlines the proposed plan for the changes of a public library’s floor in two periods: 20 years ago and current time.
Overall, the adjustment encompasses the replacement of...
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nowadays, as role models, famous people have an increasing influence on the young. Is it positive or negative development ?
In this modernised period, celebrities are agressively regarded as a desirable person for the young generation to follow. Personally, I contend that this tendency has more positive influence rather than negative one for teenagers.
On the one hand, it is strongly believed by others that the young should not revere well-knowned inhabitants as role models in their whole life. Numerous influencers follow unhealthy lifestyles, which bolster the use of banned items including tobaccos, and alcohols, whereas their followers tends to mimic their behaviours regardless of whether or not it could be illegal or acceptable in their countries. As a result, more and more patients encounter the risk of being cancer because of the poisonous ingredients in tobaccos or electronic cigarettes, and that trend also gives rise to the increase of mortality rates dramatically. If government concerns these problems and imposes more regulations to deter the export and import of these items, the number of labourers can climb noticeably and foster the development of domains which requires the endeavour and devotion of humans, especially manual jobs.
On the other hand, one school of though firmly holds the view that renowned individuals are more likely to have great impact on those who lack of life experience at the young age. Idols inspire their fans to give assistance to the underprivileged who comes from the poor socio-economic background. A good example of this is Do Mixi, the noted streamer in Vietnam. When this philanthropist puts more resources into running campaigns to erect more educational institutions at mountainous areas, their advocates supported his project by donating money through online platforms as a way to contribute to the success of these programs as well as improve the qualities of life in remote areas in this developing nation. As a result, a large number of Vietnamese students have the opportunity to get exposure to education, and make the illiteracy become less common in the society.
In conclusion, albeit some famous peoples promulgate the erroneous belief and badly affect the society, it is advantageous to some extent that there are some motivations and useful lessons that the celebrities want to impart to their targeted audience. It is advisable for the young to idolize in a way that is selective and carefully before taking actions to support anyone.
nowadays, as role models, famous people have an increasing influence on the young. Is it positive or negative development ?
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The graph illustrates 5 age groups in terms of Glasgow's educational attainment in 2010.
Overall, people aged 16 to 75 had the highest proportion of Tertiary degrees, compared to other categories. Conversely, those aged 75 plus mostly were without qualifications.
The share of individuals aged 16 to 24 was equal to that of those aged 24 to 35 and 35 to 50, at roughly 75%; followed by those aged 50 to 75 (50%) and over 75 (25%). Regarding the unqualified, the figure for the 75-and-above age group was 72%, which was 40% higher than that of the 50-to-75-year-olds. Additionally, the unqualified levels of the three remaining groups were the same, at a mere 9%.
Around 20% of people with school certificates from 3 groups, aged 16 to 75, except that of the 24-to-35 years of age, which was 15%. Finally, this is only the case for 3% of the 75-plus.
The graph illustrates 5 age groups in terms of Glasgow's educational attainment in 2010.
Overall, people aged 16 to 75 had the highest proportion of Tertiary degrees, compared to other categories. Co...
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The bar chart illustrates the quantity of family with different groups of annual income in three certain years: 2007, 2011 and 2015 in the United State.
Overall, the chart categorises the group of households into 5 distinctive levels of income. Although the number of households earning over 100,000$ per year took a leading role among the other group’ in both 2007 and 2015, its number was dropped and stayed at the third rate in 2011.
In detail, two households having the yearly income rate under 25,000$ and 25,000$-49,999$, had a small distinguish in the number of family, just more than 1-2 million for three years. Conversely, at the same period, the quantity of family gaining 75,000$-99,999$, at about 25 million was extremely lower than the one above 100,000$, at approximately 30 million.
Furthermore, the group earning from 50,000$ to 74,999$ every year constantly remained with merely 22 million families during three timeframes. Similarly, the amount of household possessing income between 75,000$ and 99,999$ mostly stayed at the bottom, respectively 19 million in 2007, 18 million in 2011 and 20 million in 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of family with different groups of annual income in three certain years: 2007, 2011 and 2015 in the United State.
Overall, the chart categorises the group of...
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The maps illustrate how Felixstone, a town in the United Kingdom, changed from 1967 to 2001.
Overall, the town underwent dramatic changes, the most important of which was the removal of the fish market and farmland. The addition of some tourism utilities like a hotel and some beaches catering for the development of tourism.
In the north-west, some wind turbines were erected between the sea and dunes, while in the south-west, no changes were made to the golf course. In the center of the town, there were constructions of a car park, located to the north-west of the hotel, and a public beach, erected to the east of the hotel. In addition, a small cafe was built inside the beach, right next to the hotel. Meanwhile, in the northern section, two buildings of shops in 1967 were expanded with more floors, and one of them transformed into an apartment.
In the north-east, a private beach was constructed, which replaced the spaces for the fish market, marina, and pier. Regarding the south-east of the town, the huge farmland was converted into some utilities for tourism, including a hotel, a swimming pool, and two tennis courses.
The maps illustrate how Felixstone, a town in the United Kingdom, changed from 1967 to 2001.
Overall, the town underwent dramatic changes, the most important of which was the removal of the fish m...
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The charts illustrate the average energy use in Australian households and the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions. Overall, while heating accounts for the largest proportion of energy use, water heating contributes the most to greenhouse gas emissions.
Heating constitutes the highest energy use at 42%, followed by water heating at 30%. However, the greenhouse gas emissions from these two sources are reversed, with heating responsible for 15% and water heating for 32%.
Refrigeration and lighting use 7% and 4% of the total energy, respectively, yet their greenhouse gas emissions are approximately double these values. Cooling uses and emits about the same percentage, around 2-3%. Other appliances, although accounting for 15% of energy use, produce a significant 28% of the emissions, making them the second highest contributor to greenhouse gases.
The charts illustrate the average energy use in Australian households and the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions. Overall, while heating accounts for the largest proportion of energy use, water he...
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The charts illustrate the Australian average use of energy in every household and the greenhouse gas emissions produced as a result. Overall, while the energy used for heating accounts for the most, the majority of carbon dioxide is from the use of water heating.
The energy used for heating accounts for the highest proportion, at 42% of the total average use of energy in Australia. The figure for water heating is the second highest at 30%. However, the carbon dioxide stems from these uses completely switch place in the volume order which are 15% and 32% of heating and water heating, respectively.
While the percentages of refrigeration and lighting use are 7% and 4% of the whole regular consumption in every Australian household the exhaust created is twice as much as they are. The cooling, besides, produces pretty much the same percentage of gas emissions as it is used. Other appliances were not quite significant with their utilization at 15% but their gas exhaust is remarkable, at 28%, the second highest.
The charts illustrate the Australian average use of energy in every household and the greenhouse gas emissions produced as a result. Overall, while the energy used for heating accounts for the most, t...
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The graph illustrates 5 age groups in terms of Glasgow's educational attainment in 2010.
Overall, people aged 16 to 75 had the highest proportion of Tertiary degrees, compared to other categories. Conversely, those aged 75 plus mostly were without qualifications.
The share of individuals who got university qualifications ages ranging from 16 to 24 was equal to that of those aged 24 to 35 and 35 to 50, at roughly 75%; followed by those aged 50 to 75 (50%) and over 75 (25%). Regarding the unqualified, the figure for the 75-and-above age group was 72%, which was 40% higher than that of the 50-to-75-year-olds. Additionally, the unqualified levels of the three remaining groups were the same, at a mere 9%.
Around 20% of people with school certificates from 3 groups, ages ranging from 16 to 75, except that of the 24-to-35 years of age, which was 15%. Finally, this is only the case for 3% of the 75-plus.
The graph illustrates 5 age groups in terms of Glasgow's educational attainment in 2010.
Overall, people aged 16 to 75 had the highest proportion of Tertiary degrees, compared to other categories. Con...
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Đề bài: To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? what will be the effect if children are not taught history?
write at least 250 words
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Some people argue that there is no benefit of studying the history and it can be substituted by other more important subject. In my opinion, however, it is a not logical opinion for many resons.
Although history produce events in the past, it also is one of the most important subjects for students in recently. Firstly, history can be very useful in planning for the future. If humans know the mistakes that had been done and caused disastriase events in the past, they will try to avoid doing the same mistakes in the future. That is a great way to increase successful rate for young people. Moreover, studying in the past of other nations will give the opportunity to know more than their society. This helps them broaden their horizon and build good relationships between different walks of life.
Children are the people who will lead the world in the future, but if they are not taught history, it is very hard for them to get success. The main effect is students can not know their origin and they maybe wonder that where were they born? What was their country overtake? As a result, they could not effort and try building their country is better. The history of Viet Nam, for example, there were many heros who fought bravely to get liberaty and independence from invador. When students were be taught those, they was felt themselves have to more effort and improve their life which martyrs exchanged by their blood. Another impact is it is a challenging task for children to understand the history of other countries on the world. Therefore, there will be less job opportunity in abroad. For instant, if people know the history of country where they are working, they can be have high position in their carreer and more relationships.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that history, this summary of human experience, is very important in improventment of human’s future and there are many negative impats if students are not known their history.
Đề bài: To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? what will be the effect if children are not taught history?
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Currently, the condition exhibits that numerous individuals dealing with some common diseases attempt to use a variety of medicines or therapies instead of being diagnosed or cured by a professional doctor. However, in my perspective, this trend has an adverse advancement on public health, and my essay will elaborate further on my viewpoint with relevant examples.
First and foremost, self-diagnosing hides many potential threats to human health. This is because some health problems have similar symptoms which are normally recognised by patient. Therefore, they are capable to mistake these diseases via their personal experience, and using the inappropriate medicine can even worsen their current condition. For instance, both diarrhoea and constipation are two diseases characterized by the abdominal sore. In this circumstance, if patient uses the constipation therapy for diarrhoea disease, it can exacerbate their problem as well as lead to the severe dehydration of body.
Furthermore, using the medicine without the allowance of medical professions may trigger to harmful complications. As some medicines require a rigid description. If people do not receive the advice from doctor and follow it cautiously, it can cause the detrimental effects as overdose or memorising issue. For an example, paracetamol is limited to be used twice or three times per day. When patient tries to use it as much as possible to heal their issues, they can face complications respectively vomiting, dizzy and the shortness in memory. Thus, self-treatment is one of big mistakes for individual health.
To conclude, a great number of people choose self-therapy or medicine by themselves to alleviate the health problems rather than seeing by the professionals in medical field. Conversely, I believe that it seems like a bad option for any individuals. Indeed, being diagnosed by doctors is one of the wisest options for patient to deal with their disease.
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The given pie charts illustrate the average ratio of three different sorts of nutrients which are separated into American distinct meals. Moreover, these nutrients can harm to human health with a high level of consumption.
Overall, these charts categorize nutrients into three types: sodium, saturated fat and additional sugar and their proportion is revealed via four different timeframes. While sodium and saturated fat are the most preferable during dinner time, added sugar is consumed greater at snacks.
In detail, whereas snacks and breakfast time are sharing the same consuming percentage of sodium at merely 14%, saturated fat is prioritized to be used for a snack at 21% than for breakfast at 16%. However, the proportion of both sodium and saturated fat during lunch time is constantly greater than breakfast and snack time, respectively sodium at 29% and fat at 26%.
Furthermore, for the added sugar, the dominant utilization occurs for a snack with 42%, nearly doubling the percentage of consumption during a dinner meal. It is remarkable that both breakfast and lunch show the using proportion of this nutrient under 20%.
The given pie charts illustrate the average ratio of three different sorts of nutrients which are separated into American distinct meals. Moreover, these nutrients can harm to human health with a high...
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The bar chart illustrates how much time male and female employees spent on leisure activities.
Overall, the number of people in both sexes who were unemployed and retired had the highest amount for leisure pursuits. It is also evident that part-time employed men and male housewives had no time for themselves, while the figure for women owning full-time occupations was the least, compared to other feminine categories.
The amount of spare time unemployed men owned was around 85 units, while that of women was slightly lower, at shy of 80 units. Similarities can be seen in the figure for retired men, as opposed to women, which was just under 85 and 89 units in turn. As for people with full-time jobs, men got roughly 45 units, 7 units higher than women.
50 units of free period female housewives was spent, while masculine counterparts had no time at all. Finally, the leisure time span of part-time employed women also far exceeded that of men, with respective figures being 40 and 0 units.
The bar chart illustrates how much time male and female employees spent on leisure activities.
Overall, the number of people in both sexes who were unemployed and retired had the highest amount for l...
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The line graph illustrates how many enquiries the Tourist Information Office got in one city in the first 6 months of 2011.
Overall, there was a decline in enquiry numbers received through email and in person, with that of hand receiving surpassed others in March onwards, while the figure for receiving by telephone witnessed downward trend over the given period.
The number of enquiries collected by hand started at just over 400 units, after which it rose slightly to 800 in the commencement of March, before ending the period at 1900. Meanwhile, the figure for telephone hovered in the range from 900 to 1000, and grew from that point in April to 1600 units in June.
Just under 800 enquiries got through letter in January, with a subsequent decrease to about 700 in March. Similar changes, but to a greater extent, were seen in the 2 following months, which dropped at shy of 400 and followed by a final stability toward the end of the period.
The line graph illustrates how many enquiries the Tourist Information Office got in one city in the first 6 months of 2011.
Overall, there was a decline in enquiry numbers received through email and...
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The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the gathering and treatment process that turns rainfall into consumable water in Australia.
Overall, there are five steps in the treatment plan, beginning with the drainage of rainwater and concluding with its redistribution as potable water.
Initially, draining pipes installed on the roofs of Australian homes channel rainfall into an underground pipeline. The pipes, which link the drain of multiple households, are connected to a common filtration system. After passing through the water filter, the rainwater is transported to a storage unit where it is held until the next phase.
Subsequently, the water is transported from the storage tank to a treatment plant where it undergoes purification using various chemicals. After the treatment is finished, the water - now clean and drinkable - is pumped back up to Australian households via a seperate conveyor system. These pipes, which also connect multiple houses, redistribute the water to be used for hydration.
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People in many countries are spending more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families?
A rising number of people in the globe nowadays live far away from their families. In my point of view, the major reasons for this tendency may contribute to the increasing personal demand of humans, leading to both positive and negative effects to society.
In this modern and competitive world, it is apparent for people, not least young individuals, to seek for further education as well as more opportunities such as jobs. Therefore, they tend to live away from their families, moving to other cities or countries which provide more chances to meet their demands of pursuing a career. For example, people living in countries where their education systems are limited are more likely to study abroad. Moreover, individuals have not continued with families as they want to no longer depend on their parents. Living alone has many benefits to them, particularly enhancing domestic or time management skills which are useful for them, thereby developing themselves.
In consequence, this trend tends to affect both beneficial and detrimentally to those individuals and their family. Regarding the positive aspect, living independently not only broadens their horizons, but also enables them to seek more opportunities to improve their future career. Additionally, families are also likely to receive financial support from their children who live and work in developed areas. However, living away also results in a lack of connection in relationships among family's members. Those who move to other places seem to decrease real interaction with their parents or siblings due to being busy and stressed with their work and lives. Thus, it poses a threat to maintaining a healthy relationship in the family.
In conclusion, owing to the increasing demand of humans in the advanced world, it is more prevailing for people to live far a long distance from family. This activity is beneficial for themselves but also exacerbates the connection between them and their important persons.
People in many countries are spending more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families?
A rising number of peopl...
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